Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0NZ6Q1P0M2ZW6257S06Y5Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.126035
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn reached the cordon at 04:17, with rain still ticking from the brim of her black coat and Camden High Street glowing behind her in strips of kebab-shop neon. The uniform at the alley mouth lifted the tape. “Morning, ma’am. Watch your footing. Stairs are rotten.” Quinn gave him one look. He straightened. “Mind your hands. If you touched the rail, put it in your pocket and tell SOCO.” His face lost colour. “I—yes, ma’am.” A service door squatted between a shuttered tattoo parlour and a vape shop, half-hidden behind bins fat with split rubbish bags. Someone had painted over the door three times. Someone else had scraped a symbol through the layers: a circle broken by three vertical cuts. Fresh scratch marks showed pale metal beneath. Quinn paused before the threshold. Her brown eyes moved over the doorframe, the rusted hinges, the wet concrete, the single cigarette butt floating in a puddle. She lifted her left wrist, checked the worn leather watch, then stepped down into the old station. The stairwell smelled of damp brick, old electricity and penny-copper blood. Below, flood lamps turned the abandoned Tube passage into a morgue-white tunnel. Tiles buckled from the walls in scales. Black mould clouded the ceiling. A line of constables stood near a row of dead ticket barriers, their paper suits too clean for the place. Forensics had laid stepping plates across the grime, but boot marks had already muddied the dust. Quinn’s jaw tightened. DS Martin Bell waited at the foot of the stairs with a clipboard tucked under one arm and a takeaway coffee in the other. He had the pink, scrubbed look of a man who had been awake too long and still trusted caffeine as a system of government. “You found a body in a Tube station that doesn’t exist.” Bell glanced at the tiled wall behind him. CAMDEN NORTH, the old lettering read, with half the letters cracked through. “Disused, not non-existent. Closed in the seventies. Local kids used to break in. Urbex lot, dealer meets, rough sleepers. You know the menu.” “Who found him?” “Transport maintenance crew. They came for a leak inspection. Door upstairs was open. One of them saw blood on the steps and did the rare sensible thing.” “Name.” “Victim? No wallet. Prints pending. Male, late thirties. Knife wounds. Ritual-ish dressing around him, though I think that’s smoke.” Quinn looked past him. “Show me.” Bell lifted a hand towards the ticket hall. “Brace yourself. It’s a circus.” They moved through the barriers. Old posters clung to the walls, their colours leached to bruises. A smiling woman from some forgotten soap advert had no eyes; moisture had eaten them out. On the floor, among flakes of ceiling plaster and rat droppings, lay objects that did not belong in a closed station: a torn strip of black velvet, three brass coins with holes through the middle, a glass vial crusted white at the lip, and a fish head wrapped in brown paper. Quinn stopped. Bell took two more steps before he noticed. “What?” She crouched without touching anything. “These weren’t dropped by kids.” “You’d be surprised what kids drop.” “Brass doesn’t green like that in a night.” “It’s an old station.” “The dust isn’t.” Bell looked down at the coins. “You want me to put ‘mystery coins’ in the report?” “I want you to stop naming things before they answer.” He opened his mouth, shut it, and drank coffee instead. The body lay beyond the ticket barriers, beneath a dead departure board. The man had been placed on his back inside a ring of grey powder. His coat had been cut open. Shirt soaked dark. Four wounds in the chest, two shallow slashes across the palms. His face had been turned towards the stairs, mouth open, teeth stained with blood. Someone had placed a bone disc on his tongue. A camera flash cracked against the tiles. Quinn stood still and let the scene arrange itself. The powder circle had gaps. Not smeared gaps. Plucked gaps, as if something had lifted small pinches at equal points around the body. The man’s right shoe had no lace. His left cuff was buttoned with green thread, different from the other buttons. Blood had pooled under his back but had not spread into the dust the way it should have. The floor slanted towards the barriers. The pool should have crawled. It had not. Bell stepped beside her. “Stabbing, then staged. Killer wanted it to look occult. Internet rubbish. Candles, powder, bone token. We’ve seen versions of it.” “No candles.” “Fine. Low-budget occult.” “No wax. No scorch marks. No footprints inside the ring except his own heel marks.” “The killer stepped over.” Quinn angled her head. “With blood on his shoes?” Bell frowned at the circle. “Could’ve worn covers.” “And removed powder from six points in the circle with tweezers on his way out?” One of the forensic techs, a young woman with her hood unzipped, looked up from her evidence markers. “We haven’t logged that yet.” Quinn’s eyes stayed on the gaps. “Log them.” Bell shifted his weight. “Look, Harlow, I know you’ve had a bee in your bonnet about that Camden crowd since the Hampstead warehouse job, but this isn’t them. It’s theatrical. Some nutter brought a prop kit.” At the edge of the light, a woman hugged a worn leather satchel to her chest. Curly red hair had escaped her hood in damp coils. Round glasses reflected the flood lamps. Freckles stood out against skin gone pale from cold or fright. A uniform kept one arm out in front of her like she might bolt through the scene and start licking evidence. Quinn noticed her left hand. The woman tucked hair behind her left ear. Once. Twice. “Who’s that?” Bell followed her gaze. “Eva Kowalski. Found near the entrance when first response arrived. Says she’s from the British Museum. Restricted archives, if you please. Claimed she had academic knowledge relevant to the site.” “She was inside the cordon?” “On the stairs. No blood on her. Bag full of books and old paper. She’s been chatty about folklore and secret markets. I was going to send her home once we got a statement.” Quinn watched Eva stare at the bone disc on the victim’s tongue. Not at the wounds. Not at the blood. “What did she call the disc?” Bell checked his notes. “A token. Bone token.” The station seemed to draw a breath through the tunnels. Quinn walked to Eva. The uniform stepped back at once. “Eva Kowalski.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the satchel strap. “I already told your sergeant what I knew.” “You told him a story.” “I told him a warning.” Bell coughed behind Quinn. “Here we go.” Quinn did not look away from Eva. “What was this place?” Eva’s eyes flicked to the tiled sign, then to the gaps in the powder circle. “Not Camden North. Not tonight.” “You stepped past the upstairs door?” “I followed the sound.” “What sound?” “Coins. Metal on stone. Like someone dropped a purse.” Bell rubbed his brow. “You told my officer you heard a scream.” “I heard that after.” Quinn took one step closer. Eva smelled of rain, paper and old leather. “Start with the coins.” Eva swallowed. “The Veil Market used this station. It moved here under the full moon. People who knew the way paid in bone to pass.” A constable snorted. Quinn turned her head. The snort died. Bell spread both hands. “You see? This is what I meant. She’s read one too many grimoires in a basement.” Eva’s chin lifted. “The body wasn’t staged. It was locked out.” Quinn’s gaze cut to her. “Explain that.” “The circle was a boundary. Not for theatre. Those missing points—someone took the pins. Anchors, probably. If you break a boundary in six balanced places, whatever sat on the other side folds back.” Bell looked at Quinn. “Are we entertaining this?” Quinn moved back towards the body. “We’re listening. Those are different things.” Eva stayed behind the tape. Her voice thinned but carried. “The Market doesn’t leave stalls behind. It cleans itself when it moves. If something died in its threshold, the threshold would shed the parts it didn’t own.” Bell lifted his coffee. “Brilliant. The market ate the furniture.” Quinn crouched near the victim’s shoes. “Stop performing, Martin.” The right shoe had scraped powder at the heel. The sole held grit, soot, and a single blue thread caught in the tread. No mud. No brick dust from the stairwell. No rust from the service door. The man had not entered through the way Quinn had. She leaned closer to the palms. Two slashes across each, clean, deliberate. Defensive wounds looked messy; fingers cut deep, skin torn where a blade dragged under panic. These cuts sat neat and parallel, from the base of the thumb towards the wrist. “He paid.” Bell crouched on the other side. “Paid?” “With blood.” Eva’s breath hitched behind them. Quinn pointed without touching. “Palms cut before death. No bruising on knuckles. He didn’t fight here. Chest wounds came after blood loss began. Look at the shirt.” Bell peered. “Looks soaked.” “The soak runs upward.” He stared. Quinn traced the line in the air. “He was lying at a different angle when the blood left him. Or he bled somewhere gravity disagreed with this floor.” Bell’s mouth twisted. “That’s a sentence I won’t enjoy repeating.” “Then repeat the useful bit. He wasn’t killed in this position.” The forensic tech shifted closer. “Detective, there’s also this.” She held up an evidence bag. Inside sat a small brass compass with a greenish patina crusting the casing. Its face bore tiny etched sigils instead of letters. The needle trembled, then snapped towards the closed tunnel beyond the platform entrance. “We found it under his left shoulder. Thought it was an antique.” Quinn took the bag by the corner. The needle quivered again. Not north. The tunnel. Eva pressed a hand to her mouth. Bell saw that. “You recognise it?” Eva did not answer fast enough. Quinn’s eyes lifted. “Name it.” “A Veil Compass.” Bell made a sound like a laugh cut in half. “Of course it is.” Eva’s hand dropped. “It points towards rifts. Openings. Places where the skin between here and elsewhere thins.” Quinn turned the bag. The needle held its direction with stubborn force. “Nearest opening is down the line.” “The line’s bricked up,” Bell cut in. “We checked the old plans.” “Plans don’t bleed.” Bell glanced at the body, irritated despite himself. Quinn rose. Her coat brushed the air. Her bearing filled the ticket hall without volume. “Where were the maintenance crew when they found him?” “Top of the stairs.” “They saw blood on the steps?” “Yes.” “Show me.” Bell blinked. “We’re standing at the body.” “And I asked for the blood on the steps.” He led her back through the barriers. Eva remained behind the tape, clutching her satchel, eyes fixed on the compass bag in Quinn’s hand. On the stairwell, red drops marked the centre of three steps. Uniforms had placed cones beside them. Quinn crouched on the second step and studied the stain. Bell leaned on the rail. “Trail from the victim. Killer dragged him down or up, changed their mind, dumped him there.” Quinn pointed at the edge of the droplet. “Round.” “Blood drops do tend to—” “No tail. No cast-off. No smear. It fell straight down.” She moved to the next step. “Same here. Centre of the tread. Someone stood still and bled.” “Victim paused.” “With chest wounds? Then walked down, lay inside a circle, put a bone token in his mouth and stabbed himself twice more?” Bell pinched the bridge of his nose. “I’m giving you the mundane version because CPS prefers it.” “CPS can have a version when we have one.” Quinn looked up the stairwell. The service door at street level glimmered in a strip of sodium light. Then she looked down, towards the ticket hall. The droplets formed no path. Three drops. No more. Not a trail. A marker. She stood and turned to the wall beside the stairs. Damp had blistered the paint. Graffiti layered over graffiti: tags, phone numbers, a crude crown, an eye in black marker. Beneath the eye, fresh scratches cut through grime at shoulder height. She stepped closer. Three vertical cuts inside a broken circle. The same mark as the door. “Martin.” Bell came down one step. “What?” “Light.” He handed her his torch. She angled the beam across the wall. The scratches caught silver. Not paint. Metal dust. Quinn pulled a penlight from her pocket, switched it on, and lowered the beam to the floor below the scratched mark. Fine brass filings glittered in the crack between wall and stair. Bell crouched, coffee forgotten. “Someone scraped something here.” “No.” Quinn tapped the torch beam to the scratches, then to the blood drops. “Someone opened something here.” The stairwell fell quiet around them. Even the constables in the ticket hall seemed to lower their voices. Bell stared at the wall. “A door?” “An entrance.” “You’re adopting the market story now?” “I’m adopting the evidence.” He looked towards Eva, then back to the scratches. “So our victim came through a secret door in a closed Tube station, bled on the steps, ended up dead in a powder circle, and a magic compass points down the track.” Quinn handed the torch back. “Remove the adjectives and you’ve improved.” A shout rose from the ticket hall. “Detective Quinn?” The forensic tech stood near the body, one gloved hand raised. Quinn and Bell descended. Eva pressed close to the tape again, though the uniform blocked her with his elbow. The tech pointed at the victim’s open coat. “When you asked about the shirt, I checked beneath the collar. There’s a stitch line. Something was sewn into the lining and removed.” Quinn crouched beside the body again. She lifted the coat edge with tweezers. The lining gaped along a neat slit under the left lapel. Threads hung clean and pale. “Cut after death?” “Looks like. No blood soak in the slit.” Bell rocked back on his heels. “So the killer staged the scene to steal whatever was in the coat.” Quinn examined the slit, the palm cuts, the token, the coin gaps in the powder circle. The brass compass needle trembled in its bag against her hand, still dragging towards the platform tunnel. “No. The killer needed him to bring it through.” Bell’s brows pulled together. “What?” She looked at the dead man’s mouth. “Token on the tongue. Blood in the palms. Compass hidden in the coat, not taken. Whatever was sewn there mattered more than the compass. He carried it past the entrance. Someone met him at the boundary, took the anchors from the circle, took the sewn object, then left him where ordinary police would call it nonsense.” Eva’s voice came from behind the tape, low and raw. “They didn’t leave through the stairs.” Quinn looked over. Eva’s green eyes had fixed on the departure board above the body. Most of the letters hung dead, but one flap had fallen out of alignment. Not a station name. Not a time. A narrow black rectangle behind the board showed fresh gouges along its frame. Quinn rose and walked beneath it. The old departure board sat too high for casual hands. Dust coated its lower edge, except for four clean crescent marks where fingers had gripped. Below it, the wall tiles bore a faint scuff, knee height, as if someone had climbed and pushed through. Bell followed her gaze. “That board’s been there fifty years.” Quinn reached up with her gloved fingers and pressed the lower corner. The board shifted inward a fraction. From the gap came cold air, carrying the smell of wet stone, burnt sugar and something sharp beneath it, like struck matches. No one spoke. Quinn stepped back and looked once more at the circle around the dead man. Six missing points. A hidden passage above the tiles. Blood that fell without a trail. A compass that refused north. Her thumb brushed the cracked leather of her watch strap. “Get that board photographed before anyone opens it. Full frame. Then the hinges, the dust, the grip marks. I want the stair scratches cast, the brass filings bagged, and every officer who used that rail written down.” Bell’s voice lost its bite. “And Kowalski?” Quinn turned towards Eva. Eva had tucked her curls behind her ear again, but her eyes had not left the dead man. Quinn held up the evidence bag with the compass inside. “She stays.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2779
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2779
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count2
6
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"traced"
4"etched"
5"trembled"
6"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences214
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences334
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2778
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions102
wordCount1743
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn43
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
Martin1
Bell33
Eva20
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Martin"
3"Bell"
4"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.266
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2778
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences334
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs241
mean11.53
std13.79
cv1.196
sampleLengths
031
19
28
37
416
54
62
752
843
911
1060
113
1248
1311
1420
1523
163
1727
181
1919
204
212
228
235
2483
252
268
271
285
295
306
318
324
333
346
3510
3610
3710
3869
397
409
4172
423
434
4420
452
463
4715
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences214
matches
0"been placed"
1"been turned"
2"was buttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs271
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences334
ratio0.006
matches
0"A smiling woman from some forgotten soap advert had no eyes; moisture had eaten them out."
1"Defensive wounds looked messy; fingers cut deep, skin torn where a blade dragged under panic."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.018889524899828276
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0005724098454493417
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences334
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences334
mean8.32
std7.38
cv0.887
sampleLengths
031
19
28
35
42
516
64
72
821
98
1016
117
125
1321
1417
1511
1612
177
185
1920
2016
213
2224
2324
2411
258
2612
2723
283
2927
301
3119
324
332
348
355
365
3711
3816
3951
402
418
421
435
445
456
468
474
483
496
48.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3083832335329341
totalSentences334
uniqueOpeners103
33.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences197
matches
0"Then she looked down, towards"
1"Even the constables in the"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences197
matches
0"His face lost colour."
1"Her brown eyes moved over"
2"She lifted her left wrist,"
3"He had the pink, scrubbed"
4"They moved through the barriers."
5"She crouched without touching anything."
6"He opened his mouth, shut"
7"His coat had been cut"
8"His face had been turned"
9"His left cuff was buttoned"
10"It had not."
11"Her voice thinned but carried."
12"She leaned closer to the"
13"She held up an evidence"
14"Its face bore tiny etched"
15"Her coat brushed the air."
16"Her bearing filled the ticket"
17"He led her back through"
18"She moved to the next"
19"She stood and turned to"
ratio0.137
46.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount163
totalSentences197
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn reached the"
1"The uniform at the alley"
2"Quinn gave him one look."
3"His face lost colour."
4"A service door squatted between"
5"Someone had painted over the"
6"Someone else had scraped a"
7"Quinn paused before the threshold."
8"Her brown eyes moved over"
9"She lifted her left wrist,"
10"The stairwell smelled of damp"
11"Tiles buckled from the walls"
12"A line of constables stood"
13"Forensics had laid stepping plates"
14"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
15"DS Martin Bell waited at"
16"He had the pink, scrubbed"
17"Bell glanced at the tiled"
18"CAMDEN NORTH, the old lettering"
19"Quinn looked past him."
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He had the pink, scrubbed look of a man who had been awake too long and still trusted caffeine as a system of government."
1"On the floor, among flakes of ceiling plaster and rat droppings, lay objects that did not belong in a closed station: a torn strip of black velvet, three brass …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.1382%