| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 74.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1165 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 87.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1165 | | totalAiIsms | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "lurch" | | 2 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1181 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1011 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Eva | 9 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | December | 1 | | January | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.61 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite water — a note, sustained, a held chord in a language Rory's chest understood before her mind could" | | 1 | "as though waking" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 26.24 | | std | 28.85 | | cv | 1.099 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 101 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 87 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 105 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 73 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 42.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "was reaching" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "were having" | | 3 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had bundled herself into three coats and still looked cold; her breath fogged her glasses." | | 1 | "That was the part that kept unsettling her — they walked a pace ahead, boots making no sound at all on the rimed grass, their tall silhouette cut out of the predawn blue like a missing piece of the world." | | 2 | "Inside it the Heartstone pendant lay cold and quiet against her notebook — no portals here, then." | | 3 | "One moment it was twenty yards off, a black snarl against the sky; the next they were under it, and Rory realized with a kind of slow, sickening lurch that she did not remember walking the distance between." | | 4 | "There were nine of them, maybe more — it was hard to count, because Rory's eyes kept slipping off, the way they slipped off a word she'd read three times without understanding." | | 5 | "The cold on the far side of her body lagged behind, and for a heartbeat she was halved — one Rory still in December, one Rory already somewhere else — and then the rest of her caught up and she stumbled out onto soft grass." | | 6 | "The grass was full of tiny white stars of stitchwort, and bluebells, and something with a petal like a tongue of flame that she did not know the name of, and she could smell all of them at once — honey and pepper and that warm, dusty smell of a meadow at the end of a long afternoon." | | 7 | "Nyx emerged last, and the grove took them oddly; their shadow-form gathered itself more fully here, edges firming, as though the place insisted on a shape." | | 8 | "In its center a low spring bubbled up between pale roots, and the water made a sound that was not quite water — a note, sustained, a held chord in a language Rory's chest understood before her mind could." | | 9 | "Above them the sky was — she tilted her head back — the sky was wrong." | | 10 | "Rory caught her wrist — gently, gently — and Eva looked up, blinking as though waking." | | 11 | "The second hand was moving, but slowly — an unhurried sweep, as though the seconds had decided to be minutes, or as though the minutes were having a long conversation." | | 12 | "Rory was certain of that — the grass in front of her was uncreased, unmarked, the stitchwort undisturbed." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 999 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same pre-dawn blue she" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03803803803803804 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014014014014014014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.43 | | std | 11.46 | | cv | 0.922 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 45 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 58 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 61.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4105263157894737 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere past the tree line" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her other hand drifted to" | | 1 | "It always did." | | 2 | "She'd taken to thinking of" | | 3 | "Her ears popped." | | 4 | "She stared at it." | | 5 | "Her boots had stepped from" | | 6 | "They looked, Rory thought, almost" | | 7 | "They drifted very slowly, like" | | 8 | "She lowered her gaze." | | 9 | "She had not walked there." | | 10 | "Her eyes were the pale," | | 11 | "She tilted her head at" |
| | ratio | 0.19 | |
| 63.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost came off the" | | 1 | "Eva whispered beside her, fingers" | | 2 | "Eva had bundled herself into" | | 3 | "Rory repeated, because saying a" | | 4 | "Nyx did not breathe." | | 5 | "That was the part that" | | 6 | "Nyx said, and their voice" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "Her other hand drifted to" | | 9 | "It always did." | | 10 | "She'd taken to thinking of" | | 11 | "The hawthorn came up on" | | 12 | "Oak, not stone." | | 13 | "Oak that had gone to" | | 14 | "The bark was grey and" | | 15 | "Ice sleeved every twig." | | 16 | "The ice did not melt" | | 17 | "Eva stopped breathing." | | 18 | "Rory could hear her not" | | 19 | "Nyx turned their head a" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the leather, the" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the part that kept unsettling her — they walked a pace ahead, boots making no sound at all on the rimed grass, their tall silhouette cut out of the pre…" | | 1 | "Nyx emerged last, and the grove took them oddly; their shadow-form gathered itself more fully here, edges firming, as though the place insisted on a shape." | | 2 | "In its center a low spring bubbled up between pale roots, and the water made a sound that was not quite water — a note, sustained, a held chord in a language Ro…" | | 3 | "The sky was the same pre-dawn blue she had left, but behind it, faintly, she could see stars arranged in patterns that did not belong to any January she had liv…" | | 4 | "The second hand was moving, but slowly — an unhurried sweep, as though the seconds had decided to be minutes, or as though the minutes were having a long conver…" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva whispered, fingers tight on Rory's sleeve" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |