Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DMJ2HE6HR736G1V8ANP8A

Run Details

Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.000693
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against the wood that sent Ptolemy scattering from Rory’s lap. She marked her place in the leather-bound journal with a finger, frowning at the door. Eva wasn’t due back until tomorrow. The delivery drivers from the curry house below never came up this late. She crossed the cramped flat, stepping over a stack of folios near the coffee table, and slid the first deadbolt free. Then the second. She pressed her eye to the peephole. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway light, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other adjusting his cuff. His platinum hair caught the yellow glow, slicked back as always, not a strand out of place. The charcoal suit fit him like a second skin. Rory’s breath caught. She hadn’t seen him in eight months. Not since the night at the Golden Empress when he’d walked out mid-sentence, leaving her standing in the rain with a half-eaten bowl of noodles and a question she never got to ask. She pulled the third bolt free and opened the door a crack. “You’re a hard woman to find, Aurora.” His voice came low, accented, smooth as the whiskey he used to pour her at Silas’ bar. “I went to the flat above the pub first. Silas said you’d moved.” “I did.” She didn’t open the door wider. “Eight months ago.” Something flickered in his mismatched eyes — amber and black, like a candle flame against a void. He shifted his weight onto the cane. “May I come in?” “Why?” “Because I’ve been looking for you since Tuesday, and I’ve run out of patience for doorways.” She should close the door. She knew she should close the door. Whatever business Lucien Moreau had with her, it came wrapped in sharp edges and half-truths, and she’d spent the better part of a year learning to sleep without jumping at every creak in the floorboards. She’d rebuilt. She’d made a life in this cluttered flat above a curry house, with Ptolemy and her books and the slow quiet of ordinary evenings. But she’d also spent eight months wondering what she would have said if he’d let her finish that sentence. She pulled the door open and stepped aside. Lucien entered slowly, his cane tapping against the floorboards. He surveyed the room with the practiced attention of a man who noticed everything — the research notes pinned to the wall above Eva’s desk, the collection of jars on the windowsill, the stack of takeaway menus near the kettle. His gaze lingered on the journal in her hand. “You’re still translating the Veren texts.” “Some of us don’t have a network of informants to do our reading for us.” He smiled. It was a small thing, barely a curve of his mouth, but it reached his amber eye. The black one stayed cold, watchful, a relic of whatever bloodline had marked him in Avaros. “I’ve missed your tongue, Aurora.” “You could have called.” “Could I?” He turned to face her fully. “After the way I left? I didn’t think you’d take my call. I wasn’t certain I deserved you to.” Rory set the journal on the arm of the sofa and crossed her arms. “You walked out on me, Lucien. In the middle of a sentence. I was trying to tell you — ” “I know what you were trying to tell me.” His voice dropped, losing some of its polish. “That’s why I left.” The admission hung between them, raw and honest in a way he rarely allowed himself to be. Lucien Moreau dealt in secrets and favors, in the careful exchange of information that kept London’s supernatural underworld from tearing itself apart. He didn’t do vulnerable. He didn’t do the hard work of staying when things got complicated. Rory had learned that the hard way. “You could have stayed,” she said. “You could have let me finish.” “And then what? You would have asked me to stay the night. I would have said yes. And the next morning, you would have woken up next to a half-demon with a price on his head and a list of enemies longer than my leg.” He set his cane against the wall and removed his jacket, draping it over the back of Eva’s chair. “I was protecting you.” “I didn’t ask for protection.” “No. You never do.” He moved closer, and she caught the scent of him — cedar and smoke, something like clove cigarettes. “That’s one of the things I admire about you. You charge headfirst into disaster without a thought for your own safety. You’d argue theology with a Catholic school nun and walk away satisfied you’d won.” “I’m not taking that as a compliment.” “Take it however you like.” He stopped a foot away from her, close enough that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the way his jaw tightened when he was choosing his next words carefully. “I’ve been looking for you because I owe you an explanation. And because there’s something I need to tell you in person.” “The curse on the Veren text.” His eyebrows lifted. “How did you — ” “I’m not just pretty, Lucien. I’ve been translating it piece by piece. I know there’s a binding spell woven into the original parchment. I know it targets anyone who reads the full passage aloud.” She held his gaze. “And I know you knew about it before you handed me the book.” He didn’t flinch. “Yes.” “Why?” “Because I needed someone I could trust to break it. And you’re the only person in London who reads Middle Avaric well enough to do it without triggering the trap.” Rory laughed. It came out sharp and hollow. “So you gave me a cursed book, walked out before I could figure out what you’d done, and spent eight months hoping I’d decode the thing without dying.” “I spent eight months in Edinburgh, hunting down the original caster.” He reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a small cloth pouch, tied with red string. “I found her. She’s no longer a problem. And I have the counter-curse.” He held the pouch out to her. Rory looked at it. Then at him. At the dark circles under his eyes she hadn’t noticed before, the slight pallor beneath his usual composure. The cane he leaned on heavier than he used to. “You’re hurt.” “I’m fine.” “You’re lying.” “I’m always lying. It’s part of my charm.” He pressed the pouch into her palm, his fingers warm against hers. He didn’t pull away. “The counter-curse requires someone to speak it in the same language as the original binding. I don’t speak Middle Avaric. But you do.” “And if I don’t want to?” “Then I’ll find another way. I always do.” He looked down at her hand in his. “But I’d rather do this with you than without you, Aurora. I’d rather do everything with you.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. Eight months of silence. Eight months of telling herself she’d imagined the weight of his gaze, the way he’d brushed her hair from her face that night at Silas’ bar, the way he’d said her name like it mattered. She curled her fingers around the pouch. “You’re an ass, Lucien Moreau.” “I know.” “You can’t just show up at my flat at eleven-thirty at night, hand me a cursed artifact, and expect me to fall into your arms.” “I don’t expect anything.” His thumb traced a slow circle across her knuckles. “I’m hoping.” Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s ankles, purring like a small engine. The demon looked down at the cat, then back at Rory, and something in his face cracked open — a sliver of uncertainty, of fear, of the man beneath the suits and the secrets. “I’m sorry,” he said. “For leaving. For not trusting you enough to stay. For every moment I spent convincing myself I didn’t care.” Rory pulled her hand free and walked to the kitchen counter. She set the pouch next to the kettle, beside the jar of loose-leaf tea she’d bought from the shop down the street, the one he’d recommended before everything went sideways. She didn’t turn around. “The counter-curse,” she said. “Is it dangerous?” “Moderately.” “Will it work?” “If we do it correctly.” She drew a breath. Let it out slow. “Then you’re staying tonight. I’ll make tea, and you’ll tell me everything about Edinburgh, and tomorrow we’ll figure out the spell.” Behind her, she heard him exhale — a sound that might have been relief or exhaustion or something she wasn’t ready to name yet. “Aurora.” She turned. He stood in the middle of her cluttered flat, half in shadow, one hand resting on the back of Eva’s chair. The black eye caught the lamplight and reflected nothing. The amber one burned warm, fixed on her face with an intensity that made her chest ache. “Thank you,” he said. She reached for the kettle and filled it from the tap. “Don’t thank me yet. You haven’t tasted my tea.”
created_at"2026-04-25T13:35:32.949Z" 4/25/2026, 1:35:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.567
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"charm"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1525
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount929
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Rory8
Moreau3
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien5
Eva4
Avaros1
London1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
1"Avaros"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like clove cigarettes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1525
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"learned that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean23.11
std19.88
cv0.86
sampleLengths
054
131
249
343
412
537
611
728
81
916
1073
1119
128
1358
146
1515
1635
175
184
1927
2034
2121
2255
237
2412
2568
265
2757
287
2962
306
318
3251
334
341
3530
3636
3741
387
3935
402
412
422
4347
446
4533
4645
4712
482
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was choosing"
25.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences122
ratio0.041
matches
0"Something flickered in his mismatched eyes — amber and black, like a candle flame against a void."
1"He surveyed the room with the practiced attention of a man who noticed everything — the research notes pinned to the wall above Eva’s desk, the collection of jars on the windowsill, the stack of takeaway menus near the kettle."
2"“No. You never do.” He moved closer, and she caught the scent of him — cedar and smoke, something like clove cigarettes."
3"The demon looked down at the cat, then back at Rory, and something in his face cracked open — a sliver of uncertainty, of fear, of the man beneath the suits and the secrets."
4"Behind her, she heard him exhale — a sound that might have been relief or exhaustion or something she wasn’t ready to name yet."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02911208151382824
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004366812227074236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean12.5
std10.91
cv0.873
sampleLengths
020
115
26
313
421
53
67
723
817
99
103
117
1233
1312
1424
1513
168
173
1817
197
204
211
2216
235
247
2535
262
2724
2819
298
309
3140
329
336
3415
352
3617
3716
385
394
408
4119
4214
4320
4417
454
4617
4722
484
4912
48.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3442622950819672
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners42
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then at him."
ratio0.029
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences70
matches
0"She marked her place in"
1"She crossed the cramped flat,"
2"She pressed her eye to"
3"His platinum hair caught the"
4"She hadn’t seen him in"
5"She pulled the third bolt"
6"His voice came low, accented,"
7"She didn’t open the door"
8"He shifted his weight onto"
9"She should close the door."
10"She knew she should close"
11"She’d made a life in"
12"She pulled the door open"
13"He surveyed the room with"
14"His gaze lingered on the"
15"It was a small thing,"
16"He turned to face her"
17"His voice dropped, losing some"
18"He didn’t do vulnerable."
19"He didn’t do the hard"
ratio0.571
24.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences70
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"She marked her place in"
2"Eva wasn’t due back until"
3"The delivery drivers from the"
4"She crossed the cramped flat,"
5"She pressed her eye to"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"His platinum hair caught the"
8"The charcoal suit fit him"
9"Rory’s breath caught."
10"She hadn’t seen him in"
11"She pulled the third bolt"
12"His voice came low, accented,"
13"She didn’t open the door"
14"Something flickered in his mismatched"
15"He shifted his weight onto"
16"She should close the door."
17"She knew she should close"
18"Whatever business Lucien Moreau had"
19"She’d made a life in"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against the wood that sent Ptolemy scattering from Rory’s lap."
1"He surveyed the room with the practiced attention of a man who noticed everything — the research notes pinned to the wall above Eva’s desk, the collection of ja…"
2"Lucien Moreau dealt in secrets and favors, in the careful exchange of information that kept London’s supernatural underworld from tearing itself apart."
3"Behind her, she heard him exhale — a sound that might have been relief or exhaustion or something she wasn’t ready to name yet."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.033
83.6112%