| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory agreed quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.44 | | leniency | 0.88 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 73.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "resolving" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1131 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1033 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 11 | | October | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.822 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like east; the lilac sky offered n" |
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| 23.17% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.768 | | wordCount | 1131 | | matches | | 0 | "not the bruised purple of English twilight but a slow, lilac shimmer, as if someone had poured dawn" | | 1 | "not soft, muffled sound, but nothing at all, as though the ground itself refused to ackno" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 28.28 | | std | 29.18 | | cv | 1.032 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 104 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 81 | | 33 | 101 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 61 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.40% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "was already drifting" | | 1 | "were singing" | | 2 | "was dragging" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "At the threshold between two oaks they paused, and Rory felt it before she saw it — a pressure against her sternum, as though the air there had thickened into water." | | 1 | "The distant groan of London traffic, the sough of planes overhead, the small autumnal rustle of Richmond Park — all of it peeled away in a single breath, like a sheet drawn off a bed." | | 2 | "The sky overhead was the wrong color — not the bruised purple of English twilight but a slow, lilac shimmer, as if someone had poured dawn and dusk into the same glass and stirred." | | 3 | "She was suddenly aware that her boots made no sound on the grass — not soft, muffled sound, but nothing at all, as though the ground itself refused to acknowledge her weight." | | 4 | "They did that sometimes, in places where the boundaries between things were gentler; their shadow-form pulled inward and knit, and now they stood as an almost-man in a long dark coat, their violet eyes the brightest thing in the clearing." | | 5 | "A shimmer in the air above the brook, like heat rising off tarmac — except it was cold, and it moved against the breeze, and when she turned her head quickly she thought she caught, through the distortion, a different meadow entirely." | | 6 | "Eva stuck close to Rory's elbow, her breath quick and shallow, and Rory felt a protective ache she hadn't known in years — the old Cardiff ache, the one that used to mean Eva was about to do something stupid on a dare." | | 7 | "Or what felt like east; the lilac sky offered no sun to orient by." | | 8 | "Something had hooked her under the ribs — not the pendant, something older, something that felt suspiciously like her own curiosity with its teeth in her." | | 9 | "It was coming from a great oak at the centre of the clearing — an oak so vast Rory could not have put her arms around a third of it, its bark silvered with lichen, its roots lifting out of the ground to form a kind of low stone hollow underneath." | | 10 | "A thread of smoke rose from a clay bowl and did not disperse; it hung in the air in a slow, perfect spiral." | | 11 | "This was a shape resolving out of stillness — a woman seated cross-legged on the moss, silver hair spilling past her waist and into the roots." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1028 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03696498054474708 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010700389105058366 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 12.57 | | std | 10.91 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 67.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.43333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw." | | 1 | "Too tall at the shoulder," |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She had her arms wrapped" | | 1 | "She stepped through." | | 2 | "Her throat had gone tight." | | 3 | "She was suddenly aware that" | | 4 | "They did that sometimes, in" | | 5 | "They tilted their head, listening" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "She caught Eva's hand and" | | 8 | "She watched it take three" | | 9 | "She drew her hand back" | | 10 | "It was the wrong shape." | | 11 | "It regarded them with eyes" | | 12 | "She had stepped out of" | | 13 | "She could feel the drop" | | 14 | "It was coming from a" | | 15 | "It was not Nyx's kind" | | 16 | "She had not been there" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven as she" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured at her shoulder," | | 3 | "Eva repeated under her breath" | | 4 | "She had her arms wrapped" | | 5 | "Rory caught her friend's sleeve" | | 6 | "Nyx was already drifting ahead," | | 7 | "The Heartstone lay quiet at" | | 8 | "Whatever waited beyond the stones," | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The sound came first." | | 11 | "The distant groan of London" | | 12 | "The clearing was perhaps thirty" | | 13 | "The sky overhead was the" | | 14 | "Wildflowers grew everywhere, impossible flowers:" | | 15 | "A small brook cut the" | | 16 | "Eva came through the gap" | | 17 | "Her throat had gone tight." | | 18 | "She was suddenly aware that" | | 19 | "Nyx had solidified." |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "At the threshold between two oaks they paused, and Rory felt it before she saw it — a pressure against her sternum, as though the air there had thickened into w…" | | 1 | "The sky overhead was the wrong color — not the bruised purple of English twilight but a slow, lilac shimmer, as if someone had poured dawn and dusk into the sam…" | | 2 | "She was suddenly aware that her boots made no sound on the grass — not soft, muffled sound, but nothing at all, as though the ground itself refused to acknowled…" | | 3 | "The second hand was dragging itself forward in slow, reluctant jerks, pausing between each tick as though uncertain it wanted to continue." | | 4 | "Something had hooked her under the ribs — not the pendant, something older, something that felt suspiciously like her own curiosity with its teeth in her." | | 5 | "Beside her, Nyx gave the smallest, driest laugh, as though to a joke only they understood." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice the dry rustle of leaves" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Rory agreed quietly (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.48 | |