Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DQAAK5RX3SXPG70RRWY9E

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Duration:
55.7s
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$0.001767
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate should have been locked. Rory pressed her palm against the cold iron. It swung inward with a groan that seemed to echo longer than it should. Her phone’s torch cut a weak path through the dark, picking out the first of the ancient oaks that marked the boundary. *Last time, Isolde opened it for me.* “Isolde?” Her voice sounded small. Swallowed. The trees didn’t so much rustle as breathe, a low susurrus that seemed to come from every direction at once. No birds. No distant traffic from Richmond proper. The silence underneath the leaves was absolute. Wet moss squelched under her boots. The air tasted green and old, thick with the scent of wildflowers she couldn’t name. The path was wrong. She stopped. Shifted the torch beam across the ground. When Isolde had led her here three weeks ago, the trail wound left at the split oak, then straight through a corridor of ferns. Now the split oak stood to her right, and the ferns pressed close on both sides like they’d been waiting for her to notice. “Okay.” She tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, fingers brushing the silver chain at her throat. The pendant lay warm against her collarbone. Warmer than skin heat. “Okay, different entrance. That happens.” The grove didn’t agree. Or maybe it did, in its own way. The torch flickered. Once. Twice. She slapped it against her palm and the beam steadied, but the shadows it cast against the standing stones ahead seemed to linger a beat too long after the light moved on. Rory had run out of options. That’s what she told herself in the taxi over, watching London shrink in the rear window. Eva’s face was still missing from every Missing Persons database she’d hacked into. Silas’ contacts in the Fae courts had gone silent. And the dreams, the ones where Eva screamed from behind a wall of bone, had started bleeding into her waking hours. *The pendant knows the way.* Isolde’s words, delivered with that infuriating half-smile. *But the Grove has moods, little bird. Come only when the moon wanes.* The moon overhead was a waxing crescent. Barely a sliver. Something rustled to her left. She spun, torch sweeping the undergrowth. Nothing. Just ferns, still swaying slightly. A single wildflower, crimson as the pendant’s stone, bent toward her like a tiny, watching face. “Isolde, if this is a test...” A child’s laugh. High and delighted, somewhere deeper in the trees. Wrong direction for the old encampment. Wrong season for anyone to be camping at all. The pendant pulsed. Not warmth now, but heat. She pressed a hand to it and the silver chain burned against her neck. She remembered Isolde’s long fingers fastening the clasp. *This marks you. For protection, or for something else. Depends on who’s asking.* Rory Carter didn’t believe in protection anymore. She believed in leverage. The standing stones emerged from the darkness like crooked teeth. There were twelve of them, each as tall as her shoulder, carved with spirals that seemed to twist when she wasn’t looking directly at them. The clearing beyond should have been the Grove proper, the pocket between worlds where Isolde held court. Instead, the torch beam simply stopped at the stone circle’s edge, swallowed by a dark so absolute it looked solid. “Eva?” Her voice cracked on the name. “Eva, if you’re here...” The laugh came again. Closer. And beneath it, a different sound. Claws on stone. Or hooves. Something moving in patient, deliberate arcs just beyond the light. Rory’s fingers found the pendant. She gripped it hard enough to feel the gemstone’s facets bite into her palm. “I know what I am,” she said to the dark. “Guest. Petitioner. Maybe prey. But I’m not leaving without answers.” The torch died. Not flickered, not dimmed. Died. As if something had simply reached out and smothered the light. Darkness rushed in like water. Cold, thick, full of pressure. Rory’s breath caught. The pendant was the only thing she could feel now, a star of heat against her sternum. She could hear her own heartbeat. Too fast. Too loud. And something else’s heartbeat underneath it. Slower. Much slower. *A trick of the dark.* She’d read about sensory deprivation. Auditory hallucinations. The brain filling silence with ghosts. The ferns rustled. Near her ankles. Then near her waist. Then at her shoulder, as if something were rising from the ground beside her, slow and patient and terribly tall. “Aurora.” Not Isolde’s voice. Not Eva’s. Something older, that shaped her full name like a mouth testing unfamiliar food. The breath that came with it smelled of turned earth and something floral-sweet, like funeral lilies. She ran. Not toward the path. Toward the stones. Arm outstretched, fingers scrabbling for the carved spirals, the cold anchor of granite. Three steps. Five. The ground was wrong under her boots, too soft, too giving, like running across a mattress. Something snagged her ankle. She pitched forward. Her palms hit stone. Light exploded. Not white, but green, the deep emerald of sunlight through leaves. It pulsed from the carvings beneath her hands and spread through the spirals, racing from stone to stone until the entire circle blazed. The dark retreated to the treeline, seething, resentful. Rory knelt in the centre of the Grove. The real Grove. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, swaying in a breeze that touched nothing beyond the stone circle. The ancient oak at its heart spread branches wide, and from those branches hung not leaves but ribbons. Hundreds of them. Silk and satin and rough-spun wool, every colour bleeding into grey under the green light. And on each ribbon, a name. She could see them, stitched in silver thread that caught the glow. Names she recognized from files. From news reports. From the databases she’d scoured for any trace of Eva. *Emily Hart.* Missing, 2018. *Marcus Webb.* Cold case, 2015. *Lena Ødegård.* Tourist, vanished from her hotel. *Siobhan Murphy, Thomas Chen, Daniel Okonkwo...* The pendant was pulsing in time with her heartbeat. No, faster. Outpacing it. The heat had become a vibration she could feel in her teeth. “You found me.” She turned. Eva stood at the edge of the stones. Not inside the circle. Not quite outside it, either. The green light touched her face in all the wrong places, carving shadows where there should have been none. She wore the same clothes from that last night. Jeans. The grey jumper with the frayed cuff. Her dreadlocks were loose, falling over shoulders that seemed too still, too rigid. “Eva.” Rory’s throat clenched. “You’re here. You’re actually-” “I’m not.” Eva’s lips moved. Her voice came from somewhere else. From the trees. From the ground. “I’m not, Rory. You know that.” The pendant was burning now. Rory’s fingers wouldn’t let go of it, no matter how she tried. “I came to bring you home.” “You came because she called you.” Eva’s mouth shaped a smile that didn’t reach her eyes. “The pendant. The dreams. The... door opened just when you needed it most. Who does that, Rory? Who leaves a gate unlocked?” The green light flickered. The ribbons in the oak tree stirred, and Rory heard them now, the whisper of fabric like a hundred small voices murmuring in sleep. “Isolde wouldn’t-” “Isolde *hungers*.” Eva’s form rippled. For a heartbeat, Rory saw something else beneath her friend’s face. Branches. Roots. A jaw that split in too many directions. “She always has. You’re the delivery girl, Rory. You brought exactly what she wanted.” The pendant blazed crimson against the green. The heat was unbearable. Rory’s hand finally obeyed her, tearing the chain from her neck and hurling it to the wildflowers. It didn’t fall. It hovered. Spun slowly. The gemstone opened like an eye. And from the oak tree, something vast and patient began to uncurl.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
40.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Emily"
2"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"database"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count2
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"satin"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"database"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"could feel"
7"racing"
8"silk"
9"satin"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences158
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords56
totalWords1309
ratio0.043
matches
0"Last time, Isolde opened it for me."
1"The pendant knows the way."
2"But the Grove has moods, little bird. Come only when the moon wanes."
3"This marks you. For protection, or for something else. Depends on who’s asking."
4"A trick of the dark."
5"Emily Hart."
6"Marcus Webb."
7"Lena Ødegård."
8"Siobhan Murphy, Thomas Chen, Daniel Okonkwo..."
9"hungers"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1198
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Isolde6
Richmond1
London1
Missing2
Persons1
Eva8
Grove4
Rory11
Carter1
Cold2
Tourist1
Murphy1
Thomas1
Chen1
Daniel1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Missing"
2"Eva"
3"Grove"
4"Rory"
5"Carter"
6"Cold"
7"Tourist"
8"Murphy"
9"Thomas"
10"Chen"
11"Daniel"
places
0"Richmond"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"groan that seemed to echo longer than it should"
1"susurrus that seemed to come from every direction at once"
2"spirals that seemed to twist when she wasn’t looking directly at them"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.292
wordCount1309
matches
0"Not warmth now, but heat"
1"Not white, but green, the deep emerald of sunlight through leaves"
2"not leaves but ribbons"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean25.17
std19.96
cv0.793
sampleLengths
06
144
27
31
461
54
657
735
849
965
1025
1110
1233
136
1426
1543
1611
1772
1811
1926
2039
213
2216
2340
249
2518
2630
271
2834
292
3046
314
3244
3362
3436
3522
3625
373
382
3966
408
4123
4217
436
4438
4528
462
4740
4828
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"been locked"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was still missing"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"were rising"
3"was pulsing"
4"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences172
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount356
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.03089887640449438
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0028089887640449437
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean7.61
std6.15
cv0.809
sampleLengths
06
18
214
322
47
51
64
71
820
92
106
117
126
1315
144
152
167
1724
1824
1919
207
214
225
234
248
253
261
271
2832
296
3016
3113
329
3321
3412
357
366
377
383
395
406
411
425
4316
446
453
468
476
489
493
59.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.4186046511627907
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners72
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences131
matches
0"Barely a sliver."
1"Just ferns, still swaying slightly."
2"Instead, the torch beam simply"
3"Then near her waist."
4"Then at her shoulder, as"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences131
matches
0"It swung inward with a"
1"Her phone’s torch cut a"
2"Her voice sounded small."
3"She tucked a strand of"
4"She slapped it against her"
5"She spun, torch sweeping the"
6"She pressed a hand to"
7"She remembered Isolde’s long fingers"
8"She believed in leverage."
9"Her voice cracked on the"
10"She gripped it hard enough"
11"she said to the dark"
12"She could hear her own"
13"She pitched forward."
14"Her palms hit stone."
15"It pulsed from the carvings"
16"She could see them, stitched"
17"She wore the same clothes"
18"Her dreadlocks were loose, falling"
19"Her voice came from somewhere"
ratio0.16
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences131
matches
0"The gate should have been"
1"Rory pressed her palm against"
2"It swung inward with a"
3"Her phone’s torch cut a"
4"Her voice sounded small."
5"The trees didn’t so much"
6"The silence underneath the leaves"
7"The air tasted green and"
8"The path was wrong."
9"She tucked a strand of"
10"The pendant lay warm against"
11"The grove didn’t agree."
12"The torch flickered."
13"She slapped it against her"
14"Rory had run out of"
15"That’s what she told herself"
16"Eva’s face was still missing"
17"*The pendant knows the way.*"
18"The moon overhead was a"
19"Something rustled to her left."
ratio0.672
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"Now the split oak stood"
1"*But the Grove has moods,"
2"As if something had simply"
ratio0.023
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Then at her shoulder, as if something were rising from the ground beside her, slow and patient and terribly tall."
1"The breath that came with it smelled of turned earth and something floral-sweet, like funeral lilies."
2"Her dreadlocks were loose, falling over shoulders that seemed too still, too rigid."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She tucked, fingers brushing the silver chain at her throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.0278%