Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0NSTWJ4JPV3NVCZF7Q4AJG

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.5
Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.107820
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain needled the windscreen hard enough to turn Soho into a smear of sodium light and black glass. Detective Harlow Quinn sat in an unmarked Astra with the engine ticking under her boots, one hand on the wheel, the other resting across the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The strap had darkened at the edges from years of sweat and weather. Across the street, The Raven’s Nest hunched beneath its green neon sign, the glow bleeding over the wet pavement like something chemical. A drunk couple stumbled past the entrance, sharing one umbrella and three arguments. A delivery rider in a soaked orange jacket chained his bike to a bent railing. Nothing unusual. Nothing clean. Quinn kept her eyes on the bar’s front door. Her phone buzzed in the cup holder. “Quinn.” The voice of DC Farrow cracked through rain static. “Still parked outside Silas’ place?” “Still looking at it.” “You should’ve had uniform with you.” “You should’ve sent them when I asked.” A pause. Paper shifted at Farrow’s end. “Control says no active warrant, no live threat, no resources.” Quinn watched a man step into the doorway of The Raven’s Nest. Short curly dark hair. Olive skin. Collar turned up. He paused under the green sign and looked left, then right, too calm for a man leaving a bar at half eleven in weather fit for drowning rats. Tomás Herrera. Quinn leaned forward. “Got him.” “Herrera?” “He just came out.” “Don’t engage alone.” Herrera adjusted something at his throat. A medallion flashed once under the neon before he tucked it beneath his shirt. Quinn opened the car door. Rain hit her face cold and sharp. “Quinn, did you hear me?” She stepped into the street and shut the door without a slam. “Keep the line open.” Herrera turned east, moving fast without breaking into a run. His shoulders stayed level. He passed beneath a black awning, then crossed between two taxis as their horns barked. Quinn followed from the opposite pavement, boots striking through shallow streams along the kerb. A bus dragged a sheet of dirty water through the gutter and threw it across her coat. She did not flinch. Farrow spoke again. “What’s he wearing?” “Dark bomber. Grey hood. Black jeans. Medical bag, left hand.” “Medical?” “Canvas. Old. Brown leather straps.” “That doesn’t make him our man.” “No. The three dead bodies with Herrera’s gauze in them made him my man.” Herrera glanced back. Quinn turned her face toward a shop window plastered with vape adverts and kept walking. In the reflection, Herrera’s gaze clipped across the street, found her shape, and stayed half a second too long. He bolted. Quinn surged after him. “Runner.” Her boots punched through puddles. Herrera cut down Greek Street, weaving between midnight smokers huddled outside restaurants, their cigarettes dying under the rain. A waiter cursed as Herrera shoulder-checked a stack of crates. Plastic tubs burst across the pavement, olives skittering into the road like black beads. Quinn cleared the mess in one long step. “Police. Move.” A man in a wool coat turned into her path with a phone at his ear. Quinn caught his lapel, spun him aside, and kept running. Herrera shot across the junction against the lights. A cab braked so hard its tyres screamed on the slick road. “Oi!” Quinn slapped the cab bonnet as she vaulted around it. “Met Police!” The driver’s window dropped. “Then get a bloody car!” Herrera disappeared past a shuttered bakery. Quinn drove herself harder, breath cutting hot through her chest. She had kept herself in shape because grief respected weakness the same way rot respected wood. It entered where it could. Her knees complained. Her lungs did not. Ahead, Herrera skidded at the corner, grabbed a lamp post with his free hand, and hurled himself down an alley beside a closed theatre. Quinn reached the mouth of it three seconds later. The alley stank of beer, wet cardboard, and old fat. Rain fell in hard lines between the buildings, broken by fire escapes and sagging cables. Herrera splashed through the narrow channel, bag thumping against his thigh. “Tomás Herrera.” He did not slow. Quinn drew her baton but kept it down along her leg. “You’re wanted for questioning in connection with three suspicious deaths.” Herrera threw a glance over his shoulder, eyes wide now, no performance left. “You don’t know what you’re stepping in.” “Then stop running and explain it.” A van blocked the far end, its rear doors open beneath a weak yellow bulb. Two men were unloading kegs into a basement. Herrera went straight for them. “Move, please.” The first man laughed. “Mate, we’re work—” Herrera shoved between them. One keg tipped. The metal barrel struck the cobbles with a deep clang and rolled across Quinn’s path. She hurdled it, landed hard, and felt a jolt climb her shin. The second man grabbed her sleeve. “Hey, you can’t—” Quinn twisted his wrist off her coat without breaking stride. “Police. Hands to yourself.” Herrera reached a chain-link gate at the alley’s end. Locked. For one clean second Quinn thought she had him. He pulled something small and pale from his pocket. Not a key. A token. Bone-white, roughly circular, threaded on red cord. He pressed it to the gate’s rusted padlock. The lock opened with a soft click. Quinn slowed. Herrera slipped through and yanked the gate behind him. The padlock swung, open. The chain hung loose. He stared at her through the mesh. Rain streamed down his face and clung to his lashes. The Saint Christopher medallion had come free, bright against his wet shirt. “Detective, go home.” Quinn lifted her warrant card so the gate light caught it. “Open it.” Herrera’s mouth tightened. “That badge won’t work down there.” He vanished into the darkness beyond. Farrow’s voice spat from the phone clipped to Quinn’s coat. “Quinn? Status.” She pushed the gate. It creaked inward. “Suspect entered a service access behind—” She looked up at the rusted sign over the black stairwell beyond the gate. Half the letters had peeled away. CAMDEN NORTH SERVICE. “—an old Tube access. I’m following.” “No. Wait for backup.” Quinn stepped through the gate. “Send it.” “You don’t even know where it comes out.” “That’s why we call it following.” “Quinn.” His tone had changed. Less procedural. More human. She paused at the top of the stairs. Water poured down the concrete steps, carrying cigarette filters and a single red receipt that stuck to the wall like a tongue. Farrow lowered his voice. “Morris went into a dead zone on his own.” Quinn’s fingers closed around the stair rail. Rust flaked beneath her grip. For a moment, rain and city noise fell away. A different night pressed against her. DS Morris laughing under his breath because a suspect had lost a shoe in the mud. DS Morris asking for two minutes before backup because two minutes never mattered until they did. DS Morris’ radio cutting out mid-sentence, not with static but with a wet, choking hush. Then his body on a morgue tray. No wound that matched the blood. No explanation that survived daylight. Quinn looked down the stairwell. Herrera’s footsteps slapped somewhere below, fading. She brought the phone closer to her mouth. “Morris didn’t have a name. I do.” “Quinn—” The signal died. The display showed no bars. She pocketed the phone and descended. The stairs bent twice, then sank beneath street level. Graffiti blackened the tiled walls. Old Underground roundels showed through the grime, the red circles cracked, the blue bars empty where station names had been stripped or painted over. Water ran in threads along the ceiling and dropped onto the steps with patient taps. At the bottom stood a metal door wedged open by a brick. Beyond it, a maintenance corridor stretched into the dark. Quinn pulled her torch. The beam cut across pipes, cable trays, and warning signs furred with mould. Herrera’s wet footprints marked the concrete, clean-edged and fresh. She followed them past a row of lockers with their doors hanging open, past a booth where a dead monitor stared from behind dusty glass, past a rat that froze in the light and then slid into a crack without sound. A clang echoed ahead. Quinn killed her torch. Dark folded around her. She listened. Footsteps. Herrera, still moving fast. Another sound beneath it: voices. Many of them. Too distant for words. A low, crowded hum where no station should have been alive. She moved with one hand brushing the wall, baton in the other. The corridor sloped down. The air changed from wet concrete to hot metal, spice, paraffin, and something bitter, like burnt hair sealed in sugar. Light seeped around the next bend. Not fluorescent. Not emergency red. Gold. Green. Blue. Quinn reached the corner and looked. The abandoned platform had become a market. Stalls lined both sides of the track bed, built from railway sleepers, canvas, brass tubing, and scavenged shopfronts. Lamps burned inside coloured glass jars. Tarps sagged under rainwater leaking through the old roof. People moved through the aisles in coats, robes, medical scrubs, courier jackets, evening gowns, welding masks, and animal skulls worked into hats. Some looked human until they turned their heads. Some did not bother. A woman with silver coins sewn into her cheeks argued over a cage full of moths that glowed blue. A man with no visible mouth counted teeth onto a velvet pad. Two children in identical yellow macs watched a vendor pour black liquid uphill from one bottle into another. A butcher trimmed pale strips of meat from something that kept twitching without a body. Quinn stayed behind the tiled pillar. Herrera pushed through the crowd below, head down, medical bag clutched tight. Someone called after him. “Tommy, your credit died last moon.” “Put it on my grave.” Laughter followed him, thin and sharp. Quinn’s jaw set. The Veil Market. She had seen the phrase in scraps: seized notebooks, a dead informant’s encrypted phone, chalk marks under bridges that disappeared after rain. Farrow had called it gang slang. The Crown Prosecution Service had called it inadmissible nonsense. Quinn had called it unfinished. Now it breathed beneath Camden, packed shoulder to shoulder under dead rails. She scanned for exits. Two old stairways on the far side. A tunnel mouth with strings of charms hanging across it. Three visible guards, if guards was the word. One had arms too long for his coat. Another held a shotgun made from polished bone and steel. The third wore a Transport for London high-vis vest over chainmail and leaned on a spear tipped with a broken Oyster card. Herrera had almost reached the centre aisle. Quinn moved. She came down the maintenance steps and entered the market with her warrant card already out. The nearest vendor, a woman arranging jars of preserved eyes, looked up and smiled with far too many gums. “No badges after threshold, love.” Quinn did not stop. “Metropolitan Police.” The vendor leaned over her stall. “That used to mean something upstairs.” A hand caught Quinn’s sleeve. She seized the wrist, turned, and pinned the owner’s arm against a post in one movement. The man attached to it wore a velvet waistcoat and a face split by gills along the neck. He hissed, showing needle teeth. Quinn pressed harder. “Don’t.” The hiss became a strained laugh. “First time.” “Last, if you grab again.” She released him and kept moving. Whispers spread ahead of her, faster than feet. “Copper.” “No token on her.” “Copper came in raw.” “Who let iron through?” Herrera heard it. He turned. Their eyes met across a table stacked with silver scissors. For a heartbeat he looked less like a fugitive and more like a man who had watched someone step onto thin ice. Then he ran again. Quinn knocked the table aside to follow. Scissors cascaded to the floor and snapped open as they fell, blades biting at empty air. One caught the hem of her coat. She tore free. “Tomás.” He shoved through a curtain of hanging red cords. The cords writhed after him like severed veins. Quinn ducked beneath them, shoulder first, and came out in a narrower lane between stalls selling powders, masks, old bones, handwritten maps, and vials labelled in languages she could not place. A stallholder thrust an arm across her chest. “You broke my stock.” Quinn drove an elbow into his ribs and moved past him. “Invoice the Met.” Herrera leapt from the platform onto the track bed, landed between the rusted rails, and sprinted toward the tunnel mouth. Quinn followed, boots skidding on loose ballast. Pain bit through her ankle from the bad landing in the alley. She ignored it. The tunnel ahead breathed warm air across her face. Charms strung across the arch clicked together though no wind touched them: bones, keys, copper coins, dolls’ fingers, tiny paper umbrellas. The high-vis guard stepped into her path and lowered his spear. “Token.” Quinn lifted her baton. “Move.” The guard’s eyes reflected light like a cat’s. “Token, oath, or blood.” Herrera stopped twenty feet beyond the arch, half inside the tunnel. “Don’t make him ask twice.” Quinn kept the spear point in her peripheral vision and fixed on Herrera. “You’re coming with me.” “No, I’m not.” “You ran from a lawful stop.” “You followed me into a market that sells lungs by the pair and memories by the spoon. Law didn’t come with you.” The guard jabbed the spear. The tip kissed the front of Quinn’s coat. A tiny thread of smoke lifted from the fabric. She looked down at it, then back at him. “I’m not here for your market.” The guard’s mouth spread. “Market’s here for you.” Around them, trade slowed. Faces turned. Conversations thinned into a hush layered with clicks, breaths, the rustle of wet coats, the clink of charms. Quinn felt the weight of the place pressing from all sides, curious and hungry. Herrera took one step back. Quinn saw the route behind him: tunnel darkness, low lamps, branching maintenance passages. No radio. No backup. No map. No rules anyone would admit in court. She saw, too, the canvas medical bag in his hand. The same waxed thread used on three bodies. The same herbal stink from the crime scenes bleeding out through the wet leather. The same look Morris had worn in the photograph on her desk: caught mid-laugh, unaware the world had teeth below the pavement. Quinn unbuttoned her coat with one hand. The guard watched the movement. She slid her warrant card back into her inner pocket, then drew out the small evidence pouch she had taken from a dead man’s flat two nights before. Inside lay a chipped disc of bone threaded with red cord. Herrera’s face changed. The guard tilted his head. “Stolen token.” “Recovered property.” “Names change nothing.” “They change paperwork.” Quinn held the pouch up but did not hand it over. “This gets me through.” The guard extended a grey palm. “Bare.” She looked at his hand. “No plastic. Token feels skin.” Herrera shook his head once, a quick warning. “Detective.” Quinn tore the pouch open with her teeth and tipped the bone token into her left palm. Cold went through her arm. Not surface cold. Not rain cold. It sank under the tendons, moved behind the scar tissue of old sprains and breaks, and pinched each knuckle from the inside. Her watch stopped. She heard it stop, one tiny mechanical surrender against her wrist. The charms across the arch lifted. The guard stepped aside. Herrera swore in Spanish and ran into the tunnel. Quinn closed her fist around the bone token until its edge cut her palm. Then she followed him down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.051
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2626
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2626
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"grave"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"velvet"
3"grave"
4"scanned"
5"weight"
6"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences259
matches
0"felt a jolt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences259
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences336
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2626
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions118
wordCount2275
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn46
Astra1
Raven2
Nest2
Farrow6
Herrera30
Greek1
Street1
Saint1
Christopher1
Half1
Morris3
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
Crown1
Prosecution1
Service1
Camden1
Transport1
London1
Oyster1
Spanish1
Rain4
Two3
One3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Farrow"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Service"
10"Camden"
11"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Half"
4"London"
5"Spanish"
globalScore0.489
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences160
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.381
wordCount2626
matches
0"not with static but with a wet, choking hush"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences336
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs196
mean13.4
std14.73
cv1.099
sampleLengths
018
167
232
39
47
51
614
74
86
97
1017
1149
122
133
142
151
164
173
1820
1912
205
2116
2229
2335
246
2510
261
275
286
2914
303
3134
322
334
341
3547
368
372
3846
391
4010
412
429
436
4438
4524
469
4736
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences259
matches
0"been stripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs392
matches
0"were unloading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences336
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Short curly dark hair."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.019157088122605363
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019157088122605363
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences336
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences336
mean7.82
std6.11
cv0.782
sampleLengths
018
132
213
322
413
515
62
72
89
97
101
119
125
134
146
157
162
175
1810
1912
204
212
223
2328
242
253
262
271
284
293
306
3114
325
337
345
3512
364
3710
384
3915
4014
4117
424
433
443
4510
461
475
486
4914
46.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences336
uniqueOpeners108
56.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences235
matches
0"Then his body on a"
1"Too distant for words."
2"Then he ran again."
3"Then she followed him down."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences235
matches
0"Her phone buzzed in the"
1"He paused under the green"
2"She stepped into the street"
3"His shoulders stayed level."
4"He passed beneath a black"
5"She did not flinch."
6"Her boots punched through puddles."
7"She had kept herself in"
8"It entered where it could."
9"Her knees complained."
10"Her lungs did not."
11"He did not slow."
12"She hurdled it, landed hard,"
13"He pulled something small and"
14"He pressed it to the"
15"He stared at her through"
16"He vanished into the darkness"
17"She pushed the gate."
18"It creaked inward."
19"She looked up at the"
ratio0.183
38.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount198
totalSentences235
matches
0"Rain needled the windscreen hard"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sat in"
2"The strap had darkened at"
3"A drunk couple stumbled past"
4"A delivery rider in a"
5"Quinn kept her eyes on"
6"Her phone buzzed in the"
7"The voice of DC Farrow"
8"Paper shifted at Farrow’s end."
9"Quinn watched a man step"
10"Collar turned up."
11"He paused under the green"
12"Quinn leaned forward."
13"Herrera adjusted something at his"
14"A medallion flashed once under"
15"Quinn opened the car door."
16"She stepped into the street"
17"Herrera turned east, moving fast"
18"His shoulders stayed level."
19"He passed beneath a black"
ratio0.843
21.28% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences235
matches
0"Now it breathed beneath Camden,"
ratio0.004
95.76% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences91
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Herrera cut down Greek Street, weaving between midnight smokers huddled outside restaurants, their cigarettes dying under the rain."
1"Water poured down the concrete steps, carrying cigarette filters and a single red receipt that stuck to the wall like a tongue."
2"She followed them past a row of lockers with their doors hanging open, past a booth where a dead monitor stared from behind dusty glass, past a rat that froze i…"
3"A woman with silver coins sewn into her cheeks argued over a cage full of moths that glowed blue."
4"A butcher trimmed pale strips of meat from something that kept twitching without a body."
5"She had seen the phrase in scraps: seized notebooks, a dead informant’s encrypted phone, chalk marks under bridges that disappeared after rain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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89.4997%