Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0B0JNSB92F7C643T8Z34CQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.001953
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn's face as she sprinted through the narrow Soho streets. Her boots splashed through puddles, the water soaking through her trousers. Ahead, the suspect—a hooded figure with a distinctive limp weaved through the late-night crowd. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Quinn shouted, her voice cutting through the drumming rain. The figure glanced back, eyes wide with panic before disappearing down an alley near the Raven's Nest. Quinn followed, her military precision serving her well as she navigated the slick cobblestones. The alley opened into a service corridor behind the bar. The distinctive green neon sign of the Raven's Nest cast an eerie glow across the wet pavement. The suspect had vanished. Quinn scanned the area, her hand resting on the grip of her service pistol. The air smelled of damp brick and spilled alcohol. She noticed a loose brick near the foundation and pried it open, revealing a small compartment. Inside lay a bone-shaped token—exactly what she'd read about in the classified files about the Veil Market. The suspect's footsteps echoed from below, coming from the direction of the abandoned Tube station. Quinn hesitated for only a moment before following. Her partner's face flashed in her mind—the unexplained injuries, the supernatural symbols found at the scene. This case had those same markings. She descended the crumbling stairs into darkness. The air grew thick with the smell of damp earth and something else—exotic spices and ozone. A single bare bulb illuminated the platform where her suspect stood, holding up the bone token. "You shouldn't have come, detective," the figure said, pulling back the hood to reveal the face of Elena Vasquez, a community activist Quinn had interviewed earlier. "Elena, you're under arrest for questioning in connection with the disappearance of three individuals." Elena laughed, a bitter sound. "You don't understand what you're dealing with. The Veil Market doesn't welcome police." "Then you'll have to explain it to me at the station." Elena shook her head and stepped through an archway that hadn't been there moments before. The market materialized around her—stalls selling strange glowing objects, herbs in jars, and people in cloaks haggling over unknown items. The bone token glowed in Elena's hand. Quinn stood at the threshold, rainwater dripping from her jacket onto the platform below. Her training screamed to call for backup, to secure the scene. But her instincts—refined by eighteen years on the force and three years of hunting answers about her partner's death—urged her forward. The market pulsed with energy, a hidden world beneath the city streets. Merchants eyed her suspiciously, their whispered conversations stopping as she passed. Elena was nowhere to be seen. "Looking for something, detective?" a vendor asked, his eyes glowing faintly purple. "Just observing," Quinn said, her hand resting near her weapon. "Observation is not permitted without a token," another vendor chimed in, her face obscured by a silver mask. Quinned moved deeper into the market, her senses on high alert. Stalls displayed items that defied explanation—clocks that ran backward, potions that bubbled with contained lightning, and books with covers that seemed to shift colors when not looked at directly. A stall near the center displayed various tokens made of bone, metal, and stone. The vendor, a woman with skin like polished obsidian, watched Quinn approach. "Lost your way, copper?" she asked, her voice like stones grinding together. "Just looking for someone who passed through here." "The Market doesn't keep records. We respect privacy—unlike your kind." Quinn showed her badge. "I'm Detective Harlow Quinn. I need information about Elena Vasquez." The vendor leaned forward. "Detective Quinn. I've heard whispers about you. The one who chases shadows." "That's what they call me." "The tokens are currency here. Without one, you're an intruder. The Market protects itself." "Tell me about the disappearances. Three people vanished last week. All had connections to Elena's community group." The vendor's eyes narrowed. "Some things are not meant for mortal knowledge. The Market exists outside your laws." "Then maybe you'd prefer to answer some questions at the Yard." The vendor laughed, a dry rattling sound. "The Yard doesn't know this place exists. Does it?" Quinned hesitated. The vendor was right. No official report mentioned the Veil Market. Her investigation had been off-books from the start, fueled by suspicions about her partner's death. "What happens to people who come here without tokens?" Quinn asked. "They find their way out eventually. Or they don't. The Market has its own way of maintaining balance." Elena appeared at the edge of the market, watching from the shadows. She held up a small vial filled with swirling black liquid. "Detective, you should leave while you still can," Elena called out. "Some doors shouldn't be opened." "Tell me what's in that vial, Elena. Who are you working for?" Elena smiled, a cold expression that didn't reach her eyes. "Just helping people. Providing services your system can't." "Services that involve disappearing people?" "The Market provides for those in need. The disappearances were voluntary. They wanted new lives." Quinn noticed several market visitors shifting nervously, their eyes darting between her and Elena. The tension in the air had grown thicker, charged with unseen energy. "You're lying," Quinn said, taking a step forward. "The bone tokens—where do they come from?" Elena's smile vanished. "That's enough questions. You've seen too much already." She threw the vial to the ground. It shattered, releasing a cloud of black smoke that filled the market. When it cleared, Elena was gone. The market erupted into chaos. Vendors began closing their stalls, customers melting into shadows. Quinn found herself surrounded by walls of fog that hadn't been there moments before. "Detective! Over here!" a voice called from behind her. Tomás Herrera emerged from the fog, his medical bag slung over his shoulder. He pulled her through a narrow passage they hadn't noticed before. "What are you doing here, Tomás?" Quinn demanded, catching her breath. "Following you. You really thought you could handle this alone?" "The disappearances—Elena's involved. She's supplying people with passage to the Market." Tomás stopped abruptly, his face serious. "That's not the whole story. The Market doesn't just take people. It takes something from them too." "What do you mean?" "The disappearances—they're paying with memories. Not just any memories. Their strongest ones." Quinn's mind raced. Her partner's last words echoed in her memory—something about a price to pay for knowledge. "Why are you telling me this?" Quinn asked, her hand still on her weapon. Tomás met her gaze, his warm brown eyes steady. "Because you're close to something dangerous. Because I saw the way you looked at the bone token—you recognized it from your partner's case file." "How did you—" "We all know about you, detective. The cop who chases shadows. The one who lost her partner to something the department doesn't understand." They reached a metal door marked with a symbol Quinn recognized from Morris's case file. Tomás pressed his hand against it, and it swung open to reveal the Tube station stairs leading back to the surface. "You need to get out of here," Tomás said. "Before they realize you know too much." "What about Elena? The people she's taken?" Tomás hesitated. "There might be a way to bring them back. But it would mean going deeper into the Market. Facing things you're not prepared for." Quinn looked back toward the fog-shrouded market, then at Tomás's determined face. The rain had lessened, but the darkness ahead seemed deeper than ever. Her decision hung in the balance—retreat to the safety of the world she knew, or venture further into the supernatural underworld that had cost her partner his life.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.578
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"scanned"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"pulsed"
5"tension"
6"charged"
7"shattered"
8"raced"
9"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"e with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1270
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount836
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Veil2
Market2
Tube2
Elena11
Vasquez1
Quinned2
Tomás7
Herrera1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Market"
5"Elena"
6"Vasquez"
7"Quinned"
8"Tomás"
9"Herrera"
10"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.364
windowScore0.5
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"covers that seemed to shift colors when not looked at directly"
1"seemed deeper than ever"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1270
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.48
std12.16
cv0.594
sampleLengths
040
112
231
331
456
545
639
726
814
918
1011
1142
1246
1329
1412
1510
1618
1740
1826
1912
208
2110
2214
2316
245
2514
2617
2718
2811
2916
3028
3111
3218
3323
3416
3512
3618
375
3815
3926
4015
4111
4225
4328
449
4524
4611
4710
4811
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences110
ratio0.082
matches
0"Ahead, the suspect—a hooded figure with a distinctive limp weaved through the late-night crowd."
1"Inside lay a bone-shaped token—exactly what she'd read about in the classified files about the Veil Market."
2"Her partner's face flashed in her mind—the unexplained injuries, the supernatural symbols found at the scene."
3"The air grew thick with the smell of damp earth and something else—exotic spices and ozone."
4"The market materialized around her—stalls selling strange glowing objects, herbs in jars, and people in cloaks haggling over unknown items."
5"But her instincts—refined by eighteen years on the force and three years of hunting answers about her partner's death—urged her forward."
6"Stalls displayed items that defied explanation—clocks that ran backward, potions that bubbled with contained lightning, and books with covers that seemed to shift colors when not looked at directly."
7"Her partner's last words echoed in her memory—something about a price to pay for knowledge."
8"Her decision hung in the balance—retreat to the safety of the world she knew, or venture further into the supernatural underworld that had cost her partner his life."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount850
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00823529411764706
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.55
std5.48
cv0.475
sampleLengths
015
111
214
312
417
514
610
717
84
914
109
1116
1217
1315
148
1516
166
177
1816
1916
2026
2114
225
2313
2411
2515
2620
277
2814
2911
3021
3112
3211
336
3412
3510
3618
3711
3829
3914
4012
4112
428
4310
444
4510
464
4712
485
4914
59.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.38181818181818183
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
1"She noticed a loose brick"
2"Her partner's face flashed in"
3"She descended the crumbling stairs"
4"Her training screamed to call"
5"she asked, her voice like"
6"Her investigation had been off-books"
7"She held up a small"
8"She threw the vial to"
9"It shattered, releasing a cloud"
10"He pulled her through a"
11"Her partner's last words echoed"
12"They reached a metal door"
13"Her decision hung in the"
ratio0.189
0.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
2"Quinn shouted, her voice cutting"
3"The figure glanced back, eyes"
4"Quinn followed, her military precision"
5"The alley opened into a"
6"The distinctive green neon sign"
7"The suspect had vanished."
8"Quinn scanned the area, her"
9"The air smelled of damp"
10"She noticed a loose brick"
11"The suspect's footsteps echoed from"
12"Quinn hesitated for only a"
13"Her partner's face flashed in"
14"This case had those same"
15"She descended the crumbling stairs"
16"The air grew thick with"
17"A single bare bulb illuminated"
18"the figure said, pulling back"
19"Elena laughed, a bitter sound."
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The market materialized around her—stalls selling strange glowing objects, herbs in jars, and people in cloaks haggling over unknown items."
1"Stalls displayed items that defied explanation—clocks that ran backward, potions that bubbled with contained lightning, and books with covers that seemed to shi…"
2"Quinn noticed several market visitors shifting nervously, their eyes darting between her and Elena."
3"It shattered, releasing a cloud of black smoke that filled the market."
4"Her decision hung in the balance—retreat to the safety of the world she knew, or venture further into the supernatural underworld that had cost her partner his …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn shouted, her voice cutting through the drumming rain"
1"a vendor asked, his eyes glowing faintly purple"
2"Quinn said, her hand resting near her weapon"
3"Quinn asked, her hand still on her weapon"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"another vendor chimed in (chime in)"
2"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
74.5043%