| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s form flickered momentarily [momentarily]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.632 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 95.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1164 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1164 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "desire" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1154 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 985 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 1 | | Aurora | 11 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Belphegor | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.942 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like tiny bones snapping" | | 1 | "mouth that seemed to stretch too wide for his face" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.867 | | wordCount | 1154 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with a groan, but with a sigh" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 46.16 | | std | 32.47 | | cv | 0.703 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 96 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 85 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 100 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 121 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 36 |
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| 91.59% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been braided" | | 2 | "was made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "was cloying" | | 1 | "was eating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade had taken a solid form for the crossing—a tall, dark silhouette against the amber glow, violet eyes fixed on the horizon." | | 1 | "It had been doing that since they stepped through the rift in Richmond Park—Isolde’s grove, with its standing stones and time-slipping wildflowers, had spat them out here, into Hel’s own belly." | | 2 | "Their trunks spiraled upward as if twisted by an invisible hand, bark smooth as polished copper, and from their branches hung fruit that pulsed with a soft, internal glow—pear-shaped, the color of molten gold." | | 3 | "Every few yards, they passed openings in the underbrush—narrow, winding trails that led to grottos and clearings." | | 4 | "The bridge was made of bones—femurs, ribs, vertebrae—lashed together with vines that grew roots into the marrow." | | 5 | "The bridge ended at a gate of living wood—branches woven together that shifted and grew as she watched, thorns like iron nails pressing outward." | | 6 | "And at the far end, on a dais of polished obsidian, a figure lounged on a throne of fused silverware—forks and knives and spoons melted together into a grotesque seat." | | 7 | "Then he smiled, and his teeth were all wrong—too many, too sharp." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 996 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.023092369477911646 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0050200803212851405 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.74 | | std | 9.29 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 68.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.44047619047619047 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he smiled, and his" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 94.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "It came from everywhere at" | | 1 | "She stepped off the cobblestone" | | 2 | "Their voice came from everywhere" | | 3 | "Their form rippled in the" | | 4 | "It had been doing that" | | 5 | "She let the pendant fall" | | 6 | "Their trunks spiraled upward as" | | 7 | "They walked beneath the spiraled" | | 8 | "She caught glimpses: a stone" | | 9 | "It swayed gently in a" | | 10 | "Their weight did not make" | | 11 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 12 | "She felt it in her" | | 13 | "She heard music then, faint" | | 14 | "It had no handle." | | 15 | "He was enormous, soft and" | | 16 | "He did not stop when" | | 17 | "She slipped her hand into" | | 18 | "He tore a leg off" | | 19 | "He gestured with the bone" |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky of Dymas" | | 1 | "It came from everywhere at" | | 2 | "She stepped off the cobblestone" | | 3 | "Their voice came from everywhere" | | 4 | "The Shade had taken a" | | 5 | "Their form rippled in the" | | 6 | "Aurora’s hand went to the" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 8 | "It had been doing that" | | 9 | "The grove was gone now." | | 10 | "She let the pendant fall" | | 11 | "A grove of trees rose" | | 12 | "Their trunks spiraled upward as" | | 13 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 14 | "Aurora pulled her hand back," | | 15 | "The fruit’s glow seemed to" | | 16 | "They walked beneath the spiraled" | | 17 | "The air grew heavier." | | 18 | "Every few yards, they passed" | | 19 | "She caught glimpses: a stone" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone, a steady, patient warmth that matched the rhythmic thrum of the air around them." | | 1 | "Their trunks spiraled upward as if twisted by an invisible hand, bark smooth as polished copper, and from their branches hung fruit that pulsed with a soft, int…" | | 2 | "Every few yards, they passed openings in the underbrush—narrow, winding trails that led to grottos and clearings." | | 3 | "On the far side, a city sprawled: towers of amber glass, roofs that curved like open mouths, and in the center, a palace of flesh and stone entwined, its walls …" | | 4 | "She heard music then, faint and distorted, as if played underwater: strings, a flute, and something that might have been a scream." | | 5 | "Tables stretched into the distance, groaning under the weight of platters: whole roasted boars with apples in their mouths, towers of glazed pastries, fish that…" | | 6 | "He was enormous, soft and pale as unbaked dough, with fingers like sausages and a mouth that seemed to stretch too wide for his face." | | 7 | "Belphegor’s laugh was a wet, rattling sound that shook his belly." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, her voice thin" | | 1 | "Belphegor said, without looking up" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |