Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0G6BJAC05400FNRHQ45WQW

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25.0s
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a reluctant thunk, and Rory pulled the door open an inch before she'd bothered to look through the peephole. That was her first mistake. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing like he'd been poured into his suit that morning, cane resting against his shoulder, rain beading along the charcoal wool. Platinum hair slicked back as though the weather hadn't dared touch it. One amber eye, one black. Both fixed on her. "You're meant to check before you open." "I knew it was you." A lie. She shoved the chain back into its runner and wedged her bare foot against the door. "Eva's not here." "I didn't come for Eva." Ptolemy threaded between her ankles and made a break for the stairwell. Rory scooped him up, the tabby going limp with betrayal, and used the movement to buy herself a breath she badly needed. "Then you can turn around," she said into Ptolemy's fur. "Whatever you want, the answer's no." "You haven't heard it." "I know you." "Mm." He tilted his head, that half-smile doing the work his mouth refused to. "Do you, Aurora." Her full name, from him, still landed like a hand between the shoulder blades. She hated that. She hated more that he'd noticed her notice. "Five minutes," he said. "Then I go." She held the door another beat, long enough to let him think she might close it. Long enough to pretend she was weighing something. Then she stepped back and let him in. The flat was at its usual worst: books stacked three deep on the coffee table, a half-eaten bowl of cereal fossilising on the windowsill, Eva's research spread across the rug in a fan of yellow legal paper. Lucien took it in without remark, which was its own species of remark. He set his cane against the wall. Didn't sit. "Tea?" The word left her before she could stop it. Old habit. Bad one. "Please." She put Ptolemy on the armchair and went to the kettle because it gave her hands something better to do than shake. The tap coughed. The gas ring ticked twice before catching. Behind her, Lucien did not pace. He never paced. He just existed in a room until the room arranged itself around him. "You look thin," he said. "I look fine." "Both, then." She set two mugs down harder than she needed to. "You came for tea and commentary?" "I came because someone in Camden has been asking after a girl matching your description, and I don't love the people doing the asking." The kettle hit its note. She poured, watching the water turn amber, and only afterwards did she trust her voice. "Evan?" "Not him. Someone he paid." "How much?" "Enough that I thought you should know before you went to work tomorrow and found him parked outside the Empress." She passed him the mug. Their fingers brushed on the handle, and she felt the small animal part of her brain go very quiet and very alert, the way it used to when he stood close in doorways and didn't move. "Thank you." She meant for the warning. She meant for the care of it. She meant to sound less like someone whose sternum had just cracked open. Lucien drank. Didn't sit. He was letting her keep the room. "You could have phoned," she said. "I could have." "But you didn't." "No." "Why." He put the mug down on the stack of books beside him — carefully, a coaster of paperbacks — and looked at her properly for the first time since she'd opened the door. The black eye did what it always did, which was refuse to tell her anything. The amber one was worse. The amber one told her too much. "Because the last time I phoned," he said, "you didn't pick up." "Luc—" "For three weeks." "I know how long it was." "Do you." She set her own mug down. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight — pale little moon — and she covered it with her thumb without meaning to. He saw that too. He saw everything. "I needed the time," she said. "I gave you the time." "You gave me an opinion, Lucien. Dressed up as time." "I told you not to go back to Cardiff alone." "I didn't go back." "I know. That's not the argument." "Then what's the argument?" He was quiet. The rain did a soft, consistent thing against the window. Downstairs, someone in the curry house shouted about onions in a language she didn't speak. A very ordinary Tuesday, in the middle of which stood a man in a tailored suit she had kissed twice and walked away from once. "The argument," he said, "is that I told you I was worried about you, and you heard me trying to own you." "That's not—" "And I don't know how to be worried about you quietly, Aurora. I have tried. It is not a thing I'm good at." She took a step. She hadn't planned to. The floorboard under the rug creaked at her, traitor. "You don't have to be good at it." "I have to be better at it than I was." "Luc." He looked up. "Sit down," she said. "Before I say something I'll regret standing." A flicker of something — amusement, or the older, quieter thing underneath it — crossed his mouth. He sat. The armchair accepted him like it had been waiting. Ptolemy, outrageous traitor, climbed immediately into his lap and began kneading the wool of a suit that probably cost more than her rent. Rory stayed standing. It felt important to stay standing. "I didn't pick up," she said, "because I was going to. And I knew if I did, I'd come back to yours that night, and I wasn't — I wasn't steady enough to come back to yours that night and mean it." "And now?" "Now I'm standing in my friend's kitchen at ten p.m. not drinking tea with you." "That's not an answer." "It's the one I've got." He stroked Ptolemy's ear with one gloved finger. Watched her over the cat's head. "Then I'll wait for a better one," he said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.236
leniency0.473
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount698
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau1
Ptolemy5
Eva1
Old1
Lucien4
Tuesday1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1038
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean15.26
std15.88
cv1.041
sampleLengths
029
147
27
326
45
534
616
74
83
917
1025
117
1232
1359
1414
151
1654
175
183
192
2016
2124
2220
231
245
252
2620
2741
2827
2911
306
313
323
331
341
3560
3612
371
383
396
402
4137
426
435
4410
4510
464
476
484
4953
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been poured"
96.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was weighing"
1"was letting"
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"He put the mug down on the stack of books beside him — carefully, a coaster of paperbacks — and looked at her properly for the first time since she'd opened the door."
1"The crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight — pale little moon — and she covered it with her thumb without meaning to."
2"A flicker of something — amusement, or the older, quieter thing underneath it — crossed his mouth."
95.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0446685878962536
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008645533141210375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean8.95
std8.23
cv0.92
sampleLengths
024
15
226
312
45
54
67
77
816
93
105
1112
1222
1310
146
154
163
1714
183
1914
203
218
224
233
2416
258
268
2737
2813
297
302
3110
322
332
341
3522
363
377
386
393
4013
415
423
432
4410
456
4624
475
4815
491
56.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.39655172413793105
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners46
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Then she stepped back and"
ratio0.017
23.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences59
matches
0"She shoved the chain back"
1"she said into Ptolemy's fur"
2"He tilted his head, that"
3"Her full name, from him,"
4"She hated that."
5"She hated more that he'd"
6"She held the door another"
7"He set his cane against"
8"She put Ptolemy on the"
9"He never paced."
10"He just existed in a"
11"She set two mugs down"
12"She poured, watching the water"
13"She passed him the mug."
14"Their fingers brushed on the"
15"She meant for the warning"
16"She meant for the care"
17"She meant to sound less"
18"He was letting her keep"
19"He put the mug down"
ratio0.492
2.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences59
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"That was her first mistake."
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Platinum hair slicked back as"
4"Both fixed on her."
5"She shoved the chain back"
6"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles"
7"Rory scooped him up, the"
8"she said into Ptolemy's fur"
9"He tilted his head, that"
10"Her full name, from him,"
11"She hated that."
12"She hated more that he'd"
13"She held the door another"
14"The flat was at its"
15"Lucien took it in without"
16"He set his cane against"
17"The word left her before"
18"She put Ptolemy on the"
19"The tap coughed."
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien took it in without remark, which was its own species of remark."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tilted, that half-smile doing the work his mouth refused to"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4227%