Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0NP6QMT1K5K7FMWSZ70W85

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.097220
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter reached the oak standing stones at nine minutes past midnight, with a paper map folded into quarters in her coat pocket, a torch gripped between her teeth, and the Heartstone Pendant burning a small, rude heat against her breastbone. Richmond Park should have ended at the line of trees. It did not. The path slid under the brambles and kept going, narrower than she remembered from the afternoon, its edges crowded by nettles silvered with frost. Beyond the trunks, London had fallen silent. No road-hum. No late bus sighing at the kerb. No fox barking from the bins. Even the wind seemed to have stopped at the park gates and decided against following her in. Rory took the torch from her mouth. “Lovely. Not ominous at all.” Her voice landed flat between the trees. No echo. The woods swallowed it whole. She checked her phone. No signal. The screen showed 00:09, then blinked to 00:08. Rory stared at it. “Don’t start.” The phone stayed at 00:08. She locked it and shoved it into her pocket, though her fingers stayed around it a moment longer than necessary. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught on the cuff of her coat, a tiny tug of old pain. She rubbed it once with her thumb and looked up at the stones. They stood in a broken half-ring ahead, each one no taller than her waist, dark oak grown into shapes that looked too much like hunched figures. Their bark had split into seams. Pale moss filled the cracks, and in the torchlight the moss shone with a faint green wetness, as if the stones breathed through it. Yu-Fei’s words came back to her from the steam and clatter of the Golden Empress kitchen. Don’t go in if the flowers point the wrong way. At the time, Rory had laughed because Yu-Fei had handed her a takeaway bag, a packet of prawn crackers, and that sentence with the same level of concern. Now she crouched beside the first clump of wildflowers at the boundary and aimed the torch at them. Bluebells, snowdrops, foxgloves, marigolds, all tangled together though none of them had any business blooming in the same season. Their stems leaned towards the grove. Every last one. “Fine. We’re all being normal.” She stepped between the standing stones. The air changed. Not warmed. Not cooled. Changed, like she had pushed her face through water and come out the other side with different lungs. The scent of wet earth thickened. Sweet rot threaded through it. Something floral too, heavy as perfume spilled on carpet. The pendant gave one hard pulse. Rory flinched and hooked a finger under the silver chain. The deep crimson stone sat against her jumper, the size of a thumbnail, glowing from within like an ember trapped under skin. It had been warm all evening. It had not hurt. Now it nipped. “Isolde?” she called. The name threaded through the clearing ahead. No answer. Rory had expected moonlight in the grove. She had expected a round clearing, soft grass, year-round flowers, perhaps a smug fae woman lounging against a tree as if midnight meetings in cursed pockets of Richmond Park were a social hobby. She had not expected the dark to have weight. The clearing lay ahead, but its edges would not settle. Trees stood where the path opened, then were gone when she turned the torch, replaced by curtains of ivy or stone or empty black. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their colours muted to bruises under the beam. They did not move in the still air. At the centre of the grove sat a low table made from a slab of pale wood. On it rested a brass dish, a stoppered glass vial, and a folded square of cream paper. Rory let out a breath through her nose. “That better not be an invoice.” She crossed the grass, boots sinking deeper than they should have. The ground felt soft. Not muddy. Springy. Like something underneath had given way to her weight and then pressed back. Halfway to the table, a twig snapped behind her. Rory stopped. The torch beam fixed on the brass dish. Her hand tightened around the handle until plastic creaked. No breath. No footsteps. No whisper of fabric. She turned. The path between the oak stones had vanished. In its place stood a wall of black hawthorn, thorns long and pale as teeth. Beyond it, nothing. Not darkness with distance in it. Nothing. Rory kept the torch on the hedge. “Right. That’s poor hosting.” A sound came from the left. A single note, high and thin. Like a child humming into a glass. Rory swung the beam. Flowers. Moss. A tree trunk with a hollow at its base. The note stopped. She waited. Her scalp tightened at the crown. The grove held still around her, too still, every leaf and petal posed as if for a photograph. Then, from somewhere behind the tree with the hollow, came three soft taps. Tap. Tap. Tap. Rory backed towards the table, each step chosen, heel down first, then sole. Her delivery trainers had no grip for ancient fae weirdness. Of course they didn’t. She had dressed for slipping through park gates, not for being boxed in by a hedge with an attitude problem. The pendant pulsed again. This time warmth spread across her ribs in a slow ring. The tapping came again. Tap. Tap. Tap. Closer. Rory reached the table without looking away from the trees. Her hip bumped the edge, and something on the slab rattled. The brass dish spun a fraction and settled. “Isolde, if this is you, I’m going to be extremely Welsh about it.” The grove answered with a wet click. Not from the left. From above. Rory raised the torch. Branches knitted over the clearing in a black lattice. Between them, the sky showed no stars. At first she thought leaves clustered there, caught in the crooks of limbs. Then one of the leaves opened. A pale lid slid back from a round, glossy eye. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. More eyes opened across the canopy. Dozens. No, not eyes in branches. Eyes behind branches. Set in a shape that did not fit the tree, a long bulk crouched across the woven limbs, all angles and patient weight. The torch beam touched a strip of skin the colour of old mushroom flesh. It withdrew behind bark without sound. Rory lowered the torch. “Absolutely not.” The words scraped out small. Something laughed under the table. Rory moved before thought caught up. She stumbled back, kicked the brass dish off the slab, and the dish hit the grass with no sound at all. The silence of it struck harder than a clang would have. Her boot heel sank into the soft ground. She yanked it free and aimed the torch beneath the table. Nothing underneath but flower stems. Long stems. Too long. They curled around the table legs and the legs were not table legs. They were roots, pale and smooth, vanishing into the grass. The folded paper had slid open in the disturbance. A line of ink showed across it. Rory did not want to look. She looked. BRING THE HEART THAT BURNS. The handwriting was neat. Human. Block capitals, pressed deep enough to score the page. A second line had begun beneath it, though she had not seen one before. NOT YOURS. The ink darkened as she watched. It pushed through the paper fibres in slow threads, as if written from the other side. Rory snatched the pendant under her jumper. The crimson stone scalded her palm. “Who gave you this?” she whispered. The paper curled at the edges. A whisper moved through the grove. Not a word. A mouth practising the shape of one. Rory turned in a circle, torch raised. Flowers bent away from the beam now. Their faces—petals, she told herself, petals—tilted towards the trees instead, towards the gaps between trunks where the dark had begun to gather into columns. A footstep sounded on the vanished path. Rory froze. Another. Slow. Heavy. Measured. Not approaching from the hedge. From behind it. From the place the path had been. Something walked on the other side of the black hawthorn, close enough for branches to twitch, though no thorns broke. Rory slipped her phone from her pocket and pressed the side button. 00:08. Still. The screen lit her knuckles blue-white. No signal. No emergency call. No torch icon; she had left the torch in her other hand, and the beam trembled over the hedge despite her grip. A voice spoke from the hawthorn. “Rory?” Her stomach dropped cold and fast. Not Isolde. Eva. Rory did not move. “Rory, open up. It’s freezing.” The voice came clear through the thorns, breathy with irritation, the exact clipped London edge Eva used when she pretended not to worry. Rory’s fingers went numb around the phone. “Eva’s in Camden,” Rory called. A pause. Then a small laugh. “Yeah, and you’re in Richmond Park talking to shrubbery. We’re both making poor choices.” Rory’s throat closed around the reply. That was the kind of thing Eva would say. That was the problem. “Tell me what you called me after I cut my fringe at fourteen.” Beyond the hedge, something shifted its weight. Branches rasped over skin or cloth or something slick. “Open up first.” “No.” “Rory.” The voice changed on the second syllable. Not enough for anyone else to catch. Too smooth. Eva’s voice always had grit in it, a scuff from too many late nights and cheap coffee. This one had copied the pitch, not the damage. Rory backed away from the hawthorn. “Bad impression. Two stars.” The voice stopped breathing. The phone in her hand vibrated. She looked down. Incoming call: Eva. Her thumb hovered. The screen glitched. Eva’s name stretched, the letters thinning, black cracks cutting through the white glow. Then the phone answered itself. Static filled the clearing. Under it, something scratched at the receiver. A nail on glass. A tooth on wire. Then Eva’s voice, far away and frantic. “Rory? Don’t listen if it uses me. Don’t answer anything. Don’t—” The call cut. The phone showed 00:07. The hawthorn shuddered. A face pressed between the thorns. Rory saw only pieces: a cheek too flat, an eye bright as wet slate, a mouth shaped like Eva’s mouth but set too low. Thorns pierced it and did not draw blood. The lips widened, caught, split at the corners without tearing. It smiled because it had learned that faces did that. “Open up first,” it repeated. Rory hurled the brass dish. It passed through the hedge without striking leaves and vanished. A second later, from somewhere deep in the dark beyond, metal rang once. The creature behind the hawthorn snapped its head towards the sound. Rory ran. Not towards the path. There was no path. She sprinted deeper into the clearing, over the flowers, towards the far line of trees where the grove blurred and remade itself. Her boots crushed stems that gave off a smell of pepper and milk. The torch beam jumped across trunks, roots, white stones half-buried in the grass. Behind her, the hawthorn tore itself open. Branches cracked. Not like wood. Like fingers pulled from sockets. Rory did not look back. The pendant beat against her chest with each stride. Heat gathered in it, fierce now, a hot coin beneath fabric. Ahead, between two yew trees, a red thread of light appeared in the air. Thin. Vertical. The Heartstone answered with a pulse so strong it jolted her step. A portal. Or a wound. At that moment, Rory did not care which. The humming began again, high and thin, but now voices layered beneath it. Women. Men. Children. All speaking from the edges of the grove, from under leaves, from the earth under her feet. “Carter.” “Laila.” “Malphora.” “Rory.” She stumbled at the last one because it came from directly beside her ear. Cold breath touched the hair at her temple. Rory swung the torch like a club. The beam caught empty air. Something moved at the edge of vision. Tall. Bent sideways. It passed between trees without disturbing a single branch. The canopy eyes opened again, tracking her, glossy and patient. Her foot hit a root. She pitched forward, caught herself on both hands, and the torch flew from her grip. It landed in the flowers and rolled, beam spinning, throwing the grove into slices: white petals, black bark, pale hand, grass, stone, eye, nothing. Rory pushed up on one knee. A hand had risen from the flowers ten feet ahead. Long fingers spread against the air as if feeling for rain. They were not attached to an arm she could see. Another hand rose beside it. Then another, each one pale, each one slow, the flowers parting around wrists that ended in darkness below the ground. The red slit between the yews flickered. Rory grabbed the pendant through her jumper. The heat blistered her palm, but she held on. “You want the heart that burns?” The hands turned towards her voice. Rory ripped the chain over her head. The clasp caught in her hair. Pain flashed along her scalp. She pulled harder, teeth bared, and the silver chain snapped free. The Heartstone swung from her fist, crimson light strobing across her knuckles. The grove inhaled. Every flower faced her. Every eye in the canopy opened. The false Eva stood at the broken hawthorn, its borrowed face slack now, too many teeth crowded behind the lips. It took one step into the clearing, and the grass bent away from its feet. Rory held the pendant out towards the red slit. “Fetch.” She threw it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2297
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2297
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"absolutely"
8"silence"
9"measured"
10"trembled"
11"stomach"
12"vibrated"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences281
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences281
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences303
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2295
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Their faces—petals, she told herself, petals—tilted towards the trees instead, towards the gaps between trunks where the…"
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount2183
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Park2
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Rory35
Yu-Fei2
Richmond2
Isolde1
Eva9
Like3
Tap6
Branches3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Eva"
6"Branches"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
globalScore0.698
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences164
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if feeling for rain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2295
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences303
matches
0"learned that faces"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs177
mean12.97
std15.15
cv1.169
sampleLengths
041
110
23
363
47
55
614
714
84
92
105
1153
1256
1316
1410
1546
1625
173
185
196
203
2142
226
2342
243
253
267
272
2849
2954
3034
318
326
3331
349
352
3617
378
382
398
4025
417
424
4319
444
4511
463
472
4837
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences281
matches
0"were gone"
1"being boxed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs348
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences303
ratio0.007
matches
0"Their faces—petals, she told herself, petals—tilted towards the trees instead, towards the gaps between trunks where the dark had begun to gather into columns."
1"No torch icon; she had left the torch in her other hand, and the beam trembled over the hedge despite her grip."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.025547445255474453
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0013686131386861315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences303
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences303
mean7.57
std6.25
cv0.825
sampleLengths
041
110
23
324
47
52
67
76
817
97
105
117
122
135
144
152
168
174
182
195
2020
2120
2213
2326
246
2524
2616
2710
2828
2918
3019
316
323
335
346
353
362
372
3818
396
405
419
426
4310
4422
456
464
473
483
497
42.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.304635761589404
totalSentences302
uniqueOpeners92
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences225
matches
0"Even the wind seemed to"
1"Then, from somewhere behind the"
2"Of course they didn’t."
3"Then one of the leaves"
4"Then a small laugh."
5"Then the phone answered itself."
6"Then Eva’s voice, far away"
7"All speaking from the edges"
8"Then another, each one pale,"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences225
matches
0"It did not."
1"Her voice landed flat between"
2"She checked her phone."
3"She locked it and shoved"
4"She rubbed it once with"
5"They stood in a broken"
6"Their bark had split into"
7"Their stems leaned towards the"
8"She stepped between the standing"
9"It had been warm all"
10"It had not hurt."
11"She had expected a round"
12"She had not expected the"
13"They did not move in"
14"She crossed the grass, boots"
15"Her hand tightened around the"
16"Her scalp tightened at the"
17"Her delivery trainers had no"
18"She had dressed for slipping"
19"Her hip bumped the edge,"
ratio0.196
82.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount170
totalSentences225
matches
0"Aurora Carter reached the oak"
1"Richmond Park should have ended"
2"It did not."
3"The path slid under the"
4"Rory took the torch from"
5"Her voice landed flat between"
6"The woods swallowed it whole."
7"She checked her phone."
8"The screen showed 00:09, then"
9"Rory stared at it."
10"The phone stayed at 00:08."
11"She locked it and shoved"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"She rubbed it once with"
14"They stood in a broken"
15"Their bark had split into"
16"Yu-Fei’s words came back to"
17"Bluebells, snowdrops, foxgloves, marigolds, all"
18"Their stems leaned towards the"
19"Every last one."
ratio0.756
44.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences225
matches
0"Now she crouched beside the"
1"Now it nipped."
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They stood in a broken half-ring ahead, each one no taller than her waist, dark oak grown into shapes that looked too much like hunched figures."
1"Pale moss filled the cracks, and in the torchlight the moss shone with a faint green wetness, as if the stones breathed through it."
2"She had expected a round clearing, soft grass, year-round flowers, perhaps a smug fae woman lounging against a tree as if midnight meetings in cursed pockets of…"
3"Set in a shape that did not fit the tree, a long bulk crouched across the woven limbs, all angles and patient weight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"it repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
91.1515%