Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0PWVFFEWQX68GBMD6BJR7B

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Duration:
2m 20s
Cost:
$0.182205
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a tired clack, and Aurora Carter opened the door with a kitchen knife hidden along her thigh. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing as if he had been arranged there by a more expensive universe. Charcoal suit despite the rain. Platinum hair slicked back, not a strand out of place. One gloved hand rested on the ivory head of his cane; the other braced against the frame as though he trusted old Brick Lane wood more than his own legs. His eyes found hers—one amber, one black—and the air between them tightened so sharply that the noise from the curry house below seemed to drop away. For one stupid second, Rory forgot the knife. Forgot the garlic smoke leaking up through the floorboards, the avalanche of Eva’s notes on the table behind her, the tabby cat winding suspiciously around her ankles. Forgot every excellent reason she had spent the last six weeks telling herself Lucien Moreau was a closed file. Then he smiled. Not the polished smile he used on vampires with gambling debts or witches who sold secrets by the ounce. This one was smaller. Uneasy. Almost human. “Bonsoir, Rory.” She should have shut the door in his face. Her hand tightened on the knife. “No.” His brows lifted a fraction. “No?” “No to whatever this is. No to the suit, no to the tragic doorway pose, no to you saying my name like you’ve earned the right.” A muscle moved in his jaw. He glanced down the narrow stairwell, toward the smear of neon from the restaurant sign and the rain ticking against the small window at the turn. “May I come in?” “Absolutely not.” “Someone is following me.” “Tell them I said hello.” The corner of his mouth twitched, but the humor didn’t land. He looked pale under the hallway bulb. Not merely pale in the elegant, half-demon way he usually wore like a tailored accessory, but blood-drained, edged with gray. A dark stain spread beneath the left side of his jacket, almost hidden by the charcoal wool. Rory saw it. Hated that she saw it. Hated more that her body reacted before her pride did, her weight shifting forward, her free hand lifting an inch. Lucien noticed. Of course he did. Lucien noticed everything. That had been one of the first things she’d liked about him. That had been one of the first things she’d learned to fear. “You’re bleeding,” she said. “A little.” “You’re leaning on the doorframe.” “A stylistic choice.” “Lucien.” His name came out sharper than she meant it to, and something in his face softened with such quiet hunger that she nearly stepped back. He had no right to look relieved because she had said his name. No right at all. Ptolemy gave a low, offended meow and sat on Rory’s foot, tail lashing. Lucien looked down. “Still judging, I see.” “He has good instincts.” “He bit me last time.” “He has excellent instincts.” From somewhere below came the thump of a delivery crate, a burst of laughter, the sizzle of onions hitting hot oil. Ordinary London pressed against the edges of the scene, trying to make it ridiculous: a woman with wet hair and a knife standing in a doorway above a curry house, arguing with a half-demon fixer who looked as if he’d bled on Savile Row. Then the bulb in the stairwell flickered. Once. Twice. Lucien stopped breathing. Rory saw that too. The rain outside the landing window did not fall so much as pause, silver lines suspended in the dirty yellow light. The laughter downstairs cut off mid-note. Ptolemy’s back arched under Rory’s hand. “Inside,” Lucien said, and the polish vanished from his voice. Rory moved. Not because he commanded it. That was what she told herself as she grabbed his lapel and yanked him across the threshold. She moved because the air in the stairwell had curdled cold, because every hair on her arms lifted, because she had survived too much by ignoring danger in the shape of men who said trust me. Lucien stumbled. He caught himself on the cane, breath hissing through his teeth. Rory slammed the door and threw the deadbolts one by one, the familiar sequence grounding her: top, middle, bottom. Metal into metal. Barrier into place. Something brushed the other side of the door. Not knocked. Brushed. Like a hand with too many fingers learning the shape of a home. Rory stepped back, knife raised. Lucien stood very still in the narrow strip of entryway, shoulder nearly touching a stack of books on Sumerian funerary rites. His gaze stayed on the door. The amber eye had brightened, the black one drinking the lamplight whole. “What is that?” Rory whispered. “A debt collector.” “That is not a bailiff.” “No.” “Lucien.” His mouth tightened. “Avaran.” The word settled badly in the flat, as if Eva’s notes and books had gone silent to listen. Rory knew enough about Avaros to know she didn’t want to know more. Demon realm. Hunger dressed as law. Deals written in blood, bone, or breath. “You brought an Avaran debt collector to Eva’s flat.” “I did not bring it. I was attempting to lose it.” “And you thought, naturally, Brick Lane.” “I thought of you.” The answer hit too cleanly. Rory looked at him. Really looked, despite herself. At the blood soaking into his shirt. At the faint tremor in the hand wrapped around the cane. At the way he held himself angled between her and the door, as if half-dead still meant useful. Her heart did something foolish. She ignored it. “You don’t get to say that either.” Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist, where the sleeve of her jumper had ridden up, exposing the small crescent scar pale against her skin. He’d once traced that scar with his thumb while they sat on the roof of Silas’ bar after midnight, London damp and glittering around them. He’d asked how she got it. She’d told him: childhood accident, broken mug, too much blood for such a small thing. He had listened as if even her old wounds deserved witnesses. Three nights later, he had handed her over to a vampire matriarch as collateral in a deal she hadn’t known he’d made. Technically, he’d got her out alive. Technically, she had never forgiven him. Behind them, Eva’s flat looked as if a library had exploded and then been cross-examined. Scrolls lay pinned under mugs. Books rose in dangerous towers from the rug. Research notes covered the walls in Eva’s looping scrawl, red thread connecting newspaper clippings, hand-copied sigils, and a takeaway menu someone had used as a bookmark. The warm, crowded mess of it should have comforted Rory. Tonight it felt flammable. The thing outside brushed the door again. Lucien turned his cane in his hand. Rory heard the soft click of a hidden mechanism. “Don’t,” she said. He paused. “If that thing can get through three deadbolts and whatever wards Eva has scribbled under the mat, your fancy toothpick won’t impress it.” “Your confidence wounds me.” “You’re already wounded.” “Then it joins the queue.” She hated him most when he was charming while bleeding. Hated the way her fear kept trying to turn itself inside out and become tenderness. “Sit down,” she snapped. “Rory—” “Sit down before you decorate Eva’s floorboards. She’ll invoice you, and then I’ll help her.” His expression shifted. For half a breath, the old Lucien looked out at her: amused, caught, unwillingly fond. Then pain dragged at him. He inclined his head in surrender and limped into the flat. Ptolemy followed at a distance, hissing commentary. Rory guided Lucien to the only clear chair by the table. Clear was generous. She swept a pile of photocopies and three pens onto the floor with her forearm. He lowered himself with careful control, but the last inch betrayed him; he sank hard, breath breaking. The sound did something awful to her. She set the knife on the table within reach. “Jacket off.” His lashes lifted. “Do not flirt with me while bleeding from the torso.” “I would never.” “You absolutely would.” A faint smile. “Yes.” There it was again. That softness. That brief, unguarded yes, as if he owed her honesty now, even in useless scraps. Rory looked away first. She moved through the cramped kitchenette on instinct, pulling down Eva’s battered first-aid tin from above the sink, then a clean tea towel from the oven handle. Her hands were steady. They always got steady in crisis. Later they would shake. Later, when no one could see, when she was alone in the bathroom or on the stairs or delivering dumplings to someone who didn’t know monsters were real. For now, steady. She came back to find Lucien trying one-handed to unbutton his waistcoat. “For God’s sake,” she muttered, and stepped between his knees. The moment she entered his space, the flat shrank. Rain tapped the windows. The door held. The thing outside remained a waiting cold. But Rory’s world narrowed to platinum hair, expensive wool, the faint scent of bergamot and smoke that clung to him beneath the copper smell of blood. Lucien went still under her hands. “Don’t,” she said quietly, eyes on the buttons. “I haven’t said anything.” “You’re thinking loudly.” “That has never been one of my talents.” “Lucien.” This time his name wasn’t a blade. It was worse. It was tired. He exhaled. “I was thinking that I have missed you.” Her fingers faltered on the second button. The words did not burst out dramatically. He didn’t weaponize them with a smile. He offered them low, almost reluctantly, as if they cost him something he wasn’t sure he could spare. Rory undid the third button. “You don’t miss people. You collect them.” “That is unfair.” “Yes.” The fourth button slipped free. “But not inaccurate,” he said. Her throat tightened, and she hated him a little less for saying it. She pushed the waistcoat open, then the shirt. The wound cut across his ribs, long and ugly, edged with a faint black shimmer that made her eyes water if she stared too hard. Not a knife, then. Not any human blade. “Jesus,” she breathed. “He wasn’t involved.” “Still talking. Bad sign.” “For whom?” “For me.” His gaze found her face. Rory pressed the folded tea towel to the wound. Lucien’s hand shot up and closed over her wrist. Not hard. Never hard. But sudden enough that memory flared: a vampire’s marble fingers around her arm, Lucien’s voice telling her to trust him, trust him, trust him, while terror filled her mouth with metal. She froze. Lucien released her instantly. The silence after was worse than the touch. “I’m sorry,” he said. She kept pressure on the wound. “For grabbing me or for the other thing?” His face stripped bare. Outside, something scratched once at the door. High. Patient. Lucien looked as though he might turn toward it with relief. “No,” Rory said. “You don’t get saved by the demon at the door. Answer me.” His throat moved. “Both.” The word landed between them, small and insufficient. Rory laughed once, without humor. “That’s tidy.” “I know.” “Six weeks, Lucien. Six weeks, and that’s what you bring me? You show up bleeding on Eva’s landing with hell’s own loan shark behind you, and now you’re sorry?” “I have been sorry since the moment I did it.” “Did that help while I was tied to a chair?” His eyes closed. Good, she thought fiercely. Good. See it. Because she still did. In dreams, in the wrong kind of shadow, in the smell of old velvet and blood-warm wine. Lucien across the room in a tailored suit, speaking French to a monster, face unreadable. Rory furious because she had thought she knew the shape of him beneath all that polish. Furious because some traitorous part of her had waited for him to look at her differently than he looked at everyone else. And he had. That had been the worst part. He had looked at her as if it hurt. “I made a bargain before I knew you would be there,” he said, voice roughened. “When I learned she had taken you, I altered the terms.” “You traded the ledger.” “Yes.” “The ledger everyone wanted.” “Yes.” “You could have told me.” “I could have.” “But you didn’t.” “No.” Rory lifted the towel. Blood welled slower now, dark around the shimmering edges. She reached for antiseptic, then stopped because she had no idea what antiseptic did to half-demon flesh. Knowing Lucien, he’d either heal instantly or catch fire. He watched the calculation cross her face. “The blue vial in my inside pocket.” “Of course you brought mysterious pocket fluids.” “For romantic emergencies.” She glared. He gave her a weak, unapologetic look. “Too soon?” “By several years.” But she leaned close, sliding her hand inside his jacket. The lining was silk-warm. Her knuckles brushed the hard plane of his chest, and his breath caught so quietly most people would have missed it. Rory was not most people. Not with him. Never with him. She found the vial and pulled it free. Blue glass, no label, stoppered with silver. “What is it?” “Distilled mercy.” “Lucien.” “A coagulant. Painful but effective.” “On a scale?” “For me or for humans?” “That is not comforting.” “Seven.” “Which means ten.” “Eight, perhaps.” She uncorked it with her teeth before she could think too hard about his mouth watching hers. “If you pass out, I’m drawing a moustache on you.” “Make it elegant.” She poured. Lucien did not scream. His back arched, one hand clamping white-knuckled around the cane, the other gripping the chair seat so hard the wood groaned. The wound smoked blue. The black shimmer recoiled, shriveling like paper in flame. Rory wanted to stop. Her own eyes stung. “Nearly done.” He made a sound that might have been her name if pain hadn’t broken it. She pressed the towel back down, gentler now. “Breathe, you idiot.” He obeyed, eventually. The muscles under her hands loosened by slow degrees. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, inspected the vial, and sneezed. “Don’t lick that,” Rory told him. The cat gave her a look of profound insult and stepped deliberately onto Lucien’s folded pocket square. Lucien opened one eye. “Assassin.” “Good judge of character.” “So you’ve mentioned.” For a moment, absurdity steadied them. Rory focused on practical things: another towel, tape from Eva’s drawer, the careful wrapping of ribs beneath ruined silk. Her hands worked close to his skin. Too close. She could feel heat coming off him, could see a faint line of old scars disappearing under his shirt, could hear each breath he tried to hide. When she finished, she stepped back too quickly and bumped into a tower of books. Three slid off and hit the floor with scholarly thuds. Lucien reached as if to steady her, then stopped himself. The restraint hurt more than the touch would have. Rory folded her arms. “Why are they after you?” His gaze moved to the door. The cold beyond it had lessened but not gone. “Because I broke a contract.” “For me?” He hesitated. Her pulse kicked. “Do not lie.” “Yes,” he said. The room went very quiet. Rory stared at him. “What contract?” “My father’s people have long memories. Avaros does not appreciate theft.” “The ledger.” “The ledger, the names inside it, the leverage attached to them.” He gave a tired smile. “And, technically, one human woman who had been promised as temporary collateral.” Her stomach turned. “Promised by whom?” “The vampire.” “But you signed.” His silence answered. Rory stepped back as if he’d touched her again. “You signed me into a contract?” “No.” He pushed himself upright, pain flashing over his face. “I signed a contract to retrieve information. Your name was added after. I did not know until—” “Until it was useful not to know?” His jaw tightened. “Until I walked into that room and saw you.” She wanted to throw something. There were so many options in Eva’s flat. Books, mugs, a small bronze bust of Hypatia. Instead she stood very still because stillness was the only thing between her and shaking. “You looked at me,” she said, “and told me to trust you.” “I know.” “You let me think you had chosen them.” “I had to.” “No.” Her voice cracked, and she hated that too. “You chose that. You chose silence. You chose to play the clever man in the room because that’s what you always choose. You never once thought I might have chosen to fight beside you if you’d given me the truth.” Lucien flinched as if she had found a wound deeper than the one in his side. “I did think it,” he said. “That was why I could not risk it.” Rory laughed, brittle. “How noble.” “No. Cowardly.” He looked up at her, and there was nothing polished left. His amber eye burned; the black one reflected nothing, not even her. “I have survived by turning people into pieces on a board. Favors. Debts. Assets. Threats. Then you arrived with your blue eyes and your delivery scooter helmet and your infuriating habit of asking the question no one wants answered, and I—” He stopped, breath unsteady. “I did not know where to put you.” Rory’s chest hurt. “Try ‘person,’” she said. “I did. Too late.” The thing at the door scraped again, weaker now, like nails dragging over stone from a long way away. Eva’s wards pulsed faintly under the threshold, chalk marks glowing through the worn mat. Lucien’s gaze dropped to Rory’s hands. “I came tonight because the collector will not stop with me. Anyone attached to the broken contract can be claimed.” “Attached,” she repeated. “Yes.” “So this is still about your bargain.” “It is about keeping you alive.” “Those are not mutually exclusive.” “No.” His honesty was going to kill her. Not because it fixed anything. It didn’t. The hurt sat between them with its teeth bared. But every straight answer took away one of the walls she’d built out of anger, and behind those walls were all the inconvenient things she had buried: the roof at midnight, his coat around her shoulders, his thumb on her scar, the way he’d listened, the way she’d wanted. She turned away and dragged both hands through her straight black hair, damp strands clinging to her cheeks. “Eva’s going to murder me if a demon eats her door.” “I will pay for repairs.” “You’ll be dead.” “I have arranged funds for that eventuality.” “Of course you have.” “I am very organized.” “Lucien.” He quieted. Rory looked back. He sat in Eva’s crowded flat like an elegant sin someone had spilled blood on. Pale, proud, frightened in all the places he tried not to show. The man who had hurt her. The man who had come to her when he had nowhere else to go. The man who had thought of her. She hated how much that mattered. “What happens when it gets through?” she asked. “It will not get through tonight. The wards are old, but competent.” “They’re Eva’s. They’re probably annotated.” “Extensively.” “And tomorrow?” His expression answered before he did. Tomorrow would be worse. Tomorrow meant choices, plans, bargains. Tomorrow meant being forced together by a contract neither of them had finished bleeding from. Rory picked up the kitchen knife and set it beside the first-aid tin. Then she pulled out the chair opposite him and sat. Lucien watched her with careful hope, which was somehow more dangerous than desire. “This does not mean I forgive you,” she said. “I know.” “It does not mean you’re staying.” His gaze flicked toward the door. Rory exhaled through her nose. “Fine. It means you’re staying until whatever that is stops lurking outside like a supernatural tax inspector.” “A generous offer.” “It’s not generous. It’s practical. If it kills you in the hallway, I still have to step over the body.” “Practical,” he echoed, but his mouth softened. “And tomorrow, you tell me everything. Not the edited version. Not the version where you decide what I can handle. Everything.” He inclined his head. “Yes.” “If you lie to me, I will know.” “I suspect you will.” “And if you try to sacrifice yourself dramatically to settle some debt without consulting me, I’ll bring you back just to kill you again.” A faint gleam returned to his eyes. “Necromancy is generally frowned upon.” “I live above a bar and work deliveries for a restaurant whose owner once threatened a ghoul with a cleaver. I can find a guy.” “I do not doubt it.” They looked at each other across Eva’s cluttered table. Rain resumed against the window, sudden and ordinary, as if someone had released the world from a held breath. Downstairs, the curry house noise swelled back to life: voices, pans, the muffled bass of a radio. The cold at the door thinned. Ptolemy climbed onto Lucien’s lap without permission, turned twice, and settled directly against his bandaged ribs. Lucien went rigid. Rory pressed her lips together. “Move him if you dare.” “I would not dream of it.” The cat purred like a small engine. Lucien’s face, still drawn with pain, took on an expression of solemn endurance so absurd that Rory almost smiled. Almost. Then his hand shifted on the table, palm up. Not reaching. Not asking outright. Just there, long fingers relaxed, glove removed at some point she hadn’t noticed. An offering, or a question. Rory stared at it. She should not touch him. Touch made things simple when they were not simple. Touch remembered what anger tried to revise. His hand had held hers once in an alley behind a nightclub while a banshee wailed two streets over; he’d pulled her behind him, then beside him, then laughed when she’d saved them both by throwing a bin lid at the creature’s head. Later, he’d kissed rain from her lower lip and looked as surprised by himself as she felt. She had missed his hands. Damn him. She reached out and placed two fingers against his palm, light as a test. Lucien did not close his hand around hers. He let her decide the pressure, the shape of it. His skin was warm. Too warm. Alive. “I should have come sooner,” he said. “Yes.” “I did not think you would open the door.” “I almost didn’t.” “I would not have blamed you.” “I would have,” she said. “A little. If you’d died on the landing. Very inconvenient.” His thumb moved, barely brushing the side of her finger. “Rory.” The sound of her name in his mouth was still a problem. Softer than Aurora, less useful than Carter, tangled with every version of herself she had become since leaving Cardiff, leaving Evan, coming to London because Eva had said run toward me, not away. Rory was the woman who had rebuilt herself above Silas’ bar, who carried takeaway bags through rain and stared down monsters with a kitchen knife. Rory was the woman Lucien had seen too clearly and not clearly enough. She met his eyes. “What?” “I thought of you,” he said again, but this time it wasn’t an explanation. It was a confession stripped to bone. “Not because I was wounded. Not because I was hunted. Before. Every day.” Her fingers curled a little into his palm despite her best intentions. “That doesn’t fix it,” she whispered. “No.” “It doesn’t even help much.” “I know.” But it did help. A dangerous amount. Enough that she felt the first hairline crack in the ice she’d packed around his memory. Enough that fear rushed in with the warmth. Lucien finally closed his hand around hers, slowly, giving her time to pull away. She didn’t. Beyond the door, whatever waited in the stairwell let out a thin, distant sound—anger or hunger, fading down through the bones of the building. The wards glowed once, then dimmed. Ptolemy slept on, triumphant and heavy. Rory sat in the cluttered little flat above Brick Lane with the man she should have sent away, her hand in his, the night pressing close on all sides. Tomorrow would be ugly. Contracts. Demons. Truth. Tonight, Lucien’s pulse beat against her fingers, stubborn and real. She looked at their joined hands and then at him. “You can sleep in the chair.” His smile was slow, exhausted, and unbearably beautiful. “Of course.” “And I’m keeping the knife.” “Naturally.” “And if you bleed on Eva’s notes, you explain it to her.” A shadow of the old mischief returned. “I have faced dukes of hell.” “Eva has highlighters organized by threat level.” “Then I shall endeavor not to bleed.” Rory did smile then, unwilling and small. Lucien saw it. The breath left him as if that small curve of her mouth had done what the Avaran blade could not. His fingers tightened once around hers—not possession, not triumph. Gratitude. It made her want to cry, so she scowled instead. “Stop looking at me like that.” “Like what?” “Like you’re about to say something French and devastating.” “I would not dare.” “You absolutely would.” His smile gentled. “Yes.” The word settled differently this time. Not charming. Not evasive. A promise, perhaps, though she did not trust promises yet. Rory leaned back in the chair, still holding his hand because letting go felt too much like another ending. The rain washed the windows. The flat smelled of curry, old paper, antiseptic, and smoke. Lucien’s thumb rested against the crescent scar on her wrist, not tracing, not claiming. Just there. She let it stay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He’d once [once]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences198
tagDensity0.157
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.03
87.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4281
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count5
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
2"really"
3"reluctantly"
4"deliberately"
5"quickly"
6"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4281
totalAiIsms29
found
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1
word"weight"
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word"flickered"
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word"familiar"
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word"flicked"
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word"traced"
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word"tenderness"
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word"marble"
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word"silence"
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word"velvet"
count1
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word"unreadable"
count1
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word"silk"
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word"comforting"
count1
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word"profound"
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word"could feel"
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word"pulse"
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word"stomach"
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word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"familiar"
4"flicked"
5"traced"
6"tenderness"
7"marble"
8"silence"
9"velvet"
10"unreadable"
11"silk"
12"comforting"
13"profound"
14"could feel"
15"pulse"
16"stomach"
17"pulsed"
18"desire"
19"echoed"
20"warmth"
21"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences360
matches
0"t with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences360
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences528
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4277
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions49
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions128
wordCount3158
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
Carter2
Moreau2
Brick2
Lane2
Rory43
Eva11
Lucien37
London2
Savile1
Row1
Sumerian1
Avaros1
French1
Hypatia1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Avaran1
Hated3
Ptolemy6
Later3
Tomorrow4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Lucien"
6"Evan"
7"Ptolemy"
8"Tomorrow"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.819
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences204
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4277
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences528
matches
0"Hated that she"
1"traced that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs318
mean13.45
std16.5
cv1.227
sampleLengths
022
118
271
354
43
526
62
79
87
96
1026
1136
122
134
145
1555
1628
1721
1812
194
202
215
223
231
2442
2513
267
274
285
294
3065
317
321
331
343
354
3633
3710
382
3958
4038
418
423
4313
445
4539
465
473
485
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences360
matches
0"been arranged"
1"being forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs584
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences528
ratio0.013
matches
0"One gloved hand rested on the ivory head of his cane; the other braced against the frame as though he trusted old Brick Lane wood more than his own legs."
1"His eyes found hers—one amber, one black—and the air between them tightened so sharply that the noise from the curry house below seemed to drop away."
2"He lowered himself with careful control, but the last inch betrayed him; he sank hard, breath breaking."
3"His amber eye burned; the black one reflected nothing, not even her."
4"His hand had held hers once in an alley behind a nightclub while a banshee wailed two streets over; he’d pulled her behind him, then beside him, then laughed when she’d saved them both by throwing a bin lid at the creature’s head."
5"Beyond the door, whatever waited in the stairwell let out a thin, distant sound—anger or hunger, fading down through the bones of the building."
6"His fingers tightened once around hers—not possession, not triumph."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1520
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.039473684210526314
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences528
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences528
mean8.1
std7.41
cv0.914
sampleLengths
022
118
25
310
430
526
68
727
819
93
1019
114
121
132
142
159
166
171
185
191
2026
216
2226
234
242
254
265
2711
287
2920
3017
313
325
3320
342
354
363
3712
3812
394
402
415
423
431
4425
4513
464
4713
483
494
42.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats37
diversityRatio0.2481060606060606
totalSentences528
uniqueOpeners131
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount12
totalSentences303
matches
0"Then he smiled."
1"Of course he did."
2"Then the bulb in the"
3"Really looked, despite herself."
4"Technically, he’d got her out"
5"Technically, she had never forgiven"
6"Then pain dragged at him."
7"Instead she stood very still"
8"Pale, proud, frightened in all"
9"Then she pulled out the"
10"Then his hand shifted on"
11"Just there, long fingers relaxed,"
ratio0.04
93.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount96
totalSentences303
matches
0"His eyes found hers—one amber,"
1"She should have shut the"
2"Her hand tightened on the"
3"His brows lifted a fraction."
4"He glanced down the narrow"
5"He looked pale under the"
6"His name came out sharper"
7"He had no right to"
8"She moved because the air"
9"He caught himself on the"
10"His gaze stayed on the"
11"His mouth tightened."
12"Her heart did something foolish."
13"She ignored it."
14"He’d once traced that scar"
15"He’d asked how she got"
16"She’d told him: childhood accident,"
17"He had listened as if"
18"She hated him most when"
19"His expression shifted."
ratio0.317
77.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount232
totalSentences303
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Charcoal suit despite the rain."
3"Platinum hair slicked back, not"
4"His eyes found hers—one amber,"
5"This one was smaller."
6"She should have shut the"
7"Her hand tightened on the"
8"His brows lifted a fraction."
9"A muscle moved in his"
10"He glanced down the narrow"
11"The corner of his mouth"
12"He looked pale under the"
13"A dark stain spread beneath"
14"Rory saw it."
15"Lucien noticed everything."
16"That had been one of"
17"That had been one of"
18"His name came out sharper"
19"He had no right to"
ratio0.766
16.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences303
matches
0"Because she still did."
ratio0.003
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences114
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"One gloved hand rested on the ivory head of his cane; the other braced against the frame as though he trusted old Brick Lane wood more than his own legs."
1"Ordinary London pressed against the edges of the scene, trying to make it ridiculous: a woman with wet hair and a knife standing in a doorway above a curry hous…"
2"She moved because the air in the stairwell had curdled cold, because every hair on her arms lifted, because she had survived too much by ignoring danger in the …"
3"At the way he held himself angled between her and the door, as if half-dead still meant useful."
4"Behind them, Eva’s flat looked as if a library had exploded and then been cross-examined."
5"That brief, unguarded yes, as if he owed her honesty now, even in useless scraps."
6"Later, when no one could see, when she was alone in the bathroom or on the stairs or delivering dumplings to someone who didn’t know monsters were real."
7"But Rory’s world narrowed to platinum hair, expensive wool, the faint scent of bergamot and smoke that clung to him beneath the copper smell of blood."
8"He offered them low, almost reluctantly, as if they cost him something he wasn’t sure he could spare."
9"The wound cut across his ribs, long and ugly, edged with a faint black shimmer that made her eyes water if she stared too hard."
60.48% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien said, and the polish vanished from his voice"
1"he said, voice roughened"
2"He pushed, pain flashing over his face"
3"he echoed, but his mouth softened"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"she repeated (repeat)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences198
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.061
90.1936%