| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1091 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1091 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1101 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Eva | 3 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite trunks anymore — more like knuckles pressed up through the soil" | | 1 | "seemed benign then, strange in a storybook sense" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.97 | | std | 21.66 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 70 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 51 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 64 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been cupped" | | 2 | "been disappointed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's text had been specific — the oaks by the bracken line, after moonrise, alone — and Eva never asked for anything unless it mattered." | | 1 | "Seven oaks, ancient, their trunks twisted into shapes that weren't quite trunks anymore — more like knuckles pressed up through the soil." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the clearing beyond the stones — bluebells, cow parsley, something pale and bell-shaped she couldn't name — all of them out of season, all of them too still." | | 3 | "Deer had shape and weight; they broke the undergrowth." | | 4 | "She'd seen the idea of it more than the thing itself — a vertical smudge where the dark had been darker, sliding between two trunks and gone." | | 5 | "More the memory of one, pressed into her ear from the inside — a long, considering hum, the way a person hums when they've noticed you across a room and haven't decided yet whether to wave." | | 6 | "That thought of him — of the bar, the smell of hops, the ordinary grievance of plumbing — felt abruptly very far away." | | 7 | "Not ran — she had enough sense left to know running made you prey." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1077 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.039925719591457756 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008356545961002786 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 12.66 | | std | 11.24 | | cv | 0.888 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 52.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3563218390804598 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, deer coughed" | | 1 | "Somewhere behind her, a twig" | | 2 | "More the memory of one," |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 58.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't think about that" | | 1 | "She zipped her jacket to" | | 2 | "She followed the trampled grass" | | 3 | "They'd seemed benign then, strange" | | 4 | "She stepped between two of" | | 5 | "She clicked the torch off," | | 6 | "She crouched, brushed one with" | | 7 | "She straightened up." | | 8 | "she told the grove, because" | | 9 | "She swung the light." | | 10 | "She held the beam steady" | | 11 | "She'd seen the idea of" | | 12 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 13 | "She turned, slow." | | 14 | "Her breath came out white" | | 15 | "she said, quietly" | | 16 | "She took one step back" | | 17 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly." | | 18 | "It faded before she could" | | 19 | "Her torch dimmed." |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 37.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate to Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She didn't think about that" | | 2 | "Eva's text had been specific" | | 3 | "She zipped her jacket to" | | 4 | "October had put an edge" | | 5 | "The path narrowed past the" | | 6 | "She followed the trampled grass" | | 7 | "London kept its wildness in" | | 8 | "A fox screamed further off." | | 9 | "That, at least, was ordinary." | | 10 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 11 | "Rory had passed them twice" | | 12 | "They'd seemed benign then, strange" | | 13 | "Tonight they leaned." | | 14 | "She stepped between two of" | | 15 | "The word came back to" | | 16 | "She clicked the torch off," | | 17 | "The beam carved a white" | | 18 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the clearing" | | 19 | "She crouched, brushed one with" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The path narrowed past the Isabella Plantation, losing its gravel, losing its sense." | | 1 | "She could feel the warmth of it against the back of her neck, close enough to lift the fine hairs there, and she understood, with a flat clarity that surprised …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |