Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0G1SDJ4AYMVSGG2GA03712

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28.2s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did. Rory jiggled the chain, swore under her breath, and yanked the door open with her shoulder braced for a delivery courier or Mrs. Patel from below come to complain about Ptolemy yowling at three in the morning. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he'd been poured there. "Rory." She shut the door. Three deadbolts. She took her time on each one, the metallic click of the topmost sliding home loud enough to carry. Then she stood with her forehead against the wood and counted to ten in Welsh because English wasn't enough. "I can hear you breathing," he called from the other side. Amused. Of course amused. "I'd rather not conduct this through two inches of cheap pine." "Then don't conduct it at all." "Aurora." Nobody said her full name like that. Not her mother, not her father with all his courtroom polish. Only him, and only when he wanted something he thought she wouldn't give. She undid the locks. He hadn't moved. One shoulder to the frame, the ivory cane hooked over his wrist, that charcoal suit fitted within an inch of its life. The amber eye caught the hallway bulb. The black one didn't reflect anything at all. "You look tired," he said. "You look like a man about to get a door shut in his face a second time." "A fair assessment." He inclined his head at the flat behind her. "May I?" "No." "Rory." "You don't get to turn up here, Luc. You don't get to stand in Eva's hallway at eleven at night in your funeral suit and say my name like we left things anywhere but where we left them." "And where was that, exactly?" Ptolemy wound between her ankles, unbothered, and went to sniff at Lucien's polished shoes. The traitor. Lucien crouched with the kind of liquid ease that still, after everything, did something unforgivable to her pulse, and offered the cat two knuckles. Ptolemy head-butted them. "He remembers me," Lucien said. "He's a cat. He remembers whoever feeds him veal." "He has excellent taste." "Get up." He rose, slow, and she caught a flicker of something in his face when his weight went through the cane — not pain exactly, but the memory of it. The last time she'd seen him, he'd been bleeding through a white shirt onto the cobbles behind Silas' bar and telling her, quite calmly, to run. She'd run. "Five minutes," he said. "Three." "Four." "You're negotiating with me on my own doorstep, Moreau." "I'm negotiating with you anywhere you'll let me." She stepped back. He took it as invitation, because he always did, and moved past her into the cramped little warren of Eva's living room with its towers of books and its scrolls going yellow at the edges. He didn't sit. He knew better than to sit. He set the cane against the arm of the sofa and stood with his hands clasped behind him like a man at inspection. She closed the door. Didn't lock it. She wanted the option. "Talk." "There's a job." "No." "You haven't heard it." "No." "Aurora —" "Is that what you came for? A job?" She folded her arms. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight and she watched his eyes track to it and then politely away, the way they always had. "You could've sent a note. You love sending notes. Cream paper, that ridiculous wax seal —" "I didn't come for the job." That landed in the quiet between them like a dropped glass. She uncrossed her arms. Crossed them again. "Then what." He looked at her properly for the first time since she'd opened the door. Whatever he'd been holding behind the amusement cracked a fraction, and she saw the shape of the thing underneath, and she wished, briefly and fiercely, that she hadn't. "You didn't answer my letters," he said. "I burned them." "All of them?" "The last one I kept. Then I burned that one too." "Why the delay?" "Because I'm a bloody idiot, Lucien, is that what you want me to say?" "No." His voice had gone quiet. "I wanted to know if you read it." "I read it." He waited. "Twice." She looked at the ceiling. The water stain there was shaped like a rabbit if you squinted. "Three times. Don't make me count." "Rory." "Don't." He took a step. The floorboards gave him away — Eva's flat had no secrets from its own floor — and she heard him stop when she flinched. "I'm not going to touch you," he said. "If that's what you —" "It isn't." A pause. "Then would you prefer I did?" She laughed. It came out wrong, cracked down the middle, and she pressed the heel of her hand to her mouth to push the rest of it back in. "You don't get to ask me that. Not after Southwark. Not after you bled all over my shoes and told me to disappear and then sent me, what, six letters in six weeks like I was a girl in a novel —" "Seven." "What?" "Seven letters." "I didn't get a seventh." "No." His mouth did something complicated. "I didn't send that one." She lowered her hand. "Why not?" "Because when I'd finished writing it I realised I'd have to deliver it in person or I wouldn't mean any of it." Silence. Ptolemy jumped onto the back of the sofa and began washing a paw with tremendous dignity, as if the two of them were very much beneath his notice. "And here you are," she said. "And here I am." "In your funeral suit." "I came from a funeral." "Oh." She swallowed. "Whose?" "Nobody you knew." He didn't elaborate. He never did. "May I sit now?" She looked at him — the platinum hair slicked back, the cane, the slight favour he was still giving his left side — and at the door she hadn't locked, and at her own hands, which had begun to shake somewhere around the word *seventh*. "Sit," she said. "I'll put the kettle on." "Rory." "Don't say anything nice to me, Lucien. Not yet. I haven't got the constitution for it." He sat. She went to the kitchen. And she took a very long time filling the kettle, because her reflection in the dark window above the sink looked like a woman who'd already made up her mind, and she wasn't ready for him to see it on her yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicker"
2"weight"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1089
ratio0.001
matches
0"seventh"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount694
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Mrs1
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Welsh1
English1
Amused1
Lucien4
Eva2
persons
0"Mrs"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places
0"Welsh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a woman who'd already made up"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.918
wordCount1089
matches
0"not pain exactly, but the memory of it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean13.28
std16.04
cv1.208
sampleLengths
046
111
21
34
440
526
66
71
831
94
1040
115
1217
1314
141
151
1638
175
1843
195
209
214
222
2355
242
254
261
271
289
298
3070
3111
321
333
341
354
361
372
3854
396
4011
417
422
4342
447
453
463
4711
483
4914
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"been poured"
1"was shaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was still giving"
73.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences124
ratio0.024
matches
0"He rose, slow, and she caught a flicker of something in his face when his weight went through the cane — not pain exactly, but the memory of it."
1"The floorboards gave him away — Eva's flat had no secrets from its own floor — and she heard him stop when she flinched."
2"She looked at him — the platinum hair slicked back, the cane, the slight favour he was still giving his left side — and at the door she hadn't locked, and at her own hands, which had begun to shake somewhere around the word *seventh*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount471
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.03184713375796178
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008492569002123142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean8.78
std9.68
cv1.102
sampleLengths
09
123
214
311
41
54
62
719
819
911
101
113
1211
136
141
157
1611
1713
184
193
2022
217
228
235
2417
2512
262
271
281
2938
305
3114
322
3324
343
355
369
374
382
3929
4026
412
424
431
441
459
468
473
4835
493
54.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3709677419354839
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then she stood with her"
1"Of course amused."
2"Only him, and only when"
ratio0.058
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences52
matches
0"She shut the door."
1"She took her time on"
2"he called from the other"
3"She undid the locks."
4"He hadn't moved."
5"He inclined his head at"
6"He rose, slow, and she"
7"She stepped back."
8"He took it as invitation,"
9"He didn't sit."
10"He knew better than to"
11"He set the cane against"
12"She closed the door."
13"She wanted the option."
14"She folded her arms"
15"She uncrossed her arms."
16"He looked at her properly"
17"His voice had gone quiet"
18"She looked at the ceiling"
19"He took a step."
ratio0.519
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences52
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Rory jiggled the chain, swore"
2"Patel from below come to"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"She shut the door."
5"She took her time on"
6"he called from the other"
7"Nobody said her full name"
8"She undid the locks."
9"He hadn't moved."
10"The amber eye caught the"
11"The black one didn't reflect"
12"He inclined his head at"
13"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
14"Lucien crouched with the kind"
15"Ptolemy head-butted them."
16"He rose, slow, and she"
17"The last time she'd seen"
18"She stepped back."
19"He took it as invitation,"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ptolemy jumped onto the back of the sofa and began washing a paw with tremendous dignity, as if the two of them were very much beneath his notice."
1"She looked at him — the platinum hair slicked back, the cane, the slight favour he was still giving his left side — and at the door she hadn't locked, and at he…"
2"And she took a very long time filling the kettle, because her reflection in the dark window above the sink looked like a woman who'd already made up her mind, a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7998%