| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped around [around]" | | 1 | "She touched gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.647 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 86.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsms | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystal" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1141 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It wanted to close around something slim, about the width of a pencil, about the weight, she guessed, of nothing very mu…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 793 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Iver" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 5 | | Camden | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Adeyemi | 1 | | Iver | 5 | | Isle | 1 | | Dogs | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Iver" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 30.84 | | std | 28.28 | | cv | 0.917 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 95 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 100 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 73 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 69 | | 30 | 93 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 38 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "been disused" | | 1 | "been briefed" | | 2 | "been taken" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 87.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "was hearing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, generator light hummed; somewhere behind her, Camden went on pretending it was an ordinary Tuesday above ground." | | 1 | "The abandoned station had been disused since the forties — she'd been briefed on the walk from the cordon — but someone had been using it recently." | | 2 | "Her leather watch had fogged under its crystal from the damp; she twisted it absently on her wrist." | | 3 | "Under the nails, she could see, there was nothing — no skin, no fibres." | | 4 | "But there was a second shape in it — a ring of dry tile encircled by blood on all sides, perfectly round, as if something cylindrical had stood in the pool and been taken up." | | 5 | "At the threshold of the platform proper, where the tiling gave way to the black mouth of the tunnel, the chalk mark appeared again — the circle, the slash." | | 6 | "Not a fragment of the man on the floor — too weathered, too yellow, drilled through at one end as if for a cord." | | 7 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision — a shift in the dark of the tunnel that was not a rat and not the draft." | | 8 | "She looked once more at the curled, empty hand — the fingers still cupped around the absence — and felt the shape of a case opening beneath her, deeper than the platform, deeper than the tunnel, going down." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 791 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03286978508217446 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006321112515802781 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 13.27 | | std | 11.69 | | cv | 0.881 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 89.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5697674418604651 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, generator light hummed;" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch cut a narrow" | | 1 | "She nodded and ducked under" | | 2 | "He was a big, careful" | | 3 | "She stepped around the puddle" | | 4 | "Her leather watch had fogged" | | 5 | "He tilted his torch toward" | | 6 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 7 | "She breathed through her mouth." | | 8 | "His right hand was half-closed." | | 9 | "She touched, gently, the crook" | | 10 | "It wanted to close around" | | 11 | "She let that go, for" | | 12 | "She stood and walked a" | | 13 | "She had seen it before" | | 14 | "She nodded at the wound" | | 15 | "She walked on." | | 16 | "He came to stand beside" | | 17 | "She lifted it with gloved" | | 18 | "She turned it in the" | | 19 | "Her pulse did something she" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 76.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairwell smelled of wet" | | 1 | "Her torch cut a narrow" | | 2 | "PC Adeyemi was waiting at" | | 3 | "She nodded and ducked under" | | 4 | "The abandoned station had been" | | 5 | "The tiles showed a dull" | | 6 | "A smell of candle wax" | | 7 | "Iver looked up from his" | | 8 | "He was a big, careful" | | 9 | "She stepped around the puddle" | | 10 | "Her leather watch had fogged" | | 11 | "He tilted his torch toward" | | 12 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 13 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 14 | "She breathed through her mouth." | | 15 | "The man's hair was grey" | | 16 | "His right hand was half-closed." | | 17 | "The fingers were clean." | | 18 | "She touched, gently, the crook" | | 19 | "It wanted to close around" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she looked properly and" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "At the foot of the old stairwell, a ticket hall opened into a vault of brick, and in the middle of it lay a man, face down, arms thrown forward as if he had bee…" | | 1 | "But there was a second shape in it — a ring of dry tile encircled by blood on all sides, perfectly round, as if something cylindrical had stood in the pool and …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |