| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.837 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1143 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1143 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unreadable" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "charm" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | English | 1 | | French | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Welsh | 1 | | Hanway | 1 | | Street | 1 | | One | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Carefully | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "One" | | 5 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Hanway" | | 3 | "Street" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 26.74 | | std | 23.99 | | cv | 0.897 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 69 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 86 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 82 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 70 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 59 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairwell light caught the platinum of his hair and made one amber eye glow; the other stayed black and unreadable, as it always did." | | 1 | "Eva's research was everywhere — stacks of grimoires on the kitchen table, a half-unrolled scroll pinned down by a jam jar, sticky notes in three alphabets fluttering from the fridge." | | 2 | "Not her face — her left wrist, where the small crescent scar caught the lamplight as she lifted the kettle." | | 3 | "The bracelet he had given her two months ago — a thin silver chain with a charm like a blackened coin — hung against her pulse." | | 4 | "The sofa was small; he chose the farther end, which she appreciated and resented in equal measure." | | 5 | "\"That is not an excuse. I offer it as information.\" One amber eye lifted to hers; the black one followed, and the combination hit her, as always, like a small skipped step on a staircase." | | 6 | "Rory looked at his hands — long, pale, scarred in places she had once traced with her thumb — and then at his face, and she made the mistake, finally, of meeting both eyes at once." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 887 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.038331454340473504 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006764374295377677 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.64 | | std | 10.41 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 46.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.34065934065934067 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, a door slammed," |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She regretted it before the" | | 1 | "he said, in that low," | | 2 | "She did not step aside." | | 3 | "She did not widen her" | | 4 | "He said it carefully, the" | | 5 | "She almost said no." | | 6 | "She rehearsed the shape of" | | 7 | "He moved through the flat" | | 8 | "She fled to the kitchenette." | | 9 | "She fussed with mugs, teabags," | | 10 | "She looked down before she" | | 11 | "She had told herself, every" | | 12 | "He accepted the mug she" | | 13 | "She said it too quickly" | | 14 | "He turned the mug in" | | 15 | "She had learned, with him," | | 16 | "She looked away." | | 17 | "She remembered the third night" | | 18 | "She was not going to" | | 19 | "She refused to hand him" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "She regretted it before the" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "Charcoal suit, cane tucked under" | | 4 | "The stairwell light caught the" | | 5 | "he said, in that low," | | 6 | "Ptolemy wound himself around her" | | 7 | "She did not step aside." | | 8 | "She did not widen her" | | 9 | "The curry house two floors" | | 10 | "The corner of his mouth" | | 11 | "He said it carefully, the" | | 12 | "She almost said no." | | 13 | "She rehearsed the shape of" | | 14 | "He moved through the flat" | | 15 | "Eva's research was everywhere —" | | 16 | "Lucien took it in without" | | 17 | "Rory asked, because her mother" | | 18 | "She fled to the kitchenette." | | 19 | "The kettle was already hot." |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Charcoal suit, cane tucked under one arm, shoulders dusted with the fine mist that had been threatening all afternoon." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.256 | | leniency | 0.512 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |