| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.442 | | leniency | 0.884 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1499 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1499 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "tinged" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "crystallized" | | 11 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 33 | | totalWords | 1486 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "too" | | 1 | "Don't eat anything" | | 2 | "air" | | 3 | "fuller" | | 4 | "That's what it's supposed to feel like" | | 5 | "This is what excess tastes like." | | 6 | "visible" | | 7 | "toward" | | 8 | "That's not a vein of ore. That's a artery of something else." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1138 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Faerie | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Don | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Dymas" | | 7 | "Seer" | | 8 | "Gluttony" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Earth" | | 6 | "Hel" | | 7 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.665 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "edges that seemed to sharpen in this place" | | 1 | "something like woodsmoke when her boot brush" | | 2 | "hilt that seemed to drink the light" | | 3 | "something like hunger in their violet gaze" | | 4 | "something like fear in their voice" | | 5 | "seemed drawn toward* it, a hungry pull" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.673 | | wordCount | 1486 | | matches | | 0 | "not from within, but with a light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 26.54 | | std | 21.28 | | cv | 0.802 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 70 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 52 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 75 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it against her skin like a silk scarf drawn across her face—heavier, sweeter, warmer than any autumn afternoon had a right to be in London." | | 1 | "Still blue, still daylight, but the quality of light was different—amber-tinged, like looking through honey." | | 2 | "The Shade had materialized from the shadows of an elder oak, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it—still a silhouette of living darkness, but with edges that seemed to sharpen in this place." | | 3 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, and this time she felt a directional pull to it—a gentle tug toward the grove's center, where three standing stones formed a crude archway." | | 4 | "Even the breeze that stirred her hair smelled wrong—or right, maybe, in the way that Faerie was supposed to smell." | | 5 | "They had drawn up beside her, and she saw that they held something—a blade of moonlight and shadow, their hand wrapped around a hilt that seemed to drink the light." | | 6 | "The sound hadn't come from the stones themselves—it came from the *air* between them, a tectonic shift that made her teeth ache." | | 7 | "The honey-light deepened, turning the grapes translucent, and she heard music—distant, throbbing, a beat that matched her pulse." | | 8 | "The gardens around her were immaculate but organic—no straight lines, no careful beds." | | 9 | "Their features had resolved—sharp cheekbones, a mouth too wide for a human face, eyes that held no whites, only glowing violet." | | 10 | "The deep crimson gem was glowing—not from within, but with a light that seemed drawn *toward* it, a hungry pull." | | 11 | "Isolde stepped out from behind it—or through it, Rory couldn't tell." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1158 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar whisper-carried-wind." |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.02849740932642487 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0069084628670120895 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 11.61 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 42.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3203125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Still blue, still daylight, but" | | 1 | "Even the breeze that stirred" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled into a clearing" | | 1 | "She felt Nyx before she" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed like" | | 3 | "they said, their voice that" | | 4 | "She didn't know how she" | | 5 | "Her mouth watered unbidden." | | 6 | "She heard no birds, no" | | 7 | "They had drawn up beside" | | 8 | "She drew it." | | 9 | "She felt *fuller* here, more" | | 10 | "Their features had resolved—sharp cheekbones," | | 11 | "She gasped, clawing at her" | | 12 | "Her silver hair hung to" | | 13 | "She tilted her head, studying" | | 14 | "She stepped closer, and her" | | 15 | "She met Rory's gaze over" | | 16 | "She'd come to find answers." | | 17 | "She was starting to think" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 37.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "Rory felt it against her" | | 2 | "The next, the undergrowth simply" | | 3 | "She stumbled into a clearing" | | 4 | "The sky above was wrong." | | 5 | "The trees around the clearing's" | | 6 | "She felt Nyx before she" | | 7 | "The Shade had materialized from" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes glowed like" | | 9 | "they said, their voice that" | | 10 | "Rory said, and the words" | | 11 | "She didn't know how she" | | 12 | "The Heartstone Pendant beneath her" | | 13 | "Nyx's voice carried no judgment," | | 14 | "Rory said, and stepped forward" | | 15 | "The grass underfoot was springy," | | 16 | "Bluebells grew beside roses, which" | | 17 | "A patch of clover released" | | 18 | "The scent wrapped around her:" | | 19 | "Her mouth watered unbidden." |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Standing stones ringed the space, pale granite veined with something that glittered like crushed silver." | | 1 | "She felt Nyx before she saw them, a coolness at her shoulder that had nothing to do with temperature." | | 2 | "The Shade had materialized from the shadows of an elder oak, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it—still a silhouette of living darkness, but with edges…" | | 3 | "The grass underfoot was springy, dense, and thick with wildflowers that made no botanical sense." | | 4 | "Bluebells grew beside roses, which bloomed beside snowdrops, all in the same square foot of earth." | | 5 | "Rory's hand went to her pocket, fingers brushing the cold length of the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had sent her two weeks ago, delivered by a crow that had fixed h…" | | 6 | "A path of crushed white stone that curved through grounds that stretched impossibly far, drenched in a warm amber sky." | | 7 | "The honey-light deepened, turning the grapes translucent, and she heard music—distant, throbbing, a beat that matched her pulse." | | 8 | "Nyx walked at her side, their incorporeal form now fully solid, as if Dymas demanded substance from everything that entered." | | 9 | "Their features had resolved—sharp cheekbones, a mouth too wide for a human face, eyes that held no whites, only glowing violet." | | 10 | "The deep crimson gem was glowing—not from within, but with a light that seemed drawn *toward* it, a hungry pull." | | 11 | "Her silver hair hung to her waist, catching the amber light, and her pale lavender eyes held Rory like she was the only interesting thing in any realm." |
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| 46.05% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their voice that familiar whisper-carried-wind" | | 1 | "Rory said, and the words came out certain" | | 2 | "She stepped, and her eyes were ancient, and sad, and utterly devoid of pity" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.605 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |