Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0N9AXREBCJFRXVV51NCGJG

Run Details

Duration:
2m 3s
Cost:
$0.164690
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest wore the rain like old varnish. Water ran down the front windows in crooked lanes, bending the green neon sign until the letters looked submerged. Inside, the bar held its usual low amber light. Old maps curled at the corners on the walls. Black-and-white photographs watched the room from above the booths: Berlin in winter, Belfast in smoke, a woman laughing beside a car that no longer existed, men in coats with their backs turned to history. Aurora Carter stood behind the bar because Yu-Fei’s delivery bike had a puncture, the kitchen downstairs had closed early, and Silas had gone into the hidden back room with a man who smelled of embassy cigarettes. She had tied her black hair at the nape of her neck with a strip of ribbon she had found in the till drawer. Her left sleeve had ridden up while she dried glasses, leaving the pale crescent scar on her wrist exposed. A man at the end of the bar lifted his empty tumbler. “Another?” He nodded without looking at her. His wedding ring had left a band of untanned skin on his finger, though the ring itself was gone. Aurora poured him a measure of whisky and took the notes from his hand. The cash felt damp. Everything did that night. Coats steamed on chair backs. The floor held the dark shine of wet pavements. Even the air tasted of rain and hops and old wood. The door opened with a push of wind. A woman stepped in and stood beneath the green spill of the sign. For a moment the colour cut her face into stranger’s angles: cheekbones too sharp, mouth too controlled, eyes hidden behind rain-beaded glasses. She wore a camel coat belted tight, city boots, a black leather satchel across her body, and the kind of haircut that took money and discipline. Her hair used to be an untidy copper cloud. Aurora’s hand stopped around a glass. The woman wiped her glasses with the edge of her sleeve. She looked around the room, not with interest but calculation, as if checking exits, witnesses, distances. Then she saw Aurora. The bar noise thinned. A laugh from the dartboard broke off. The man with the missing ring coughed into his fist. Aurora set the glass down before it slipped. “Eva.” The woman’s chin lifted. The name landed somewhere under her ribs; Aurora saw it. A small catch, gone before anyone else could claim it. “Rory.” Nobody had called her that in this room except Silas, and even then he used it when he wanted her to eat, sleep, or stop pretending she had no bruises beneath her sleeves. Eva Morgan crossed the room with measured steps. Years ago she had moved through Cardiff like weather: loud boots, bright coats, bracelets clattering, whole streets altered by her arrival. This woman threaded past chairs without touching them. Aurora reached for a towel and wiped a dry patch on the bar. “You’re in London.” “You’re observant.” “You’re soaked.” “You’re still Welsh when you’re annoyed.” “Irish when I’m drunk.” Eva removed her coat. Beneath it she wore a grey suit, soft as smoke and cut close to a body Aurora remembered as always in motion. Eva had become spare. Not thin exactly, but edited. No jangling earrings. No chipped blue nail varnish. No ink smudges on her fingers from writing phone numbers on her own skin. Only a narrow gold chain at her throat and a bruise-coloured shadow under each eye. Aurora reached for a glass. “Wine?” Eva looked at the bottles behind her, then at Aurora’s face. “Whatever you drink now.” “I’m working.” “That never stopped you at nineteen.” “At nineteen I thought vodka and orange counted as fruit.” A corner of Eva’s mouth moved. Not enough to become a smile. “Then whisky. Neat.” Aurora poured. Silas kept the good bottle tucked behind a row of cheaper ones for regulars he trusted and enemies he respected. She used it now without asking herself why. Eva watched the pour. “Fancy.” “Silas likes people to think the bar has secrets.” “Does it?” Aurora slid the glass over. “It has damp in the cellar and a fruit machine that pays out only when threatened.” Eva took the whisky, but did not drink. Her fingers curled around the glass. Her nails were bare, buffed to a dull sheen. “You look well.” Aurora heard the old code inside it. You’re alive. You’re not with him. You made it out. She stacked three clean tumblers. “You look expensive.” “That sounded like an accusation.” “Wasn’t polished enough for one.” Eva looked at the shelves, the maps, the photographs. Her gaze paused on a framed picture of Prague, snow along a bridge and a black car half cut from the shot. “You live near here?” “Above.” “Above the bar.” “Rent’s cheap. Stairs are murder. The mice have unionised.” “You always did like glamour.” “You always did hate answering questions.” Eva drank at last. The whisky tightened her mouth, but she swallowed it clean. “I’m in Bloomsbury. For now.” “Work?” “Yes.” “Still publishing?” Eva touched the chain at her neck. “No.” Aurora waited. The old Aurora would have chased the answer, filled the pause with jokes, tugged at Eva’s sleeve until the truth spilled out laughing. This Aurora wiped the same dry patch of bar and let silence put its elbows down between them. Eva looked at her scar. “You still have that.” Aurora pulled her sleeve over her wrist. “Skin’s sentimental.” “Your dad blamed me for that.” “You dared me to climb the greenhouse.” “I dared you to sit on the wall.” “You said the roof had better views.” “It did.” “It collapsed.” “You landed on Jennifer’s rosemary.” “Mam cared more about the rosemary.” Eva’s laugh came out once, startled and rough. It opened her face for half a second, and the girl from Cardiff flashed through: sixteen, raincoat unbuttoned, red hair escaping pins, a cigarette stolen from her older brother held like a film prop. Then the woman shut again. Aurora’s throat tightened, which irritated her. The door opened behind Eva. Two men came in arguing about Arsenal. They shook umbrellas at the mat, took the corner table, and called for lager. Aurora served them, counting change while feeling Eva at the bar like a lit match. When she returned, Eva had placed a folded paper napkin under the base of her glass, correcting a wobble in the bar top. “You still fix furniture.” “I stabilise situations.” “You used to kick table legs until they behaved.” “That was before I discovered consequences.” Aurora leaned on the back counter. “Did you?” Eva’s eyes met hers. Brown, not green as memory had stored them. Or perhaps they had always been brown and youth had lit them with something else. “I discovered invoices.” “That’ll do it.” “And solicitors.” “Less effective than kicking.” “You’d know.” There it was. Evan’s shadow, pulled from a corner and set between their drinks. Aurora picked up the towel again. Her fingers wanted occupation. “You spoke to him?” “No.” “But you know.” “Cardiff talks.” “Cardiff gossips. Talks suggests aim.” Eva turned the glass on the napkin. “I heard after.” “After what?” “After you left.” “I didn’t leave a forwarding address for the city.” “You left one for me.” The towel stilled. Rain beat harder on the windows. The neon shivered in the glass. Aurora placed the towel down, smoothing it flat with both hands. “I rang you.” “I know.” “No. You don’t get to say it like that.” Eva’s jaw clenched. A pulse worked beside her ear. “You rang from a number I didn’t recognise.” “I rang three times.” “I was in Edinburgh.” “You had voicemail in Edinburgh.” “My phone was off.” “For a week?” Eva lifted the whisky. Put it down again. “I was in hospital.” Aurora’s anger, old and well-fed, halted mid-step. “What?” “Not dramatic. Appendix. Burst before I admitted it wasn’t indigestion. I made a mess of a conference bathroom and woke up with staples.” Aurora stared at her. “Why didn’t you tell me?” Eva gave a small shrug, too clean to carry the truth. “By the time I got your messages, you’d stopped leaving them.” “I thought you’d chosen not to answer.” “I thought you’d found someone more useful.” The words sat there. Plain. Ugly. Years compressed into one short sentence. Aurora’s chest felt too small. “I was in a coach station in Bristol.” Eva closed her eyes. “Rory.” “Don’t. I had a black eye hidden under sunglasses I bought for four pounds from a kiosk. One lens popped out somewhere near Newport. My purse had eleven quid and a loyalty card for a coffee shop that had shut down. I rang you from a pay-as-you-go because Evan had my phone. I left you messages while a man in a high-vis jacket mopped sick around my shoes.” Eva’s hand covered her mouth. No sound came. Aurora looked past her to the men in the corner. One of them lifted a hand for more lager. She ignored him. “I said, ‘Evie, I need you.’ Like some pathetic—” “No.” Eva’s palm struck the bar. Not loud enough to draw the room, but hard enough to make the whisky jump. “Don’t you dare do his work for him.” Aurora’s eyes burned. She hated that. She turned and took two pint glasses from the shelf. “Customer’s waiting.” “Let him dehydrate.” Aurora filled the pints. Foam rose too high on the first. She scraped it off with the blade of a knife. Her hands kept steady because they had learned that trick in worse rooms than this. She delivered the lagers. The Arsenal men had fallen into a silence that pretended not to listen. When she came back, Eva had removed her glasses and pressed thumb and finger to the bridge of her nose. Without them, her face looked younger and more ruined. Aurora spoke to the bottles. “You could have called after.” “I did.” “No.” “I rang Brendan’s house.” Aurora turned. “When?” “Two days after I got out. Your dad answered. He said you weren’t there.” “He didn’t know where I was.” “He knew more than he said.” “That was his hobby.” “He told me you needed peace. That I had always made you reckless.” Aurora let out a breath without humour. “Of course he did.” “I rang your old mobile. Dead. I went to your flat. Evan opened the door.” The bar seemed to tilt. Eva’s face hardened in a way Aurora had not seen before, not expensive now, not edited. Sharpened. “What did he do?” “He smiled.” Aurora gripped the counter edge. “That sounds like him.” “He wore your university hoodie. The green one with the torn cuff.” Aurora remembered that hoodie. Eva had stolen it for an entire winter and returned it smelling of smoke, rain, and her lavender shampoo. “I asked where you were. He said you’d gone off with some delivery driver from Swansea. Said you’d cleaned out his cash and left him with rent due. Said I’d know all about ditching people.” Aurora tasted metal. “And you believed him.” “No.” Eva’s voice cut the air. “No, I didn’t believe him. I wanted to put my keys through his face. But he had a split lip, and he stood there like proof. Then Mrs Pritchard from downstairs opened her door and watched us both. I left.” “You left.” “I went to the police.” Aurora blinked. “What?” “I gave his name. Yours. The address. I told them he had hurt you.” Aurora’s mouth parted, but no sound formed. Eva’s fingers trembled around the glass. She saw it and flattened her hand on the bar. “They took notes. A man with dandruff on his collar asked if I had witnessed the assault. I said no. He asked if you had made a complaint. I said I didn’t know. He asked if you had a history of making allegations. I told him to repeat that with his supervisor present.” A small, savage pride stirred in Aurora despite everything. “Did he?” “He found new phrasing.” “That’s their native language.” “I kept ringing stations. Hospitals. Hostels. Your old course mates. Your mother cried into the phone and asked if I’d done something.” Aurora shut her eyes. “Mam.” “I didn’t know what to tell her.” “You could’ve told her you’d found me.” “I hadn’t.” “No.” The word came softer than Aurora intended. It landed without teeth. Eva drank the rest of the whisky in one swallow. She looked as if it hurt and welcomed the hurt. “Three months later I got an email from you.” Aurora searched memory’s rooms. That year had gaps where days had been stacked in the dark. “What did it say?” “That you were safe. That you didn’t want contact with anyone from before. That if I cared about you, I’d leave you alone.” Aurora’s skin went cold. “I didn’t send that.” “I know.” “Do you?” “I knew five minutes after reading it. You’d used a semicolon correctly.” Despite herself, Aurora gave a cracked laugh. “Bastard never could.” “And you signed it Aurora.” Aurora’s laugh vanished. “He thought I hated Rory.” “You did when strangers used it.” “You weren’t a stranger.” Eva’s eyes shone, but she did not look away. “No. I wasn’t.” Silas emerged from the bookshelf door at the far end of the room. To anyone else, it looked like he had stepped from a narrow hallway beside the loos. Aurora saw the faint shift of the atlas spine, the way the shelf settled behind him, the pause before he placed weight on his left leg. His grey-streaked auburn hair had dampened at the temples. His silver signet ring caught the bar light as he buttoned his cuff. He surveyed the room in a glance: empty glasses, wet coats, Eva’s posture, Aurora’s face. “Rory.” “I’m fine.” His eyebrows moved a fraction. “That wasn’t the question.” Eva turned on the stool. Silas came nearer, his limp drawing one foot half a beat behind the other. He had the quiet authority of a man who had once entered rooms where the wrong breath could kill someone. He set a hand on the bar, signet ring against the wood. “You’re a friend?” Eva looked at Aurora before answering. “I was.” Silas took that in. The word settled on him, found no purchase. “Then you still get the house whisky, not the one we serve estate agents.” “She already found it,” Aurora muttered. “I trained you too well.” “You trained me to spot which bottle you hide behind the cheap gin.” “State secrets crumble.” Eva slid off the stool and straightened. “I should go.” Aurora’s hand moved before her mind agreed. She caught the edge of the bar towel, twisted it, released it. “You came here by accident?” Eva put on her glasses. The lenses restored distance. “I had a meeting in Soho. Saw the sign. Remembered you once said if you ever owned a pub, you’d call it something with a bird because men trusted places named after animals.” “I said that?” “You were drunk on cider in Bute Park. You also said judges should wear trainers so defendants could imagine them running for buses.” “That one holds up.” Eva reached for her coat. Rain had darkened the shoulders. Silas did not move away. “The weather’s foul. Finish your drink.” “I finished it.” “Then have another.” “I’ve an early train.” Aurora heard the retreat in her voice. Polite. Sensible. Armoured. “Back to Bloomsbury?” Eva tightened the belt on her coat. “Cardiff.” The name struck the bar between them. Aurora looked at the clock above the optics. Ten past ten. “Tonight?” “Last train.” “Why?” Eva’s mouth folded at one side. “My father died.” Aurora gripped the bar. “Mr Morgan?” “He hated that. Said it made him sound like a bank manager.” “He wore cardigans with leather elbow patches.” “He was a librarian.” “He fined me for a book you lost.” “You had more honest eyes.” Aurora came round from behind the bar. The movement placed her in open space, without counter, bottles, or work between them. Eva noticed. Her shoulders rose, then dropped. “When?” “Monday.” “It’s Thursday.” “The dead can’t read calendars.” “Evie.” The old name slipped out, raw from disuse. Eva looked down. “He asked for you near the end.” Aurora swallowed. “He did?” “He thought it was 2008. Kept telling Mam to make up the spare bed because Rory had fallen out with Brendan again and would need toast.” A chair scraped near the dartboard. Someone laughed too loudly, then stopped. Aurora saw Mr Morgan’s kitchen: yellow walls, radio low, toast smoking because Eva had turned the dial too high, her own school tie shoved into her pocket, Eva’s father pretending not to see the tears Aurora had fought in his hallway after Brendan had called her wilful, dramatic, impossible. He had placed a plate before her and tapped the rim. “Eat before declaring independence. Revolutions needed carbohydrates.” Aurora pressed her knuckles to her lips. “I should have visited.” Eva’s face twisted. “You were surviving.” “That’s become a very convenient absolution.” “It’s not absolution.” “What is it, then?” “A fact with teeth.” Silas took a step back, not leaving, not intruding. His gaze rested on Aurora as if he could hold a net beneath her without showing the weave. Eva drew a folded envelope from her satchel. Cream paper, softened at the edges. She placed it on the bar. “He wrote this last year. Didn’t post it. I found it in his desk with old theatre stubs and a photo of us at Barry Island.” Aurora stared at the envelope. Her name sat on the front in a slanted hand. Rory Carter. Not Aurora. Not Ms Carter. Rory. “I can’t.” “You don’t have to open it now.” “I mean I can’t take it and watch you walk out again.” Eva went still. The bar kept breathing around them: taps hissed, rain ticked against glass, ice settled in a bucket behind the counter. Aurora lowered her hand. Her blue eyes held Eva’s through the smear of lamplight and old years. “I spent a long time angry with you because it was easier than being angry with a dead phone, a locked ward, my father, your father, the police, myself, every bloody road out of Cardiff. You were a shape I could throw it at.” Eva’s throat worked. “I let you.” “You weren’t there.” “No.” “You were hurt.” “Yes.” “I needed you.” Eva nodded once. No defence. No performance. “I know.” Aurora hated the quiet dignity of it. She wanted an argument, something with corners. She wanted to accuse and be accused until the years cracked open and spilled all their spoiled contents across the floor. Instead Eva stood in a camel coat with rain in her hair, older than she should have been, younger than she pretended, carrying her father’s death in a satchel and Aurora’s name in an envelope. Silas lifted the empty whisky glass. “Another for both of you.” Eva’s eyes flicked to him. “I said I had a train.” Silas took down two clean tumblers. “Trains had waited for worse reasons.” Aurora almost corrected him—trains waited for no one, not in Britain, not for grief or old friends or letters from dead librarians—but Silas had already poured. He set one glass near Eva and one near Aurora. “On the house.” Eva looked at the drink, then at the door, where rain silvered the black street beyond the glass. Aurora picked up the envelope. It weighed almost nothing. It altered the room anyway. Eva spoke without looking at her. “I don’t know who you are now.” Aurora ran her thumb over Mr Morgan’s handwriting. “I deliver Chinese food, live above a bar, and sometimes help a retired spy lie to men in good shoes.” Silas cleared his throat. “Retired publican.” “Of course.” Eva’s mouth curved, then sank. “I prosecute financial crime.” Aurora looked up. “You hate maths.” “I hate thieves more.” “You used to steal traffic cones.” “I returned most of them.” “You stole a sheep from a nativity.” “It was made of plywood.” “It had emotional value.” Eva’s laugh broke again, but this time it stayed a little longer. It trembled in the air between them, half joy, half damage. Aurora held the envelope against her chest. “You cut your hair.” “You stopped straightening yours.” “You wear beige.” “You wear someone else’s apron.” Aurora glanced down at the black bar apron tied around her waist, stained with lime juice and beer. “It has pockets.” “My suit has pockets.” “Fake ones.” Eva slipped a hand into her jacket pocket and pulled out a train ticket. Aurora frowned. “Show-off.” The ticket sat between Eva’s fingers, bent from being gripped too long. Silas moved to the far end of the bar and began polishing glasses that were already clean. The men in the corner called for crisps. He served them with a look that discouraged conversation. Eva turned the ticket over. “If I miss it, I’ll have to go in the morning.” Aurora looked at the window. Rain washed green light over the pavement. Taxis slid past full and indifferent. Somewhere beyond Soho, platforms filled with wet passengers and blue boards and announcements that swallowed names. “Your mum expecting you?” “She told me to stay in London tonight. Said grief hated company before breakfast.” “That sounds like her.” “She also said if I found you, I wasn’t to make a speech.” “Too late?” “I had cue cards.” Aurora sat on the stool beside Eva, not across the bar now. Their shoulders did not touch. The space between them held years, fathers, bruises, wards, unanswered calls, a forged email, a dead man’s letter. Eva pushed one of the whisky glasses towards her. “You drinking while working now?” Aurora took it. “At nineteen I thought vodka and orange counted as fruit.” Eva lifted her own glass. “At thirty-four, I considered whisky dinner twice this week.” “You’re thirty-three.” “Am I?” “Unless you lied about your birthday too.” Eva stared at her, then smiled with one side of her mouth. “You remembered.” Aurora looked into the whisky. The surface caught the green neon and broke it into pieces. “I remembered loads. Against my better judgement.” Eva’s glass touched hers. A small sound. No ceremony. They drank. The whisky burned clean, then opened into smoke and something like apples left too long in a wooden crate. Aurora kept the envelope under her palm. Eva kept the train ticket under hers. Neither moved towards the door. Silas limped past with a bowl of crisps for no one and set it between them. “Eat. Revolutions need carbohydrates.” Aurora turned her head. Eva stared at him. Silas paused, ring bright against the bowl. “What?” Aurora’s laugh came out wet and startled. Eva covered her face, but her shoulders shook. The sound drew a glance from the Arsenal men, from the widower at the end of the bar, from the photographs on the walls with their frozen smoke and lost bridges. For a minute, the Raven’s Nest held them as they had been and as they had become: two women bent over a bar in Soho, rain at their backs, grief in their coats, whisky in their blood, and an old sentence returning through a stranger’s mouth with enough force to put them both in Mr Morgan’s yellow kitchen again. Eva wiped under her glasses with her thumb. “He would’ve liked this place.” Aurora looked at the maps, the shadowed bottles, Silas pretending not to listen, the green neon trembling on wet glass. “He would’ve complained about the lighting.” “He would’ve asked for tea.” “Silas has tea.” Silas answered from the till. “Silas has standards.” Eva picked up a crisp and examined it as if it were evidence. “Do his standards include stale cheese and onion?” “Those are vintage.” Aurora ate one. It had softened at the edges. “God. They are.” Eva looked at the train ticket again. Her thumb rubbed the printed time until the ink blurred. Aurora did not ask her to stay. Not with the word. She had learned the cruelty of doors that shut after pleas. Instead, she opened Mr Morgan’s envelope with care, sliding one finger beneath the flap, and Eva turned towards her on the stool, rainwater drying in her shortened hair, whisky untouched now, face stripped of its courtroom stillness as the first folded page came free.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences242
tagDensity0.004
leniency0.008
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4079
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4079
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silence"
2"jaw clenched"
3"pulse"
4"trembled"
5"weight"
6"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences288
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences288
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences529
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4077
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions205
wordCount2619
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity3.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity8
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Berlin1
Belfast1
Carter3
Yu-Fei1
Silas17
Aurora81
Morgan5
Cardiff2
Eva71
Prague1
Arsenal3
Mr4
Brendan1
Ms1
Britain1
Soho2
You3
Rain3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"Morgan"
7"Eva"
8"Mr"
9"Brendan"
10"Ms"
11"You"
12"Rain"
places
0"Berlin"
1"Belfast"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Arsenal"
5"Britain"
6"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences175
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if checking exits, witnesses, distances"
1"looked like he had stepped from a narrow"
2"something like apples left too long in a woo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords0.736
wordCount4077
matches
0"not with interest but calculation, as if checking exits, witnesses, distances"
1"Not thin exactly, but edited"
2"Not loud enough to draw the room, but hard enough to make the whisky jump"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences529
matches
0"did that night"
1"learned that trick"
2"remembered that hoodie"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs405
mean10.07
std12.85
cv1.277
sampleLengths
09
171
279
312
41
525
647
78
870
96
1031
1121
128
131
1424
151
1633
1737
1813
193
202
212
226
234
2472
255
261
2711
284
292
306
3110
3212
333
3430
354
361
379
382
395
4016
4123
423
4317
445
453
465
475
4831
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences288
matches
0"was gone"
1"been stacked"
2"being gripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs455
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences529
ratio0.004
matches
0"The name landed somewhere under her ribs; Aurora saw it."
1"Aurora almost corrected him—trains waited for no one, not in Britain, not for grief or old friends or letters from dead librarians—but Silas had already poured."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2629
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"behind rain-beaded glasses."
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.02510460251046025
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.001901863826550019
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences529
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences529
mean7.71
std7.99
cv1.037
sampleLengths
09
119
29
39
434
536
624
719
812
91
106
1119
1214
134
144
155
169
1711
188
1913
2022
2126
229
236
2411
2516
264
274
287
2910
308
311
324
3310
3410
351
3633
378
3821
398
4013
413
422
432
446
454
464
4722
484
495
42.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats39
diversityRatio0.20793950850661624
totalSentences529
uniqueOpeners110
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences266
matches
0"Even the air tasted of"
1"Then she saw Aurora."
2"Only a narrow gold chain"
3"Then the woman shut again."
4"Instead Eva stood in a"
5"Somewhere beyond Soho, platforms filled"
6"Instead, she opened Mr Morgan’s"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences266
matches
0"She had tied her black"
1"Her left sleeve had ridden"
2"He nodded without looking at"
3"His wedding ring had left"
4"She wore a camel coat"
5"Her hair used to be"
6"She looked around the room,"
7"She used it now without"
8"Her fingers curled around the"
9"Her nails were bare, buffed"
10"You’re not with him."
11"You made it out."
12"She stacked three clean tumblers."
13"Her gaze paused on a"
14"It opened her face for"
15"They shook umbrellas at the"
16"Her fingers wanted occupation."
17"She ignored him."
18"She hated that."
19"She turned and took two"
ratio0.188
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount231
totalSentences266
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest wore the"
1"Water ran down the front"
2"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
3"She had tied her black"
4"Her left sleeve had ridden"
5"A man at the end"
6"He nodded without looking at"
7"His wedding ring had left"
8"Aurora poured him a measure"
9"The cash felt damp."
10"Everything did that night."
11"Coats steamed on chair backs."
12"The floor held the dark"
13"The door opened with a"
14"A woman stepped in and"
15"She wore a camel coat"
16"Her hair used to be"
17"Aurora’s hand stopped around a"
18"The woman wiped her glasses"
19"She looked around the room,"
ratio0.868
18.80% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences266
matches
0"To anyone else, it looked"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences92
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood behind the bar because Yu-Fei’s delivery bike had a puncture, the kitchen downstairs had closed early, and Silas had gone into the hidden ba…"
1"She wore a camel coat belted tight, city boots, a black leather satchel across her body, and the kind of haircut that took money and discipline."
2"She looked around the room, not with interest but calculation, as if checking exits, witnesses, distances."
3"Silas moved to the far end of the bar and began polishing glasses that were already clean."
4"Somewhere beyond Soho, platforms filled with wet passengers and blue boards and announcements that swallowed names."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences242
tagDensity0.004
leniency0.008
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.008
87.4447%