Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0N77M5HC1NJ20E8SGDFRMC

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.5
Duration:
2m 9s
Cost:
$0.168500
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had varnished Soho into a sheet of black glass by half eight, and The Raven’s Nest wore its green neon like a wound above the door. Inside, the bar held its usual weather: warm brass light, old wood, gin, wet wool, citrus peel crushed under a knife. Maps crowded the walls in faded blues and browns, cities pinned under glass, borders that no longer existed traced in ink by dead men. Black-and-white photographs hung between them—faces caught in cigarette smoke, hotel lobbies, train platforms, embassies with windows like blind eyes. Aurora Carter balanced three plates along her forearm and nudged the swing door from the tiny kitchen with her hip. A crescent of scar flashed pale on her left wrist as she steadied a bowl of chips sliding toward disaster. “Table six gets the fish, table three gets the pie, and if anyone asks whether the gravy’s vegan, you never saw me,” Silas called from behind the bar. His silver signet ring struck the beer tap as he pulled a pint. The sound cut clean through the low music. Rory slid the plates down in front of a pair of theatre men arguing over Shakespeare as if the playwright might rise from the carpet and choose a side. “Fish. Pie. Chips that nearly died for you.” One of them looked up, eyes damp from drink. “You’re an angel.” “Worse. I’m part-time.” She lifted the empty tray against her ribs and turned back toward the bar. Silas had one palm braced on the counter, his left leg set with care behind him. The old knee always announced itself when rain came in. He had said as much once, in a tone that made the weather sound like a former colleague who owed him money. “Yu-Fei rang,” he told her as she approached. “Said tomorrow’s delivery list changed. Camden first, then Marylebone. No Brixton.” “Mercy exists.” “Don’t waste it. It curdles.” Rory leaned over the bar and plucked an olive from the garnish tray. Silas glanced at her fingers. “That’s theft.” “That’s staff development.” “It’s a garnish, Carter, not a pension.” She popped it into her mouth, salt and metal blooming on her tongue, and reached for the damp cloth near the till. Her hair clung straight against her cheeks from the run between Golden Empress and the Nest. She had left Cardiff years ago with one rucksack and a phone full of calls she refused to answer. London had not softened her. It had filed her down until she fitted into doorways without drawing attention. The bell over the entrance gave a tired jangle. Cold air pushed into the room. Rain followed on coat shoulders, umbrella tips, the exposed skin at a man’s throat. Rory wiped a ring of beer from the counter and did not look up at once. People came in all night; the city kept feeding them through the door, each one carrying a grievance, a thirst, an excuse not to go home. Then Silas stopped moving. Not paused. Stopped. The half-filled pint in his hand foamed over his knuckles and down the glass. Rory looked. A man stood inside the doorway, water dripping from the hem of a dark overcoat cut better than the Nest’s clientele usually deserved. He had removed his hat and held it against his chest in both hands, not from politeness but because he seemed unsure what else to do with them. His hair had gone almost white at the temples. Not grey-streaked like Silas, not eased in by age with charm and warning, but bleached in two hard sweeps above a narrow face. A scar dragged from the corner of his mouth toward his jaw, thin and glossy under the bar light. One eye, the left, stayed fixed. Glass or damage. The other moved across the room and found Silas. The air around the bar tightened. “Arthur Vale,” Silas said. The man gave a small nod. “Silas.” No one at the tables noticed. The theatre men had launched into betrayal. A woman by the far window laughed into her drink with both hands round the glass. Rain tapped at the front panes, restless as fingers. Rory set the cloth down. Silas put the overflowing pint under the tap tray. Beer ran between his fingers and struck the rubber mat. “You were dead.” Arthur looked at the wet floorboards near his shoes. “So were you, in one version.” Silas’s mouth changed shape, not quite a smile, not quite pain. “Which version brought you here?” “The one with worse handwriting.” Rory moved behind the bar, slow enough not to invite attention. Silas had many names folded into him. Men came sometimes with old passports in their inside pockets and voices that did not fit their clothes. Women sat in the back booth and touched the stems of their glasses only with gloved hands. But those visits passed through coded pleasantries, clean exchanges, a name scribbled on a napkin and burned over the kitchen sink. This was not that. Arthur Vale looked at the room as if memory had rearranged the furniture out of spite. “You kept the maps.” Silas turned off the tap. The glass sat abandoned, mostly foam. “You kept breathing.” Arthur’s good eye flicked to Rory. Silas followed the glance. “Carter. Cover the bar.” “I’m standing right here.” “Then do it from closer to the till.” Arthur gave her a brief, courteous look, the sort men used when they had learned manners in places where manners came after surveillance. “I didn’t mean to disturb your evening.” “It was already raining.” The corner of his scarred mouth pulled. Silas reached beneath the counter for a towel and dried his hands one finger at a time. His signet ring caught green from the neon and threw it back, sickly and sharp. “Drink?” Arthur kept the hat against his chest. “If you’ve got whisky that isn’t pretending to be smoke and peat.” Silas took down a bottle with no label facing out. “You used to drink anything with a cork.” “You used to trust me with keys.” The bottle neck hovered over a glass. Rory watched Silas’s jaw work once. Whisky fell. One measure. Then another. Arthur crossed to the bar. He moved with the care of a man whose body had become a room full of loose floorboards. At the counter, he placed the hat down between them. Old felt. Expensive once. Crushed now along the brim. Silas pushed the glass toward him. Arthur did not take it. “Is there somewhere we can talk?” “The bar’s open.” “I can see that.” “Then talk.” Arthur’s hand settled around the glass. The knuckles had swollen badly at some point and healed crooked. He lifted the whisky, smelled it, and set it down untouched. “You really did retire.” Silas huffed through his nose. “I sell beer to actors and adulterers. Hardly witness protection.” “You always threatened to open a bar.” “I threatened many things.” “You threatened to buy a vineyard in Crete.” “That was after Budapest. I had a fever.” “You threatened to shoot Chalmers in the foot.” “I regret the restraint.” Arthur’s face warmed for half a second, and in that half second Rory saw the younger man inside him: someone quick, elegant, dangerous in rooms where other people still checked for exits. Then the scar pulled the warmth apart. Silas saw it too. His fingers curled around the towel. Arthur took a sip at last. The whisky touched his mouth and he closed his eyes. “You still know where to find the good stuff.” “I know where I put it.” A silence opened between them. Not empty. Crowded. Rory busied herself with glasses, though none needed washing. The sink water ran hot over her wrists. Steam climbed against her face. The crescent scar on her left wrist gleamed, then vanished under suds. She kept her bright blue eyes lowered to the basin and listened. Arthur tapped one nail against the glass. “I was in London for a medical appointment.” Silas looked at the fixed eye. “Successful?” “They confirmed I was difficult to kill.” “Waste of a specialist.” “They charged enough to make it feel profound.” The theatre men rose from table six, coats half on, argument still alive between them. “Can we settle up?” one called. Rory shut off the tap and went to the till. “Fish, pie, two pints, one whisky sour, and a side order of theatrical collapse.” The man with the scarf blinked. “Was the collapse extra?” “Built in.” He paid in cash, over-tipped because he had not counted properly, and Rory took the plates while his friend tried to open the door by pushing the brass pull. Rain swallowed them with relief. When she returned, Arthur had removed his gloves. The back of his right hand bore a web of pale lines, burns or cuts, too neat to be accidental. Silas stared at them. “Where?” Silas asked. Arthur turned his hand over, palm down. “Does it matter?” “It mattered then.” “Yes.” The word landed with more weight than anger would have carried. Silas poured himself a drink and left it on the counter. “You disappeared in Prague.” Arthur’s good eye sharpened. “You were carried out of Prague.” “In a butcher’s van with a bullet crease on my ribs and half my knee hanging off. Forgive me if my account lacks polish.” “I watched them load you.” “You watched?” Arthur took another swallow. This one went down rough. “From a flat above a chemist’s. Third floor. Yellow curtains. A woman kept pigeons on the sill. One of them had no foot.” Silas did not move. Rory dried one glass for too long. The cloth squeaked against it. “You were there,” Silas said. “Yes.” “All this time, you let me believe—” “I let you live.” Silas’s laugh came once, hard and flat. “Is that what you call it?” Arthur’s fingers tightened on the whisky. “I call it not putting a second team on you before the anaesthetic wore off.” Silas leaned closer, both palms on the bar. His limp vanished in the force of him; for a moment he looked taller than the room. “You could have sent one word.” “No.” “One bloody word, Arthur.” “No.” The answer cracked. Not loud. Final. Rory glanced toward the remaining customers. A couple near the window had bent over a phone, heads touching. A man in a brown coat slept in the corner booth beneath a map of the Balkans, chin on chest, pint untouched. The Nest held secrets the way damp held brick. Tonight, it seemed to sweat them out. Silas lowered his voice. “You owed me that.” Arthur looked at the maps. “I owed you more. That was the problem.” Something changed in Silas’s face. Not forgiveness. Recognition, unwelcome and immediate. Rory set the dried glass on the shelf. “I’ll check the kitchen.” Silas did not look at her. “Stay.” The word snapped out, then softened under his next breath. “Please.” Rory stayed. Arthur’s gaze shifted to her again, measuring the shape of her presence behind the bar, the way she occupied the narrow space beside Silas without flinching from his old ghosts. “New recruit?” Rory folded the cloth over the tap. “No.” Silas’s mouth twitched. “She delivers dumplings and steals olives.” “Useful cover.” “Low pension.” Arthur gave her that brief almost-smile again. “Carter, was it?” “Rory.” Silas looked at her, warning tucked into his eyes. She met it and did not move. Arthur noticed. Of course he noticed. Men like him had built religions out of noticing. “Rory,” he repeated, and the name sounded different in his mouth, as if he had tested it for weight. “He always collected strays.” “I walked in.” “No one walks into Silas’s orbit by accident.” “I was carrying noodles.” “That would do it.” Silas picked up his untouched whisky and drank. Arthur watched his throat move. “You look older.” “I am older.” “No. I mean you look as if you remained where the blast left you.” Silas set down the glass. “And you look embalmed by committee.” Arthur touched the scar by his mouth with two fingers. “They had poor materials.” “Who?” Arthur’s hand dropped. The green neon outside hummed through the front window, trembling over the wet glass. A bus passed and painted red across the ceiling. For a breath, the old maps looked blood-washed. Silas spoke into that colour. “Who had you?” Arthur did not answer. Silas stepped back from the bar as if space might keep his anger in shape. His left knee buckled a fraction. He gripped the counter before Rory could move. Arthur saw that too. His face shut. “I heard about the knee.” “From whom?” “People talk.” “Dead men attract gossip.” “Only the vain ones.” “You should know.” Arthur took the hit without blinking. “I deserved that.” Silas’s hand, the one with the ring, flattened on the bar. “Don’t make offerings. I’ve no altar for you.” Arthur looked down at the ring. “You still wore it.” “My father’s ring had nothing to do with you.” “You never wore it in the field unless you expected trouble.” “I always expected trouble when you planned the exit.” Arthur’s shoulders shifted under the overcoat. Rainwater had dried into darker patches along the wool. “Prague had no exit.” “You planned one.” “I planned three.” “Then use smaller handwriting next time.” A sound left Arthur that might have been laughter if it had not died so fast. “I missed this.” Silas went still. Arthur seemed to regret the words before they finished leaving him. He reached for the hat, turned it, set it down again. “I didn’t come for a reunion.” “Good. We’re short on bunting.” “I came because I saw the sign.” “You saw the sign.” “From the cab. Green bird over a black door. I thought it couldn’t be yours. Too theatrical.” “It’s a raven.” “It looks like a pigeon with legal troubles.” Rory let out a small breath through her nose. Silas’s eyes flicked toward her. The line of his mouth eased despite himself. Arthur saw that as well, and something like grief crossed his face, quick and humiliating. He hid it inside the glass, finishing the whisky. “You found people, then.” Silas reached for the bottle. “I found staff.” “You found someone who argues.” “She does that for free.” Rory took the bottle from Silas before he poured. “Water with the next one.” Both men looked at her. She held the bottle against her hip. “You’ve got rain in your bones, he’s got half a doctor’s office in his face, and neither of you ate dinner. Water.” Arthur looked to Silas. “She always give orders in your bar?” “Only when she’s right.” Rory filled two tumblers from the tap and placed them down with more force than needed. Water jumped over the rims. Arthur lifted his. “To competent interference.” Rory wiped the spill. “To not bleeding on the counter.” He drank. His throat worked with effort. Silas watched him. “What happened after Prague?” Arthur set the water down. “You know the shape of it.” “Do I?” “You were there long enough.” “I was there long enough to hear the shot that was meant for you.” Arthur’s good eye shifted to the shelves behind Silas—bottles, glasses, the narrow gap where a bookshelf at the back disguised a door Rory had only seen open twice. “It wasn’t meant for me.” The bar seemed to lower around them. Silas’s fingers tightened around his glass. “Say that again.” Arthur’s mouth thinned. “No.” “Arthur.” “No.” Silas moved around the end of the counter. His limp showed now, sharp with each step. Rory had seen him cross the bar for drunks twice his size with that same calm violence in his shoulders. Arthur did not back away. They stood face to face in the narrow strip of floor between the stools and the taps, two men with years stacked behind them like crates of rot. Silas spoke low. “Who was it meant for?” Arthur’s fixed eye caught the light and gave nothing back. The living one shone. “You.” Silas stared at him. The word sat between them, small and obscene. Rory felt the cold from the door again though no one had entered. Silas’s hand rose, stopped halfway, and dropped. Not a blow. Not an embrace. The ghost of both. “You took it.” Arthur’s scar pulled when he swallowed. “I was closer.” “That’s your explanation?” “It remains accurate.” Silas turned away, one step, then another, then stopped beneath a framed photograph of a railway station. A crowd blurred around one clear figure near a pillar, young and clean-shaven, looking off-frame with a cigarette in hand. Rory had never noticed the resemblance before. The figure in the photograph had Arthur’s bone structure without the damage. Silas had kept the picture on the wall. Arthur noticed where he stood. “You hung Vienna.” “It came with the frame.” “Liar.” Silas touched the bottom edge of the photograph. Dust marked his fingertip. “You hated that coat.” “It was too tight in the shoulders.” “You said it made you look like a waiter who poisoned archdukes.” “It did.” Rory saw Silas’s reflection in the glass over the photograph. His face had emptied in a way anger could not manage. Arthur’s voice dropped. “You laughed for ten minutes.” “I remember.” “I thought I’d cracked a rib.” “I remember.” The man asleep in the corner snorted and jerked awake. He looked around, offended by consciousness. “Closing time?” Rory glanced at the clock. “Not unless you’ve invented it.” He frowned at the map above him, then at his pint, and returned to sleep. Arthur looked at the old man and then back at Silas. “Life became strange for you.” Silas turned from the photograph. “It became quiet.” “Same thing, to us.” “No.” Silas crossed back, slower now. “Not the same. Quiet has invoices. Boilers. Licensing inspections. A woman from the council who believed my cellar housed rats because your lot left a transmitter behind the vermouth.” Arthur blinked. “Did we?” “You tell me.” “We put one in a butcher’s freezer once.” “That explains your standards.” Arthur’s face moved again, and this time the younger self held for three breaths. Then he looked down at his hands. “I had a flat in Antwerp for six months. I bought a plant.” Silas waited. “It died.” “Under interrogation?” “I overwatered it.” Rory leaned one elbow on the bar. “That’s how they get you.” Arthur looked at her, and his mouth softened. “What did you flee, Rory Carter?” Silas’s head snapped toward him. Rory met Arthur’s gaze. The question had been clean, too clean, sliding beneath skin without raising a mark. She saw Evan’s hands on a kitchen door in Cardiff, the crack in the paint where her shoulder had struck, Eva’s voice on the phone saying, Come to London now, don’t pack properly, just come. She saw Yu-Fei shoving a delivery bag into her arms on her first week and calling her too skinny to be frightened. She saw Silas placing a key on the bar without ceremony, the flat above the Nest smelling of dust and lemon soap. She picked up a lime and cut it in half. “Bad weather.” Arthur held her stare. “Did it follow?” She pressed the blade through the flesh. Juice beaded on the board. “Not into this bar.” Silas said nothing, but the air beside him altered, protective and old. Arthur inclined his head. “Then it chose well.” Rory scraped the lime into a metal tub. “You came here to talk to him, not to peel me.” Arthur accepted the rebuke with a lift of one shoulder. “Habit.” “Break it.” His good eye moved back to Silas. “She sounds like you.” “She has better sense.” “Clearly. She stayed behind the bar.” Silas reached for the whisky bottle, thought better of it, and took the water. “What do you want, Arthur?” The old friend breathed in. The room waited with him. “Ten minutes where you didn’t hear my name from a stranger.” Silas’s grip tightened around the tumbler. “You could have had that years ago.” “I couldn’t walk across a room years ago.” “You could write.” “I had no hands worth using.” The pale webbing across Arthur’s knuckles seemed to deepen under the light. Silas looked at them. “They broke them?” Arthur flexed his fingers. “Among other hobbies.” Silas closed his eyes for a second. When he opened them, his anger had not gone. It had found a chair and sat down. “Who gave you up?” Arthur’s face went still. “You know.” Silas shook his head once. “No.” “You always knew. You buried it because the alternative had teeth.” Rory watched the two men, the bar between them now less a counter than a trench. Silas whispered a name. “Chalmers.” Arthur did not nod. He didn’t need to. Silas’s laugh scraped out of him. “I should’ve shot him in the foot.” “Both feet.” “I sent him a Christmas card in ’ninety-eight.” “I know.” Silas stared. Arthur lifted the empty whisky glass and looked through its base at the lights. “He kept it on his mantel. Said it proved you’d gone soft.” Silas’s face hardened. “When?” “Before Lisbon.” Silas absorbed that. His eyes tracked over years only he could see, placing a body here, a message there, a door that had opened too soon. “You were with him.” “I was near him.” “You could have—” “No.” Arthur set the glass down. “No heroics. No secret knife. No final act. I was alive because he found me useful half-broken. That was all.” The honesty struck harder than any performance might have. Silas leaned back against the bar. His limp leg angled out, and for once he made no effort to hide it. Rory took the empty glasses from the counter, though her hands had begun to feel clumsy. Arthur watched Silas’s knee. “I’m sorry.” Silas looked up. “For which part?” Arthur’s lips parted. Closed. Rain battered the windows in a sudden burst, as if someone had flung gravel from the street. “For being alive in the wrong places.” Silas’s face changed again, the smallest collapse around the eyes. “That’s not an apology.” “No.” “What is it?” Arthur’s hand moved toward the hat and stopped short of touching it. “All I’ve got.” Rory thought Silas might throw him out then. She saw it in the set of his shoulders, in the way he looked past Arthur toward the door, judging distance, exit, the cruel mercy of ending a thing before it widened. Instead, Silas picked up the whisky bottle and poured into Arthur’s glass. One measure. Then he poured into his own. Rory opened her mouth. Silas pointed at her without looking. “Water after.” She shut it. Arthur’s hand trembled when he reached for the drink. He trapped it against the bar with the other until the glass stopped clicking. Silas saw. Looked away. “To Prague?” Arthur asked, with a bitter curl to the words. “No.” “To Vienna?” “No.” Rory watched Silas lift his glass. His ring flashed green, then silver. “To the plant in Antwerp.” Arthur stared at him. A laugh broke out of him, raw and startled, and turned at once into a cough that bent him over the bar. Rory slid the water toward him. He took it without pride. Silas drank half his whisky. Arthur wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. “It was a fern.” “Even worse.” “I named it.” “Of course you did.” “Margaret.” Rory made a noise she failed to hide. Arthur glanced at her. “She had presence.” “She had root rot,” Silas said. “She had enemies.” For a minute, the Nest breathed around them like any bar on any wet London night: glasses clinking, pipes knocking behind old walls, traffic hissing past outside, a sleeping drunk murmuring under a dead border on a map. Two men stood at the counter with whisky and water between them, and the years did not vanish; they crowded in closer, but they made room enough for the next sentence. Silas placed his glass down. “How long are you in London?” Arthur rubbed his thumb along the brim of the hat. “Train north at eleven.” “Tonight?” “Yes.” “That gives you two hours.” “One and a half.” Silas looked toward the back of the bar, where the bookshelf stood in shadow between a photograph of Istanbul and a framed shipping route through the Adriatic. Rory saw the thought form before he spoke. Arthur saw it too. His hand tightened on the hat. Silas turned to her. “Carter. Lock the front after the couple leaves. Brown coat can sleep till he remembers his own name.” Rory wiped her hands on the towel. “And if anyone asks?” Silas glanced at Arthur, then at the hidden door. “Private function.” Arthur did not move. “Silas.” The name carried warning, plea, and the old shape of trust worn thin from use. Silas limped toward the bookshelf. His shoulders stayed square. “You wanted ten minutes where I didn’t hear your name from a stranger.” His hand found the false spine of a book Rory had never seen him touch without purpose. The shelf clicked. Silas looked back, hazel eyes fixed on the man who had walked in from the rain with a dead name and ruined hands. “You’ll have them in the back.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas crossed back [back]"
dialogueSentences242
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.083
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.008
98.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4227
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4227
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"coded"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"structure"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
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2"coded"
3"flicked"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"profound"
8"weight"
9"structure"
10"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences331
matches
0"m with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences331
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences562
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions233
wordCount3025
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity2.91
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest6
Carter1
Shakespeare1
Rory41
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Silas88
Vale1
Arthur70
Balkans1
Evan1
Eva1
Come1
London3
Yu-Fei1
Istanbul1
Adriatic1
Rain5
One4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Shakespeare"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Vale"
7"Arthur"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
10"Yu-Fei"
11"Rain"
12"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Istanbul"
4"Adriatic"
globalScore0.045
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences209
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite pain"
1"not quite pain"
2"something like grief crossed his face, quick"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords0.71
wordCount4225
matches
0"not from politeness but because he seemed unsure what else to do with them"
1"Not grey-streaked like Silas, not eased in by age with charm and warning, but bleached in two hard sweeps above a narrow face"
2"not eased in by age with charm and warning, but bleached in two hard sweeps above a narrow face"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences562
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs450
mean9.39
std11.51
cv1.226
sampleLengths
027
164
240
328
421
529
68
79
83
93
1014
1148
1219
132
145
1513
165
172
183
197
2075
219
2220
2342
244
253
2614
272
2851
2969
306
314
326
331
3438
355
3619
373
389
396
4011
415
425
4374
444
4516
464
4711
483
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences331
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs530
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences562
ratio0.009
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs hung between them—faces caught in cigarette smoke, hotel lobbies, train platforms, embassies with windows like blind eyes."
1"People came in all night; the city kept feeding them through the door, each one carrying a grievance, a thirst, an excuse not to go home."
2"His limp vanished in the force of him; for a moment he looked taller than the room."
3"Arthur’s good eye shifted to the shelves behind Silas—bottles, glasses, the narrow gap where a bookshelf at the back disguised a door Rory had only seen open twice."
4"Two men stood at the counter with whisky and water between them, and the years did not vanish; they crowded in closer, but they made room enough for the next sentence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3037
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount89
adverbRatio0.02930523542970036
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0029634507737899243
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences562
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences562
mean7.52
std6.29
cv0.837
sampleLengths
027
121
224
319
420
520
628
713
88
929
108
119
123
133
1414
1516
1610
1722
188
1911
202
215
2213
235
242
253
267
2722
2816
2919
305
3113
329
336
3414
3516
3626
374
382
391
4014
412
4223
4328
449
4523
4619
476
483
499
46.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.20640569395017794
totalSentences562
uniqueOpeners116
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences303
matches
0"Then Silas stopped moving."
1"Then the scar pulled the"
2"Of course he noticed."
3"Then he looked down at"
4"Instead, Silas picked up the"
5"Then he poured into his"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences303
matches
0"His silver signet ring struck"
1"She lifted the empty tray"
2"He had said as much"
3"he told her as she"
4"She popped it into her"
5"Her hair clung straight against"
6"She had left Cardiff years"
7"It had filed her down"
8"He had removed his hat"
9"His hair had gone almost"
10"His signet ring caught green"
11"He moved with the care"
12"He lifted the whisky, smelled"
13"His fingers curled around the"
14"She kept her bright blue"
15"He paid in cash, over-tipped"
16"His limp vanished in the"
17"She met it and did"
18"he repeated, and the name"
19"His left knee buckled a"
ratio0.162
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount279
totalSentences303
matches
0"Rain had varnished Soho into"
1"Maps crowded the walls in"
2"Aurora Carter balanced three plates"
3"A crescent of scar flashed"
4"Silas called from behind the"
5"His silver signet ring struck"
6"The sound cut clean through"
7"Rory slid the plates down"
8"She lifted the empty tray"
9"Silas had one palm braced"
10"The old knee always announced"
11"He had said as much"
12"he told her as she"
13"Rory leaned over the bar"
14"Silas glanced at her fingers."
15"She popped it into her"
16"Her hair clung straight against"
17"She had left Cardiff years"
18"London had not softened her."
19"It had filed her down"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences303
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences108
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory slid the plates down in front of a pair of theatre men arguing over Shakespeare as if the playwright might rise from the carpet and choose a side."
1"Men came sometimes with old passports in their inside pockets and voices that did not fit their clothes."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he repeated, and the name sounded different in his mouth, as if he had tested it for weight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences242
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.066
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.008
85.7140%