Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0AJZXSN8A535311NQXCG2C

Run Details

Duration:
39.0s
Cost:
$0.005915
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as they stepped between the last two oaks, their ancient trunks curved like the ribs of a sleeping giant. The familiar scent of damp earth and decaying leaves of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by something cleaner, sharper, like ozone after a lightning strike, undercut with the sweet decay of impossible blossoms. “Whoa.” Aurora’s breath misted in the sudden, absolute chill. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket pulsed, a steady, warm beat against her sternum, like a second heart waking up. “Time bends here,” Isolde’s silver hair shimmered in a light that had no sun. She stood without a footprint in the thick, velvet grass. “It is not always polite. Don’t linger on one thought for too long.” Aurora looked back. The London sky, grey and choked with industry, was gone. In its place hung a firmament of deep, bruised violet, swirled with slow-moving bands of pale gold. No sun, no moon. Just a luminous, constant twilight. “Your cloak, Nightwhisper,” Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on Nyx. Nyx, their form a dense, humanoid silhouette against the alien flora, solidified with a sound like settling gravel. “It feels… thin. The Veil. Here.” “Here, it is but a gossamer curtain,” Isolde agreed. She turned and walked into the grove proper. They followed. The path wasn’t a path at all, but a natural parting in the undergrowth. The wildflowers weren’t wild—they were choreographed. Blossoms of cobalt blue pulsed with a soft internal light, opening and closing in silent, slow rhythm. Vines of silvery, thornless briar coiled up the trunks of trees whose bark resembled layered mother-of-pearl. Everything glowed. The air hummed, a low, sub-vocal resonance that vibrated in the teeth. “I don’t hear birds,” Rory murmured, her voice swallowed by the dense, sweet air. “You hear the Nectar-Sippers,” Isolde gestured. Tiny, jewel-toned insects, too bright to be real, darted between flowers, their wings beating so fast they were blurs of colour. The hum was them, a thousand tiny, harmonized drones. Nyx drifted closer to a cluster of the blue flowers. A tendril of their shadow reached out, its tip almost brushing a petal. The flower flinched, its blue light dimming to purple, and it curled inward. “It knows what I am.” “Everything here knows what you are,” Isolde said, not unkindly. “Shadows are a language. You speak it fluently. Do not shout.” They moved deeper. The trees grew denser, their pearlescent bark knotting into shapes that suggested sleeping faces, screaming mouths, or outstretched hands. The golden bands in the sky brightened, casting long, stark shadows that seemed to move independently of the glowing flora. Aurora kept her hand near the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The handle was cold moonlight, even through her glove. It felt right here, a sliver of the same silver that painted the tree bark and the underside of Isolde’s hair. A clearing opened. At its center stood a circle of standing stones, but they weren’t rough hewn. They were smooth, black obsidian, veined with threads of the same glowing gold as the sky. They radiated a silent, oppressive power. The air near them was colder, thicker. “Do not enter the circle,” Isolde warned, her gaze distant. “It is a mouth. And what it has swallowed, it does not regurgitate.” Aurora’s scar itched. She rubbed her left wrist, the crescent-shaped mark a familiar anchor in the dissolving reality. “What’s on the other side?” “A question better left unasked in this place. It gives answers in the form of removal.” Nyx flowed around the perimeter of the black stones, their form losing cohesion at the edges, trailing wisps like smoke. “There are… echoes here. Not of sound. Of feeling. Rage. Hunger.” They recoiled, solidifying sharply. “Old hunger.” “The gluttony of the forgotten,” Isolde said. She moved on, past the stone circle. They followed, relief a palpable thing as the circle’s cold presence faded behind them. The next part of the grove was a bower. Instead of grass, the ground was a soft, springy moss that glowed a faint, encouraging green. The trees here grew in a tight dome, their pearlescent branches interlocking overhead to form a perfect, light-filtering canopy. The air was warmer, smelling of honey and warm stone. In the center, a pool of water lay perfectly still. It wasn’t reflective. Its surface was a sheet of obsidian glass, mirroring only the golden twilight above, not the visitors who stood at its edge. Aurora saw it first. A face, not hers, looking up from beneath the dark surface. A man’s face, with sharp cheekbones and eyes that were holes into a starry void. It mouthed silent words. She stumbled back, her boot sinking into the glowing moss. “There’s something—” Nyx was at her side instantly, a solid, cold presence. “Where?” “In the pool. There was a face.” She pointed, but when she looked again, it was gone. Only the perfect, dark mirror remained. “It spoke. I couldn’t hear it.” Isolde stood at the pool’s far edge, her silver hair trailing in the non-reflection. “It showed you one who called for it. A memory trapped in the water-mirror. They are all around, now. Can you not feel their attention?” Aurora could. It was a pressure, not on her skin, but in her mind. A thousand curious, silent stares from the glowing bark, from the pulsing flowers, from the very light itself. The wonder was curdling into a primal, skin-crawling unease. This place was alive, and it was watching them. “My pendant,” Aurora said, her voice tight. The warmth against her chest had intensified to a steady, insistent heat. “It’s… agitated.” Isolde’s gaze dropped to the Heartstone. “It smells its home. The amber skies, the vineyards of Dymas. That trinket is a compass to gluttony. You carry a thread, and the loom in Hel is very, very interested in the pattern you weave.” She smiled, a faint, sad thing. “They will come for it. For you.” The distant hum of the Nectar-Sippers changed pitch. It grew louder, more urgent. The pulsing blue flowers began to glow in sequence, a wave of light rippling through the bower towards them, like an alarm signal. Isolde looked up, her lavender eyes sharp. “The sun turns. It is longer than you think. We must go. Time’s courtesy has been revoked.” The violet sky was darkening to a deep, starless purple. The golden bands were fading. In the sudden, encroaching gloom, the glowing flora didn’t seem beautiful anymore. It seemed predatory. The shadows between the pearlescent trees grew deeper, and within them, things began to shift and whisper. “Run,” Isolde said, and for the first time, there was no riddle in her voice. It was a flat, urgent command. Aurora didn’t need telling twice. She turned, the Fae blade a cold weight in her hand, and sprinted back the way they came, Nyx a flowing streak of darkness beside her. The whispers followed them, weaving through the trees, a chorus of forgotten voices calling them back, urging them to stay, to listen, to join the feast in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"sharply"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"echoes"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count2
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"shimmered"
4"velvet"
5"resonance"
6"vibrated"
7"stark"
8"oppressive"
9"echoes"
10"palpable"
11"perfect"
12"warmth"
13"gloom"
14"whisper"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
94.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1176
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount950
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
London1
Nyx6
Isolde12
Tiny1
Fae-forged1
Aurora8
Nectar-Sippers1
Fae2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Tiny"
3"Aurora"
4"Nectar-Sippers"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"London"
4"Fae-forged"
5"Fae"
globalScore0.868
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seemed to move independently of the glowing flora"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.85
wordCount1176
matches
0"not on her skin, but in her mind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean34.59
std17.93
cv0.519
sampleLengths
054
129
237
339
411
524
617
769
814
936
1041
1121
1283
1346
1423
1523
1616
1737
1814
1968
2035
2134
2212
2311
2429
2539
2650
2721
2855
2936
3024
3147
3221
3360
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
29.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was curdling"
1"was watching"
2"was darkening"
3"were fading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences103
ratio0.01
matches
0"The wildflowers weren’t wild—they were choreographed."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Tiny, jewel-toned insects,"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026014568158168574
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007284079084287201
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.42
std7.16
cv0.628
sampleLengths
022
132
29
320
414
510
613
73
810
917
104
115
1211
1318
146
159
168
172
1814
196
2017
2116
222
2312
2414
256
2621
279
2810
2913
3013
315
3210
3311
343
3519
3620
3711
389
3921
403
4114
4216
436
447
4510
4613
473
4815
495
47.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3300970873786408
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just a luminous, constant twilight."
1"Instead of grass, the ground"
2"Only the perfect, dark mirror"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences82
matches
0"She stood without a footprint"
1"She turned and walked into"
2"They moved deeper."
3"It felt right here, a"
4"They were smooth, black obsidian,"
5"They radiated a silent, oppressive"
6"She rubbed her left wrist,"
7"They recoiled, solidifying sharply"
8"She moved on, past the"
9"They followed, relief a palpable"
10"It wasn’t reflective."
11"Its surface was a sheet"
12"It mouthed silent words."
13"She stumbled back, her boot"
14"She pointed, but when she"
15"It was a pressure, not"
16"She smiled, a faint, sad"
17"It grew louder, more urgent."
18"It seemed predatory."
19"It was a flat, urgent"
ratio0.256
14.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences82
matches
0"The air thickened as they"
1"The familiar scent of damp"
2"Aurora’s breath misted in the"
3"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
4"Isolde’s silver hair shimmered in"
5"She stood without a footprint"
6"Aurora looked back."
7"The London sky, grey and"
8"Isolde said, her lavender eyes"
9"Nyx, their form a dense,"
10"She turned and walked into"
11"The path wasn’t a path"
12"The wildflowers weren’t wild—they were"
13"Blossoms of cobalt blue pulsed"
14"Vines of silvery, thornless briar"
15"The air hummed, a low,"
16"Rory murmured, her voice swallowed"
17"The hum was them, a"
18"Nyx drifted closer to a"
19"A tendril of their shadow"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air hummed, a low, sub-vocal resonance that vibrated in the teeth."
1"The golden bands in the sky brightened, casting long, stark shadows that seemed to move independently of the glowing flora."
2"It felt right here, a sliver of the same silver that painted the tree bark and the underside of Isolde’s hair."
3"Nyx flowed around the perimeter of the black stones, their form losing cohesion at the edges, trailing wisps like smoke."
4"Instead of grass, the ground was a soft, springy moss that glowed a faint, encouraging green."
5"Its surface was a sheet of obsidian glass, mirroring only the golden twilight above, not the visitors who stood at its edge."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on Nyx"
1"Isolde said, not unkindly"
2"Isolde warned, her gaze distant"
3"Aurora said, her voice tight"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde agreed (agree)"
1"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.207
78.4509%