Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DJD9KEWHVVY0HQSHNGT7M

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.002244
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the asphalt in silver needles, each droplet catching the amber glow of streetlamps before shattering against the pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather-soled shoes fought for purchase as she rounded the corner onto Brewer Street, her quarry a blur of motion thirty yards ahead. The man—mid-twenties, olive-skinned, dark curls plastered to his forehead—glanced back. Streetlight carved his face into stark relief. Recognition flickered through Quinn’s mind. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. Current person of interest in three ongoing investigations. “Herrera! Stop!” He didn’t. Quinn pumped her arms harder, the worn leather watch band biting into her wrist with each stride. Eighteen years on the force and her body still responded with military precision—breathing controlled, footfalls measured, eyes tracking every micro-adjustment in her target’s trajectory. Herrera cut left into an alley. Quinn followed without hesitation. The alley stank of rotting produce and stale beer. Overflowing bins lined both walls, forcing them into single file. Herrera kicked a trash can behind him. Metal screamed against cobblestone. Quinn vaulted it clean, one hand bracing against the slick brick wall. “Metropolitan Police!” Her voice bounced off the narrow corridor. “You’re only making this worse!” Ahead, the alley dead-ended at a rusted fire escape. Herrera launched himself at the ladder, fingers catching the bottom rung. The mechanism screeched down with a sound like grinding bones. He climbed. Quinn reached the ladder three seconds later. Her palms stung with cold as she pulled herself up, rung after slick rung, until the alley yawned beneath her like an open throat. Six stories up, Herrera disappeared over the roof’s edge. She hauled herself onto the gravel-scattered rooftop. The London skyline sprawled before her—a jagged silhouette of glass and steel punctuated by the distant wink of the Shard. Rain needled her face. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair dripped water into her eyes. Herrera stood at the opposite edge, chest heaving. Between them stretched a ten-foot gap to the next building. “Don’t.” Quinn raised both hands, palms out. “Broken legs won’t help either of us.” He laughed—a short, breathless sound. “You think I’m worried about broken legs?” His accent carried the warmth of southern Spain. Rain plastered his shirt to his chest, revealing the outline of a medallion beneath the fabric. “You don’t know what you’re chasing, Detective.” “Then enlighten me.” Herrera’s eyes flicked to the gap between buildings. Back to Quinn. Something passed across his face—not fear. Calculation. “You lost someone,” he said. “Three years ago. Your partner.” Quinn’s jaw tightened until her teeth ached. “Morris,” Herrera continued. “The official report said cardiac arrest. But we both know that’s not what happened.” “How do you know about Morris?” “Because I treated people like him.” Herrera edged sideways along the roof’s lip. “People whose bodies did things medical science can’t explain. And I recognized the signs in his autopsy photos before someone made those photos disappear.” Lightning split the sky. In its flash, Quinn saw the scar running along Herrera’s left forearm—a pale ribbon of healed tissue, too clean for a random knife attack. “Who are you working for?” Quinn advanced one step. Two. “Working for?” Another laugh, this one tinged with something darker. “I’m running from the same thing you’ve been hunting without knowing it. The same thing that killed Morris.” Without warning, Herrera sprinted for the gap. His body arced across the void, arms pinwheeling, and landed in a roll on the adjacent rooftop. He came up running. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She backed up five paces, charged forward, and launched herself into open air. For one suspended heartbeat, there was nothing beneath her but six stories of rain and darkness. Her shoulder struck gravel. Pain lanced through her collarbone. She tumbled, came up gasping, and kept moving. Herrera had already reached a roof access door. It hung open on rusted hinges, revealing unlit stairs spiraling downward. Quinn plunged after him. The stairs descended further than the building should have allowed. Past ground level. Past basement. The air grew thick with the scent of wet stone and something older—incense, maybe, or ozone before a storm. Electric bulbs caged in wire flickered along the walls, their light a sickly yellow. Quinn’s feet found level ground. She stood in a concrete tunnel, the kind that honeycombed London’s underground—abandoned Tube infrastructure, maintenance corridors, Victorian-era drainage systems. The rain had become a distant percussion above. Herrera’s footsteps echoed ahead. She followed. The tunnel opened abruptly into a vast chamber that should not exist beneath Camden. Quinn stumbled to a halt, her detective’s mind struggling to catalogue what she saw. Stalls of salvaged wood and corrugated metal lined a concourse lit by floating orbs of blue-white light. Merchants hawked wares from behind tables draped in velvet and bone. Glass vials bubbled without heat sources. Leather-bound books whispered to themselves in languages Quinn didn’t recognize. In one corner, a woman with too many joints in her fingers examined a customer’s palm while the customer’s blood floated in delicate spheres above her hand. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers in interrogation rooms, seen references in files that supervisors told her to forget. A supernatural black market that moved with the full moon. Entry required a bone token. Herrera stood twenty feet away, speaking urgently to a tall figure shrouded in grey cloth. The figure’s hood turned toward Quinn. Beneath it, she glimpsed features that shifted like heat mirage. “You led her here.” The grey figure’s voice resonated at frequencies that made Quinn’s molars ache. “She needs to understand.” Herrera’s hand closed around the medallion at his throat. “You owe me for the bone-wright’s fever. Three nights I kept her breathing. Three nights.” The grey figure tilted its head at an angle that defied anatomy. “The debt is acknowledged. But entering without token carries consequence. For her as well.” Quinn’s hand drifted toward the holster beneath her jacket. Standard-issue Glock. She had no idea if bullets worked on anything in this room. “Herrea.” She kept her voice level. “Step away from him. Whatever this is, whatever’s happening here, we can handle it above ground. My way.” “Your way got your partner killed.” Herrera moved to stand beside the grey figure, putting both of them in Quinn’s field of vision. “Morris stumbled onto something the force didn’t want investigated. Something that lives in the spaces between what you can prove and what you can’t.” The market had gone quiet. Dozens of faces—some human, some approaching the idea of human—watched the standoff. In the orb-light, Quinn could see the details of Herrera’s exhaustion: the bruise-purple shadows beneath his warm brown eyes, the tremor in his scarred left arm, the way his weight shifted as though standing still required conscious effort. The grey figure extended a hand. Long fingers. Too many knuckles. “You have a choice, Detective. Return to the surface. Forget what you’ve seen. Or follow us deeper.” “Don’t,” Herrera said, but his voice cracked on the word. “You’ve already seen too much. They’ll make you forget anyway. That’s what they do.” Quinn’s watch ticked against her wrist—sober, mundane, real. Above her, London carried on in blissful ignorance. Below, the Market waited with its impossible lights and its shifting promises. She thought of Morris. The way his eyes had looked that final night, fixed on something she couldn’t see. The official report: cardiac arrest. The unofficial truth: a body drained of something that wasn’t blood, found in a room locked from the inside. “Forget,” Quinn repeated. “Like they made me forget what happened to him.” Herrera’s expression shifted. For the first time, something other than fear surfaced. Recognition. “You remember.” “Flashes. Dreams.” She never spoke of them. Not to the department therapist. Not to anyone. “I remember enough to know I’m not walking away a second time.” The grey figure made a sound that might have been amusement. A bone token appeared in its palm—small, carved from something that glowed faintly blue. It pressed the token into Herrera’s hand. “Her debt is yours now. If she follows, she is your responsibility. Should she falter, should she betray, the price falls on you.” Herrera’s fingers closed around the token. He looked at Quinn across the impossible market, rain still dripping from his curls, medallion glinting at his throat. “They killed Morris because he found proof,” Herrera said. “I have that proof now. Names. Places. Evidence that crosses from their world into ours and back again.” He held up the bone token. “This gets you past the first door. But there’s no coming back as the person you were.” The market waited. The grey figure waited. Herrera waited, offering a choice that Quinn understood would change everything she thought she knew about her city, her career, and the partner she failed to save. Lightning flashed somewhere above ground. The Market’s floating orbs pulsed in sympathetic rhythm. Quinn stepped forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera’s hand closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.053
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"resonated"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"flickered"
2"measured"
3"warmth"
4"flicked"
5"tinged"
6"charged"
7"electric"
8"footsteps"
9"echoed"
10"velvet"
11"resonated"
12"standard"
13"weight"
14"glinting"
15"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1469
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1142
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn27
Brewer1
Street1
Herrera23
Ahead1
London3
Shard1
Spain1
Rain3
Lightning2
Two1
Tube1
Victorian-era1
Camden1
Veil1
Market3
Glock1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Rain"
4"Lightning"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
2"London"
3"Spain"
globalScore0.318
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though standing still required conscious effort"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1469
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"files that supervisors"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean25.33
std14.88
cv0.587
sampleLengths
045
134
22
32
441
510
642
714
832
940
1041
1118
1214
1343
143
1518
1610
177
1817
196
2037
2128
2210
2328
2428
2516
2616
2717
2823
2948
3032
316
3228
3371
3435
3531
3616
3728
3826
3923
4024
4147
4255
4328
4424
4528
4643
4712
4813
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences148
ratio0.074
matches
0"The man—mid-twenties, olive-skinned, dark curls plastered to his forehead—glanced back."
1"Eighteen years on the force and her body still responded with military precision—breathing controlled, footfalls measured, eyes tracking every micro-adjustment in her target’s trajectory."
2"The London skyline sprawled before her—a jagged silhouette of glass and steel punctuated by the distant wink of the Shard."
3"He laughed—a short, breathless sound."
4"Something passed across his face—not fear."
5"In its flash, Quinn saw the scar running along Herrera’s left forearm—a pale ribbon of healed tissue, too clean for a random knife attack."
6"The air grew thick with the scent of wet stone and something older—incense, maybe, or ozone before a storm."
7"She stood in a concrete tunnel, the kind that honeycombed London’s underground—abandoned Tube infrastructure, maintenance corridors, Victorian-era drainage systems."
8"Dozens of faces—some human, some approaching the idea of human—watched the standoff."
9"Quinn’s watch ticked against her wrist—sober, mundane, real."
10"A bone token appeared in its palm—small, carved from something that glowed faintly blue."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.017964071856287425
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00427715996578272
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean9.93
std6.79
cv0.684
sampleLengths
020
125
210
37
45
52
62
78
82
92
1017
1124
126
134
149
1510
167
174
1812
199
205
219
2211
2310
242
257
2624
279
287
2920
304
3110
328
3310
347
357
365
3715
3816
397
403
418
423
436
441
455
465
477
483
4914
71.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4527027027027027
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners67
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Too many knuckles."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences112
matches
0"Her voice bounced off the"
1"Her palms stung with cold"
2"She hauled herself onto the"
3"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
4"He laughed—a short, breathless sound."
5"His accent carried the warmth"
6"His body arced across the"
7"He came up running."
8"She backed up five paces,"
9"Her shoulder struck gravel."
10"She tumbled, came up gasping,"
11"It hung open on rusted"
12"She stood in a concrete"
13"She had no idea if"
14"She kept her voice level"
15"She thought of Morris."
16"She never spoke of them"
17"It pressed the token into"
18"He looked at Quinn across"
19"He held up the bone"
ratio0.179
62.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences112
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather-soled shoes"
1"The man—mid—twenties, olive-skinned, dark curls"
2"Streetlight carved his face into"
3"Recognition flickered through Quinn’s mind."
4"Quinn pumped her arms harder,"
5"Herrera cut left into an"
6"Quinn followed without hesitation."
7"The alley stank of rotting"
8"Herrera kicked a trash can"
9"Metal screamed against cobblestone."
10"Quinn vaulted it clean, one"
11"Her voice bounced off the"
12"Herrera launched himself at the"
13"The mechanism screeched down with"
14"Quinn reached the ladder three"
15"Her palms stung with cold"
16"She hauled herself onto the"
17"The London skyline sprawled before"
18"Rain needled her face."
19"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She stood in a concrete tunnel, the kind that honeycombed London’s underground—abandoned Tube infrastructure, maintenance corridors, Victorian-era drainage syst…"
1"A supernatural black market that moved with the full moon."
2"Beneath it, she glimpsed features that shifted like heat mirage."
3"In the orb-light, Quinn could see the details of Herrera’s exhaustion: the bruise-purple shadows beneath his warm brown eyes, the tremor in his scarred left arm…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Herrera said, but his voice cracked on the word"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Herrera continued (continue)"
1"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.105
83.5569%