| 68.85% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Eva said carefully [carefully]" | | 2 | "Brennan hurried away [away]" | | 3 | "Eva said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.328 | | leniency | 0.656 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.131 | |
| 89.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1967 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1967 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "database" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "potential" | | 6 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1983 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1360 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 20 | | Camden | 1 | | Overground | 1 | | Italian | 1 | | Brennan | 7 | | Tube | 2 | | Eva | 16 | | Kowalski | 2 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Hawley | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Brennan" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Kowalski" | | 6 | "Museum" | | 7 | "Hawley" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.765 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite surprise and wasn't quite peace" | | 1 | "quite peace" | | 2 | "quite reach" | | 3 | "something that seemed to absorb the floodlight rather than reflect it" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.017 | | wordCount | 1983 | | matches | | 0 | "not the pallor of exsanguination or the grey-blue of asphyxiation, but a strange waxy translucence, as though the fat" | | 1 | "not gold, not silver, but something" | | 2 | "not silver, but something" | | 3 | "not from the presence of death, but from the suspicion" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 27.54 | | std | 25.94 | | cv | 0.942 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 116 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 111 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 65 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 52 | | 43 | 60 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 80.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "been rigged" | | 1 | "been *placed" | | 2 | "been brought" | | 3 | "been stationed" | | 4 | "being sent" | | 5 | "been opened" | | 6 | "been sealed" | | 7 | "been mistaken" |
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| 80.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "was already repacking" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed immediately — colder, thicker, carrying the mineral smell of old concrete and something else underneath, something organic, like dried herbs burned to ash." | | 1 | "The skin had an odd quality to it — not the pallor of exsanguination or the grey-blue of asphyxiation, but a strange waxy translucence, as though the fat and muscle beneath had been slowly drawn out, replaced by something thinner." | | 2 | "Along the walls, she could see the remnants of old advertisements — faded Tube maps, an advert for a brand of cigarettes that hadn't existed since the seventies." | | 3 | "They were shallow, deliberate, and arranged in a pattern that spiraled outward from a central point — right at the level of the victim's chest, if he'd been standing against the wall." | | 4 | "Quinn recognized the curly red hair first, then the round glasses, then the way Eva Kowalski tucked a strand behind her left ear when she was nervous — which was always, but especially now." | | 5 | "Quinn caught a glimpse of dense text and hand-drawn illustrations — not the kind of thing that appeared in mainstream publications." | | 6 | "She looked at the bone tokens in the evidence bag — currency for a market that wasn't supposed to exist, in a Tube station that had been sealed for decades." | | 7 | "On Hawley's left hand, the ring finger bore a thin band of dark metal — not gold, not silver, but something that seemed to absorb the floodlight rather than reflect it." | | 8 | "Eva looked at her — really looked, the way people do when they're deciding whether to trust someone with something that can't be taken back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1361 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03379867744305658 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011021307861866276 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 14.06 | | std | 11.78 | | cv | 0.837 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 63.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.41843971631205673 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Too symmetrical, Quinn noted." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 88.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned it in her" | | 1 | "His eyes were open, fixed" | | 2 | "He wore an expensive three-piece" | | 3 | "His shoes were Italian leather," | | 4 | "He'd been brought here by" | | 5 | "He was young, maybe thirty," | | 6 | "She'd learned that silence did" | | 7 | "He gestured at the body" | | 8 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 9 | "She leaned closer." | | 10 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 11 | "She walked closer to the" | | 12 | "They were shallow, deliberate, and" | | 13 | "She traced the symbol in" | | 14 | "He pointed toward the platform" | | 15 | "She was not a forensic" | | 16 | "Her green eyes were wide" | | 17 | "She clutched a hardback volume" | | 18 | "She broke off, adjusting her" | | 19 | "she repeated, as though repetition" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 42.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The bone token clinked against" | | 1 | "She turned it in her" | | 2 | "The SOCO officer lifted the" | | 3 | "Quinn ducked beneath it and" | | 4 | "The air changed immediately —" | | 5 | "Emergency floodlights had been rigged" | | 6 | "The victim lay on his" | | 7 | "The body had been *placed*," | | 8 | "His eyes were open, fixed" | | 9 | "He wore an expensive three-piece" | | 10 | "His shoes were Italian leather," | | 11 | "He'd been brought here by" | | 12 | "Quinn nodded to the uniformed" | | 13 | "He was young, maybe thirty," | | 14 | "Brennan flipped through his notebook" | | 15 | "She'd learned that silence did" | | 16 | "He gestured at the body" | | 17 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 18 | "The suit jacket had been" | | 19 | "She leaned closer." |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The skin had an odd quality to it — not the pallor of exsanguination or the grey-blue of asphyxiation, but a strange waxy translucence, as though the fat and mu…" | | 1 | "Along the walls, she could see the remnants of old advertisements — faded Tube maps, an advert for a brand of cigarettes that hadn't existed since the seventies…" | | 2 | "They were shallow, deliberate, and arranged in a pattern that spiraled outward from a central point — right at the level of the victim's chest, if he'd been sta…" | | 3 | "Quinn caught a glimpse of dense text and hand-drawn illustrations — not the kind of thing that appeared in mainstream publications." | | 4 | "The body with no cause of death and no signs of struggle, placed with ceremonial precision in a location that hadn't been publicly accessible in years." | | 5 | "On Hawley's left hand, the ring finger bore a thin band of dark metal — not gold, not silver, but something that seemed to absorb the floodlight rather than ref…" | | 6 | "She stood and addressed Brennan, who had been watching this exchange with the expression of a man who had lost the thread of the conversation twenty minutes ago…" | | 7 | "Quinn turned back to Eva, who was already repacking her satchel with the same frantic energy she'd had when Quinn arrived." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she repeated, as though repetition would make it sound more official" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.131 | | leniency | 0.262 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.033 | |