| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1349 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1349 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "lurch" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1337 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1097 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | Seer | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.816 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "knots that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "something like amusement in their voice" |
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| 50.41% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.496 | | wordCount | 1337 | | matches | | 0 | "not spirals, but a series of vertical lines, like tally marks" | | 1 | "not green but a deep, bruised purple" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 29.07 | | std | 21.41 | | cv | 0.737 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 63 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park had been quiet before—the usual rustle of squirrels, the distant bark of a dog—but here, at the edge of a stand of ancient oaks, the silence had teeth." | | 1 | "Between two of the largest trees, the air shimmered—a faint, oily distortion, like heat haze on a summer road but there was no heat." | | 2 | "She’d packed water, a energy bar, her phone on airplane mode—all the precautions a sensible person took before stepping into a realm where the rules of physics were negotiable." | | 3 | "The grass underfoot was impossibly soft—carpet-thick, studded with wildflowers that should have been dormant in late autumn: bluebells and foxgloves, tiny white star-shaped blossoms she couldn’t name." | | 4 | "Moss grew in the grooves, but it was a moss that glowed—a faint phosphorescence, like moonlight trapped in velvet." | | 5 | "Nine stones in total, each one unique—one had a crack running through its center, another was veined with quartz that caught the golden light." | | 6 | "Beyond the ring, the grove extended in every direction—a forest of gnarled trees with silver bark and leaves that were not green but a deep, bruised purple." | | 7 | "The leaf she’d touched had changed color—turning a pale, translucent white, veins standing out like threads of light." | | 8 | "She felt a strange kinship with it—exposed, vulnerable, waiting." | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes found Rory’s, and she smiled—a thin, knowing expression that contained more secrets than it revealed." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1115 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny white star-shaped blossoms" |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.017937219730941704 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007174887892376682 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.86 | | std | 8.62 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 60.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.40384615384615385 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 86.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a cold that raised" | | 1 | "Then the world snapped into" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 95.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, and their voice" | | 1 | "She’d kept it hidden since" | | 2 | "She was ready." | | 3 | "They drifted closer, their form" | | 4 | "She’d packed water, a energy" | | 5 | "She still felt underprepared." | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "It was a moment of" | | 8 | "They bloomed in wild profusion," | | 9 | "They had come through behind" | | 10 | "She noticed that now: the" | | 11 | "She touched one of the" | | 12 | "Her fingers tingled." | | 13 | "She circled the ring, counting" | | 14 | "She counted them." | | 15 | "She thought about time slipping" | | 16 | "She turned, scanned the edges" | | 17 | "Their branches interlaced overhead, forming" | | 18 | "She couldn’t see any eyes," | | 19 | "She walked toward the closest" |
| | ratio | 0.312 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "Rory felt it as a" | | 2 | "Richmond Park had been quiet" | | 3 | "Nyx solidified beside her, the" | | 4 | "they said, and their voice" | | 5 | "Rory’s hand drifted to the" | | 6 | "The moonsilver was cold even" | | 7 | "She’d kept it hidden since" | | 8 | "She was ready." | | 9 | "The oaks before her grew" | | 10 | "They drifted closer, their form" | | 11 | "Rory had heard that warning" | | 12 | "An hour could be minutes" | | 13 | "She’d packed water, a energy" | | 14 | "She still felt underprepared." | | 15 | "She stepped through." | | 16 | "The transition was not a" | | 17 | "It was a moment of" | | 18 | "The grove was a bowl" | | 19 | "The grass underfoot was impossibly" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks before her grew in a near-perfect circle, their trunks thick as parked cars, bark crusted with lichen that caught the afternoon light in shades of pale…" | | 1 | "It was a moment of vertigo, a lurch in her stomach as though the ground had tilted and righted itself without her permission." | | 2 | "The grass underfoot was impossibly soft—carpet-thick, studded with wildflowers that should have been dormant in late autumn: bluebells and foxgloves, tiny white…" | | 3 | "Their branches interlaced overhead, forming a canopy that filtered the golden light into shifting patterns on the ground." | | 4 | "The change spread to neighboring leaves, then to the branch, and then the whole tree shimmered, shedding its purple foliage in a cascade that fluttered to the g…" | | 5 | "Her silver hair fell to her waist, catching the golden light and turning it into a waterfall of mercury." | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes found Rory’s, and she smiled—a thin, knowing expression that contained more secrets than it revealed." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice rich and layered, like honey poured over gravel" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped, and the wildflowers swayed toward her as she passed, as though drawn by her gravity" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |