Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0G5TN119BPVM1R4MGZWEHM

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven — three knuckles, slow, measured — and Rory knew before her hand closed around the chain who was standing on the other side of the door. She knew it the way you knew a bruise before you pressed it. She undid the deadbolts anyway. All three. Eva's paranoia had rubbed off on her these last months, and the slide of each lock gave her a little longer to decide what face to wear. Lucien stood on the landing with rain in his hair. That was the first wrong thing. His hair was never wet. The platinum was always slicked back with a precision that bordered on theological, and now a strand had fallen loose across his forehead, darkened nearly to bronze by the weather. He had his ivory cane hooked over one wrist and a paper sack in his other hand, and those eyes of his — the amber and the black — took her in the way they always did: inventory first, apology never. "You're not in your own flat," he said. "Observation. Impressive." "I went there first." "I'm cat-sitting." She did not move aside. Behind her, Ptolemy threaded figure-eights around her ankles, purring with the shameless enthusiasm of a creature who had never once been betrayed by anyone. "Eva's in Edinburgh until Sunday." "I know." "Of course you do." A beat. Rain ticked in the gutter. The curry house below was closing up for the night, and the smell of cumin and frying onions drifted up the stairwell with the damp. Lucien glanced down at the paper sack as though surprised to find it in his hand. "May I come in, Aurora." Not Rory. He had never once called her Rory, not even that night six weeks ago when she'd had her mouth against his throat and her fingers buried in his collar, not even when he'd said her name like a prayer he was embarrassed to know the words to. Aurora. It made her feel, always, as though he were addressing someone older and more dangerous than she actually was. She stepped back. He came in the way he did everything — carefully, with the small courtesy of a man who knew exactly how much space he was taking up. He set the paper sack on the kitchenette counter between a stack of Eva's grimoires and a half-drunk mug of tea that had gone cold hours ago. He did not sit. He did not take off his coat. "I brought food," he said. "It's almost midnight." "You forget to eat when you're angry." "I'm not angry." He looked at her then, really looked, and she hated the small turning-over feeling in her chest, the one that always happened when he put those mismatched eyes on her full-force. She crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight, pale as a fingernail paring, and she saw him notice it and look away, because six weeks ago he had pressed his mouth to it and said something in French she'd pretended not to understand. "I'm not angry," she said again. "I'm finished." "Yes." He set the cane against the counter. "You made that clear." "Did I? Because you've shown up at my door twice this week, Luc, and I thought the note was fairly explicit." "The note was three words." "They were the right three words." "*Don't follow me,*" he quoted, flat. "Very literary." "Succinct." She pulled the belt of her dressing gown tighter. "You always said I was succinct." He almost smiled. That was the worst of him — the almost-smile, the thing that slid across his face like a shadow under a door and was gone again before you could accuse him of it. He moved a book aside on the counter. He moved another. He was buying time, and Lucien Moreau did not buy time. He sold it, brokered it, rented it out by the hour to people who paid in secrets. He did not stand in a cramped Brick Lane flat at midnight rearranging a witch's library because he could not decide what to say. "I was wrong," he said finally. Rory went very still. "About what part." Her voice came out smaller than she meant it. Ptolemy had gone silent too, as if the cat also wanted to hear. "About thinking I could — " He stopped. Started again. "About telling you what I did. About how. You deserved — " His jaw worked. In the lamplight she could see the faint tension at the hinge of it, the place she had once put her thumb. "You deserved the truth given gently. I gave it to you like a knife." "You gave it to me in a fucking alley, Lucien." "Yes." "After." "Yes." "With your coat still — " "I know what I did, Aurora." She found she had walked closer without deciding to. Two steps, maybe three. The kitchenette was very small. He smelled of rain and the particular cologne he wore, which was expensive and old-fashioned and which she would, she knew, smell on strangers for the rest of her life and hate them for it. "Why are you here," she said. "Because you asked me not to come." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have." He did look at her now, and the black eye was steady and the amber one was not, and it was the amber one that had always given him away, the flicker in it like a candle someone kept trying to cup a hand around. "I have been a great many things to a great many people, and I have been useful to most of them. I was useful to you. That was the arrangement." "Don't." "Let me finish." "Don't, Luc — " "I was not supposed to want to be anything else." The rain ticked. The cat wound itself between them, oblivious and warm. Rory put her hand on the counter because her knees had done something unreliable, and his hand was already there, and their fingers did not quite touch, and did not quite not. "Say something," he said, and for the first time she could remember, the Frenchman sounded afraid. She looked at the paper sack on the counter. She looked at the rain in his hair. She looked at the small, stupid, treacherous space between their hands. "Take off your coat," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.089
71.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"very"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"tension"
2"flicker"
3"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"was embarrassed"
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"notice"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1075
ratio0.003
matches
0"Don't follow me,"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount837
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Ptolemy2
Eva2
French1
Lucien3
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Started1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Frenchman"
places
0"French"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touch, and did not quite not"
1"not quite not"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1075
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean21.08
std26.07
cv1.237
sampleLengths
046
134
210
382
48
52
64
736
82
94
1048
115
1269
133
1465
155
163
177
183
1980
208
2112
2221
235
246
258
2616
2799
286
294
3025
3161
3210
331
341
351
366
376
3853
396
407
414
4281
431
443
454
4610
4744
4816
4928
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"been betrayed"
1"was embarrassed"
2"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was standing"
1"was closing"
2"were addressing"
3"was taking"
4"was buying"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven — three knuckles, slow, measured — and Rory knew before her hand closed around the chain who was standing on the other side of the door."
1"He had his ivory cane hooked over one wrist and a paper sack in his other hand, and those eyes of his — the amber and the black — took her in the way they always did: inventory first, apology never."
2"He came in the way he did everything — carefully, with the small courtesy of a man who knew exactly how much space he was taking up."
3"That was the worst of him — the almost-smile, the thing that slid across his face like a shadow under a door and was gone again before you could accuse him of it."
88.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, stupid, treacherous space"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04659498207885305
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007168458781362007
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.56
std11.56
cv1
sampleLengths
033
113
25
32
427
510
66
75
830
941
108
112
124
137
1424
155
162
174
182
195
2025
2116
225
232
2447
251
2619
273
2827
2927
304
317
325
333
347
353
3631
374
3845
396
402
418
424
4321
445
456
466
472
4810
496
53.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.40860215053763443
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences53
matches
0"She knew it the way"
1"She undid the deadbolts anyway."
2"His hair was never wet."
3"He had his ivory cane"
4"She did not move aside"
5"He had never once called"
6"It made her feel, always,"
7"She stepped back."
8"He came in the way"
9"He set the paper sack"
10"He did not sit."
11"He did not take off"
12"He looked at her then,"
13"She crossed her arms."
14"she said again"
15"He set the cane against"
16"he quoted, flat"
17"She pulled the belt of"
18"He almost smiled."
19"He moved a book aside"
ratio0.642
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"She knew it the way"
2"She undid the deadbolts anyway."
3"Eva's paranoia had rubbed off"
4"Lucien stood on the landing"
5"That was the first wrong"
6"His hair was never wet."
7"The platinum was always slicked"
8"He had his ivory cane"
9"She did not move aside"
10"Rain ticked in the gutter."
11"The curry house below was"
12"Lucien glanced down at the"
13"He had never once called"
14"It made her feel, always,"
15"She stepped back."
16"He came in the way"
17"He set the paper sack"
18"He did not sit."
19"He did not take off"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven — three knuckles, slow, measured — and Rory knew before her hand closed around the chain who was standing on the other side o…"
1"The platinum was always slicked back with a precision that bordered on theological, and now a strand had fallen loose across his forehead, darkened nearly to br…"
2"Behind her, Ptolemy threaded figure-eights around her ankles, purring with the shameless enthusiasm of a creature who had never once been betrayed by anyone."
3"It made her feel, always, as though he were addressing someone older and more dangerous than she actually was."
4"He came in the way he did everything — carefully, with the small courtesy of a man who knew exactly how much space he was taking up."
5"He set the paper sack on the kitchenette counter between a stack of Eva's grimoires and a half-drunk mug of tea that had gone cold hours ago."
6"That was the worst of him — the almost-smile, the thing that slid across his face like a shadow under a door and was gone again before you could accuse him of i…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he quoted, flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he quoted (quote)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.178
leniency0.356
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.044
72.4134%