Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0PMG8MYJN3SKEYM614YE7B

Run Details

Duration:
2m 1s
Cost:
$0.153620
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had been needling Soho since six, thin and mean, turning the pavement outside The Raven’s Nest into a black ribbon stitched with taxi lights. The green neon sign above the door shivered in every puddle, RAVEN’S NEST bending and breaking beneath the shoes of office workers, theatre crowds, men with collars turned up, women ducking under newspapers, cyclists swearing at buses. Inside, the bar held its usual dusk. Not darkness, never quite darkness, but a brown-gold murk that clung to the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls. Faces from wars nobody spoke of. Streets from cities that had changed their names. A framed photograph of Prague hung near the end of the counter, its river silvered by age. Aurora Carter stood behind the bar with her sleeves rolled to her elbows, drying glasses she had not dirtied. Silas had gone down to the cellar ten minutes before and left her with the late lull, that hour between the after-work drinkers and the ones who came in looking to forget the shape of their flats. Her black hair brushed her jaw as she reached for another tumbler. The crescent scar on her left wrist flashed pale under the bar light. A man at the corner table lifted two fingers. “Another whisky?” He tapped his empty glass. “You’ve had three.” He gave her the wounded look of a spaniel denied a biscuit. “Four makes you sentimental. Five makes you sing. I’m saving the room.” The man blinked, then laughed into his scarf. “Water, then?” “Look at that. Growth.” She set a glass of water in front of him and took his whisky tumbler before he could argue himself into courage. The bell above the door gave a tired clink. Cold air shouldered in first. Then a woman. Aurora glanced up because she always did; Silas had drilled that into her without saying a word. Eyes first. Hands second. Shoes third. People told the truth badly with their mouths and better with everything else. The woman stood just inside the doorway, shaking rain from a black umbrella. She wore a camel coat belted tight, the sort of coat that belonged in front of clean townhouses and glass offices. Her hair had once been a wild red-brown cloud; now it was cut blunt at her chin and smoothed into obedience. A slim gold hoop gleamed in one ear. The other ear held three tiny studs. Her lipstick was dark enough to make her skin look pale. Aurora’s hand tightened around the cloth. The woman looked towards the bar. For a second, neither moved. Then the woman’s mouth parted. “Rory?” The name crossed the room and landed in Aurora’s chest with the sharpness of a thrown key. She set the glass down too hard. It rang against the wood. “Eva.” Eva Morgan took one step, then stopped as though the floor had changed texture. “I thought—” “Yeah.” The corner-table man looked between them, caught the weather, and lowered his gaze into his water. Eva closed her umbrella and came forward. Not rushing. Eva had once rushed everywhere, down Cardiff lanes, over school gates, into arguments, through the front doors of parties she had not been invited to. This woman measured the distance from door to bar as if someone had charged her for each step. “You work here?” Aurora put the cloth over her shoulder. “Some nights.” “Right.” “You drink?” Eva looked at the bottles behind her. Her eyes snagged on a dusty green bottle of Chartreuse, then moved away. “Gin and tonic. If you’ve got it.” “We run a bar, so there’s a chance.” A tiny smile tugged at Eva’s mouth and vanished before it became useful. Aurora took down a glass, filled it with ice, cut lime. Her fingers remembered the order even while the rest of her stood six years back, in the doorway of a Cardiff flat with a bag in her hand and Eva’s voice on the phone saying, Get out now. Don’t pack books. Don’t pack guilt. I’ll sort you a sofa. Eva watched the lime knife. “You still did that.” “What?” “Cut limes like you were dissecting evidence.” Aurora dropped the wedge into the glass. “Pre-Law left scars.” “Your mother would have loved that line.” “My mother would have corrected it.” “Jennifer Ellis Carter, terror of Year Nine English.” “She still used red pen on birthday cards.” Eva laughed, and there she was for half a breath: the girl who had drawn a moustache on the statue outside Cardiff Crown Court and blamed it on a rival school, the girl who had stolen sandwiches from staff training days because “public education owed us protein.” Aurora slid the drink across. Eva reached for it, and her hand stilled beside Aurora’s. No rings. Neat nails, colourless and short. The skin over her knuckles looked rough, bitten by cold or cleaning chemicals or nerves. “How much?” “On the house.” “Don’t.” “It’s a gin.” “It’s a habit.” Aurora pulled the card machine closer. “London prices. Brace yourself.” Eva paid without looking at the amount. The machine chirped. Aurora tore the receipt and dropped it in the little brass dish by the till. Eva touched the rim of her glass but did not lift it. “I didn’t know you were in Soho.” “I didn’t know you were in London.” “I moved three years ago.” “Big city.” “Not that big.” Aurora wiped a dry patch of bar that had already been clean. “No. Not that big.” The rain pressed against the windows, blurring the street into green and amber. Eva looked around the room. Her gaze travelled over the maps, the old photographs, the shelves crowded with bottles, the narrow corridor leading towards the toilets and the heavy bookcase that looked too full to move. Silas had oiled its hinges that morning; Aurora could still smell the faint metal tang under beer and citrus. “This place is strange.” “Most places are, once you stand still.” “Who owns it?” “Silas.” “The man with the limp?” Aurora’s head lifted. “You saw him?” “He passed me outside. Held the door and looked at me like he knew every lie I’d ever told.” “That’s just his face.” “Good face for a landlord.” “Better for other things.” Eva finally drank. The ice shifted against her lip. “You sound different.” Aurora reached under the counter for a crate of clean glasses and lifted it onto the shelf. “I was twenty when you last saw me.” “Twenty-one.” “Fine. Ancient.” “You had a Welsh thing on the ends of sentences then.” “I still do when I’m tired.” “You used to talk faster.” “You used to interrupt.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the glass. “I still do.” “No, you don’t.” The words sat between them. Eva looked at the lime wedge floating in her drink as if it had accused her. A group of three came in, wet coats steaming, laughter too large for the room. Aurora served two pints and a soda with blackcurrant while Eva shifted to the side, glass in hand, shoulders close to the bar but not touching it. The newcomers argued over who had promised to buy the round. Their noise filled the space in a merciful ugly blanket. When they moved away, Eva had taken off her coat. Underneath she wore a dark green blouse tucked into black trousers. Good fabric. Good cut. The collar sat high on her throat. A faint line ran from just below her left ear down beneath the cloth, pale and raised, not old enough to have disappeared into the rest of her. Aurora saw it. Eva saw her seeing it. She lifted her glass. “Work thing.” “What work throws knives?” “The kind I left.” Aurora waited. Eva took a longer drink. “I was with a charity. Outreach. Hostels, women’s shelters, court forms, the whole grim orchestra.” “That sounds like you.” “It sounded like me when I started.” “And now?” “Now I wrote policies for people who never sat on a plastic chair outside a family court at nine in the morning.” Aurora leaned her hip against the bar. “Promotion?” “Extraction.” A laugh came out of Aurora before she could stop it. Not kind. Not cruel either. A hard little sound. Eva flinched. “Sorry.” “Don’t be. I earned worse.” “You didn’t earn anything.” “You don’t know that.” “I know you got me out.” Eva looked at her then, full on, and the years between them did not vanish; they arrived. All of them. They stood behind Eva’s eyes, stacked and unfiled. “I got you to London. Then I disappeared.” Aurora picked up the cloth again. Her hands needed employment. “You sent money.” “Once.” “Twice.” “Rory.” “You found me Yu-Fei’s number. You knew someone who knew someone. I got the delivery job because of you.” “I left you in a city where you knew nobody.” “I knew Yu-Fei.” “You knew a restaurant owner who made you carry bags of noodles through rain.” “Golden Empress fed me for free.” “Because you looked like a ghost with a helmet.” Aurora’s mouth twitched despite herself. “I looked excellent in that helmet.” “You looked like a pen lid.” The corner of Eva’s mouth broke. This time the smile stayed long enough to hurt. Aurora turned to the sink and rinsed a spoon that did not need rinsing. “You stopped answering.” Eva set her glass down. “I did.” “No funeral. No prison. No dramatic explanation. Just—gone.” “There was a man.” Aurora kept the tap running. Water hammered the steel basin. “Mine had a name.” “I know.” “Evan.” “I remember.” “Yours?” Eva rubbed the heel of her hand against her sternum once, a brief, irritated motion, as though the body had made an inappropriate comment. “Tom.” Aurora shut off the tap. “Did he do that?” Eva’s fingers went to the scar at her throat, then dropped. “No. That was a woman outside the shelter with a broken bottle. Tom did quieter work.” The three at the table burst into laughter over something on a phone. One of them slapped the wood, and a pint jumped. Aurora stared at the row of optics behind the bar, at the upside-down bottles with their dark measures waiting. Eva’s voice lowered. “I told women to leave. Every day. I printed safety plans. I hid spare phones in tampon boxes. I had a speech about documents and cash and code words. Then I went home and checked whether dinner sounded wrong in his mouth.” Aurora swallowed. “You could have rung me.” “I know.” “You had my number.” “I know.” “I would have come.” Eva gave a short nod, looking not at Aurora now but at the grain of the bar. “That was the part I couldn’t bear.” Aurora’s hand found the crescent scar on her wrist, thumb pressing into the old raised curve. “Why?” “Because you did leave. You got on the train. You slept on my floor. You walked into rooms shaking and still made jokes about the wallpaper. You went pale when a door slammed, then you opened the next door anyway. You were proof.” Aurora said nothing. Eva’s laugh had no humour in it. “Proof became inconvenient.” A gust pushed at the front door as someone left, dragging smoke and rain smell through the bar. Silas appeared from the cellar stairs with a crate of stout balanced against one hip. His auburn hair, grey at the temples, caught the low light. The silver signet ring on his right hand knocked once against the crate as he set it down. His hazel eyes moved from Aurora to Eva. “Everything all right?” Aurora reached for the crate. “Fine.” Silas did not move. Eva straightened. “I was just leaving.” “You’ve half a drink.” “I’ve had enough.” Silas gave her the kind of look that made people reorganise their secrets. “Coat’s on the stool behind you.” Eva turned, as if surprised to find she had taken it off. Aurora shot Silas a glance. He lifted both hands a fraction, palms open, ring flashing. “I’ll change the keg.” He took the crate and went towards the far end of the bar, his limp small but present, built into the rhythm of him. He did not go far enough to be absent. Eva picked up her coat and pushed one arm into the sleeve. “You work for him?” “Sometimes.” “Not just bar work.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “You still read rooms.” “You still don’t answer questions.” “There are questions that earn answers.” Eva slid her other arm into the coat. “Fair.” She tied the belt. Her fingers fumbled on the knot, then corrected with the precision of someone who hated being observed. Aurora leaned forward. “Sit down.” Eva looked towards the door. “Rory—” “Sit down, Eva.” The old command cut through both of them. Eva froze. At school, Aurora had used that voice before exams, before lies, before Eva climbed anything taller than a bus shelter. Eva had always pretended not to obey. She obeyed now. She sat on the bar stool and kept her coat on. Aurora poured herself soda water from the gun and left it untouched. “Are you safe?” Eva’s face closed around the question. “Yes.” “Don’t give me the version for intake forms.” “I am safe.” “Where is he?” “Leeds. Last I heard.” “Last you heard?” “I changed my number. Changed jobs. Moved flats twice.” “Police?” Eva’s eyes flicked to the old photographs on the wall. “You know how that goes.” “I know how some of it goes.” “They took notes. He took my house keys. Notes did not outrun keys.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. Eva noticed. “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Put your coat on in your head.” Aurora’s fingers, which had already moved towards the hook where her jacket hung, stopped. “I wasn’t.” “You were.” Silas, at the far end, pulled the stout tap and watched foam rise in a glass, though no one had ordered it. Eva leaned closer. “I didn’t come here for help. I didn’t know you were here. I had a meeting round the corner and walked because the Tube smelled of wet wool and panic. I saw the sign. Green raven. Ridiculous. Came in for one drink.” “There’s no raven on the sign.” “There is in spirit.” “You always had terrible observation skills.” “I found you.” “That took six years and bad weather.” Eva’s lips parted, then closed. Aurora regretted it at once. The line had landed too clean. Eva nodded. “There it is.” “What?” “The bill.” “I’m not billing you.” “You are. You should.” Aurora braced both hands on the bar. The wood felt sticky under her palms despite an hour of polishing. “I hated you.” Eva absorbed it without theatrics. Her shoulders dipped, not much. “Good.” “No, not good. Don’t make it noble.” “I wasn’t.” “You vanished, and I thought I’d done something. I went over every conversation. Every call. Every text I sent. Too many, too few, too needy, too—” She stopped and bit down on the rest. The three customers had gone quiet enough that their silence had ears. Silas lifted his chin towards them. “Last orders for that table in two minutes if you want to keep your dignity.” The table erupted in protest. Noise returned, rough and useful. Aurora lowered her voice. “I had your old hoodie for two years. The blue one with the bleach mark. I kept meaning to post it, then I didn’t know where. Then I kept it because I was angry. Then because it stopped smelling like you and that felt worse.” Eva’s eyes shone, but nothing fell. “I looked for it.” “Good.” “I thought I left it at Tom’s.” “Good,” Aurora repeated, weaker this time. Eva took the last mouthful of gin. The ice knocked against her teeth. “I used to think we’d have a flat with bad heating and plants we killed.” “We did kill plants.” “Your basil drowned.” “You watered it with leftover cider.” “It was thirsty.” Aurora huffed. The sound bent into something close to a laugh and broke before it got there. Eva pushed the empty glass towards her. “You were going to be a barrister.” “You were going to run a shelter and terrorise Parliament.” “I still terrorised one local council. Briefly.” “I left law.” “I heard.” “From who?” Eva’s gaze slid away. “Your mum.” Aurora stared. “You spoke to my mother?” “Once. Two years ago. I rang the house and hung up the first time. She called back. Of course she did. Teacher voice. Full name within ten seconds.” Aurora could hear it: Aurora Maeve Carter, if you think breathing down a receiver constitutes communication— “What did she say?” “That you were alive. In London. Working too hard. Eating badly. She didn’t give me your number.” “Good.” “I asked.” “Good.” Eva looked down. “She said if I wanted forgiveness, I should start with honesty and bring a casserole.” Despite everything, Aurora laughed. “That’s her crisis policy.” “I nearly made one.” “You can’t cook.” “I can assemble grief in a ceramic dish.” “Undercooked.” “Saltless.” They looked at each other across the bar, two women with rain on one and work on the other, the years laid out between them like a table nobody had cleared. Silas came over with the till drawer open in one hand. “Rory, I need change for a twenty.” “There’s a roll of pound coins in the left drawer.” “I know where the coins are.” Aurora looked at him. He looked back, bland as church glass. Eva took out her phone. “I should go.” Aurora hated the speed of her own pulse. “Of course.” Eva unlocked the phone, opened contacts, hesitated. “My number. If you want it. If you don’t, I’ll write it on a napkin and you can throw it away after I leave with whatever expression suits the occasion.” Aurora took the phone. Her own reflection ghosted over the black screen for a moment: bright blue eyes, black hair, face sharper than the one Eva had known. She typed her number in and saved it under Rory, then pressed call. Her phone buzzed beneath the bar beside the receipt spikes and bottle opener. Eva watched that small exchange as if it were a document signed in blood. Aurora ended the call. “There. Now you can avoid me with modern efficiency.” Eva pocketed the phone. “I deserved that.” “Yes.” “I’ll still use it.” Aurora lifted her glass of soda and drank. The bubbles cut her tongue. “You said you had a meeting.” Eva buttoned her coat. “Civil service. Consultancy. A room with frosted glass, coffee in flasks, six people discussing vulnerability metrics while a man in brown shoes said ‘stakeholders’ until I lost the will to remain polite.” “Did you remain polite?” “For twenty-three minutes.” “Then?” “I asked him whether he’d ever seen a woman hide her passport inside a cereal box because her husband checked drawers but not carbohydrates.” Silas coughed once at the till. It might have been approval. Aurora studied Eva’s face, the polished hair, the expensive coat, the scar disappearing under the high collar, the hand that no longer waved when she spoke. “You changed.” Eva’s mouth twisted. “So did you.” “I know.” “No. You don’t.” Eva leaned her elbows on the bar, then seemed to remember the coat and straightened again. “You used to look like you were waiting for permission to occupy space. Now that man over there dropped his voice when you told him to drink water.” “He was on whisky four.” “You built something.” Aurora glanced around the bar: the maps, the stains, the hidden room behind the bookshelf, Silas counting coins he did not need to count, the door to the flat upstairs where her laundry hung over a radiator and three books lay open beside her bed. “I borrowed corners.” “That’s how cities start.” The rain softened outside. Not stopped. London rarely granted clean endings; it preferred damp revisions. Eva stepped back from the stool. “I’m at a flat in Bloomsbury for now.” “For now?” “Lease ends in March.” “Do you need—” “No.” Eva raised a hand. “No. But thank you.” Aurora nodded once. Eva pulled her umbrella from the stand by the door. She did not open it yet. “Rory.” Aurora looked up. “I’m sorry I made your escape lonelier than it already was.” The bar noise thinned. Even the pipes seemed to hold still. Aurora gripped the edge of the counter until the wood pressed into the lines of her palms. “You should have let me be useful.” “I know.” “You should have let me love you badly, or angrily, or while shouting. Whatever I could manage.” Eva’s face crumpled for one second, quick as paper in flame, then she gathered it back. “I know.” Silas turned away and began wiping down bottles that had never seen dust. Aurora came out from behind the bar. The movement startled both of them. She crossed the few feet of worn floorboards, past the brass rail, past the table where the drinkers now pretended to debate football. Eva stood rigid, umbrella clenched in one hand. Aurora stopped close enough to smell rain in the wool of her coat and the faint peppery trace of perfume that did not belong to the girl from Cardiff but suited the woman who had survived into it. She did not hug her. Not yet. She reached for Eva’s collar instead and adjusted where it had folded under at the back. “You always missed that.” Eva let out a breath through her nose. “You always fixed it like I’d offended the nation.” “You had.” Aurora’s fingers brushed the raised line near Eva’s throat. Eva did not move away. The contact lasted less than a second. Then Aurora stepped back. Eva looked at the door, then at her. “I’ll ring.” “You said that before.” “I texted before. Different crime.” “Still on record.” “I’ll ring tomorrow.” Aurora folded her arms. “After six. I’m delivering lunch shifts.” “Golden Empress?” “Yu-Fei would chain me to the wok if I left.” “She still calls you Laila?” “Only when I annoy her.” “Why Laila?” “She said Aurora was too many vowels for a woman who never slept.” Eva smiled, small and unguarded. “That sounds right.” The bell above the door trembled as someone outside pushed past. Eva opened the door and the rain smell rushed in again, softer now, threaded with petrol and wet stone. She paused on the threshold under the green neon, half in the bar’s amber light, half in the street’s broken reflections. Aurora stayed where she was, hands tucked beneath her elbows to keep them from reaching. “Tomorrow,” Eva said. Aurora met her eyes. “After six.” Eva nodded, opened the umbrella, and stepped into the rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences243
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.049
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3784
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"angrily"
count1
highlights
0"angrily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3784
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"charged"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences243
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences480
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3783
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Despite everything, Aurora laughed."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions168
wordCount2385
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity3.06
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Prague1
Carter2
Silas13
Aurora65
Morgan1
Cardiff4
Chartreuse1
Eva73
Get1
Crown1
Court1
Maeve1
Rory1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Morgan"
5"Chartreuse"
6"Eva"
7"Get"
8"Maeve"
9"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences150
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something close to a laugh and broke before it g"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.529
wordCount3783
matches
0"Not darkness, never quite darkness, but a brown-gold murk"
1"not at Aurora now but at the grain of the bar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences480
matches
0"used that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs400
mean9.46
std12.07
cv1.276
sampleLengths
063
159
256
325
49
52
65
73
812
912
108
112
124
1322
149
158
1636
1781
186
196
205
215
221
2317
2412
251
2614
272
281
2916
3052
313
327
332
341
352
3620
377
388
3913
4060
415
424
431
447
457
463
477
486
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences243
matches
0"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs420
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences480
ratio0.013
matches
0"Aurora glanced up because she always did; Silas had drilled that into her without saying a word."
1"Her hair had once been a wild red-brown cloud; now it was cut blunt at her chin and smoothed into obedience."
2"Silas had oiled its hinges that morning; Aurora could still smell the faint metal tang under beer and citrus."
3"Eva looked at her then, full on, and the years between them did not vanish; they arrived."
4"Aurora could hear it: Aurora Maeve Carter, if you think breathing down a receiver constitutes communication—"
5"London rarely granted clean endings; it preferred damp revisions."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2392
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"wild red-brown cloud;"
1"lay open beside her"
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.028010033444816052
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0016722408026755853
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences480
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences480
mean7.88
std7.86
cv0.998
sampleLengths
026
137
27
321
46
58
617
719
837
912
1013
119
122
135
143
1512
1612
178
182
194
2022
219
225
233
2417
252
262
272
2813
2913
3021
3121
328
337
3411
356
366
375
385
391
4017
417
425
431
4414
452
461
4716
487
492
45.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.22291666666666668
totalSentences480
uniqueOpeners107
59.79% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences223
matches
0"Then a woman."
1"Then the woman’s mouth parted."
2"Even the pipes seemed to"
3"Then Aurora stepped back."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences223
matches
0"Her black hair brushed her"
1"He tapped his empty glass."
2"He gave her the wounded"
3"She set a glass of"
4"She wore a camel coat"
5"Her hair had once been"
6"Her lipstick was dark enough"
7"She set the glass down"
8"It rang against the wood."
9"Her eyes snagged on a"
10"Her fingers remembered the order"
11"I’ll sort you a sofa."
12"Her gaze travelled over the"
13"Their noise filled the space"
14"She lifted her glass."
15"They stood behind Eva’s eyes,"
16"Her hands needed employment."
17"His auburn hair, grey at"
18"His hazel eyes moved from"
19"He lifted both hands a"
ratio0.175
0.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount205
totalSentences223
matches
0"The rain had been needling"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Faces from wars nobody spoke"
3"Streets from cities that had"
4"A framed photograph of Prague"
5"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
6"Silas had gone down to"
7"Her black hair brushed her"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"A man at the corner"
10"He tapped his empty glass."
11"He gave her the wounded"
12"The man blinked, then laughed"
13"She set a glass of"
14"The bell above the door"
15"Aurora glanced up because she"
16"People told the truth badly"
17"The woman stood just inside"
18"She wore a camel coat"
19"Her hair had once been"
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences223
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences92
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The green neon sign above the door shivered in every puddle, RAVEN’S NEST bending and breaking beneath the shoes of office workers, theatre crowds, men with col…"
1"Not darkness, never quite darkness, but a brown-gold murk that clung to the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls."
2"Silas had gone down to the cellar ten minutes before and left her with the late lull, that hour between the after-work drinkers and the ones who came in looking…"
3"She wore a camel coat belted tight, the sort of coat that belonged in front of clean townhouses and glass offices."
4"Her gaze travelled over the maps, the old photographs, the shelves crowded with bottles, the narrow corridor leading towards the toilets and the heavy bookcase …"
5"Eva looked at the lime wedge floating in her drink as if it had accused her."
6"Eva rubbed the heel of her hand against her sternum once, a brief, irritated motion, as though the body had made an inappropriate comment."
7"Silas gave her the kind of look that made people reorganise their secrets."
8"Her fingers fumbled on the knot, then corrected with the precision of someone who hated being observed."
9"Aurora stopped close enough to smell rain in the wool of her coat and the faint peppery trace of perfume that did not belong to the girl from Cardiff but suited…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed (laugh)"
1"Aurora repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences243
tagDensity0.012
leniency0.025
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.016
84.9845%