Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0B08DVT8YQZS3X312TSB8X

Run Details

Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.005280
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva's front door took a particular sequence to open — one turn left, two turns right, a pause, then the final click. Rory had the rhythm memorised, the sound a kind of music she associated with safety and cardamom and Ptolemy winding between her ankles. She was halfway through a bowl of leftover tikka masala, cross-legged on Eva's sofa with a case file balanced on her knee, when the intercom crackled. "You're kidding me." It was nearly eleven. Eva was in Cardiff for the week, visiting her mother. Rory had the flat to herself — had been looking forward to the quiet, the cat purring on the armrest, the stack of case law she'd borrowed from Silas's shelf that smelled like old tobacco. She pressed the intercom button with her thumb. "Yeah?" A pause. Then a voice, low and accented, the consonants polished smooth: "Rory. Open the door." She knew that voice the way you know the sound of rain on a window you've slept beside — intimately, and against her better judgment. Her finger hovered over the button. "Lucien." "Bonsoir." "What are you doing here?" The intercom hissed between them. She could picture him standing in the curry house doorway below, one hand on that ivory-handled cane, platinum hair slicked back, charcoal suit probably pressed sharp enough to cut. He never arrived unannounced. He never arrived at all — not since the last time, which she had filed away in the part of her brain designated for things she refused to examine. "May I come up?" "No." "Ptolemy seems to think otherwise. He's scratching at the glass." She looked at the tabby, who was indeed sitting on the windowsill, tail flicking. The curry house had a small rear entrance that led to the building's shared stairwell. Of course Lucien knew about it. Lucien knew about everything. "If you've come to sell me something—" "I need your help." The words landed between them with a weight that had nothing to do with commerce. Rory set the case file aside and stood, crossing to the window. There he was, below, looking up with his mismatched eyes catching the streetlight — amber and black, the demon half of him always more visible at night. He wasn't smiling. He never smiled when it mattered. She unlocked the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third. The door opened onto a narrow hallway stacked with Eva's research notes, scrolls leaning against the wall like tired old men. The stairwell smelled of cumin and dishwater. Lucien climbed the stairs with his usual deliberate pace, the ivory handle of his cane tapping each step. When he reached the landing, he stood just inside the door and let her close it behind him. Up close, she could see the fatigue carved beneath his cheekbones, the slight looseness at his collar that meant he'd been wearing the suit for more than twenty-four hours. "You look terrible," she said. "You look well." His gaze moved across her face, her bare feet, the bowl of tikka masala still on the coffee table. Something shifted behind his amber eye — recognition, maybe, or something sharper. "I like what you've done with the place." "Ptolemy did the decorating. I'm just babysitting." "I know. Eva's in Cardiff." He stepped past her into the flat, surveying the chaos of books and research with an appraiser's eye. "She left you in charge of her notes?" "She left me in charge of her cat. The notes are a professional hazard." Rory leaned against the closed door. "You didn't answer my question. What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned to face her, and the distance between them contracted to something that made her ribs tight. He smelled of leather and cold air and whatever cologne he wore that she'd never been able to name — something dark and botanical, like crushed violets left to wilt. "I need someone who can move through London without leaving a trail in the supernatural channels. Someone whose name doesn't appear in any ledger I've touched." He paused, and for the first time since she'd known him, he looked uncertain. "Someone like you." "Because I'm human." "Because you're—" He stopped. Started again. "Because you're the only person I trust who isn't already compromised." Rory pushed off the door and walked to the kitchen, putting the counter between them. She needed the barrier. He followed anyway, settling into one of Eva's mismatched chairs with the ease of someone who'd sat there before — which he had, twice, both times in circumstances she preferred not to revisit. "Drink?" she asked, opening the fridge. Eva kept a bottle of Sancerre on the top shelf. Lucien drank Sancerre. "If you're offering." She poured two glasses without looking at him. The silence in the flat was different now — not the comfortable kind she'd been enjoying, but the loaded kind, the kind that had a pulse. Ptolemy jumped down from the windowsill and padded over to wind between Lucien's legs, which was a betrayal Rory chose to ignore. "Talk," she said, setting his glass on the counter. He took it, swirling the wine once before lifting it to his nose. "A woman named Celeste Marchand has gone missing. She ran an import business in Shoreditch — textiles, mostly, from Southeast Asia. Legitimate front, or so I believed." "Believed." "Three days ago, her office was cleaned out. Her apartment, same. No signs of struggle. Her employees haven't seen her, her phone goes straight to voicemail, and her flatmate filed a report with the Metropolitan Police this morning." He set his glass down. "The flatmate is my cousin." Rory studied his face. In three years of knowing him, she'd seen Lucien Moreau perform indifference, amusement, irritation, and calculated charm. She had never seen this — a crease between his brows that didn't belong to any performance. "She's important to you," she said. "She's important to me." He'd said it twice, and the second time his voice had dropped, stripped of its usual music. Rory picked up her own glass and leaned against the counter, watching him. The overhead light caught the platinum of his hair and the sharp geometry of his suit and the absurd elegance of him, and she thought about the last time he'd been in this flat — how he'd touched the scar on her wrist without asking, how she'd let him, how the silence afterward had stretched until it became a wall neither of them could climb. "Why me specifically?" she asked. "You have contacts. You have resources." "My contacts are the reason she's missing." He lifted his gaze to hers, and the black eye swallowed the light. "Someone in my network sold her name. I don't know who. Until I do, anyone I work with directly is a risk." "And you trust me not to sell you out." "I trust you to be exactly who you've always been." He held her stare, and something passed between them — old, unresolved, humming at a frequency she felt in her teeth. "I trust you because you walked away from me without looking back, and I've never met anyone more honest." Rory took a long sip of wine to give her mouth something to do other than respond to that. The Sancerre was cold and mineral and did nothing to settle her pulse. "You should know," he continued, "that there's a possibility this connects to Avaros." She set her glass down. "The demon realm." "One of my father's associates has been moving through London for the past month. Unsanctioned. I've been tracking him, but—" He gestured vaguely, an uncharacteristic crack in his composure. "Things have accelerated." "Your father's associates don't usually come to Earth to kidnap textile merchants." "No." Lucien's jaw tightened. "They don't." Rory looked at Ptolemy, who had abandoned her entirely and was curled in Lucien's lap, purring like a small engine. She looked at the case files on the coffee table, the scrolls leaning against the wall, the glass of Sancerre warming in her hand. She thought about the flat above Silas's bar, her own quiet space, the life she'd built in the margins of a world she'd never asked to understand. She picked up her phone and dialled. "Yu-Fei? It's Rory. I need to swap shifts for the rest of the week. Yeah, I know. Family thing." She listened, nodded, said thank you, and hung up. Lucien watched her with an expression she couldn't read. "One week," she said. "That's what I can give you. After that, I go back to delivering egg fried rice and pretending the supernatural underworld doesn't exist." He nodded once, slowly. "One week is enough." "And you're sleeping on the floor. Eva's sofa doesn't fold out, and I'm not sharing." A ghost of a smile crossed his face — the first real one she'd seen all evening. "Understood." She gathered her glass and his, carrying them to the sink. Behind her, she heard the scratch of the chair and the soft tap of his cane on the floorboards, and then his voice, close enough that she felt it against the back of her neck. "For what it's worth," he said, "I didn't come here because you're human. I came here because of the night you told me about Evan, and you didn't cry, and I realized I'd spent my whole life around people who performed strength and never once met anyone who actually had it." Rory gripped the edge of the sink. The tap dripped once, twice. "That's not worth much, Lucien." "No," he agreed, and retreated to the other room. "It isn't."
created_at"2026-04-24T18:11:01.713Z" 4/24/2026, 6:11:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.035
96.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"comfortable"
3"pulse"
4"calculated"
5"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1132
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Ptolemy3
Cardiff1
Silas2
Lucien9
Rory11
Started1
Sancerre4
Moreau1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Silas"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Sancerre"
6"Moreau"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like old tobacco"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.621
wordCount1610
matches
0"not the comfortable kind she'd been enjoying, but the loaded kind, the kind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"wore that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean25.56
std22.9
cv0.896
sampleLengths
075
13
257
31
416
531
61
71
85
967
104
111
1210
1339
147
154
1663
1739
1865
195
2042
217
2231
2331
2448
2543
263
2717
2852
2919
303
3156
329
3340
341
3548
3638
376
384
3995
4011
4142
429
4350
4432
4513
468
4732
4812
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"was curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was indeed sitting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences119
ratio0.109
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva's front door took a particular sequence to open — one turn left, two turns right, a pause, then the final click."
1"Rory had the flat to herself — had been looking forward to the quiet, the cat purring on the armrest, the stack of case law she'd borrowed from Silas's shelf that smelled like old tobacco."
2"She knew that voice the way you know the sound of rain on a window you've slept beside — intimately, and against her better judgment."
3"He never arrived at all — not since the last time, which she had filed away in the part of her brain designated for things she refused to examine."
4"There he was, below, looking up with his mismatched eyes catching the streetlight — amber and black, the demon half of him always more visible at night."
5"Something shifted behind his amber eye — recognition, maybe, or something sharper."
6"He smelled of leather and cold air and whatever cologne he wore that she'd never been able to name — something dark and botanical, like crushed violets left to wilt."
7"He followed anyway, settling into one of Eva's mismatched chairs with the ease of someone who'd sat there before — which he had, twice, both times in circumstances she preferred not to revisit."
8"The silence in the flat was different now — not the comfortable kind she'd been enjoying, but the loaded kind, the kind that had a pulse."
9"She had never seen this — a crease between his brows that didn't belong to any performance."
10"The overhead light caught the platinum of his hair and the sharp geometry of his suit and the absurd elegance of him, and she thought about the last time he'd been in this flat — how he'd touched the scar on her wrist without asking, how she'd let him, how the silence afterward had stretched until it became a wall neither of them could climb."
11"\"I trust you to be exactly who you've always been.\" He held her stare, and something passed between them — old, unresolved, humming at a frequency she felt in her teeth."
12"A ghost of a smile crossed his face — the first real one she'd seen all evening."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.031194295900178252
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0053475935828877
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.53
std11.49
cv0.849
sampleLengths
026
123
226
33
44
510
635
78
81
92
1014
1125
126
131
141
155
165
1729
184
1929
204
211
2210
2314
2415
256
264
277
284
2915
3012
3127
323
336
3411
3521
367
3718
3818
3929
405
4122
4212
438
447
4523
468
4720
4811
4918
51.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3697478991596639
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners44
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then a voice, low and"
1"Of course Lucien knew about"
ratio0.027
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences74
matches
0"She was halfway through a"
1"It was nearly eleven."
2"She pressed the intercom button"
3"She knew that voice the"
4"Her finger hovered over the"
5"She could picture him standing"
6"He never arrived unannounced."
7"He never arrived at all"
8"She looked at the tabby,"
9"He wasn't smiling."
10"He never smiled when it"
11"She unlocked the first deadbolt,"
12"His gaze moved across her"
13"He stepped past her into"
14"He turned to face her,"
15"He smelled of leather and"
16"He paused, and for the"
17"She needed the barrier."
18"He followed anyway, settling into"
19"she asked, opening the fridge"
ratio0.5
7.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences74
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva's"
1"Rory had the rhythm memorised,"
2"She was halfway through a"
3"It was nearly eleven."
4"Eva was in Cardiff for"
5"Rory had the flat to"
6"She pressed the intercom button"
7"She knew that voice the"
8"Her finger hovered over the"
9"The intercom hissed between them."
10"She could picture him standing"
11"He never arrived unannounced."
12"He never arrived at all"
13"She looked at the tabby,"
14"The curry house had a"
15"Lucien knew about everything."
16"The words landed between them"
17"Rory set the case file"
18"He wasn't smiling."
19"He never smiled when it"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory had the flat to herself — had been looking forward to the quiet, the cat purring on the armrest, the stack of case law she'd borrowed from Silas's shelf th…"
1"The curry house had a small rear entrance that led to the building's shared stairwell."
2"Up close, she could see the fatigue carved beneath his cheekbones, the slight looseness at his collar that meant he'd been wearing the suit for more than twenty…"
3"He followed anyway, settling into one of Eva's mismatched chairs with the ease of someone who'd sat there before — which he had, twice, both times in circumstan…"
4"The silence in the flat was different now — not the comfortable kind she'd been enjoying, but the loaded kind, the kind that had a pulse."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.07
83.1435%