Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0GDGP4BPDZ6Q1HJTR11WEN

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29.2s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with its usual reluctant thunk, and Rory pulled the door open with the chain still latched, expecting the delivery boy from the curry house downstairs. She had been expecting lamb bhuna. She had not been expecting Lucien Moreau. He stood in the narrow, piss-lit corridor as though he'd been poured there: charcoal suit without a crease on it, ivory cane angled at his hip like punctuation, platinum hair slicked back so precisely it looked lacquered. Rain traced the line of his collar. The amber eye caught the hall light. The black one did not. "Hello, Aurora." She let the silence stretch until it became its own answer. Behind her, Ptolemy made an inquisitive noise from a tower of unshelved grimoires, as if even the cat could feel the air change. "You've got a nerve," she said at last. "I've been told." "By me. Last time. In some detail." "You were eloquent," Lucien said. "I remember every word." She considered slamming the door. It would feel wonderful for approximately four seconds, and then she'd spend the rest of the night thinking about his face on the other side of it. She'd done that before. She had a doctorate in it. Rory unhooked the chain. "Five minutes," she said. "Generous." "Four, now." He stepped inside, and the flat, already cramped, narrowed around him as though uncertain where to put a man who wore Savile Row into Brick Lane. He set his cane against the wall with the care of a pianist laying down his instrument. His gaze moved — books, scrolls, the half-eaten toast on the desk, the little crescent scar on her wrist that she'd caught him staring at once over a glass of wine in a place she was trying hard not to remember. "Eva's out," she said, because it was easier than asking what he wanted. "I know. I waited until she was." "Of course you did." She folded her arms. "That's worse, Lucien. That is demonstrably worse." "I thought you'd prefer we speak without an audience." "I'd prefer we don't speak at all." "And yet you opened the door." "I thought you were my dinner." A muscle in his jaw moved — something that might, in better light, have been a smile. He looked tired. That was the thing she wasn't supposed to notice. Lucien Moreau did not do tired. He did composed, he did cruel, he did courteous in four languages. Tired was not in the repertoire. Tonight his shoulders were a fraction lower than they should have been, and the shadow beneath the amber eye had deepened into something bruised. "I owe you an apology," he said. "Oh, is that what this is." She laughed, and didn't like the sound of it. "I thought it might be business. I prefer when it's business with you. At least the terms are clear." "Rory." "Don't." He went still. It was the kind of stillness a demon came by honestly — a settling of every small human tell into nothing. She hated that she could feel him deciding how to proceed. She hated that she could feel him at all. "I should not have left you at the Ashford house," he said. "Not the way I did. Not without telling you what I'd seen." "No." Her throat did something treacherous. "You shouldn't have." "I thought—" He stopped. Started again, carefully, like a man finding the footholds in a wall. "I thought if you knew what he was, you would do something reckless. And I thought, if I handled it quietly, you would never need to know it had happened at all." "You mean Evan." "I mean Evan." She turned away because she didn't want him to see her face. The kitchen was two steps from the living room, which was two steps from the bedroom; there was nowhere in the flat that was not, strictly speaking, next to him. She put her palms flat on the counter. The crescent scar caught the light, pale against her skin. "You went to see him," she said. "Yes." "And you didn't tell me." "No." "Is he alive?" A pause. "Yes." "Pity." "I considered it," Lucien said, very softly. "I want to be clear with you. I considered it at length." She shut her eyes. Somewhere in the building a kettle whistled; somewhere on the street a man shouted about a taxi. Ordinary sounds. She held on to them. "Why are you telling me now?" "Because you asked me, three months ago, never to lie to you again. And I have been lying to you by omission every time I've seen you since." He drew a breath. She heard him move, not closer, just — adjusting, as if the weight of it had shifted him. "I find I cannot continue. It is interfering with my sleep." "Your sleep," she repeated, and finally turned. "Poor Lucien. How terrible for you." "Yes," he said, with a frankness that disarmed her entirely. "It is." She looked at him. Really looked: the rain still glittering on his lapel, the faint tremor in the hand that was not holding the cane, the way his mismatched eyes were fixed on her as though the rest of the room had ceased to be relevant. There had been a night, six months ago, when he had kissed her in the back of a cab from Soho and then, before the cab had even stopped moving, apologised for it in three separate languages. She had been furious at him then, too. She had been furious and also — this was the inconvenient part — she had wanted him to do it again. She still did. That was the worst of it. She stood in her best friend's kitchen with her hair half-braided and a smear of toast crumbs on her jumper and she wanted, with a specificity that felt like injury, to close the distance between them and put her mouth on his. "Don't look at me like that," she said. "Like what?" "Like you're about to apologise for something you haven't done yet." His mouth curved — properly, this time. Rueful. "I was about to ask if I might sit down." "Oh." She almost laughed. "God. Yes. Sit. Before you fall over and ruin the rug." He lowered himself onto Eva's absurd velvet settee with a grace that shouldn't have been possible at his height. Ptolemy considered him, unhurried, then jumped up and arranged himself across his knees as if he did this every Thursday. Lucien looked down at the cat. The cat looked up at Lucien. Something in Rory's chest did a slow, treacherous fold. "Traitor," she told Ptolemy. "He has excellent judgement," Lucien murmured, stroking the cat once behind the ears. "He eats his own sick." "Nobody is perfect." She pulled out the chair opposite him and sat, because her knees had stopped agreeing with her. Four feet of floor between them. A coffee table piled with Eva's research. Her own pulse, loud in her ears. "Tell me the rest," she said. "All of it. From the Ashford house to now. And Lucien—" He looked up. "If you leave one thing out," she said, "I'll know." "I believe you will," he said. And he began.