Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DKMWQXEQPRJXKW3ZDZFKZ

Run Details

Duration:
46.3s
Cost:
$0.001716
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her bike off the gravel path and leaned it against the trunk of a larch, the frame ticking as it cooled. The ride from Kingston had chewed up forty minutes, the last stretch through Richmond Park a blind slog past deer that loomed out of the dark like stone monuments. She’d nearly ditched the bike twice on the uneven ground. The pendant. She unzipped her jacket and fished it out from under two layers. The Heartstone lay against her sternum, dead and cold as glass. That wasn’t right. For three days it had pulsed whenever she faced southwest, a steady warmth that seeped through her shirt like a living thing. The sensation had grown insistent enough that she’d dug out Eva’s handwritten map, the one with the standing stones circled in red biro, and here she was. Chasing a breadcrumb trail left by a gemstone. Now nothing. Rory cupped the pendant in her palm. The crimson stone sat inert, no deeper than costume jewellery. She ran her thumb across its surface and felt only the smooth chill of something asleep. Wind slipped through the oaks and brought with it a sound that didn’t belong. A hum. Low and brief, like a finger dragged around the rim of a glass. It came from beyond the treeline to her left and faded before she could fix its direction. Rory pocketed the pendant and stood still, listening. The park at night was never truly silent—London’s ambient growl rode the air even here—but this section of the grove had swallowed sound. No traffic. No distant sirens. The breeze stirred the leaves and then stopped, as if it had been switched off. She unclipped the small torch from her belt loop and clicked it on. The beam cut a white path through the undergrowth and found the standing stones fifty yards ahead. Three oaks, petrified to grey, their trunks fused at the base into a rough arch. Eva’s map called them the boundary markers. What they marked, the notes hadn’t said. Rory approached with the torch held low, sweeping the ground for roots. Her boots crunched on dead bracken. The sound was too loud, each step a dry snap that seemed to carry further than it should. At the edge of the stone circle she stopped. The air here had weight. It pressed against her eardrums the way cabin pressure did on a descent, and she swallowed to clear it. The torch beam wobbled across the central oak’s trunk and picked out shapes that weren’t bark—carvings, worn smooth by weather, spirals and loops that seemed to shift as the light moved over them. She reached out to touch one. Warmth shot up her arm. The pendant had ignited against her chest, a sudden bloom of heat that made her gasp. She yanked the chain free and held it up. The Heartstone glowed, properly glowed, a deep arterial red that painted her fingers the color of a wound. And then something laughed. Not a human laugh. Not an animal, either. It came from everywhere at once—a dry, rattling exhalation like dead leaves scraping across pavement. It lasted three seconds and cut off with a wet click. Rory backed away from the arch. The pendant’s light strobed once and died, leaving her with the torch’s thin beam and a heart that had climbed into her throat. “Right,” she said, her voice a croak. Speaking aloud felt like throwing a stone into a well. “Eva sent me. My name is Rory Carter. I’m not here to cause trouble.” Silence pressed in from all sides. The grove held its breath. She waited. Counted to thirty. The pendant stayed cold. Something moved at the edge of the torch beam. A shift in the darkness between two trees, low to the ground, too fluid for a deer. Rory snapped the light toward it and caught nothing but the afterimage of motion burned onto her retina. The bracken there was still trembling. She took another step back and her heel met something that rolled. Rory looked down. Phone. Screen cracked, case spattered with mud. The make was recent, an iPhone in a clear MagSafe case with a photo slide inside—two women, arms linked, both grinning. She didn’t recognize the faces but the photo was faded, the edges curling. It had lain here long enough for rain to seep under the plastic. She set it down with care. Her fingers had gone cold. The standing stones stood patient as gallows. Beyond them the clearing opened into a space that didn’t match the park she’d entered. Wildflowers dotted the grass despite the season—cornflowers and poppies, bright as paint drops in the torchlight. Their scent reached her, too sweet, cloying as overripe fruit. A second sound joined the first. Rustling. Low and constant, like a body dragging itself across the forest floor. It circled the clearing, keeping to the dark outside her light. Rory didn’t run. Running was what they always did in films and then they tripped and the camera cut away. She stood her ground and swung the torch in a slow arc, section by section, forcing herself to look. Tree. Stone. Flower bed. Shadow that didn’t move. Wait. She swung back. The shadow was still there, a huddle of deeper dark between two birch trunks. It had shape—roughly human, crouched, head tilted at an angle spines didn’t allow. The torch beam struck it and did nothing. No reflection of eyes, no detail. Just a negation of light. The rustling stopped. The shadow straightened. It moved wrong, joints articulating in sequence rather than in unison, and rose until it stood head and shoulders above her own height. A shape like an arm unspooled from its side and reached toward her with fingers that were too long, too many, each joint bending in directions that left no silhouette on the ground. Rory’s thumb found the pendant. She pressed the stone hard against her palm and felt it pulse once, a single strong heartbeat, as if testing her resolve. “I’m not here to fight,” she said. “I’m here to understand.” The arm stopped. The shadow cocked its head further, bending until its featureless face was parallel with the grass. Then it spoke. “Pretty little thing.” Not a voice so much as a vibration in her molars, words assembled from the creak of branches and the buzz of flies. “What shall we do with her?” A second voice answered from behind her—plummy, theatrical, startlingly close. “She carries a trinket. I quite like trinkets.” Rory didn’t turn. Turning meant taking her eyes off the thing in front of her and whatever spoke behind was close enough to feel. The air at her back had warmed, carrying a smell like mulled wine and damp velvet. The shadow in front folded itself back down into a crouch with a sound like old paper crumpling. “Bored now. She’s not screaming.” “Give her time,” the second voice purred. “They always scream eventually.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"pulse"
7"resolve"
8"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1110
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Kingston1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Eva2
London1
Speaking1
MagSafe1
Rory10
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Speaking"
3"Rory"
places
0"Kingston"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
9.15% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"snap that seemed to carry further than it should"
1"loops that seemed to shift as the light moved over them"
2"felt like throwing a stone into a well"
3"as if testing her resolve"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1163
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.08
std21.17
cv0.728
sampleLengths
062
12
283
32
433
514
632
78
843
959
1036
1166
126
1348
144
1534
1629
1731
1811
199
2050
2112
2257
2311
2448
2530
2647
271
2849
293
3059
3127
3211
3319
343
3532
3618
3740
3823
3911
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"been switched"
1"was faded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was still trembling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences112
ratio0.063
matches
0"The park at night was never truly silent—London’s ambient growl rode the air even here—but this section of the grove had swallowed sound."
1"The torch beam wobbled across the central oak’s trunk and picked out shapes that weren’t bark—carvings, worn smooth by weather, spirals and loops that seemed to shift as the light moved over them."
2"It came from everywhere at once—a dry, rattling exhalation like dead leaves scraping across pavement."
3"The make was recent, an iPhone in a clear MagSafe case with a photo slide inside—two women, arms linked, both grinning."
4"Wildflowers dotted the grass despite the season—cornflowers and poppies, bright as paint drops in the torchlight."
5"It had shape—roughly human, crouched, head tilted at an angle spines didn’t allow."
6"A second voice answered from behind her—plummy, theatrical, startlingly close."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03309481216457961
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005366726296958855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean10.38
std7.41
cv0.714
sampleLengths
023
129
210
32
412
511
63
722
827
98
102
117
1210
1316
1414
152
1613
1717
188
1923
202
213
2215
2313
2417
2515
267
277
2812
296
3018
319
325
3319
3433
356
365
3716
389
3918
404
414
424
4315
4411
456
4623
477
4810
4914
60.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4017857142857143
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners45
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just a negation of light."
1"Then it spoke."
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences94
matches
0"She’d nearly ditched the bike"
1"She unzipped her jacket and"
2"She ran her thumb across"
3"It came from beyond the"
4"She unclipped the small torch"
5"Her boots crunched on dead"
6"It pressed against her eardrums"
7"She reached out to touch"
8"She yanked the chain free"
9"It came from everywhere at"
10"It lasted three seconds and"
11"she said, her voice a"
12"She took another step back"
13"She didn’t recognize the faces"
14"It had lain here long"
15"She set it down with"
16"Her fingers had gone cold."
17"Their scent reached her, too"
18"It circled the clearing, keeping"
19"She stood her ground and"
ratio0.255
71.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences94
matches
0"Rory pulled her bike off"
1"The ride from Kingston had"
2"She’d nearly ditched the bike"
3"She unzipped her jacket and"
4"The Heartstone lay against her"
5"That wasn’t right."
6"The sensation had grown insistent"
7"Rory cupped the pendant in"
8"The crimson stone sat inert,"
9"She ran her thumb across"
10"Wind slipped through the oaks"
11"It came from beyond the"
12"Rory pocketed the pendant and"
13"The park at night was"
14"The breeze stirred the leaves"
15"She unclipped the small torch"
16"The beam cut a white"
17"Eva’s map called them the"
18"Rory approached with the torch"
19"Her boots crunched on dead"
ratio0.777
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The ride from Kingston had chewed up forty minutes, the last stretch through Richmond Park a blind slog past deer that loomed out of the dark like stone monumen…"
1"For three days it had pulsed whenever she faced southwest, a steady warmth that seeped through her shirt like a living thing."
2"The pendant had ignited against her chest, a sudden bloom of heat that made her gasp."
3"She took another step back and her heel met something that rolled."
4"A shape like an arm unspooled from its side and reached toward her with fingers that were too long, too many, each joint bending in directions that left no silh…"
5"She pressed the stone hard against her palm and felt it pulse once, a single strong heartbeat, as if testing her resolve."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice a croak"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.7104%