| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "depths" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1365 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1311 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Year | 1 | | Eight | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | November | 2 | | Stupid | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 3 | | Closer | 3 | | Like | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Year" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared in front of her" | | 1 | "looked like fingers, and above her the em" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1365 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 23.53 | | std | 20.49 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 69 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't blooming" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "were, surrounding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park had never been silent — too many deer, too many night birds, too many rustling creatures in the undergrowth." | | 1 | "Their petals caught no moonlight — the moon had been full when she'd entered the park, but the sky above the grove held nothing." | | 2 | "No light escaped its depths, though something inside it glowed — a dull ember that shouldn't have been visible in the darkness and yet was." | | 3 | "The boundary markers formed a rough circle around the clearing — eight trunks, she'd counted eight — and now there were nine." | | 4 | "The wildflowers crunched under her boots — not grass, not stems." | | 5 | "Not in any way she could point to — no movement, no rearranging — but the distances kept being wrong." | | 6 | "But the movement kept happening — a flicker, a displacement, a sense of something large sliding through the periphery of her sight." | | 7 | "His smile was wrong — too wide, too symmetrical, like someone had carved it into his face and forgotten how expressions worked." | | 8 | "She met his eyes — his wrong, wrong eyes — and she didn't blink." | | 9 | "The sound of it collapsed into that wet dragging noise again, closer now, and Aurora felt breath on the back of her neck — cold and ancient and hungry." | | 10 | "But Evan was gone, and the breathing had stopped, and the pendant had cooled to room temperature, and somewhere in the distance — impossible distance — she heard the sound of traffic." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1299 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "quiet pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03233256351039261 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003849114703618168 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 8.58 | | std | 8.68 | | cv | 1.011 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 43.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.34591194968553457 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an empty black dome" | | 1 | "Just that crushing, absolute quiet." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the boundary" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "Their petals caught no moonlight" | | 3 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 4 | "They simply stopped, as if" | | 5 | "She pulled it free, and" | | 6 | "She could wait twelve minutes." | | 7 | "She could assess." | | 8 | "She could plan an exit" | | 9 | "She forced her breathing to" | | 10 | "Her phone showed 11:52 PM." | | 11 | "She turned in a slow" | | 12 | "She looked down and saw" | | 13 | "She moved faster." | | 14 | "She held her breath." | | 15 | "She walked backward." | | 16 | "She turned right." | | 17 | "She gasped and almost dropped" | | 18 | "They weren't blooming." | | 19 | "They were growing." |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 99.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "She paused at the boundary" | | 2 | "The metal was warm against" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "The message from the unknown" | | 5 | "Eva would have called her" | | 6 | "Aurora stepped between the stones." | | 7 | "The grove swallowed the city." | | 8 | "Richmond Park had never been" | | 9 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground." | | 10 | "Bluebells and primroses and species" | | 11 | "Their petals caught no moonlight" | | 12 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 13 | "The words didn't echo, didn't" | | 14 | "They simply stopped, as if" | | 15 | "Aurora walked deeper into the" | | 16 | "The grass didn't bend under" | | 17 | "The wildflowers stood upright and" | | 18 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 19 | "A heartbeat of heat that" |
| | ratio | 0.721 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, ancient oak trunks twisted into shapes that defied the geometry Aurora remembered from Year Eight mat…" | | 1 | "A heartbeat of heat that matched the rhythm of her own pulse." | | 2 | "No light escaped its depths, though something inside it glowed — a dull ember that shouldn't have been visible in the darkness and yet was." | | 3 | "The ninth stone stood at an angle that hurt to look at directly, its bark spiralling in a direction her brain kept trying to correct." | | 4 | "The wildflowers remained frozen in their bloom, and the silence continued its suffocation, and the ninth stone watched her with a knot in its wood that looked d…" | | 5 | "She looked down and saw the bluebells bending toward her ankles, their petals glistening with something that wasn't dew." | | 6 | "Kept her eyes on the wildflowers, on the darkness between the bluebells and primroses, on the spaces where the petals curved together to form shadows that looke…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |