| 63.64% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said slowly [slowly]" | | 2 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.318 | | leniency | 0.636 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |
| 90.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "methodical" | | 2 | "crystal" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1550 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.3 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 23 | | Town | 1 | | Jubilee | 1 | | Constable | 1 | | Davies | 3 | | Southwark | 2 | | Museum | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | Market | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Constable" | | 2 | "Davies" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Town" | | 1 | "Southwark" | | 2 | "Museum" |
| | globalScore | 0.348 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.645 | | wordCount | 1550 | | matches | | 0 | "not north, but pointing at a slight angle, toward the tunnel wall" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 71 | | mean | 21.83 | | std | 15.49 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 53 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "been dropped" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "were scuffed" | | 4 | "been dragged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was tucking" | | 1 | "was pointing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air hit Quinn first—the particular must of old brick and rat droppings and something metallic underneath, like old coins left too long in a pocket." | | 1 | "“Detective Quinn.” The uniform at the top of the stairs—Constable Davies—waved her forward." | | 2 | "Eva held up a small leather folder—identification from the Museum's liaison office, granting her access to certain archaeological sites." | | 3 | "She noted the position of the arms—the left hand palm-up, empty; the right clutching the compass." | | 4 | "Quinn tapped the crystal—the second hand was sweeping steadily." | | 5 | "The Market was supposed to be here—but there was no sign of it." | | 6 | "The tiles near the wall were scuffed—faint, almost invisible marks, as if something heavy had been dragged sideways." | | 7 | "But the floor was clean—recently swept, no dust." | | 8 | "The direction of its needle—not north, but pointing at a slight angle, toward the tunnel wall." | | 9 | "The man with the compass, who had died holding a tool that pointed toward something that didn't exist—or shouldn't." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 669 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.025411061285500747 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007473841554559043 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 9.69 | | std | 8.44 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 40.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.26875 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked under the police" | | 1 | "He looked pale, his torch" | | 2 | "She stepped onto the platform" | | 3 | "Her throat tightened." | | 4 | "She forced the memory down." | | 5 | "His mouth was slightly parted," | | 6 | "She didn't recognize the sigils." | | 7 | "She wore a worn leather" | | 8 | "She stepped forward, and Quinn" | | 9 | "She noted the position of" | | 10 | "She knelt and examined the" | | 11 | "She looked at the date" | | 12 | "It showed the 14th." | | 13 | "she said quietly" | | 14 | "She turned to Davies." | | 15 | "She faced Eva again." | | 16 | "She crouched again, this time" | | 17 | "She followed the marks to" | | 18 | "He handed it over." | | 19 | "She turned back to the" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air hit Quinn" | | 1 | "She ducked under the police" | | 2 | "Camden Town's abandoned Jubilee line" | | 3 | "The official records said structural" | | 4 | "Quinn had never believed that," | | 5 | "The uniform at the top" | | 6 | "He looked pale, his torch" | | 7 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 8 | "She stepped onto the platform" | | 9 | "The body lay in the" | | 10 | "Her throat tightened." | | 11 | "She forced the memory down." | | 12 | "Quinn crouched, careful not to" | | 13 | "The man's eyes were open," | | 14 | "His mouth was slightly parted," | | 15 | "She didn't recognize the sigils." | | 16 | "This wasn't off-the-shelf." | | 17 | "Davies shook his head." | | 18 | "Quinn studied the floor." | | 19 | "A thin layer of dust" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Male, forties, wearing a long coat that was too clean for this place." | | 1 | "She wore a worn leather satchel across her body, and she was tucking a strand of hair behind her ear in a gesture that looked nervous but practiced." | | 2 | "The tiles near the wall were scuffed—faint, almost invisible marks, as if something heavy had been dragged sideways." | | 3 | "The man with the compass, who had died holding a tool that pointed toward something that didn't exist—or shouldn't." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.227 | | leniency | 0.455 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |