Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DM212HK3NG8GQ8Z9KR1C4

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Duration:
1m 52s
Cost:
$0.003414
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stale air in the abandoned Tube tunnel tasted of old soot and something sharper—dried herbs, maybe, or ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn swept her torch across the platform, the beam cutting through a haze of dust motes that churned like a living thing. The stairs from the Camden street had descended into a warren of Victorian brick, and here, at the bottom, the station opened into a cavernous void where the tracks once ran. Makeshift stalls lined the walls, their tables empty but for scattered glass vials and twists of copper wire. A generator-powered floodlight threw harsh white light over a cluster of uniformed officers near the far end, their shadows stretched long and distorted. Quinn ducked under a sagging ribbon of crime scene tape. Her left wrist ached from the cold, the worn leather watch strap chafing against the bone. She counted eighteen years on the force and the last three had each begun with her partner’s empty chair. Morris would have made a wry comment about the location. She swallowed the thought and approached the huddle of bodies. Detective Sergeant Nathan Webb straightened from his crouch beside a sprawled figure. He was thirty-two, a year out of plainclothes training, and his tie had already loosened into a lopsided knot. “Detective Quinn. Didn’t expect you so soon.” “You caught a body in a place that’s not on any map. I’m here.” She stopped at the edge of the makeshift stall, her eyes moving across the scene. A man lay on his back, arms at his sides, legs straight as if he’d been arranged. His coat, a long leather duster, gaped open to reveal a striped shirt dyed black across the throat. No pooling. No arterial spray misting the stall’s canvas awning. The concrete beneath him was dry as dust. Webb followed her gaze. “Throat cut. We’re thinking mugging. Look at the place—obviously a black-market operation. Illegal goods, no witnesses, someone got greedy.” He gestured at the empty tables. “They probably cleared out when the killer bolted.” Quinn didn’t answer. She pulled on a pair of nitrile gloves and circled the body. The man’s skin held a waxy pallor, his jaw slack, eyes half-closed. Early forties, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His shoes were unlaced, the tongues drooping over the eyelets. She noted the absence of scuff marks on the heels. If he’d dragged himself or been dragged, the leather would show it. The floor told the same story—no smears, no disturbance in the powdery grime. “Who called it in?” she asked. “Anonymous tip. Female voice, called from a burner phone, said we’d find a body at the old Camden Town deep-level shelter. We thought it was a prank until one of the uniforms spotted a broken grate and followed the tunnel.” Webb pulled out a phone and showed her a time stamp. “Call came at 3:42 a.m. Body was cold by the time we got here, but no rigor yet.” Quinn crouched. The man’s right hand rested on his stomach. His left was clenched around something—a small brass object, the patina a sickly green of verdigris. She gently pried the fingers open. Inside the curl of his palm lay a compass, its face etched with symbols that didn’t belong to any cartographic tradition. Sigils. Warding marks. A shudder crawled up her spine, the same sensation she’d felt when she’d found Morris’s body in that alley, a scatter of stones placed in a ring around him. “Some kind of antique,” Webb said, leaning over her shoulder. “Probably boosted from one of these stalls. Junk.” The needle beneath the glass dome flickered as Quinn rotated the compass. North wasn’t north. It swung in a lazy circle before settling on the body itself, pointing directly at the man’s chest. She shifted her position and the needle followed, unwavering. “Defective,” Webb added. Quinn ignored him. She lifted the compass closer to her face. The sigils looked burned into the brass, not engraved. The needle twitched when she angled it toward the rear wall of the platform, where a brick archway had been sealed with newer, paler bricks. A damp breeze oozed through the mortar, carrying the scent of rotting flowers. The needle jerked again, quivering like a magnet drawn to lodestone. “This body wasn’t moved after the kill,” she said, not looking away from the archway. “No blood trail, no drag marks. His shoes are untied but the laces aren’t frayed. He didn’t walk here.” Webb offered a thin laugh. “He was carried, then. Killer and accomplice.” “Then why tie his shoes poorly? If you carry a body, you don’t fiddle with his laces.” She stood and pointed at the man’s wrists. “No ligature marks. No defensive wounds. He wasn’t restrained. Look at the throat wound—clean, one swipe, left to right. A right-handed assailant but no hesitation marks. Professional.” “Or a junkie with a straight razor and a lucky swing.” Webb’s voice carried the edge of someone eager to book a simple case and move on. Quinn stepped over to the stall’s counter. A scattering of glass vials, some cracked, glittered under her torchlight. A thin layer of soot had settled over everything except a rectangular patch where something had recently sat. She traced the outline with a gloved finger—a box, maybe, or a book. Next to the void sat a small object, pale and curved, no longer than her thumb. She picked it up. Bone, carved into a rough crescent and pierced at one end like a pendant. The surface bore the same sigil pattern as the compass. “Webb, what’s this?” The younger detective squinted. “Trash. Place is full of it.” She turned the token over in her palm. The edges were worn smooth from years of handling, but the dust near it was undisturbed until she’d disturbed it. The token had been placed, not dropped. Intentional. A marker, maybe—or a key. “Run the prints on this token, and on the compass.” She bagged both separately. “You’re going full forensics on a piece of bone and a busted compass?” Webb spread his arms, encompassing the empty stalls. “We’ve got an illegal market. We’ve got a dead man with his throat cut. Take the win.” Quinn swept her torch along the platform’s arched ceiling. The deeper recesses of the station swallowed the light. She felt it then—a pressure in her ears, a low thrum at the edge of hearing, like a train rumbling miles away. The bricked-up archway drew her gaze again. New mortar, but jagged cracks webbed outward from the center, and within those cracks, a sliver of absolute black that didn’t reflect the floodlight. “What’s behind that wall?” she asked. Webb consulted a tablet. “Original tunnel—collapsed twenty years ago during the Camden flood defence work. Sealed off by the city. Nothing but mud.” The compass needle in the evidence bag still pointed that way. Quinn was certain it had tugged in her grip, not with magnetism but with something else, a silent urgency. She thought of Morris’s autopsy report, the coroner’s note about “unexplained cellular degradation” and the symbol carved into his ribs that no one could identify. She’d buried that file. She was burying nothing tonight. “Cordon off the whole station,” she said. “I want a forensics sweep—full Luminol, every stall, every crack. And I want that wall examined. If it’s cracked, there might be access.” “It’s a solid brick wall, boss. You think the killer crawled through a fissure?” “I think the evidence doesn’t fit the narrative you’re selling. A throat-cut victim without a drop of blood on the floor. A black market that vanished in hours without leaving a single crate or bag behind. A compass that points to a sealed wall.” She turned to face him, her voice flat. “One of those things is a puzzle. Three is a pattern.” Webb’s jaw tightened, but he gave a curt nod and began relaying orders. Quinn walked to the archway, the beam of her torch playing over the bricks. The draft from the cracks lifted the short hairs on her neck. She pressed a gloved hand against the mortar and felt the faintest vibration, rhythmic, like a slow heartbeat. The compass in her pocket ticked audibly, its needle rapping against the glass. She stepped back and looked at the body once more, the unlaced shoes, the placed token, the clean kill. A professional hit in a hidden market, but the killer had taken nothing and left a compass that functioned like no instrument she’d ever seen. The woman who’d called it in knew the location—knew it well enough to bypass the locked grate and leave no trace. A witness who didn’t want to be interviewed. That spoke of insiders, of a community that policed its own secrets. But why arrange the body for police discovery? To send a message. To whom? Harlow Quinn pulled a small notebook from her coat and sketched the sigils from the compass face, her pencil moving with quick precision. She wouldn’t guess. She would assemble. She would find that woman, and she would find out what lay behind a wall that shouldn’t breathe and shouldn’t beat. Her partner had died trying to answer a question he never got to finish. This time, she would get the answer. The station around her fell silent, save for the tiny, persistent ticking of the compass, counting down to something she could not yet name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"churned"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"unwavering"
count1
6
word"restrained"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"eyebrow"
2"stomach"
3"etched"
4"flickered"
5"unwavering"
6"restrained"
7"traced"
8"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1569
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1186
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Webb"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow2
Quinn11
Camden1
Victorian1
Sergeant1
Nathan1
Webb10
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Nathan"
4"Webb"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.637
wordCount1569
matches
0"not with magnetism but with something else, a silent urgency"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"buried that file"
1"find that woman"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean46.15
std31.55
cv0.684
sampleLengths
0115
165
238
382
437
581
66
769
885
918
1042
113
1269
1334
1412
1552
1627
1793
183
1910
2041
2114
2238
2371
246
2523
2664
2730
2814
2963
3013
3157
3299
3395
85.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences104
matches
0"been arranged"
1"were unlaced"
2"been dragged"
3"was clenched"
4"been sealed"
5"been placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was burying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences118
ratio0.059
matches
0"The stale air in the abandoned Tube tunnel tasted of old soot and something sharper—dried herbs, maybe, or ozone."
1"The floor told the same story—no smears, no disturbance in the powdery grime."
2"His left was clenched around something—a small brass object, the patina a sickly green of verdigris."
3"She traced the outline with a gloved finger—a box, maybe, or a book."
4"A marker, maybe—or a key."
5"She felt it then—a pressure in her ears, a low thrum at the edge of hearing, like a train rumbling miles away."
6"The woman who’d called it in knew the location—knew it well enough to bypass the locked grate and leave no trace."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02506265664160401
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005847953216374269
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean13.3
std8.93
cv0.672
sampleLengths
019
124
231
318
423
510
616
719
810
910
1012
1119
127
1329
1417
1518
162
178
188
194
2025
218
223
2312
2412
259
2610
2710
2812
2913
306
3151
3218
332
348
3516
366
3721
381
392
4029
4110
428
4312
443
4518
469
473
483
498
58.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3983050847457627
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her left wrist ached from"
1"She counted eighteen years on"
2"She swallowed the thought and"
3"He was thirty-two, a year"
4"She stopped at the edge"
5"His coat, a long leather"
6"He gestured at the empty"
7"She pulled on a pair"
8"His shoes were unlaced, the"
9"She noted the absence of"
10"His left was clenched around"
11"She gently pried the fingers"
12"It swung in a lazy"
13"She shifted her position and"
14"She lifted the compass closer"
15"she said, not looking away"
16"She stood and pointed at"
17"She traced the outline with"
18"She picked it up."
19"She turned the token over"
ratio0.34
18.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences94
matches
0"The stale air in the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn swept her"
2"The stairs from the Camden"
3"A generator-powered floodlight threw harsh"
4"Quinn ducked under a sagging"
5"Her left wrist ached from"
6"She counted eighteen years on"
7"Morris would have made a"
8"She swallowed the thought and"
9"Detective Sergeant Nathan Webb straightened"
10"He was thirty-two, a year"
11"She stopped at the edge"
12"A man lay on his"
13"His coat, a long leather"
14"The concrete beneath him was"
15"Webb followed her gaze."
16"He gestured at the empty"
17"Quinn didn’t answer."
18"She pulled on a pair"
19"The man’s skin held a"
ratio0.883
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"If he’d dragged himself or"
1"To send a message."
ratio0.021
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn swept her torch across the platform, the beam cutting through a haze of dust motes that churned like a living thing."
1"A man lay on his back, arms at his sides, legs straight as if he’d been arranged."
2"A professional hit in a hidden market, but the killer had taken nothing and left a compass that functioned like no instrument she’d ever seen."
3"She would find that woman, and she would find out what lay behind a wall that shouldn’t breathe and shouldn’t beat."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She stopped, her eyes moving across the scene"
1"she said, not looking away from the archway"
2"She turned, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Webb added (add)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.069
84.2461%