Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0G49ZA092HCR2YC7XG15GH

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.079700
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks did not move, exactly. They leaned. Aurora felt it in her sternum before she saw it — a slow pressure, as though the air between the trunks had thickened enough to drink. She stopped with her foot halfway raised, boot hovering above a tuft of bluebells that had no business growing in November. "Tell me you feel that," she said. Behind her, Nyx poured themselves around a patch of moonlight, rebuilding into something close to a person. Their outline frayed at the edges like smoke caught in a draft. "I feel many things, Carter. Be specific." "The push. Like walking into a shop door you thought was open." "Ah." A pause. The violet of their eyes dimmed, brightened. "That's the boundary recognising you. Keep walking. It only bites if you hesitate." Eva swore softly somewhere to Aurora's left, hands jammed into the sleeves of a coat two sizes too large. "You could've led with that." "I am leading with it. Now." Aurora set her foot down. The bluebells gave under her sole with the crisp little snap of January frost, though the air smelled of summer — cut grass, warm stone, something sweet and green she couldn't name. The pendant at her throat warmed by a single degree, then settled. They walked forward. Behind them, Richmond Park — the yellowed grass, the distant carp of rutting deer, the steady hum of the A3 — folded shut like a book. "Oh," Eva breathed. The clearing opened the way a held breath opens. One step it was trees and the next it was a bowl of amber light sunk into the earth, rimmed with standing stones that were not stones so much as oaks that had become stones and then forgotten which they were. Moss had grown across their shoulders in patterns that looked deliberate — spirals, knots, the same loop drawn twice and then left unfinished. Wildflowers ran ankle-deep across the grove's floor. Foxgloves the height of a child. Poppies with centres so black they looked punched out of the fabric of the world. A snowdrop, absurdly, nodding at the base of a thistle in bloom. No breeze moved them, and yet they swayed. "Why do they—" Eva began. "Don't," Nyx said. Gentle. "Some questions wake things." Aurora knelt. Her knees found the ground and the ground found her back, and for a moment she had the strange sensation of being measured. She touched the petal of a poppy with two fingers. It was warm. The black at its centre felt, to her fingertip, like the far side of a mirror. "Rory." Eva's voice had gone tight. "Rory, the trees." She looked up. The oaks at the perimeter had turned. Not moved — turned, the way a head turns to follow a sound. Their bark had opened along the grain into long vertical seams that, in the slanting light, looked uncomfortably like closed eyes. None of them opened. Aurora was suddenly, fiercely grateful. "They're asleep," Nyx said, and their whisper had lost its usual dry humour. "Let's keep them that way." They went deeper. The grove had no right to the depth it possessed. From the threshold it had seemed the size of a tennis court; a dozen paces in, the far side receded, drew back, put more ground between itself and them with each step, as if the clearing were exhaling. A brook appeared that had not been there — silver water over black pebbles, running uphill with a sound like someone humming a half-remembered lullaby. Aurora bent and cupped her hand toward it, and Nyx's shadow fell across her wrist. "Drink nothing. Eat nothing. Accept nothing unless it is freely offered with a name attached." "I wasn't going to drink it." "You were going to touch it. That counts, in some stories." She withdrew her hand. The crescent scar on her wrist had gone pale, almost white, and it tingled the way a limb tingles after sleep. Eva had drifted ahead, drawn to a cluster of mushrooms ringed around a flat stone. They glowed, faint and blue, as though lit from within by a candle behind thin paper. She crouched, not touching, just looking, and the light laid itself along her cheekbones. "There's writing on the stone," she said. Aurora joined her. The letters — if letters they were — had been cut deep into the rock and filled with something that caught the amber sky and threw it back green. The shapes shifted if she looked at them too long, rearranging into new shapes when she blinked, refusing to be read. "Fae script," Nyx murmured over her shoulder. "It doesn't want to be understood by you. Don't push." "What happens if I push?" "You understand it." "And?" "And then you cannot unknow it, and your mouth shapes itself differently, and the next time you ask your mother for tea she hears something else, and she weeps, and neither of you knows why." Aurora straightened up. "Right. No pushing." Somewhere above them — if there was an above, here — something called out. Not a bird. The note was too long, too cleanly held, a single silver tone that trembled at the end into three notes and then into silence. Every flower in the grove tilted toward the sound. Then, slowly, they tilted back. Eva had gone very still. "Rory." "I heard it." "Are we— should we—" "Keep walking," Nyx said. "She knows we're here. She's known since the boundary." At the word she, the pendant against Aurora's collarbone gave a small, polite pulse. Not Hel-warm. Something else. A recognition, perhaps, of proximity to its own strangeness. The brook curled. They followed it around the base of a hawthorn that had been split by lightning and then, it seemed, stitched back together with threads of actual gold — fine bright seams running up its trunk where the wound had been. New leaves grew from the gold itself. Aurora slowed as she passed and could have sworn she heard the tree breathing, a slow, patient rasp, the way an old dog breathes in sleep. "How long have we been in here?" Eva asked. Aurora checked her watch. The second hand was moving. It was also moving backwards. It was also, when she looked again, not there at all, the face of the watch showing only the thin white moon of her own reflected skin. "I don't think that question applies," she said. Ahead, where the brook pooled at the foot of a low rise, a figure stood waist-deep in wildflowers with her back to them. Silver hair fell to where her waist met the poppies and then kept falling, and the poppies where it touched them bloomed brighter, redder, almost wet. She did not turn. She spoke, and her voice arrived from the wrong direction, from behind Aurora's left ear, warm as breath. "You took the long way," Isolde said. "The flowers have been waiting."
created_at"2026-04-24T19:40:37.23Z" 4/24/2026, 7:40:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"whisper"
2"trembled"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount950
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
November1
Nyx6
Aurora12
January1
Richmond1
Park1
Gentle1
Hel-warm1
Ahead1
Eva7
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Ahead"
3"Eva"
places
0"November"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.868
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something close to a person"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1157
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean23.61
std22.05
cv0.934
sampleLengths
08
147
27
329
47
512
623
724
86
949
1029
113
1273
1348
145
158
1654
179
183
1950
2018
213
2288
2315
246
2511
2625
2745
287
2953
3017
315
323
331
3435
356
3655
376
383
394
4013
4127
4276
439
4441
458
4649
4722
4812
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"were exhaling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences104
ratio0.096
matches
0"Aurora felt it in her sternum before she saw it — a slow pressure, as though the air between the trunks had thickened enough to drink."
1"The bluebells gave under her sole with the crisp little snap of January frost, though the air smelled of summer — cut grass, warm stone, something sweet and green she couldn't name."
2"Behind them, Richmond Park — the yellowed grass, the distant carp of rutting deer, the steady hum of the A3 — folded shut like a book."
3"Moss had grown across their shoulders in patterns that looked deliberate — spirals, knots, the same loop drawn twice and then left unfinished."
4"Not moved — turned, the way a head turns to follow a sound."
5"From the threshold it had seemed the size of a tennis court; a dozen paces in, the far side receded, drew back, put more ground between itself and them with each step, as if the clearing were exhaling."
6"A brook appeared that had not been there — silver water over black pebbles, running uphill with a sound like someone humming a half-remembered lullaby."
7"The letters — if letters they were — had been cut deep into the rock and filled with something that caught the amber sky and threw it back green."
8"Somewhere above them — if there was an above, here — something called out."
9"They followed it around the base of a hawthorn that had been split by lightning and then, it seemed, stitched back together with threads of actual gold — fine bright seams running up its trunk where the wound had been."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.037154989384288746
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009554140127388535
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.13
std9.35
cv0.841
sampleLengths
06
12
226
321
47
517
612
77
812
93
107
1113
1219
135
146
155
1632
1712
183
1926
203
219
2241
2323
247
256
2615
2712
288
295
303
311
324
332
3423
3510
363
3716
386
393
403
417
4213
4321
444
455
4613
475
483
4910
71.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners48
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Somewhere above them — if"
1"Then, slowly, they tilted back."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences67
matches
0"She stopped with her foot"
1"Their outline frayed at the"
2"They walked forward."
3"Her knees found the ground"
4"She touched the petal of"
5"It was warm."
6"She looked up."
7"Their bark had opened along"
8"They went deeper."
9"She withdrew her hand."
10"They glowed, faint and blue,"
11"She crouched, not touching, just"
12"They followed it around the"
13"It was also moving backwards."
14"It was also, when she"
15"She did not turn."
16"She spoke, and her voice"
ratio0.254
57.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences67
matches
0"The oaks did not move,"
1"Aurora felt it in her"
2"She stopped with her foot"
3"Their outline frayed at the"
4"The violet of their eyes"
5"Eva swore softly somewhere to"
6"Aurora set her foot down."
7"The bluebells gave under her"
8"The pendant at her throat"
9"They walked forward."
10"The clearing opened the way"
11"Moss had grown across their"
12"Wildflowers ran ankle-deep across the"
13"Foxgloves the height of a"
14"Poppies with centres so black"
15"A snowdrop, absurdly, nodding at"
16"Her knees found the ground"
17"She touched the petal of"
18"It was warm."
19"The black at its centre"
ratio0.806
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She stopped with her foot halfway raised, boot hovering above a tuft of bluebells that had no business growing in November."
1"Moss had grown across their shoulders in patterns that looked deliberate — spirals, knots, the same loop drawn twice and then left unfinished."
2"From the threshold it had seemed the size of a tennis court; a dozen paces in, the far side receded, drew back, put more ground between itself and them with eac…"
3"They glowed, faint and blue, as though lit from within by a candle behind thin paper."
4"They followed it around the base of a hawthorn that had been split by lightning and then, it seemed, stitched back together with threads of actual gold — fine b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.114
86.9510%