Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0GC3DZ5J1C8C173V23W5MV

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30.0s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a sound like a snapping bone, and Rory pulled the door open already halfway into a complaint about the curry smell in the stairwell. The words died somewhere behind her teeth. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with one gloved hand resting lightly on the head of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal jacket that looked as though it had been cut from a storm cloud. His platinum hair was combed back with the same obsessive precision as always. The amber eye caught the weak hallway light; the black one didn't. Behind him, somewhere on the street two floors below, a man was shouting at a delivery bike. "Rory," Lucien said. Two syllables, arranged the way he arranged everything — with care. She held the door half-closed against her hip. She was barefoot, in leggings and one of Eva's old university hoodies, and her hair was still damp from the shower. She had not, in the long accounting of today, planned for this. "How did you get up here?" "Your downstairs neighbor was coming out. He held the door." "He's not supposed to hold the door." "I am very charming," Lucien said, without smiling, "when I wish to be." Ptolemy slunk around the back of her ankles, took one look at Lucien, and retreated under the sofa with the offended dignity of a cat who had rendered his opinion clear. Rory envied him. She wished she had a sofa to crawl under. She wished Eva were home. She wished, most of all, that her heart would settle back into the rhythm it had used ten seconds ago, before she opened the door. "I told you not to come here." "You told me a great many things, in Southwark. Most of them were unfair, and several of them were untrue." His voice was very quiet. "I did not come to argue about any of them." "Then why are you here, Luc?" He looked down at the toe of his shoe, then up again, and for an instant the carefully composed face slipped, just a shade. It was only in that hairline fracture that she saw he had come up the stairs expecting her to close the door in his face. "Because I have information you need," he said. "And because I could not have this conversation by phone." She considered the door. She considered, quite seriously, shutting it. The memory of the last time she had seen him — the Blackfriars bridge, the rain, the thing he had said that she could not unhear and could not stop turning over at three in the morning — rose up hot under her collarbone. She wanted to be angrier than she was. Anger was simple. Anger she could wield. What she actually felt, standing there in bare feet, was a low and treacherous gladness at the sight of him, and she hated that most of all. She stepped back. "Five minutes." "Generous." "Don't." He came in carefully, as though the flat were a room in a museum. He always did that — took stock of a space the way some men took stock of a woman. Eva's paper tides lapped against every surface: open folios on the coffee table, a mug holding down a stack of photocopies, a scroll unrolled along the back of the armchair and weighted with a saucer. He did not touch anything. He set his cane against the wall beside the door, and that small gesture — setting aside the blade — did something inconvenient to her ribs. "Tea?" she heard herself say, and could have bitten her tongue through. "Please." She went to the kitchenette because the kitchenette had things to do in it. Kettle. Two mugs. The tin of Assam Eva had brought back from Whitechapel. Her hands did the work. Behind her, she heard Lucien lower himself onto the arm of the sofa — never the cushions; he always perched, as if committed to leaving — and she felt him watching her the way you feel a lamp warming the back of your neck. "You're limping," she said, without turning. "Am I." "On the left. You weren't last time." "You're observant." "I deliver takeaway for a living, Luc, I'm not blind." A small breath of laughter. Real, this one. It landed in the center of her chest and sat there like a coin. "It's nothing," he said. "An argument in Camden. I won." "Pity the other man." "He deserved it." She poured. The kettle's small white sound filled the silence. She turned and carried the mug over and held it out to him, and when he took it, his gloved fingers brushed the inside of her wrist — across the little crescent scar there, which he had asked about once, in a hotel bar in Mayfair, a lifetime ago. He had remembered. He had remembered, and his eyes went to it now without meaning to. She pulled her hand back. "Don't do that." "I didn't —" "You did." He set the mug down on the coffee table, on top of a page of Eva's notes, which would leave a ring, which she would have to apologize for later. He stood. He was not a tall man but in this flat, with the ceiling low and the bookshelves leaning, he took up a great deal of the air. "Aurora." No one called her that. He was the only one. He said it like the French word, stretched and soft in the middle, and her full name in his mouth had always been a weapon he used against her without, she suspected, knowing he was using it. "Don't," she said again, quieter. "I told you the truth on that bridge," he said. "You called me a coward for it. Perhaps I was. I am not interested in being brave, Rory. I am interested in being useful to you, and in not doing you harm, and I am discovering those two things are not the same." "Luc —" "Evan is in London." It was a stone dropped into still water. She felt the cold of it travel out through her, to her fingertips, to her bare feet on the cheap laminate. "What?" "Three nights ago. He was seen in a club in Shoreditch, asking questions. Your name came up. Not Laila — Aurora. He knows which one is real." He watched her face. "I came to tell you myself because I did not want you hearing it from someone who does not care how you hear it." She sat down. She had not meant to. The armchair caught her and Eva's scroll crinkled under her elbow and she did not even register the saucer sliding. Lucien crossed the small distance between them and crouched, slowly, in front of the chair. He did not touch her. The ivory cane stayed by the door. The amber eye and the black one were, for once, only looking at her, and not at all of the exits. "I am sorry," he said. "For the bridge. For coming here. For being the one to tell you this." She looked at him — at the slicked hair and the ruined symmetry of his face and the gloved hands he was very carefully keeping on his own knees — and thought, with a clarity that frightened her, that she had forgiven him somewhere on the stairs, before she'd even opened the door, and that this was going to be a problem. "Stay," she said. "While I think." "How long?" "I don't know yet." He nodded once, and did not move, and the kettle ticked as it cooled, and under the sofa Ptolemy began, grudgingly, to purr.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.512
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.047
68.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"carefully"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1008
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Moreau1
Two2
Eva6
Ptolemy2
Lucien6
Blackfriars1
Assam1
Whitechapel1
Mayfair1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Blackfriars"
1"Assam"
2"Whitechapel"
3"Mayfair"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.775
wordCount1290
matches
0"not a tall man but in this flat, with the ceiling low"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"said that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean23.04
std27.13
cv1.178
sampleLengths
029
17
282
314
441
56
610
77
813
973
107
1135
126
1349
1418
1596
163
172
181
191
2099
2112
221
2376
246
252
267
272
2810
2922
3010
314
323
3375
345
353
363
372
3859
391
4047
415
4253
432
444
4529
461
4755
4828
4948
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was combed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was shouting"
1"was using"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences105
ratio0.076
matches
0"The amber eye caught the weak hallway light; the black one didn't."
1"Two syllables, arranged the way he arranged everything — with care."
2"The memory of the last time she had seen him — the Blackfriars bridge, the rain, the thing he had said that she could not unhear and could not stop turning over at three in the morning — rose up hot under her collarbone."
3"He always did that — took stock of a space the way some men took stock of a woman."
4"He set his cane against the wall beside the door, and that small gesture — setting aside the blade — did something inconvenient to her ribs."
5"Behind her, she heard Lucien lower himself onto the arm of the sofa — never the cushions; he always perched, as if committed to leaving — and she felt him watching her the way you feel a lamp warming the back of your neck."
6"She turned and carried the mug over and held it out to him, and when he took it, his gloved fingers brushed the inside of her wrist — across the little crescent scar there, which he had asked about once, in a hotel bar in Mayfair, a lifetime ago."
7"She looked at him — at the slicked hair and the ruined symmetry of his face and the gloved hands he was very carefully keeping on his own knees — and thought, with a clarity that frightened her, that she had forgiven him somewhere on the stairs, before she'd even opened the door, and that this was going to be a problem."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03854389721627409
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010706638115631691
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.29
std12.36
cv1.006
sampleLengths
029
17
240
313
412
517
63
711
88
921
1012
116
1210
137
1413
1531
163
179
185
1925
207
2125
2210
236
2424
2525
268
2710
284
296
3044
318
323
334
3427
353
362
371
381
3914
4019
4135
425
4326
4412
451
4614
471
482
4910
49.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3904761904761905
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences64
matches
0"His platinum hair was combed"
1"She held the door half-closed"
2"She was barefoot, in leggings"
3"She had not, in the"
4"She wished she had a"
5"She wished Eva were home."
6"She wished, most of all,"
7"His voice was very quiet"
8"He looked down at the"
9"It was only in that"
10"She considered the door."
11"She considered, quite seriously, shutting"
12"She wanted to be angrier"
13"She stepped back."
14"He came in carefully, as"
15"He always did that —"
16"He did not touch anything."
17"He set his cane against"
18"she heard herself say, and"
19"She went to the kitchenette"
ratio0.625
6.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"The words died somewhere behind"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"His platinum hair was combed"
4"The amber eye caught the"
5"She held the door half-closed"
6"She was barefoot, in leggings"
7"She had not, in the"
8"Lucien said, without smiling"
9"Ptolemy slunk around the back"
10"Rory envied him."
11"She wished she had a"
12"She wished Eva were home."
13"She wished, most of all,"
14"His voice was very quiet"
15"He looked down at the"
16"It was only in that"
17"She considered the door."
18"She considered, quite seriously, shutting"
19"The memory of the last"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Behind her, she heard Lucien lower himself onto the arm of the sofa — never the cushions; he always perched, as if committed to leaving — and she felt him watch…"
1"She looked at him — at the slicked hair and the ruined symmetry of his face and the gloved hands he was very carefully keeping on his own knees — and thought, w…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Lucien said, without smiling,"
1"she said, without turning"
2"she said again, quieter"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she heard (hear)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.047
77.2387%