Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DG1PH54A012K13BBARZWP

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Duration:
22.1s
Cost:
$0.000547
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered London that night, the kind of slanting, relentless downpour that sent even the hardiest smokers diving for cover. Rory had been meant to clock off at nine, but Yu-Fei had asked her to take one last order to a flat in Covent Garden—a regular who always tipped in crumpled fivers. She’d done it, soaked to the bone for her trouble, and now she stood in the doorway of The Raven’s Nest, shaking water from her hair like a half-drowned cat. The bar was quiet for a Thursday. A few regulars nursed pints at the counter, and Silas was polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. He gave her a nod as she slipped past, the kind of nod that said *I see you, you’re safe, the world is as it is*. Rory hung her jacket on a hook by the door and made for the corner booth where she could dry off and drink something warm. That’s when she saw him. He was perched on a stool at the far end of the bar, half-turned away from her, hunched over a whiskey that had barely been touched. But she knew the set of his shoulders. Knew the way he held his glass, thumb hooked over the rim like he was steadying himself against a fall. She hadn’t seen him in seven years, not since Cardiff, not since she’d packed a single bag and fled everything she knew. “Declan?” He turned. And for a moment, just a flicker, she saw the boy she’d grown up with—the lanky frame, the cowlick at his crown that never stayed down, the easy half-smile that had charmed every barmaid in the Valleys. Then the years settled back into place, and she saw the man he’d become. His face had thinned, carved by angles that hadn’t been there before. Dark hollows sat under his eyes, and there was a stillness to him, a guardedness that made her stomach knot. “Rory Carter.” He said her name like he was testing it, tasting it for accuracy. “Or is it Aurora now? I heard you went all London on us.” “Still Rory,” she said, and slid onto the stool beside him. “And you’re still a prick.” He laughed, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Fair. That’s fair.” Silas appeared without a sound, setting a mug of tea in front of Rory before melting back into the shadows. She wrapped her hands around the warmth, let the steam curl against her face. “I didn’t know you were in London.” “I’m not. Not really.” Declan swirled the amber liquid in his glass but didn’t drink. “Just passing through. Business.” “What kind of business?” He gave her a look then, one that sliced through the small talk. “The kind that doesn’t bear talking about in a bar full of ears.” Rory’s blood chilled, but she kept her face still. Declan had been a footballer when she’d last known him—a decent one, too, scouted by a Championship club before an ankle injury ended it all. He’d been loud and brash and full of fire, the kind of friend who’d pick you up at three in the morning just because you called. This man beside her was a stranger wearing a familiar skin. “Seven years, Declan. You could have called. Written. Something.” “Could’ve.” He finally took a sip of his whiskey, winced like it burned. “Would’ve liked to. But the things I got myself into, Rory… better you didn’t know me then. Better you don’t know me now.” “That’s not your call to make.” He set the glass down, rotated it slowly, watching the light catch the liquor. “Remember the summer we were sixteen? When we stole your father’s car and drove to Porthcawl?” She remembered. Brendan Carter’s ancient Ford Cortina, the tape deck that only played Johnny Cash, the way Declan had driven with his knee on the wheel while he rolled a cigarette one-handed. They’d watched the sunrise from the pier, shivering and giddy, and he’d told her she was the only person who ever made him feel like the world wasn’t a cage. “I think about that night a lot,” she said. “Me too.” He looked at her then, really looked, and for a second the mask cracked. “I think about who I was then. Who I thought I was going to be. And then I look at who I am now, and I don’t know how to bridge the gap. It’s like mourning a version of yourself that died, but you’re still walking around in the corpse.” Rory’s throat tightened. She wanted to reach for him, to grab his hand and pull him back from whatever edge he was balancing on. But she knew that look. She’d worn it herself, in the months after she’d left Evan. The glassy veneer of a person holding themselves together by sheer force of will. “You’re not dead, Declan. You’re sitting in a pub in Soho, drinking expensive whiskey and being dramatic. That’s still living.” A ghost of the old smile flickered across his face. “Always did know how to cut through the bullshit.” “Someone had to.” The door to the bar swung open, letting in a gust of rain and a man in a long coat. He scanned the room, his gaze landing on Declan for a fraction of a second too long before he took a seat at the far end of the counter. Declan didn’t look at him, but Rory saw his jaw tighten, saw his hand slide to his pocket. “I have to go,” he said, and the words came out flat, rehearsed. “Don’t.” “Rory.” He stood, and she saw the limp he’d acquired somewhere along the way, a slight hitch in his right leg. “Some doors, once you walk through them, you can’t come back. I walked through a long time ago. You don’t want to be on the other side with me.” “Then why are you here?” Her voice cracked, and she hated it. “Why this bar? Why tonight?” He paused, and for a moment he looked young again, lost, a boy caught in a storm he hadn’t seen coming. “Because I wanted to see you one last time. Before I couldn’t.” The man in the long coat rose, pulled out his phone, and pushed through the door without a backward glance. A signal, a timer, a countdown Rory couldn’t see. Declan squeezed her shoulder, a brief, hot pressure that said everything words couldn’t. “Take care of yourself, Rory. And for what it’s worth—I’m sorry. For all of it.” He walked out into the rain, and she watched him go, watched the neon green of the sign catch the wet gleam of his coat before the night swallowed him whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"his whiskey winced like [like]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.067
86.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"stomach"
2"warmth"
3"chilled"
4"familiar"
5"flickered"
6"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"see"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords11
totalWords1128
ratio0.01
matches
0"I see you, you’re safe, the world is as it is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount852
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Declan"
discoveredNames
London1
Yu-Fei1
Covent1
Garden1
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Silas2
Cardiff1
Valleys1
Rory7
Championship1
Carter1
Ford1
Cortina1
Johnny1
Cash1
Declan6
Evan1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Carter"
6"Johnny"
7"Cash"
8"Declan"
9"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Covent"
2"Garden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Valleys"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1128
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean33.18
std26.05
cv0.785
sampleLengths
082
180
25
376
41
585
628
716
811
941
1019
114
1226
1371
149
1536
166
1730
1862
199
2066
2154
2220
2319
243
2567
2613
271
2850
2917
3033
3129
3228
3331
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"been meant"
1"was perched"
2"been touched"
23.40% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was steadying"
2"was testing"
3"was balancing"
25.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences73
ratio0.041
matches
0"Rory had been meant to clock off at nine, but Yu-Fei had asked her to take one last order to a flat in Covent Garden—a regular who always tipped in crumpled fivers."
1"And for a moment, just a flicker, she saw the boy she’d grown up with—the lanky frame, the cowlick at his crown that never stayed down, the easy half-smile that had charmed every barmaid in the Valleys."
2"Declan had been a footballer when she’d last known him—a decent one, too, scouted by a Championship club before an ankle injury ended it all."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.026744186046511628
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0069767441860465115
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean15.45
std9.61
cv0.622
sampleLengths
020
132
230
37
422
526
625
75
826
98
1020
1122
121
132
1437
1514
1612
1720
1815
1913
2011
215
228
233
2420
2514
267
2715
284
294
3013
3113
329
3325
3426
3511
369
3713
3823
396
4014
4116
422
4330
4430
459
4616
4750
483
4921
83.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5068493150684932
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners37
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Then the years settled back"
ratio0.02
32.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences49
matches
0"She’d done it, soaked to"
1"He gave her a nod"
2"He was perched on a"
3"She hadn’t seen him in"
4"His face had thinned, carved"
5"He said her name like"
6"she said, and slid onto"
7"He laughed, but it didn’t"
8"She wrapped her hands around"
9"He gave her a look"
10"He’d been loud and brash"
11"He finally took a sip"
12"He set the glass down,"
13"They’d watched the sunrise from"
14"He looked at her then,"
15"She wanted to reach for"
16"She’d worn it herself, in"
17"He scanned the room, his"
18"he said, and the words"
19"He stood, and she saw"
ratio0.469
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences49
matches
0"Rory had been meant to"
1"She’d done it, soaked to"
2"The bar was quiet for"
3"He gave her a nod"
4"Rory hung her jacket on"
5"That’s when she saw him."
6"He was perched on a"
7"She hadn’t seen him in"
8"His face had thinned, carved"
9"Dark hollows sat under his"
10"He said her name like"
11"she said, and slid onto"
12"He laughed, but it didn’t"
13"Silas appeared without a sound,"
14"She wrapped her hands around"
15"Declan swirled the amber liquid"
16"He gave her a look"
17"Rory’s blood chilled, but she"
18"Declan had been a footballer"
19"He’d been loud and brash"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain hammered London that night, the kind of slanting, relentless downpour that sent even the hardiest smokers diving for cover."
1"He gave her a nod as she slipped past, the kind of nod that said *I see you, you’re safe, the world is as it is*."
2"He was perched on a stool at the far end of the bar, half-turned away from her, hunched over a whiskey that had barely been touched."
3"And for a moment, just a flicker, she saw the boy she’d grown up with—the lanky frame, the cowlick at his crown that never stayed down, the easy half-smile that…"
4"Dark hollows sat under his eyes, and there was a stillness to him, a guardedness that made her stomach knot."
5"Declan squeezed her shoulder, a brief, hot pressure that said everything words couldn’t."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, and the words came out flat, rehearsed"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.3862%