| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 90.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "constructed" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1108 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "THE VEIL MARKET — ALL ENQUIRIES DISCREET." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 888 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Glock | 2 | | Latin | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Old" | | 2 | "Compton" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.993 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like nothing she'd ever seen" | | 1 | "quite see — wrapped in cloth, stored in glass jars, pulsing with faint light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.16 | | std | 20.17 | | cv | 0.692 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 67 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 57.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed — lost the wet city smell and took on something older, mustier, layered with incense and metal and things that had no business smelling like copper and sage at the same time." | | 1 | "They exchanged items she couldn't quite see — wrapped in cloth, stored in glass jars, pulsing with faint light." | | 2 | "A sign hung above the nearest stall, painted in uneven letters: **THE VEIL MARKET — ALL ENQUIRIES DISCREET.**" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 937 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.025613660618996798 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005336179295624333 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 11.08 | | std | 8.19 | | cv | 0.739 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 50.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.38 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 40.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she turned and walked" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "It never did." | | 1 | "She pulled her torch from" | | 2 | "She tried again." | | 3 | "She wiped her face with" | | 4 | "It stood slightly ajar, a" | | 5 | "She pushed the door open." | | 6 | "They haggled in low voices." | | 7 | "They exchanged items she couldn't" | | 8 | "Her suspect was gone." | | 9 | "He moved with the easy" | | 10 | "His left forearm bore a" | | 11 | "It didn't reach his eyes." | | 12 | "He stepped closer" | | 13 | "He held her gaze" | | 14 | "he said quietly" | | 15 | "He pulled out a card," | | 16 | "She took the card." | | 17 | "He turned and walked into" | | 18 | "She couldn't hear the rain" | | 19 | "She looked at the card" |
| | ratio | 0.241 | |
| 14.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped" | | 2 | "The figure ahead was fast," | | 3 | "Quinn kept the pace, her" | | 4 | "The warning meant nothing." | | 5 | "It never did." | | 6 | "The suspect banked hard left," | | 7 | "Quinn skidded to a halt" | | 8 | "The steps descended into darkness," | | 9 | "This wasn't on any map" | | 10 | "She pulled her torch from" | | 11 | "The beam cut a white" | | 12 | "The footsteps below had gone" | | 13 | "Quinn keyed her radio." | | 14 | "The radio crackled." | | 15 | "Static bled through the speaker." | | 16 | "She tried again." | | 17 | "Nothing but dead air." | | 18 | "The rain continued its assault," | | 19 | "Water trickled down the back" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure ahead was fast, nimble, ducking through the alley behind Old Compton Street with the practiced grace of someone who knew every shadow, every loose dr…" | | 1 | "The suspect banked hard left, disappearing down a stairwell that had no business being there." | | 2 | "The air changed — lost the wet city smell and took on something older, mustier, layered with incense and metal and things that had no business smelling like cop…" | | 3 | "The space was vast, cathedral-like, supported by thick brick pillars that stretched up into darkness." | | 4 | "Others wore robes, or leathers, or nothing that belonged to any decade she recognized." | | 5 | "Swallowed by the crowd, by the low light, by the maze of stalls and tarps and narrow corridors that disappeared into the gloom." | | 6 | "His left forearm bore a scar that ran from wrist to elbow, clean and deliberate, like a knife had found the exact line it was looking for." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |