Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DQ9EQ2KSH3QAQMFYJGR1V

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first sip of Evan Williams burned down her throat. Rory made a note to add it to the mental map of spirits. Smooth. Warm. Forgettable. Silas kept the whiskey flowing these days. Something about suppliers changing. New routes opening in the East. Old contacts getting nervous. She caught pieces through the door left ajar while she stacked glasses behind the bar. "Evan Williams. Bold choice for a lady." The voice caught her mid-reach. She knew it before she turned. That particular cadence. The way words seemed to wrap around each other before leaving the mouth. Liam Connelly. Three years older than her by earthly years. Twenty years older by experience. He looked the same at first glance. Same easy smile. Same worn leather jacket that had seen two continents and a dozen girlfriends. Same way of leaning against things like the world owed him stability. Then she noticed the hands. They used to be steady. Artist's hands. Guitarist's hands. Now they shook slightly as he placed his glass on the counter. "Liam." She said it flat. An endpoint rather than a question. "Rory Carter. I'd say small world but we both know London's actually quite small when you know the right people." He gestured to the bar. "Silas doesn't let just anyone work his counter." "He doesn't." "Mind if I sit?" "You're already sitting." He laughed. It sounded hollow. Forced. Like he was remembering how to do it from watching others. Silas appeared from the back room. His eyes flicked between them, cataloging something. He nodded once at Rory and retreated. Giving her space or warning her. Impossible to tell with the old spy. "Three years," Liam said. "And two months. Give or take." "Give or take." "Last I heard you were in Cardiff. Chasing a law degree." "Last I heard you were in Barcelona. Chasing something." She poured herself another measure. "Or someone." "Someone." He wrapped his fingers around his glass. The tremor was worse now. "Her name was Isabella. Beautiful girl. Knew four languages. Made the worst paella I've ever tasted." "Sounds about right." "You never liked her." "I never met her." Rory watched his reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. "I didn't need to. I knew the pattern." Something flickered across his face. Pain. Recognition. Maybe the first real emotion she'd seen from him. "Ouch." He took a long drink. "Still sharp as ever." "I learned from the best." "Your father?" "Silas." Liam set the glass down carefully. "I'm not the same person I was, Rory." "Neither am I." She gestured to the bottles behind her. "I deliver Chinese food for a living. Used to dream about courtrooms. Now I dream about tips." "You're better than this." "Am I? Because this feels exactly where I should be." She lit a cigarette from the pack Silas kept under the counter. She didn't smoke. But tonight felt like a smoking night. "What happened to your hands?" "Italy. Some people I shouldn't have crossed." "Violence. That's new." "Desperation." He looked at his hands like they belonged to someone else. "I needed money. They offered it." "And now?" "I need a new line of work." The bar creaked around them. Old wood. Old secrets. Silas's music box somewhere in the back playing something slow and Eastern European. "You disappeared," Rory said. "Three years. No calls. No letters. Not even a postcard." "I know." "I looked for you. After Evan. I needed-" "I know." "Do you?" She stubbed the cigarette out. "Do you know what it's like to wake up next to someone and realize you don't recognize your own face anymore? Because that's what he did to me. And I needed someone who remembered who I was before." Liam's jaw tightened. "I couldn't come back. Not then." "Why not?" "Because I was running too." He met her eyes finally. "I was running from the same thing. Different names. Same demons. But I thought if I saw you, saw what he'd done to you, I'd have to face what I was doing to myself." "Selfish." "Always was." He smiled. That hollow smile. "But I'm here now." "Three years too late." "Better than never?" "Is it?" She poured herself another drink. "What changed?" His hand went to his pocket. A silver chain emerged. A small cross dangled from it. "I found God." "In Barcelona." "Actually in a ditch outside Naples. But who's counting." He tucked the chain away. "You'd think it'd take a miracle. Turns out it just took hitting bottom. Literally." "And which bottom was that?" "The one where I woke up in a hospital with no memory of the previous week. Two broken ribs. A collapsed lung. The doctors said I was lucky to be alive." "Were you?" "At the time, no." He drank. "Now I think maybe someone was trying to tell me something." Silas emerged again. This time with a bottle of something older. Single malt. The good stuff. He placed it between them without a word and disappeared. "You want to know the funny thing?" Liam said. "I came here to find you. Took me three months of asking around. Following leads. Calling in favors. All to find out you'd been working here for almost a year." "Why not just call?" "Because calling means I can hang up. Coming here means I have to face it." He uncorked the whiskey. "I owe you an apology. For leaving. For not being there. For making you face it alone." "You don't owe me anything." "I know. That's what makes it an apology." He poured. "I'm sorry, Rory. I'm sorry for being a coward." The words hung between them. Heavy. Real. The first honest thing he'd said all night. She picked up the glass. Smelled it. Oak and peat and something dark. "To cowards who learn better." "To second chances." They drank. The whiskey burned. But it was a good burn. The kind that reminded you that you were still alive. Still breathing. Still capable of feeling something other than numbness. "One condition," she said. "Name it." "You stay in London. You don't run again. Not unless you take me with you." A genuine smile spread across his face. The first one she'd seen. "Deal." "Good." She stood. "Because Silas is going to offer you a job. And you're going to take it." "How do you know?" "Because I know him. And I know you." She grabbed her jacket. "Besides, the delivery girl needs backup." He laughed. Real this time. "Delivery girl. Right." "Don't let it go to your head." She headed for the door. "And Liam? Welcome home." The neon sign buzzed as she stepped out into the London night. Rain had started. The kind that soaked through everything. The kind that promised a long night ahead. Behind her, she heard the bar door open. Liam's footsteps on the pavement. "Rory?" She turned. "Thank you." "Don't thank me yet." She lit another cigarette. "We haven't seen what's coming next." "Doesn't matter." He stood in the rain. Hands in his pockets. Trembling slightly. But standing. "I'm not running anymore." "Good." She took a drag. "Because neither am I." The rain fell harder. The streetlights flickered. Somewhere in Soho, a door opened and closed. The city kept moving. And for the first time in three years, Rory felt like maybe she was moving with it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1225
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1225
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"flickered"
2"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences183
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount620
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Liam"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Evan1
Williams1
East1
Connelly1
Rory5
Liam6
Silas5
Eastern1
European1
London1
Hands1
Soho1
Old3
persons
0"Evan"
1"Williams"
2"Connelly"
3"Rory"
4"Liam"
5"Silas"
6"Hands"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a smoking night"
1"felt like maybe she was moving with it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1225
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean13.92
std11.56
cv0.83
sampleLengths
026
136
27
327
415
535
626
711
833
92
104
113
1217
1333
1410
153
1611
1716
1829
193
204
2122
2216
2310
245
252
261
2714
2827
294
3037
317
323
3318
342
357
3622
3714
382
398
402
4145
429
432
4444
451
4611
474
483
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs111
matches
0"was remembering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences183
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount621
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.030595813204508857
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00966183574879227
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences183
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences183
mean6.69
std5.9
cv0.881
sampleLengths
010
113
21
31
41
57
64
76
84
915
107
115
126
133
1413
152
168
175
187
193
2013
2112
225
235
242
252
2612
275
286
2925
308
312
324
333
342
353
361
3711
386
397
407
416
427
434
446
453
4611
4714
482
498
71.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.47540983606557374
totalSentences183
uniqueOpeners87
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Then she noticed the hands."
1"Maybe the first real emotion"
2"Still capable of feeling something"
3"Somewhere in Soho, a door"
ratio0.046
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences87
matches
0"She caught pieces through the"
1"She knew it before she"
2"He looked the same at"
3"They used to be steady."
4"She said it flat"
5"He gestured to the bar"
6"It sounded hollow."
7"His eyes flicked between them,"
8"He nodded once at Rory"
9"She poured herself another measure"
10"He wrapped his fingers around"
11"He took a long drink"
12"She gestured to the bottles"
13"She lit a cigarette from"
14"She didn't smoke."
15"He looked at his hands"
16"She stubbed the cigarette out"
17"He met her eyes finally"
18"She poured herself another drink"
19"His hand went to his"
ratio0.333
80.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences87
matches
0"The first sip of Evan"
1"Rory made a note to"
2"Silas kept the whiskey flowing"
3"Something about suppliers changing."
4"She caught pieces through the"
5"The voice caught her mid-reach."
6"She knew it before she"
7"That particular cadence."
8"The way words seemed to"
9"He looked the same at"
10"They used to be steady."
11"She said it flat"
12"An endpoint rather than a"
13"He gestured to the bar"
14"It sounded hollow."
15"Silas appeared from the back"
16"His eyes flicked between them,"
17"He nodded once at Rory"
18"She poured herself another measure"
19"He wrapped his fingers around"
ratio0.759
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Now they shook slightly as"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.4735%