| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 102 | | tagDensity | 0.02 | | leniency | 0.039 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2464 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2464 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charm" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 231 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 231 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "notice" | | 1 | "listen" | | 2 | "feel" |
| | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tended to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 332 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2464 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Ptolemy hissed from the back of the sofa, a low, insulted sound that fitted the moment better than any greet…" | | 1 | "Enough to keep her safe, he claimed." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 91 | | wordCount | 1821 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 25 | | Moreau | 3 | | Eva | 12 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Aurora | 27 | | Welsh | 1 | | French | 3 | | God | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Laila | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Infernal | 1 | | Jurisdictions | 1 | | Loopholes | 1 | | Black | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei" | | 7 | "Silas" | | 8 | "Rory" | | 9 | "Laila" | | 10 | "Brendan" | | 11 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Welsh" | | 1 | "French" | | 2 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like struck flint and hot skin" | | 1 | "appeared under Aurora’s skin after the curse broke, to the things that had started bowing before they tried to kill her" |
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| 37.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.623 | | wordCount | 2464 | | matches | | 0 | "not her true one, thank God, but enough, to get information on Evan’s whereabouts" | | 1 | "not Aurora, not Rory, not Laila, but the shape beneath all of them" | | 2 | "not Rory, not Laila, but the shape beneath all of them" | | 3 | "not Laila, but the shape beneath all of them" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 332 | | matches | | 0 | "seen that ring" | | 1 | "known that name" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 226 | | mean | 10.9 | | std | 12.78 | | cv | 1.172 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 58 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 231 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 302 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 332 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "He had opened his own cuff; the cut beneath ran across the heel of his hand, shallow but ugly." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1269 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02127659574468085 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002364066193853428 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 332 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 332 | | mean | 7.42 | | std | 5.98 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 45.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.2740963855421687 | | totalSentences | 332 | | uniqueOpeners | 91 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "Too elegant for a weapon" | | 1 | "Then the second." | | 2 | "Afterwards he had kissed her" | | 3 | "Then he had vanished for" | | 4 | "Then she had found out" | | 5 | "Then secrets had come with" | | 6 | "Just two plain words left" | | 7 | "Then it used Brendan Carter’s" | | 8 | "Then a hand dropped from" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand stayed on the" | | 1 | "His mouth tilted." | | 2 | "Her body moved before her" | | 3 | "She grabbed Lucien by the" | | 4 | "She threw the first bolt." | | 5 | "He smelled of smoke, cold" | | 6 | "His gloved fingers at the" | | 7 | "His voice in French against" | | 8 | "She shoved her elbow back." | | 9 | "He caught it." | | 10 | "Her shoulder brushed his waistcoat." | | 11 | "His hand still circled her" | | 12 | "Her heart behaved like a" | | 13 | "It slid through the wood" | | 14 | "It possessed opinions." | | 15 | "He had opened his own" | | 16 | "His blood looked red where" | | 17 | "She threw a line across" | | 18 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 19 | "She watched his cut bleed" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 37.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 170 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back," | | 1 | "Aurora did not move." | | 2 | "Her hand stayed on the" | | 3 | "His mouth tilted." | | 4 | "The old, lethal charm flickered" | | 5 | "The amber one gleamed too" | | 6 | "The black one looked bottomless." | | 7 | "A shadow shifted behind him" | | 8 | "Aurora saw it in the" | | 9 | "Her body moved before her" | | 10 | "She grabbed Lucien by the" | | 11 | "The thing hit the door" | | 12 | "Wood bucked under her palm." | | 13 | "The chain snapped taut." | | 14 | "Ptolemy launched off the sofa" | | 15 | "Lucien’s cane struck the floor" | | 16 | "Another blow rattled the door." | | 17 | "A strip of paint flaked" | | 18 | "She threw the first bolt." | | 19 | "The third stuck, as it" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The curry house below perfumed the floorboards with cumin, fried onion, and cardamom, a warm human smell that fought the cold seeping through the front door." | | 1 | "The blue tin sat behind three bottles of holy water, one packet of chocolate digestives, and a cracked mug that read SOLICITORS DO IT WITH PRECEDENT." | | 2 | "Yet here he stood in Eva’s cluttered front room, blood on his hand, asking as if the answer might cut deeper than the thing outside." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |