Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0GB3T847EH8DKVHR4Q2FP7

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33.2s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairwell smelled of wet iron and old tile, and Harlow Quinn disliked it before she'd reached the bottom step. Her torch cut a narrow cone through the dark. Somewhere ahead, generator light hummed; somewhere behind her, Camden went on pretending it was an ordinary Tuesday above ground. "Mind the runoff, ma'am." PC Adeyemi was waiting at the landing, hi-vis jacket sweating in the closeness. "Water's come up through the tunnel. Forensics aren't chuffed." "Where's DS Iver?" "On the platform with the body." She nodded and ducked under the tape. The abandoned station had been disused since the forties — she'd been briefed on the walk from the cordon — but someone had been using it recently. The tiles showed a dull polish under the boot-scuff. A smell of candle wax clung beneath the mildew. At the foot of the old stairwell, a ticket hall opened into a vault of brick, and in the middle of it lay a man, face down, arms thrown forward as if he had been reaching for something that was no longer there. Iver looked up from his crouch. He was a big, careful man with a neat beard and the habit of narrating his findings aloud, even to himself. "Harlow. Glad you came." "You said it was a strange one." She stepped around the puddle. Her leather watch had fogged under its crystal from the damp; she twisted it absently on her wrist. "Show me." "Male, fifties. No ID, no wallet, no phone. Throat cut — one clean pull, left to right, deep enough to nick the cervical spine. Blood pattern on the tiles is consistent with the wound. Pathologist says four hours, maybe five." "Motive?" "Robbery gone wrong, most likely. Look at the pockets — turned out. And there's this." He tilted his torch toward a streak of chalk on the wall, a ragged circle with a jagged slash through it. "Gang mark. We've seen similar around King's Cross. Could be territorial. My money's on a mugging that escalated." Quinn didn't answer. She crouched beside the body, and her knees complained in their quiet, eighteen-years-of-service way. She breathed through her mouth. The man's hair was grey at the temples, his coat good wool and older than it looked. His right hand was half-closed. Under the nails, she could see, there was nothing — no skin, no fibres. The fingers were clean. Too clean. "Iver," she said, "what was he holding?" "Beg pardon?" "His hand. It's shaped like it was holding something. But there's no weapon, no strap, no phone. His other fist has the same curl." She touched, gently, the crook of the left index finger. It wanted to close around something slim, about the width of a pencil, about the weight, she guessed, of nothing very much. Iver frowned. "The killer could have taken it." "Took the thing and left the wallet? The wallet's on the floor, Iver. Just not the notes." "Some of them went for the drugs and missed the cash. Happens." She let that go, for the moment. She stood and walked a slow perimeter, torch low. The blood had pooled where it ought to have pooled, yes, following the camber of the old tiles toward a drain. But there was a second shape in it — a ring of dry tile encircled by blood on all sides, perfectly round, as if something cylindrical had stood in the pool and been taken up. A candle, perhaps. She had seen it before and not recognised it. Now she looked properly and saw others: three, four, five voids in the stain, arranged in a loose arc around the body. Wax chips, pale as milk teeth, glittered in the torchlight. "Iver." "Mm?" "Five candles. Here, here, here." She pointed. "Taken up after the blood had already settled — look at the clean edges. Whoever did this waited for him to bleed out, then collected what they'd lit." "Candles." Iver's voice had the careful flatness of a man who wanted not to hear what he was hearing. "Ritual, you reckon." "I didn't say ritual. I said candles." "Teenagers play at that sort of thing. Doesn't mean—" "Teenagers don't cut a man's throat with a surgeon's pull." She nodded at the wound. "That's not a panicked slash. That's one line. Someone who knew where the artery was and wasn't frightened of the mess." She walked on. At the threshold of the platform proper, where the tiling gave way to the black mouth of the tunnel, the chalk mark appeared again — the circle, the slash. Iver had called it a gang mark. Quinn leaned close. Under the chalk, scratched faint into the grout, was the same symbol in older lines, and beneath that, older still, the ghost of a third. Layers of it. Years of it. "Iver. Your King's Cross gang been operating since the Blitz?" He came to stand beside her, and for a long moment said nothing. Quinn crouched a third time. At the base of the wall, half-hidden by a drift of grit, lay a small, pale sliver. She lifted it with gloved fingers. Bone. Not a fragment of the man on the floor — too weathered, too yellow, drilled through at one end as if for a cord. She turned it in the torchlight. Old. And warm, though it had no right to be. Something moved at the edge of her vision — a shift in the dark of the tunnel that was not a rat and not the draft. When she looked up, it was gone. Her pulse did something she didn't approve of. Three years ago, in a warehouse off the Isle of Dogs, Morris had turned his head the same way she'd just turned hers, and by the time she'd reached him he had been dead and the room had been empty and no one, not one person, had been able to explain it. She made herself breathe. She made her hand stop shaking around the bone. "Ma'am?" Iver said. "You all right?" "Bag this." She dropped it into the evidence pouch he held out. "And get forensics back down here with UV. I want every inch of these walls. Every inch, Iver. And I want a list of anyone with access to this station in the last five years — TfL, Urban Explorer forums, film crews, the lot." "You don't think it's a mugging." "I think," Quinn said, standing, wiping her palm on her coat as if that would help, "that whoever killed this man wasn't after his wallet. They were after whatever he came down here to buy." She looked once more at the curled, empty hand — the fingers still cupped around the absence — and felt the shape of a case opening beneath her, deeper than the platform, deeper than the tunnel, going down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped around [around]"
1"She touched gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.647
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.118
86.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1128
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1141
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It wanted to close around something slim, about the width of a pencil, about the weight, she guessed, of nothing very mu…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount793
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Iver"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn5
Camden1
Tuesday1
Adeyemi1
Iver5
Isle1
Dogs1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Iver"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1141
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"let that go"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.84
std28.28
cv0.917
sampleLengths
048
126
23
36
495
531
632
740
81
954
1064
117
122
1356
148
1517
1612
1716
18100
191
201
2135
2222
237
249
2536
2673
2710
2813
2969
3093
3113
326
3356
346
3535
3638
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"been disused"
1"been briefed"
2"been taken"
3"was gone"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was hearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences86
ratio0.105
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, generator light hummed; somewhere behind her, Camden went on pretending it was an ordinary Tuesday above ground."
1"The abandoned station had been disused since the forties — she'd been briefed on the walk from the cordon — but someone had been using it recently."
2"Her leather watch had fogged under its crystal from the damp; she twisted it absently on her wrist."
3"Under the nails, she could see, there was nothing — no skin, no fibres."
4"But there was a second shape in it — a ring of dry tile encircled by blood on all sides, perfectly round, as if something cylindrical had stood in the pool and been taken up."
5"At the threshold of the platform proper, where the tiling gave way to the black mouth of the tunnel, the chalk mark appeared again — the circle, the slash."
6"Not a fragment of the man on the floor — too weathered, too yellow, drilled through at one end as if for a cord."
7"Something moved at the edge of her vision — a shift in the dark of the tunnel that was not a rat and not the draft."
8"She looked once more at the curled, empty hand — the fingers still cupped around the absence — and felt the shape of a case opening beneath her, deeper than the platform, deeper than the tunnel, going down."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03286978508217446
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006321112515802781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.27
std11.69
cv0.881
sampleLengths
020
19
219
317
49
53
66
77
827
99
109
1143
126
1321
144
1512
1618
172
1840
191
2036
2118
223
2314
245
2517
265
2714
284
292
307
312
3234
3322
342
356
3617
3712
387
399
4021
4135
423
439
4422
4510
461
471
487
4928
89.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5697674418604651
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners49
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, generator light hummed;"
ratio0.018
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her torch cut a narrow"
1"She nodded and ducked under"
2"He was a big, careful"
3"She stepped around the puddle"
4"Her leather watch had fogged"
5"He tilted his torch toward"
6"She crouched beside the body,"
7"She breathed through her mouth."
8"His right hand was half-closed."
9"She touched, gently, the crook"
10"It wanted to close around"
11"She let that go, for"
12"She stood and walked a"
13"She had seen it before"
14"She nodded at the wound"
15"She walked on."
16"He came to stand beside"
17"She lifted it with gloved"
18"She turned it in the"
19"Her pulse did something she"
ratio0.429
76.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences56
matches
0"The stairwell smelled of wet"
1"Her torch cut a narrow"
2"PC Adeyemi was waiting at"
3"She nodded and ducked under"
4"The abandoned station had been"
5"The tiles showed a dull"
6"A smell of candle wax"
7"Iver looked up from his"
8"He was a big, careful"
9"She stepped around the puddle"
10"Her leather watch had fogged"
11"He tilted his torch toward"
12"Quinn didn't answer."
13"She crouched beside the body,"
14"She breathed through her mouth."
15"The man's hair was grey"
16"His right hand was half-closed."
17"The fingers were clean."
18"She touched, gently, the crook"
19"It wanted to close around"
ratio0.768
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now she looked properly and"
ratio0.018
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"At the foot of the old stairwell, a ticket hall opened into a vault of brick, and in the middle of it lay a man, face down, arms thrown forward as if he had bee…"
1"But there was a second shape in it — a ring of dry tile encircled by blood on all sides, perfectly round, as if something cylindrical had stood in the pool and …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.1554%