Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0PWMRQJEKSK6151GM01GPW

Run Details

Duration:
2m 5s
Cost:
$0.162230
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had polished Soho into a smear of red brake lights and shopfront glare by the time Aurora Carter pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest with two paper bags hooked over her wrist and steam leaking through the staples. The green neon sign above the entrance hummed behind her, its light clinging to the wet shoulders of her black jacket. She shoved the door closed with her hip. Warmth rolled over her: beer, lemon peel, old wood, damp wool, a faint curl of cigarette smoke that had no legal right to exist but somehow lived inside the panelling. At the far end of the bar, Silas Blackwood looked up from polishing a glass. His hazel eyes caught the bags first, then her face. His silver signet ring flashed as he set the glass down. “You’re late.” “You ordered during a flood.” “I ordered during drizzle.” “London drizzle has body count potential.” Silas slid a tenner across the bar with two fingers. His limp showed when he stepped out from behind the counter, left knee stiff as he rounded toward her. “Yu-Fei put in the prawn toast?” Aurora lifted the smaller bag away from him. “Depends whether you admit you ordered enough for four people.” “I’ve got a reputation to feed.” “Your reputation’s cholesterol is shocking.” The corner of his mouth moved. Not a smile. Silas never wasted a full one where a fraction did the job. He took the bags and nodded toward the back. The old maps on the walls seemed darker in the rainlight, their coastlines bent and browned under glass, countries renamed by dead men. Black-and-white photographs watched from between shelves of whisky and framed newspaper clippings: boxers, dockworkers, actresses, men in hats whose faces blurred into official secrecy. Aurora wiped her boots on the mat and shook water from the ends of her straight black hair. The bar held the usual Thursday crowd: two accountants muttering over a phone screen, a theatre dresser with pins still tucked in her sleeve, a pair of tourists taking photographs of the ceiling as if the cracked plaster had survived a war for their benefit. Someone laughed too loudly near the window and then coughed as though embarrassed by the size of the sound. She was halfway to the staircase that led to her flat when the door opened again. Cold air cut through the room. Aurora turned because everyone turned when the weather entered like that. A woman stood beneath the lintel, one hand still on the brass handle. She wore a cream coat too clean for the city, belted tight at the waist, and her hair—once a wild copper mess Aurora remembered tied with school ribbons, pencils, bits of thread—fell in a sleek dark-blonde sheet to her collarbone. Rain beads glittered on it. Her lipstick was the colour of bruised plums. The face beneath it was thinner than memory, sharper at the cheeks, powdered into composure. Aurora’s fingers closed around nothing. The woman looked past the bar, past Silas, past the maps, and landed on Aurora. Her mouth opened. Closed. The hand on the door handle went white at the knuckles. “Rory?” The old name struck the room before it struck Aurora. Rory belonged to Cardiff bedrooms with posters curling off the walls, to bus shelters, to chips eaten from paper while gulls shrieked above the bay, to a voice on the phone saying, Come to London, babe. I mean it. Tonight if you can. Aurora had not heard it in that exact shape for four years. “Eva.” Silas stopped where he stood. He did not ask. His gaze moved between them once, quick as a blade sliding from a sleeve, then he carried the food to the bar and busied himself with plates. Eva Morgan stepped inside and let the door fall shut behind her. She was not dressed for wandering into a Soho bar by accident; nothing about her had accident in it now. Her gloves were leather. Her boots made no sound on the floorboards. A small gold ring sat in one ear, and another in the upper cartilage, where she had once pierced herself with ice and a sewing needle while Aurora held a bag of frozen peas against her head. “God.” Eva gave a laugh with no air in it. “Look at you.” Aurora glanced down at her damp jeans, scuffed trainers, delivery jacket, the Golden Empress logo cracked at the chest. “That bad?” “No. I didn’t mean—” Eva touched her own throat, then dropped the hand. “You look the same.” “You don’t.” The words came out before Aurora dressed them. Eva’s jaw tightened. Not anger. A small locking-up. “No, well.” Eva looked toward the bar. “Years did that, didn’t they?” “Years had help.” Silas placed a plate of prawn toast on the counter and did not look at them. “Drink?” Eva turned to him. Her eyes flicked to his grey-streaked auburn hair, the trimmed beard, the limp he had not hidden, the ring on his right hand. She took in The Raven’s Nest the way some people read contracts. “Gin and tonic. Whatever’s decent.” “All my gin’s decent. Some of it has manners.” Aurora moved to the bar because standing near the stairs made her feel twelve. Eva followed, leaving a dark comma of water beneath the hem of her coat. They sat with one empty stool between them until Silas placed the gin in front of Eva and a glass of tap water in front of Aurora. “I didn’t order.” “You forget to drink when you’re rattled.” “I’m not rattled.” Silas pushed the water closer with one blunt fingertip. Aurora took it. Eva watched this exchange with a careful face. “You live here?” “Upstairs.” “In Soho.” “Above a bar. Very glamorous. The pipes sing at three in the morning and someone keeps stealing my post.” “It’s safer than it sounds,” Silas cut in, then moved away to serve the tourists. Eva stirred her drink with the black straw and did not sip it. “He seems fond of you.” “He lets me owe rent in creative instalments.” “That’s not what I said.” Aurora looked at her. Bright blue eyes to Eva’s grey-green, both women reflected in the mirror behind the optics: one in a delivery jacket, one in a coat that cost more than Aurora’s mattress. Between them stood rows of bottles, upside down and glowing. “What are you doing here, Eva?” Eva’s hand stilled. Ice clicked once against glass. “I had a meeting nearby.” “People have meetings in Soho now?” “They always did.” “Not the people we knew.” “We don’t know them now.” Aurora let out a breath through her nose. “No. I suppose we don’t.” A man at the window burst into another laugh. The sound thudded against their quiet and fell away. Eva lifted the gin at last. Her lipstick left a dark crescent on the rim. “I thought about ringing you.” “Your thumbs fall off?” “There it is.” “There what is?” “That little Cardiff knife.” Aurora’s fingers went to her left wrist without permission, thumb brushing the small crescent scar there. Childhood had left marks without ceremony. Adults made rituals of damage. “You came into my home after four years and expected bunting?” “This is your home?” Aurora looked around the bar: the maps, the photographs, Silas pretending not to listen, the bookshelf at the back with one atlas placed too squarely on the middle shelf. The Raven’s Nest had its tricks. So did she. “Yes.” Eva lowered her gaze. “Right.” The word carried too much. Aurora heard the rooms beneath it: the flat in Cardiff where Evan had broken a mug against the wall and then cried into her stomach; the coach station where Eva had stood in a mustard coat with two coffees and a spare phone; the first London sofa, too short for sleep, where they had lain top to tail under one duvet because the boiler had died. “You vanished,” Aurora said. Eva’s mouth tightened around the straw. “You did first.” “I left because you told me to.” “I told you to leave him. Not me.” Aurora’s glass sweated beneath her palm. “I was twenty-one and half-mad with it.” “I know.” “No, you don’t get to say that like you were the weather.” Eva turned on the stool. The polished version cracked; beneath it stood the girl who had once climbed a locked school gate in a skirt, swearing with both knees bleeding. “I went with you to the police station.” “And I told them nothing.” “I sat outside that interview room for three hours while he texted you forty-seven times.” Aurora looked at the bar top. A ring from someone’s old pint had dried into the wood, pale and permanent. “Forty-nine.” “I counted until my phone died.” “You told me I’d go back if I answered.” “You would’ve.” Aurora snapped her gaze up. Eva did not flinch. Her face had gone pale beneath the powder. “You would’ve, Rory. You had that look. Like if he opened the door wide enough, you’d mistake it for a way out.” Silas’ hand paused over a bottle of whisky. Only for a second. Then the glass beneath it filled. Aurora pushed her water away. “You don’t know what I would’ve done.” “I knew you then.” “You knew a version.” “I loved that version.” The word landed badly. Not soft. Not warm. It hit the brass rail beneath the bar and rang there, metallic. Aurora laughed once. “Did you?” Eva swallowed. “Don’t.” “No, come on. Let’s do it. You saved me, got tired of the mess, then got yourself a cream coat and a calendar full of meetings.” Eva’s fingers dug into the stem of her glass. “You think that’s what happened?” “I know you stopped answering.” “You stopped calling.” “After six voicemails.” “I was in Belfast.” “You could’ve been on the moon and still sent a text.” “My mother had cancer.” Aurora went still. The bar did not. The tourists ordered another round. Rain ticked against the front window. Someone fed coins into the old jukebox, and a Nina Simone song crackled through the speakers, low and scratched at the edges. Eva looked down at her drink as if it had betrayed her. “She didn’t want anyone told. Not even Dad at first, which was absurd because he lived in the same house and she was vomiting into mixing bowls.” Her lips twisted. “I went back for a weekend. Stayed eleven months.” Aurora’s throat closed around the shape of an apology and refused to release it. Eva continued, each sentence placed with care. “By the time she died, you had changed your number.” “I changed it because Evan got hold of the old one.” “I know that now.” Aurora stared at her. “Now?” “I went to your old place. Months later. Some woman with purple hair opened the door and told me you’d moved. She thought I was debt collection.” “Charming.” “She offered me a cigarette.” “That was probably Nina.” “I hated her for knowing where you’d gone when I didn’t.” Aurora pressed her thumb into the crescent scar until the old white mark reddened. “I thought you’d had enough of me.” Eva’s eyes lifted. Rain had smudged a line of mascara near the corner, so fine it looked drawn by a needle. “I had enough of hospitals. Enough of forms. Enough of relatives who brought lasagne and asked whether Mum had accepted Jesus in her final hours. Enough of hearing my own name like an errand.” She took a breath that shook at the start but hardened by the end. “Not you.” Silence opened between them, crowded with all the words they had sharpened in private and never thrown. Silas came over with the prawn toast and set it between them. “Eat something before both of you start biting glass.” Eva blinked, then gave him a look. “Do you always interfere with customers?” “Only the ones bleeding on my furniture.” “We’re not bleeding.” “You’re Welsh. Same difference.” Aurora reached for a piece of toast because her hands needed work. “I’m half-Irish.” “Worse.” Eva laughed then. A real one, small and startled, and for a moment the sleek hair, the coat, the London polish all shifted aside. Aurora saw chipped blue nail varnish, a school tie worn as a headband, Eva singing into a deodorant can while Aurora revised case law she had never wanted to learn. “What happened to Pre-Law?” Eva asked, as if she had seen the same ghost. Aurora chewed, swallowed. “It bored me into spiritual rot.” “You used to win arguments with lecturers.” “I liked winning. Not the subject.” “Your dad must’ve loved that.” “Brendan Carter has described my life choices as ‘a sabbatical from sense’.” Eva smiled into her glass. “That sounds like him.” “He asked if delivery work was undercover research.” “Is it?” Aurora looked toward Silas. He had moved down the bar but stood close enough to hear if he chose. His signet ring tapped the till once, twice. “It pays.” “That wasn’t an answer.” “No.” Eva studied her. “You always did that.” “What?” “Built doors mid-conversation.” Aurora’s shoulders stiffened. “You walked through enough of them without knocking.” “That was fair.” “I didn’t want it to be.” “No one ever does.” A group left in a burst of wet coats and chair scrapes. The bar thinned. Outside, taxis hissed through puddles. The green neon washed Eva’s cheek whenever the door opened, giving her skin a ghostly tint. Aurora took in the changes one by one because looking all at once hurt. The elegant watch. The careful nails. The faint line at Eva’s forehead that had not been there before. The absence of rings. The way she sat with her back to the wall now, the same as Silas had taught Aurora to do, though Eva had learned it somewhere else, from some other room where exits mattered. “What do you do?” Aurora asked. Eva rolled the black straw between finger and thumb. “I work for a crisis consultancy.” “That sounds invented.” “It is. Everything is.” “Do you consult crises, or cause them?” “Depends who pays.” Aurora raised an eyebrow. Eva’s mouth twitched. “Corporate reputation. Political mess. People with money who set fire to themselves and want someone else to smell of smoke.” “That is grim.” “It is.” “You like it?” Eva looked at the old maps on the wall. Her eyes moved across borders drawn in ink, seas shaded like bruises. “I’m good at it.” “That wasn’t an answer.” Eva nodded once, accepting the theft. “No.” Aurora pushed the plate toward her. “Then why?” “Because after Mum died, I couldn’t stand rooms where people spoke plainly.” Eva picked up a piece of toast and held it but did not eat. “Grief made everyone honest. It was obscene. Aunties confessing affairs by the kettle. Dad telling me he hated the wallpaper she chose in 1998. Neighbours crying into my hair in Tesco. I wanted lies with invoices. Clean ones.” Aurora watched her tear the toast in half. “And did that work?” “For a bit.” “What changed?” Eva’s laugh had teeth. “Me, apparently.” Aurora felt the line land where Eva had meant it: at the first thing she had said. You don’t. “I was surprised.” “You were horrified.” “I wasn’t.” “You looked like I’d sold my soul for tailoring.” “Have you?” Eva leaned back. “A bit.” They sat with that. Neither rushed to soften it. Silas turned the jukebox down. The room shrank with the music. He took a crate of empty bottles through a door near the back, his limp marking his pace: wood, drag, wood, drag. The bookshelf beside the hallway sat innocently beneath a framed map of Prague. Aurora had once asked about the city. Silas had looked at the rain for so long that she had never asked again. Eva’s gaze followed him. “Who is he, really?” “My landlord.” “Rory.” “Don’t use the old voice on me.” “I didn’t bring another.” Aurora rubbed a hand over her face. “He helped me. After.” “After Evan?” “After everything got boring and dangerous at the same time.” She picked at a loose thread on her jacket cuff. “He knew people who could make sure Evan stopped finding me. Properly stopped.” Eva’s expression changed, not with surprise but recognition, as if pieces had clicked into a picture she disliked. “You were in trouble.” “I was always in trouble. I just got better at answering the door with a knife in reach.” Eva set down the toast. “You should have called me.” “You were burying your mum.” “You didn’t know that.” “No. I thought you’d left.” Eva looked at the lipstick mark on her glass. “So we both wrote the worst version and signed each other’s names.” Aurora let out a breath. “Sounds like us.” “It didn’t used to.” “It did a bit.” Eva looked at her then, and the years between them stopped behaving like years. They became objects on the bar: the untouched ice, the torn prawn toast, the water glass with Aurora’s fingerprints clouding it, the black straw bent at the tip. “I was angry with you,” Eva said. Aurora nodded. “Not because you were scared. Not because you went back to him those times before you left. I understood that more than I wanted to.” Eva’s voice lowered. “I was angry because when you finally got out, you looked at me like I had witnessed something indecent. Like I knew too much to keep.” Aurora’s thumb found the scar again. She saw the old sofa, the weak morning light, Eva kneeling on the floor with a bin bag, scooping up the clothes Aurora had brought from Cardiff because Aurora could not decide what belonged to freedom and what belonged to him. She remembered snapping over a green jumper. Mine. No, not that. Leave it. Don’t touch it. She remembered Eva’s hands freezing mid-air. “I hated that you saw me like that.” “I know.” “No, I mean I hated you for it.” Eva’s face tightened, but she stayed. “I know.” Aurora blinked hard. “You were the only safe thing in the room, and I still wanted to throw you out of it.” “You did.” “I’m sorry.” Eva’s fingers pressed flat to the bar. The leather gloves had come off at some point; her nails were pale, oval, immaculate. Her hands still looked like her hands. “I’m sorry I let you.” Aurora turned the water glass in a slow circle. “You had your own life burning down.” “And you were alone.” “I had Silas.” Eva looked toward the back door. “Yes.” Aurora heard what sat beneath the word. Not jealousy. Not exactly. A grief with another person’s name attached. “He didn’t replace you.” Eva’s eyes flicked back. “I didn’t ask.” “You did with your face.” “My face has been mismanaged tonight.” “It used to be worse.” “It used to be honest.” Aurora smiled despite herself. “You once told Mr Hargreaves his breath could strip paint.” “It could. I saved lives.” “You got detention.” “Art requires sacrifice.” There, for a brief second, the bar loosened around them. Eva took a bite of toast. Aurora drank the water Silas had given her. The rain outside softened to a mist that blurred the window, turning passing pedestrians into dark smudges with umbrellas. Eva dabbed her mouth with a napkin. “Does anyone call you Aurora here?” “Customers. Police. My mother when I forget birthdays.” “Not Rory?” “Silas does sometimes. When he wants me to listen.” “Do you?” “Sometimes.” Eva nodded, and Aurora saw the effort it took not to claim the name back, not to say it again simply because she could. A phone buzzed inside Eva’s coat. She ignored it. It buzzed again, harder against the wooden bar where the coat leaned. “You need to get that?” “No.” “Crisis consulting waits?” “It charges by the hour.” “Then you’re robbing someone.” Eva took the phone out, glanced at the screen, and turned it face down. Aurora caught the name before it vanished: MARTIN H. No heart. No nickname. Just a label. “Boyfriend?” “Boss.” “Same thing in a crisis consultancy?” Eva’s mouth flattened. “Not anymore.” Aurora did not ask. The mark on Eva’s wrist caught her attention then, half-hidden beneath the cuff of her blouse: a faint band of paler skin where a watch or bracelet had sat for years. Or something tighter. Eva noticed the glance and pulled the cuff down. The action was small. The air changed. Aurora kept her voice low. “Eva.” “Don’t.” “I didn’t say anything.” “You were about to build a whole courtroom.” “That’s my dad’s disease, not mine.” Eva looked toward the door. “I should go.” Aurora felt the old panic rise, absurd and young: if Eva left now, the years would close behind her and harden. She pressed her palm to the bar, grounding herself in sticky varnish and old rings. “You came in because of a meeting?” Eva did not move. “Or because you knew I was here?” The silence answered before she did. Eva picked up one glove and folded it over her fingers. “I saw you last week.” Aurora stared. “On Wardour Street. You were getting off that horrible little moped with the dragon sticker.” “It’s a carp.” “It looked diseased.” “It’s Yu-Fei’s lucky carp.” “You had soy sauce on your sleeve and you shouted at a taxi driver in a way that made a cyclist applaud.” Eva’s mouth softened, then shut again. “I followed you for half a street.” Aurora’s skin prickled. “That’s not creepy at all.” “I know.” “Did you learn that at crisis school?” “I panicked.” “You. Panicked.” Eva looked at her then, bare-faced beneath the powder, the rain, the expensive lines she had drawn around herself. “Yes.” Aurora had no neat reply for that. Eva slid one hand into her glove. “I stood outside this place for twenty minutes tonight. Walked past twice. Went into the wrong bar first and ordered a white wine I didn’t want.” “That place across the road?” “It smelled of bleach and students.” “That’s its brand.” “I told myself if you weren’t here, I’d leave it.” “But I was.” “But you were.” Silas returned with the empty crate gone, wiping his hands on a towel. He took in their faces and stopped short of the bar. “Kitchen’s closing. Last chance for anything fried and regrettable.” Eva looked at Aurora. Aurora looked at the plate between them, at the torn pieces gone cold, at the rain shining on Eva’s shoulders as though the weather had followed her inside and settled there. “Chips,” Aurora said. Silas lifted his chin. “Two forks?” Eva removed her other glove and placed it beside the first, fingers aligned, palms open. “Three. I don’t trust her not to steal the crisp ones.” Aurora reached for a napkin and shoved it toward Eva without looking at her. “You always left the soggy ones like some sort of aristocrat.” “I had standards.” “You had delusions.” Silas gave a grunt that might have been approval and limped toward the kitchen hatch. Eva’s phone buzzed again. She turned it off this time. The screen went black under her thumb. Aurora watched her do it. “Won’t Martin H mind?” “Martin H minded before I was born.” “Sounds fatal.” “It paid well.” “Past tense?” Eva rested her elbows on the bar, then seemed to remember the coat, the posture, the version she had brought in with her. She straightened. Then, after a moment, she slouched again. A little. Enough. “I handed in my notice this morning.” Aurora turned toward her. “That was the meeting?” “One of them.” “And the other?” Eva looked at her, and there it was: not the girl from Cardiff, not the woman in cream, but someone standing in the wreckage between the two with both hands visible. “I hadn’t had it yet.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s mouth softened then [then]"
dialogueSentences248
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.113
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.008
97.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3981
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3981
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"potential"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"potential"
2"flicked"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count2
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences252
matches
0"t with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences252
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences486
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3979
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Aurora saw chipped blue nail varnish, a school tie worn as a headband, Eva singing into a deodorant can while Aurora rev…"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions195
wordCount2551
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity2.94
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Aurora71
Carter1
Raven3
Nest3
Silas19
Blackwood1
Thursday1
Cardiff4
Come1
London3
Morgan1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva75
Evan1
Nina1
Simone1
Silence1
Prague1
Rain3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Come"
7"Morgan"
8"Eva"
9"Evan"
10"Nina"
11"Simone"
12"Silence"
13"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.03
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences154
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like her hands"
99.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords1.005
wordCount3979
matches
0"no legal right to exist but"
1"not with surprise but recognition, as if pieces had clicked into a picture she dis"
2"not the girl from Cardiff, not the woman in cream, but someone standing in the wreckage between the two with both h"
3"not the woman in cream, but someone standing in the wreckage between the two with both h"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences486
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs305
mean13.05
std15.84
cv1.214
sampleLengths
042
159
236
32
45
54
66
735
818
96
105
1177
1282
1316
146
1511
1681
175
1815
1915
201
2153
2212
231
2436
2581
2613
2721
2817
292
3016
3112
323
3317
3439
355
369
3728
3827
393
407
413
429
433
4411
451
462
4719
4815
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs422
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences486
ratio0.01
matches
0"She wore a cream coat too clean for the city, belted tight at the waist, and her hair—once a wild copper mess Aurora remembered tied with school ribbons, pencils, bits of thread—fell in a sleek dark-blonde sheet to her collarbone."
1"She was not dressed for wandering into a Soho bar by accident; nothing about her had accident in it now."
2"Aurora heard the rooms beneath it: the flat in Cardiff where Evan had broken a mug against the wall and then cried into her stomach; the coach station where Eva had stood in a mustard coat with two coffees and a spare phone; the first London sofa, too short for sleep, where they had lain top to tail under one duvet because the boiler had died."
3"The polished version cracked; beneath it stood the girl who had once climbed a locked school gate in a skirt, swearing with both knees bleeding."
4"The leather gloves had come off at some point; her nails were pale, oval, immaculate."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2498
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.02842273819055244
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0032025620496397116
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences486
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences486
mean8.19
std8.21
cv1.003
sampleLengths
042
121
28
330
415
510
611
72
85
94
106
1110
1219
136
148
1510
166
175
186
193
2012
219
2223
2324
2418
2545
2619
2716
286
2911
3013
3140
325
338
3415
355
3615
373
381
3911
401
4110
4236
433
444
4512
461
475
484
4927
43.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.20987654320987653
totalSentences486
uniqueOpeners102
72.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences231
matches
0"Bright blue eyes to Eva’s"
1"Only for a second."
2"Then the glass beneath it"
3"Just a label."
4"Then, after a moment, she"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences231
matches
0"She shoved the door closed"
1"His hazel eyes caught the"
2"His silver signet ring flashed"
3"His limp showed when he"
4"He took the bags and"
5"She was halfway to the"
6"She wore a cream coat"
7"Her lipstick was the colour"
8"Her mouth opened."
9"I mean it."
10"He did not ask."
11"His gaze moved between them"
12"She was not dressed for"
13"Her gloves were leather."
14"Her boots made no sound"
15"Her eyes flicked to his"
16"She took in The Raven’s"
17"They sat with one empty"
18"Her lipstick left a dark"
19"Her face had gone pale"
ratio0.169
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount215
totalSentences231
matches
0"The rain had polished Soho"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"She shoved the door closed"
3"Warmth rolled over her: beer,"
4"His hazel eyes caught the"
5"His silver signet ring flashed"
6"Silas slid a tenner across"
7"His limp showed when he"
8"Aurora lifted the smaller bag"
9"The corner of his mouth"
10"Silas never wasted a full"
11"He took the bags and"
12"The old maps on the"
13"Aurora wiped her boots on"
14"The bar held the usual"
15"Someone laughed too loudly near"
16"She was halfway to the"
17"Aurora turned because everyone turned"
18"A woman stood beneath the"
19"She wore a cream coat"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences231
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Warmth rolled over her: beer, lemon peel, old wood, damp wool, a faint curl of cigarette smoke that had no legal right to exist but somehow lived inside the pan…"
1"The bar held the usual Thursday crowd: two accountants muttering over a phone screen, a theatre dresser with pins still tucked in her sleeve, a pair of tourists…"
2"Bright blue eyes to Eva’s grey-green, both women reflected in the mirror behind the optics: one in a delivery jacket, one in a coat that cost more than Aurora’s…"
3"The polished version cracked; beneath it stood the girl who had once climbed a locked school gate in a skirt, swearing with both knees bleeding."
4"The rain outside softened to a mist that blurred the window, turning passing pedestrians into dark smudges with umbrellas."
5"Aurora looked at the plate between them, at the torn pieces gone cold, at the rain shining on Eva’s shoulders as though the weather had followed her inside and …"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva asked, as if she had seen the same ghost"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences248
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.1555%