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"carefully"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count3
3
word"treacherous"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"silence"
2"could feel"
3"treacherous"
4"weight"
5"velvet"
6"perfect"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount867
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Lucien7
Moreau2
Ptolemy3
Savile1
Row1
Brick1
Lane1
Started1
Soho1
Eva2
Thursday1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like injury, to close the distance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1210
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"hated that she"
1"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean19.21
std23.58
cv1.228
sampleLengths
042
156
22
334
48
53
67
79
842
94
104
111
122
1384
1413
157
1615
179
187
196
206
2177
227
2334
241
251
2644
2724
289
2948
303
313
3260
337
341
355
361
373
383
391
4019
4128
426
4361
4413
4512
46112
4751
488
492
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"been poured"
1"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs154
matches
0"was not, strictly speaking"
1"was not holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences120
ratio0.067
matches
0"His gaze moved — books, scrolls, the half-eaten toast on the desk, the little crescent scar on her wrist that she'd caught him staring at once over a glass of wine in a place she was trying hard not to remember."
1"A muscle in his jaw moved — something that might, in better light, have been a smile."
2"It was the kind of stillness a demon came by honestly — a settling of every small human tell into nothing."
3"The kitchen was two steps from the living room, which was two steps from the bedroom; there was nowhere in the flat that was not, strictly speaking, next to him."
4"Somewhere in the building a kettle whistled; somewhere on the street a man shouted about a taxi."
5"She heard him move, not closer, just — adjusting, as if the weight of it had shifted him."
6"She had been furious and also — this was the inconvenient part — she had wanted him to do it again."
7"His mouth curved — properly, this time."
90.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount863
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, piss-lit corridor"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0440324449594438
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011587485515643106
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean10.08
std9.3
cv0.922
sampleLengths
029
16
27
337
47
57
65
72
811
923
108
113
127
135
144
155
1627
174
186
194
204
211
222
2326
2417
2541
2613
277
288
297
309
317
326
336
3417
353
369
376
3812
396
4024
417
4215
4319
441
451
463
4721
4811
499
60.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners50
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Somewhere in the building a"
1"Really looked: the rain still"
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences69
matches
0"She had been expecting lamb"
1"She had not been expecting"
2"He stood in the narrow,"
3"She let the silence stretch"
4"she said at last"
5"She considered slamming the door."
6"It would feel wonderful for"
7"She'd done that before."
8"She had a doctorate in"
9"He stepped inside, and the"
10"He set his cane against"
11"His gaze moved — books,"
12"she said, because it was"
13"She folded her arms"
14"He looked tired."
15"He did composed, he did"
16"She laughed, and didn't like"
17"He went still."
18"It was the kind of"
19"She hated that she could"
ratio0.609
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"She had been expecting lamb"
2"She had not been expecting"
3"He stood in the narrow,"
4"Rain traced the line of"
5"The amber eye caught the"
6"The black one did not."
7"She let the silence stretch"
8"she said at last"
9"She considered slamming the door."
10"It would feel wonderful for"
11"She'd done that before."
12"She had a doctorate in"
13"Rory unhooked the chain."
14"He stepped inside, and the"
15"He set his cane against"
16"His gaze moved — books,"
17"she said, because it was"
18"She folded her arms"
19"A muscle in his jaw"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He stood in the narrow, piss-lit corridor as though he'd been poured there: charcoal suit without a crease on it, ivory cane angled at his hip like punctuation,…"
1"Behind her, Ptolemy made an inquisitive noise from a tower of unshelved grimoires, as if even the cat could feel the air change."
2"He stepped inside, and the flat, already cramped, narrowed around him as though uncertain where to put a man who wore Savile Row into Brick Lane."
3"Really looked: the rain still glittering on his lapel, the faint tremor in the hand that was not holding the cane, the way his mismatched eyes were fixed on her…"
4"She stood in her best friend's kitchen with her hair half-braided and a smear of toast crumbs on her jumper and she wanted, with a specificity that felt like in…"
5"He lowered himself onto Eva's absurd velvet settee with a grace that shouldn't have been possible at his height."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.567
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.1
79.5759%