| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |
| 71.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1061 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1061 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1075 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 837 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 5 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Started | 1 | | Frenchman | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Frenchman" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite touch, and did not quite not" | | 1 | "not quite not" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1075 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 21.08 | | std | 26.07 | | cv | 1.237 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 80 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 99 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 53 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 81 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "been betrayed" | | 1 | "was embarrassed" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was closing" | | 2 | "were addressing" | | 3 | "was taking" | | 4 | "was buying" |
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| 19.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past eleven — three knuckles, slow, measured — and Rory knew before her hand closed around the chain who was standing on the other side of the door." | | 1 | "He had his ivory cane hooked over one wrist and a paper sack in his other hand, and those eyes of his — the amber and the black — took her in the way they always did: inventory first, apology never." | | 2 | "He came in the way he did everything — carefully, with the small courtesy of a man who knew exactly how much space he was taking up." | | 3 | "That was the worst of him — the almost-smile, the thing that slid across his face like a shadow under a door and was gone again before you could accuse him of it." |
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| 88.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 837 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, stupid, treacherous space" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.04659498207885305 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007168458781362007 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 11.56 | | std | 11.56 | | cv | 1 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 53.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.40860215053763443 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew it the way" | | 1 | "She undid the deadbolts anyway." | | 2 | "His hair was never wet." | | 3 | "He had his ivory cane" | | 4 | "She did not move aside" | | 5 | "He had never once called" | | 6 | "It made her feel, always," | | 7 | "She stepped back." | | 8 | "He came in the way" | | 9 | "He set the paper sack" | | 10 | "He did not sit." | | 11 | "He did not take off" | | 12 | "He looked at her then," | | 13 | "She crossed her arms." | | 14 | "she said again" | | 15 | "He set the cane against" | | 16 | "he quoted, flat" | | 17 | "She pulled the belt of" | | 18 | "He almost smiled." | | 19 | "He moved a book aside" |
| | ratio | 0.642 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "She knew it the way" | | 2 | "She undid the deadbolts anyway." | | 3 | "Eva's paranoia had rubbed off" | | 4 | "Lucien stood on the landing" | | 5 | "That was the first wrong" | | 6 | "His hair was never wet." | | 7 | "The platinum was always slicked" | | 8 | "He had his ivory cane" | | 9 | "She did not move aside" | | 10 | "Rain ticked in the gutter." | | 11 | "The curry house below was" | | 12 | "Lucien glanced down at the" | | 13 | "He had never once called" | | 14 | "It made her feel, always," | | 15 | "She stepped back." | | 16 | "He came in the way" | | 17 | "He set the paper sack" | | 18 | "He did not sit." | | 19 | "He did not take off" |
| | ratio | 0.943 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past eleven — three knuckles, slow, measured — and Rory knew before her hand closed around the chain who was standing on the other side o…" | | 1 | "The platinum was always slicked back with a precision that bordered on theological, and now a strand had fallen loose across his forehead, darkened nearly to br…" | | 2 | "Behind her, Ptolemy threaded figure-eights around her ankles, purring with the shameless enthusiasm of a creature who had never once been betrayed by anyone." | | 3 | "It made her feel, always, as though he were addressing someone older and more dangerous than she actually was." | | 4 | "He came in the way he did everything — carefully, with the small courtesy of a man who knew exactly how much space he was taking up." | | 5 | "He set the paper sack on the kitchenette counter between a stack of Eva's grimoires and a half-drunk mug of tea that had gone cold hours ago." | | 6 | "That was the worst of him — the almost-smile, the thing that slid across his face like a shadow under a door and was gone again before you could accuse him of i…" |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.178 | | leniency | 0.356 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |