Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0P2NPS5TJH6N4AAKKSTAB1

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Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.135160
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The portal opened in the hollow of an old oak that had no business standing upright. Its trunk bent in three places, blackened by age and weather, yet white blossoms covered every crooked branch. The flowers turned their faces away from the London dawn and toward the split in the bark, where amber light leaked through in slow, sticky threads. Aurora Carter stood at the edge of the Fae Grove with her fingers wrapped around the Heartstone Pendant. The crimson gem warmed her palm through her glove. Not hot. Not burning. Alive. Behind her, Isolde Varga moved between the wildflowers without bending a stem. Her silver hair drifted around her waist though no wind touched the clearing. The standing stones — ancient oak pillars that had petrified into shapes like hunched watchers — held the boundary in a rough circle, their carved knots glowing faint green. Nyx lingered beneath the oldest yew, their body a tall spill of shadow against the grey morning. Violet eyes hovered where a face should have been. “Does every doorway to Hel look like a diseased tree?” Rory asked. The bark groaned. A slit widened in the trunk. Beyond it, no hollow waited. No roots. No damp earth. Only a vast amber sky and the edge of a stone path tiled in colours Rory had never seen on Earth. Isolde lifted one pale hand. “The hungry door wears the face that tempts the key.” Rory glanced down at the pendant. “Right. That cleared it up.” Nyx’s voice drifted past her ear, thin as breath across glass. “It recognises Dymasian craft. The Heartstone called, and something answered.” “Something?” The shadow at Nyx’s shoulders rippled. “Doors seldom open from one side.” That landed in Rory’s ribs and stayed there. She adjusted the strap of her delivery satchel. The Fae-Forged Blade sat hidden inside, wrapped in a strip of cloth from one of Silas’s old bar towels. Moonsilver against stained cotton. Ridiculous, and somehow the most practical thing she had done all week. Isolde stepped toward the opening. “Cross with purpose. Linger between, and the between lingers in you.” “Lovely. So no dawdling in the nightmare tree.” Rory sucked in a breath that smelled of wet leaves, fox musk, and winter mud. Then she stepped through. The world turned soft. For a blink, her boot touched nothing. The air wrapped around her body like warm honey. Sound stretched until the scrape of her jacket became a long metallic cry. Her scarred left wrist prickled, the old crescent mark tightening as if invisible thread had looped beneath her skin. Then stone struck under her soles. She stumbled forward onto a bridge. Not a bridge in any London sense. No iron railings, no graffiti, no traffic rumbling underneath. This one arched over a chasm filled with mist the colour of apricot flesh. The path beneath her feet had been laid from translucent tiles, each one holding a trapped image: grapes swollen with purple light, fish with golden bones, pomegranates split open to reveal seeds like tiny red eyes, hands kneading dough, mouths open in laughter or hunger. The amber sky pressed low overhead. No sun burned in it. Light seemed to come from everything at once — the air, the stone, the distant orchards climbing impossible terraces, the rivers that moved in slow loops through fields below. Far away, towers rose like stacked wedding cakes, tier upon tier of white marble, copper domes, and hanging gardens. Vines crawled over them in thick emerald ropes. Fruit larger than carriages dangled from branches that grew out of balconies. Rory forgot to move. A scent hit her next. Roasted figs. Charred meat. Sugar crust melting under flame. Yeast and wine and cinnamon and saltwater and something mineral, like lightning had struck a butcher’s block. It flooded her mouth. Her stomach clenched hard enough to make her bend a little. “Nope.” She pressed her fist to her abdomen. “That’s rude.” Nyx slid out of the air behind her, their shape tearing free from the seam between realms. They stood taller here. More solid. Shadows clung to them in layered folds, but Dymas gave their edges a strange gloss, as though oil floated over black water. Isolde emerged last. The portal closed behind her with the soft pop of a cork leaving a bottle. She did not look around in wonder. She looked at the ground. “Do not eat what offers itself first.” Rory lifted her head. Across the bridge, a silver platter rested on a pedestal that had not been there a moment before. On it sat three small pastries glazed with honey. Steam curled from them in delicate ribbons. Each had been shaped like a rosebud, petals crisp and golden, and the smell — butter, apple, clove — struck Rory straight in the childhood: her mother’s kitchen after rain, Brendan Carter reading case files at the table, Radio Cymru murmuring beneath the hiss of the kettle. Her fingers moved before she told them to stop. Nyx’s hand formed around her wrist. Cold shadow pressed against her glove. “Carter.” Rory stared at the pastry. Her throat worked. “I know.” The nearest rosebud pastry opened. Not unfolded. Opened. Its crisp petals split around a wet, pink centre. A tongue slid out, thin and glistening, and tasted the air. Rory stepped back. “Absolutely not.” The platter trembled. The other pastries cracked open, each one revealing tiny teeth set in honeyed flesh. Isolde passed them without a glance. “The realm greets strangers according to appetite.” “My appetite doesn’t have teeth.” “Yet.” Rory looked at Nyx. “Was that a joke?” Nyx’s violet eyes narrowed. “I hoped not.” They crossed the bridge single file. Mist breathed up from the chasm, warm and damp, carrying whispers that almost became words. Rory kept one hand on the satchel and the other around the pendant. The Heartstone pulsed in a steady rhythm, tugging toward the city of towers. As they walked, the bridge changed underfoot. The images inside the tiles stirred. A painted vineyard became a living one, tiny figures moving between rows, cutting bunches from vines that bled dark wine. Another tile showed a banquet hall with a table so long its end vanished into shadow. Guests sat shoulder to shoulder, but their plates were empty. Each guest lifted a fork and knife and carved into the empty porcelain, again and again, scraping, scraping, scraping. Rory stopped on that tile. A woman inside the glass looked up. Her face pressed against the underside of Rory’s boot. Rory jumped away, pulse kicking in her neck. The woman’s mouth moved. No sound reached through the stone. She wore a chef’s jacket, stained red from collar to cuff, and her hair had been twisted into a bun with two silver skewers. Her eyes tracked Rory with blistered desperation. Nyx crouched beside the tile. “Contracted soul.” Rory swallowed. “She’s alive?” “Alive enough for the bargain to hold.” The tiny woman struck the glass with both fists. Her mouth formed a word. Help. Rory’s fingers tightened around the satchel strap until leather creaked. Isolde’s voice came from ahead. “A blade cuts wards, not bargains.” Rory looked up sharply. The seer stood halfway across the bridge, silver hair glowing in the amber air. Her pale lavender eyes rested on Rory, soft and merciless. “You saw me reach for it?” “I saw you bleed where no wound had opened.” Rory forced her hand away from the satchel. “Does everyone here speak in riddles, or is that your private brand of irritating?” The corner of Isolde’s mouth curved. “In Dymas, plain speech gets eaten first.” The bridge ended at a gate made of intertwined grapevines as thick as ship ropes. Leaves the size of dinner plates fanned out above them, casting green shadows over the road. Clusters of grapes hung low, each fruit glossy and black, each one with a pale pupil floating inside its skin. The grapes turned to watch them. Rory stopped beneath the arch. “No touching. Got it.” One grape detached from its stem. It fell without sound, landed near her boot, and split. Inside lay a pearl. Then the pearl blinked. Rory stepped over it. Past the gate, Dymas opened. They entered an orchard that stretched beyond sight. Trees grew in spirals, their trunks twisting upward like braided bread. Some bore fruit she recognised — pears, oranges, plums — though none behaved properly. Pears hummed in chords when the wind moved through them. Oranges pulsed with inner fire, skins glowing and dimming like banked coals. Plums hung heavy and translucent, each one containing a sleeping face curled within the flesh. Other trees carried things no orchard should have carried. Crystal bottles. Silver fishbowls. Loaves shaped like sleeping infants. Masks made of sugar. A ladder of ribs. A cluster of tiny bells that rang whenever Rory breathed near them. The road itself had been paved in crushed shells and pink salt. It crunched beneath her boots, releasing sharp bursts of brine. Somewhere ahead, music played. Not one tune. Dozens. A harp picked out a delicate line, then brass horns shoved through it, drums thumped like fists against a door, flutes trilled above the lot, and underneath ran a low chant in a language Rory felt in her teeth. She rubbed her jaw. “This place was designed by someone who never heard the phrase ‘too much’.” Nyx walked beside her, their feet leaving no mark in the salt. “Gluttony does not mean hunger. Hunger has an end.” Rory watched a low branch bend toward Isolde. A ripe fig split apart near the seer’s shoulder, offering red seeds and thick nectar. Isolde breathed on it. The fig shrivelled to ash. Rory lifted a brow. “Handy.” “Costly.” “What did it cost?” Isolde brushed ash from her sleeve. “The fig remembered it had once been a flower.” “That isn’t an answer.” “It fed you enough to keep walking.” Rory opened her mouth, then closed it. The smell of the ash had cut through the feast-scents, dry and bitter, and her stomach no longer clawed at her ribs. They moved deeper. The orchard sloped downward into terraced vineyards. Vines crawled over marble frames, looped through golden trellises, and dipped into irrigation channels filled not with water but with dark red wine. Barefoot workers moved among them. Some had horns curling behind their ears. Some had skin the colour of polished chestnuts, emeralds, blue porcelain. Some looked human. Too human. A man in an apron trimmed a vine with shears shaped like bird beaks. As the group passed, he glanced up. His gaze snagged on Rory’s face, then dropped to the pendant at her throat. His expression changed. Fear flashed first. Then hunger. Then calculation. He cut his thumb on the shears. The vine whipped round his wrist and sucked the blood away. “Keep walking,” Nyx murmured. Rory did. The path narrowed between two vineyard walls. Leaves brushed her sleeves, damp as tongues. Grapes clustered close enough to graze her cheek, their skins swollen tight. Whispering rose from them. Rory Carter. She stopped dead. Nyx turned. “What did you hear?” Rory stared at the nearest cluster. Each grape reflected her face, but the reflections wore different expressions: one laughed, one wept, one screamed, one stared with Evan’s bruising grip around its throat. Her breath went thin. “Nothing useful.” A grape split with a wet click. Evan’s voice spilled out, small and sour. “Rory, don’t be dramatic. Come back and talk like an adult.” Her hand went cold. Another grape opened. Her father’s voice followed, firmer, disappointed. “A Carter does not run when the facts become inconvenient.” Another. Eva laughing, but wrong, stretched and sweetened until it turned cruel. “London didn’t save you, babe. It just changed the scenery.” Rory grabbed the vine. The whispers swelled, dozens of stolen voices pressing against her skull. Nyx seized the vine above her hand. Their shadow fingers sank into the leaves. Frost spread black across the green. The grapes burst one after another, spattering the salt path with sour juice and threads of pale pulp. Rory yanked her hand back. A thin cut crossed her palm where a tendril had bitten through the glove. Blood welled. The vineyard stilled. Every leaf turned toward her. Isolde’s pale eyes sharpened. “Cover it.” Rory clamped her fist shut. From somewhere below the terrace, a bell rang once. Then again. The workers in the vineyard stopped cutting. Nyx flowed closer, body widening, their shadow stretching across the path until the salt beneath them dulled. Rory’s heartbeat hammered against the pendant. The Heartstone answered, pulsing faster, warm enough now to sting. “I’m guessing blood on the floor counts as ringing the dinner gong.” Isolde raised her hand. Her fingers traced a symbol in the air, and for a moment Rory saw the Veil — a faint shimmering distortion draped over the path, thin as soap film, trembling beneath the weight of Dymas. “Not the floor. The realm.” A low growl rolled through the vines. Not animal. Not demon in any shape Rory knew how to imagine. It sounded like a stomach large enough to swallow streets. The path ahead forked. To the left, the terraces climbed toward a pavilion of green glass, where figures in white masks stirred copper pots over blue flames. To the right, the road descended into a market lit by lanterns shaped like peaches, each lantern containing a fluttering wing. Straight ahead, a staircase cut into the vineyard and plunged into a tunnel framed by carved mouths. Rory flexed her bleeding hand inside the glove. Pain steadied her. It belonged to her. Dymas could dress hunger in silk and pastry and mother’s kitchen warmth, but pain came blunt and honest. “Which way to the portal source?” The Heartstone tugged hard toward the tunnel. Of course it did. Nyx stared at the carved mouths. Their violet eyes dimmed. “Those teeth were human once.” Rory examined the archway. The mouths had been carved into dark stone, lips peeled back, tongues forming the steps. Some smiled. Some grimaced. One mouthed silent prayers as amber moss grew between its teeth. Isolde walked to the first step. “The swallowed road leads to what fed the stone.” Rory joined her and looked down. Warm air breathed from below, thick with wine, smoke, and roasting marrow. Beneath those smells lay something metallic. Old coins. Old blood. Old locks. The growl behind them rose again. Leaves shivered. Grapes swelled. The vineyard workers began to move, not toward the vines now, but toward the path. The man with the shears watched Rory’s closed fist. His tongue slid across his lower lip. Rory pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her satchel. The cloth fell away. Moonsilver caught the amber light and rejected it, shining with a cold glow of its own. The air around the dagger tightened. The nearest vines recoiled, leaves curling black at the edges. Several workers stepped back. Nyx’s shadow lifted like a cloak in a storm that had not arrived. Isolde looked at the blade, then at Rory’s face. “A gift unsheathed becomes a question.” Rory set one boot on the first tongue-shaped step. “Good. I’ve got loads.” She descended. The stairway swallowed the orchard sound one mouthful at a time. Music thinned behind them. The bell faded. The wet rustle of vines gave way to a slow drip from unseen stone. The walls of the tunnel gleamed with mineral veins the colour of honey and bruises. Embedded in them were dining implements from different ages: bone spoons, bronze knives, porcelain chopsticks, steel forks, ladles big enough to scoop a person from the waist. Some trembled as Rory passed. Some twisted to follow the Heartstone. Nyx moved ahead of her now, one hand against the wall without touching it. “Old working. Older than Belphegor’s current kitchens.” Rory kept the blade low. “Dymas existed before its prince?” “Realms grow rulers the way wounds grow scabs.” “Graphic. Helpful, but graphic.” The tunnel opened into a cavern. Rory stopped at the threshold. For the first time since crossing, no joke came. The cavern held a lake of gold. Not molten metal. Not water reflecting amber light. A vast, still surface stretched beneath a ceiling of hanging roots and crystal stalactites, its liquid skin thick and luminous, moving only where bubbles rose and burst with soft sighs. Islands floated upon it — round tables carved from black stone, each set for a feast. Empty chairs surrounded them. Thousands of chairs. High-backed, low stools, benches, thrones, child-sized seats, all facing inward toward plates piled with food that never cooled. Above the lake drifted chandeliers made from antlers and rib bones, each tipped with a small flame that burned green. Between them, translucent shapes moved like jellyfish. Rory squinted and saw they were tablecloths, gliding through the air, their embroidered edges trailing like fins. At the far side of the cavern stood a doorway made of red marble. The Heartstone blazed in her grip. A low hum rose from the lake. It vibrated through her boots, into her bones, up behind her eyes. The plates on the floating tables rattled. Goblets chimed. Knives turned their points toward the shore. Isolde came to Rory’s side, her face lit gold from below. “Here the feast remembered its first guest.” Rory’s mouth had gone dry despite the wet heat. “Was the first guest invited?” Isolde watched a bubble swell beneath the lake’s surface until a face pressed against it from below — cheeks stretched, mouth open, eyes shut in bliss or agony. The bubble popped. The face vanished. “No feast begins with permission.” Nyx pointed across the lake. “There. The marble door. The Heartstone pulls toward it.” Rory looked for a bridge. There wasn’t one. Only a line of floating tables, each a few feet from the next, forming a broken path across the golden lake. Plates overflowed with impossible dishes: cakes lacquered in mirror glaze, roasted birds with jeweled eyes, bowls of noodles that moved like living hair, towers of fruit carved into cities, soups with stars turning in their depths. The first table bumped against the shore. A chair scraped back by itself. Waiting. Rory glanced at her cut palm, then at the blade. “No eating. No sitting. No bleeding on the furniture. Anything else?” The chair scraped back farther. Nyx leaned toward the lake, their form flickering as the green flames caught them. “The tables are listening.” Rory stepped onto the first floating island. The table dipped under her weight, then steadied. Plates shivered. A silver cloche lifted by itself, releasing steam that shaped into a woman’s hand and reached for her mouth. Rory raised the Fae blade. The steam recoiled. Behind her, Isolde placed one bare foot on the table. No ripple touched the golden lake. Nyx followed, shadow spreading over porcelain, and every fork on the table bent away from them. Ahead, the second table drifted closer with a soft knock. From the depths beneath the gold, something enormous shifted. The lake bulged. Rory stared down as a dark shape passed under the surface, too wide to see all at once. Teeth scraped the underside of the table with a long, delicate sound. Her grip tightened around the moonsilver hilt. “Move.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3193
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3193
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"marble"
count4
1
word"stomach"
count3
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"porcelain"
count4
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"depths"
count2
highlights
0"marble"
1"stomach"
2"glistening"
3"absolutely"
4"trembled"
5"pulsed"
6"porcelain"
7"pulse"
8"crystal"
9"traced"
10"weight"
11"silk"
12"warmth"
13"vibrated"
14"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences320
matches
0"d in wonder"
1"t in bliss"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences320
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences378
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions132
wordCount2848
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
Carter3
Fae4
Grove1
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Isolde17
Varga1
Rory56
Earth1
Nyx19
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Silas1
Dymas4
Brendan1
Radio1
Cymru1
Evan2
Veil1
Leaves3
Old3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Varga"
4"Rory"
5"Nyx"
6"Silas"
7"Dymas"
8"Brendan"
9"Cymru"
10"Evan"
11"Leaves"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Pendant"
4"Blade"
globalScore0.517
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences196
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a stomach large enough to swa"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.624
wordCount3203
matches
0"not with water but with dark red wine"
1"not toward the vines now, but toward the path"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences378
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs237
mean13.51
std15.87
cv1.174
sampleLengths
016
144
218
314
454
526
612
73
837
95
1010
116
125
1311
1410
151
166
176
188
1943
205
2111
228
2319
244
2548
266
276
2875
2979
304
315
3241
3310
3445
3518
3612
377
384
3918
4063
419
4212
431
448
452
465
473
4820
493
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences320
matches
0"been laid"
1"been shaped"
2"been twisted"
3"been paved"
4"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs479
matches
0"were dining"
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences378
ratio0.019
matches
0"The standing stones — ancient oak pillars that had petrified into shapes like hunched watchers — held the boundary in a rough circle, their carved knots glowing faint green."
1"Light seemed to come from everything at once — the air, the stone, the distant orchards climbing impossible terraces, the rivers that moved in slow loops through fields below."
2"Each had been shaped like a rosebud, petals crisp and golden, and the smell — butter, apple, clove — struck Rory straight in the childhood: her mother’s kitchen after rain, Brendan Carter reading case files at the table, Radio Cymru murmuring beneath the hiss of the kettle."
3"Some bore fruit she recognised — pears, oranges, plums — though none behaved properly."
4"Her fingers traced a symbol in the air, and for a moment Rory saw the Veil — a faint shimmering distortion draped over the path, thin as soap film, trembling beneath the weight of Dymas."
5"Islands floated upon it — round tables carved from black stone, each set for a feast."
6"Isolde watched a bubble swell beneath the lake’s surface until a face pressed against it from below — cheeks stretched, mouth open, eyes shut in bliss or agony."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2844
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount79
adverbRatio0.027777777777777776
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0017580872011251757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences378
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences378
mean8.47
std6.79
cv0.801
sampleLengths
016
118
226
318
49
52
62
71
812
913
1029
1117
129
1312
143
156
165
172
183
1921
205
2110
226
235
2411
2510
261
276
286
298
308
3119
324
3312
345
3511
368
3715
384
394
407
419
4213
4319
446
456
467
479
4814
4945
53.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3544973544973545
totalSentences378
uniqueOpeners134
82.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences283
matches
0"Only a vast amber sky"
1"Then she stepped through."
2"Then stone struck under her"
3"Then the pearl blinked."
4"Somewhere ahead, music played."
5"Of course it did."
6"Only a line of floating"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences283
matches
0"Its trunk bent in three"
1"Her silver hair drifted around"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"Her scarred left wrist prickled,"
4"She stumbled forward onto a"
5"It flooded her mouth."
6"Her stomach clenched hard enough"
7"She pressed her fist to"
8"They stood taller here."
9"She did not look around"
10"She looked at the ground."
11"Her fingers moved before she"
12"Her throat worked."
13"Its crisp petals split around"
14"They crossed the bridge single"
15"Her face pressed against the"
16"She wore a chef’s jacket,"
17"Her eyes tracked Rory with"
18"Her mouth formed a word."
19"Her pale lavender eyes rested"
ratio0.141
51.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount231
totalSentences283
matches
0"The portal opened in the"
1"Its trunk bent in three"
2"The flowers turned their faces"
3"Aurora Carter stood at the"
4"The crimson gem warmed her"
5"Her silver hair drifted around"
6"The standing stones — ancient"
7"Nyx lingered beneath the oldest"
8"Violet eyes hovered where a"
9"The bark groaned."
10"A slit widened in the"
11"Isolde lifted one pale hand."
12"Rory glanced down at the"
13"Nyx’s voice drifted past her"
14"The shadow at Nyx’s shoulders"
15"That landed in Rory’s ribs"
16"She adjusted the strap of"
17"The Fae-Forged Blade sat hidden"
18"Moonsilver against stained cotton."
19"Isolde stepped toward the opening."
ratio0.816
35.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences283
matches
0"To the left, the terraces"
1"To the right, the road"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences108
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones — ancient oak pillars that had petrified into shapes like hunched watchers — held the boundary in a rough circle, their carved knots glowing…"
1"Rory sucked in a breath that smelled of wet leaves, fox musk, and winter mud."
2"Her scarred left wrist prickled, the old crescent mark tightening as if invisible thread had looped beneath her skin."
3"A painted vineyard became a living one, tiny figures moving between rows, cutting bunches from vines that bled dark wine."
4"Plates overflowed with impossible dishes: cakes lacquered in mirror glaze, roasted birds with jeweled eyes, bowls of noodles that moved like living hair, towers…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.066
89.4635%