| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pristine" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 148 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1385 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Come alone. Night." | | 1 | "Stay." | | 2 | "arranging" | | 3 | "choose" | | 4 | "pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1379 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Rory | 14 | | One | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.992 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 26.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "angles that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "appeared under Rory's door, folded into the shape of a leaf, the paper rough and fibrous like nothing she'd seen before" | | 2 | "fingers that seemed to choose* where to touch" | | 3 | "looked like wounds — its shadow moved aga" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.166 | | wordCount | 1385 | | matches | | 0 | "not reaching for her, but *arranging* themselves, pooling into shapes" | | 1 | "Not cloud cover — Rory looked up and saw the sky clear, stars sharp and hard, but the moon itself dimmed" | | 2 | "not the gentle warmth she'd felt before, but a searing flash" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 21.64 | | std | 18.13 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 53 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 61 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 95.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "been eleven" | | 1 | "were arranged" | | 2 | "being buried" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 83.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "was racing" | | 1 | "were moving" | | 2 | "was gathering" | | 3 | "were turning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight caught the carvings — spirals and angles that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly." | | 1 | "Rory stopped walking and watched one of those shadows — her own, cast behind her — reach forward and touch her heel before she moved." | | 2 | "The dead stems formed patterns in the grass — spirals and angles, the same carvings from the standing stones, but fresh, broken, wet at the breaks." | | 3 | "The pendant flickered — one moment burning hot, the next cold as river stone." | | 4 | "The note hit the ground and the petals of a single wildflower — not blackened, not dead — unfurled from beneath it, pristine white against the decay." | | 5 | "The shadows around her feet were moving on their own now — not reaching for her, but *arranging* themselves, pooling into shapes that mimicked the spiral carvings, the broken flower stems, the patterns that covered every surface of this place." | | 6 | "Not cloud cover — Rory looked up and saw the sky clear, stars sharp and hard, but the moon itself dimmed and brightened like a failing bulb." | | 7 | "The moonlight touched everything — the stones, the grass, her own pale hands — but the shadows underneath them were too deep, too black, swallowing light instead of reflecting it." | | 8 | "But this one — the largest, the one with carvings so deep they looked like wounds — its shadow moved against the light." | | 9 | "A hairline fracture ran through the gem, and heat burst from it — not the gentle warmth she'd felt before, but a searing flash that made her gasp and grab at the chain." | | 10 | "She crashed through the gap between the stones, out of the Grove, into the ordinary darkness of Richmond Park — the real darkness, the one that behaved, the one that matched her flashlight and the moon and every rule she'd ever known." | | 11 | "But something else was there — a mark, warm to the touch, tender when she pressed it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1369 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.03871439006574142 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005113221329437546 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 9.36 | | std | 8.34 | | cv | 0.891 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 31.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 27 | | diversityRatio | 0.24324324324324326 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the blackened flowers and" | | 1 | "Then cold again, cycling so" | | 2 | "Just a shadow again, attached" | | 3 | "Only then did she stop." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She'd left the restaurant at" | | 2 | "She counted back the minutes" | | 3 | "She'd been here three times" | | 4 | "She forced herself to breathe." | | 5 | "Her voice came out flat," | | 6 | "She turned back." | | 7 | "She stood in the center" | | 8 | "She pulled it out from" | | 9 | "They were arranged." | | 10 | "She stepped back." | | 11 | "She pulled it out, unfolded" | | 12 | "She dropped it." | | 13 | "It hadn't been there a" | | 14 | "She was certain." | | 15 | "She'd watched the note fall." | | 16 | "They moved with purpose." | | 17 | "She spun, fists raised, heart" | | 18 | "She stopped turning." | | 19 | "It stretched toward her, longer" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 38.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory stood at the edge" | | 2 | "Something sharper underneath, like ozone" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She'd left the restaurant at" | | 5 | "She counted back the minutes" | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 7 | "Moonlight caught the carvings —" | | 8 | "She'd been here three times" | | 9 | "The reason she'd come pressed" | | 10 | "Eva had been missing for" | | 11 | "The police had nothing." | | 12 | "Silas had nothing." | | 13 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 14 | "Rory stepped between the two" | | 15 | "The Grove opened before her," | | 16 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 17 | "The grass crunched like dead" | | 18 | "The air tasted of ash" | | 19 | "The moon hung directly overhead," |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that should have bloomed year-round lay blackened and curled, their stems brittle under her boots." | | 1 | "The moon hung directly overhead, too large, too bright, casting shadows that stretched in directions that didn't match its position." | | 2 | "The ozone-copper taste thickened, and the sweet undertone deepened into something cloying, something that coated her tongue and made her want to retch." | | 3 | "The shadow *pulled* itself across the grass, inch by inch, leaving no darkness behind it, as if it was gathering all the black in the world into one reaching ha…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |