| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1609 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1609 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "normalcy" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "footfall" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 1599 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Standing stones at the rise beyond Pen Ponds. Wait for the oak that faces west. When the wind stops, step through." | | 1 | "Keep going." | | 2 | "Wrong." | | 3 | "Tick. Tick. Tick." | | 4 | "Aurora" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1593 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.31 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Pen | 2 | | Ponds | 2 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Ponds" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if crossing a border drawn in breath" | | 1 | "as if answering a question she hadn’t asked" | | 2 | "quite architecture and weren’t quite accident" | | 3 | "quite accident" | | 4 | "cold that seemed to push against the air itself" | | 5 | "light that seemed to pull her toward the center stone" | | 6 | "as if awaiting an answer" |
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| 74.92% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.251 | | wordCount | 1599 | | matches | | 0 | "not “Rory” but *Aurora*, pronounced with a patient, lilting cadence" | | 1 | "not screaming but whispering, a language of soft consonants" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 53.3 | | std | 30.71 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 74 | | 12 | 86 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 99 | | 21 | 83 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 83 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 87 | | 26 | 80 | | 27 | 70 | | 28 | 71 | | 29 | 23 |
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| 99.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The chill in the air settled in her lungs before she fully registered it—wet and green and threaded with something older than cold." | | 1 | "Richmond Park at night held a thousand small noises—nightjars, the rustle of deer in the bracken, the soft tick of branches—but here, fifty yards from the gate, the world had gone into some kind of listening." | | 2 | "She followed the path by memory more than sight—dog-walker trails she’d learned during daylight hours, pretending normalcy." | | 3 | "The frost crunched—the first sound she’d made in minutes." | | 4 | "But the dreams, the pendant, the split tree—all of it waited somewhere beyond this grimy threshold of common sense." | | 5 | "In its place, a dark shape that could have been a fallen branch rearranged itself in her peripheral vision and was something else—something that resolved into a figure, human-height, before she turned her head fully." | | 6 | "The moon above looked different now—closer, its seas a rusted red instead of grey." | | 7 | "It did not move, but the space around it moved—air wobbled like heat haze above summer asphalt, a silent vibration that pushed against her eardrums." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1611 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.03041589075108628 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006207324643078833 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 12.4 | | std | 8.28 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 45.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.32558139534883723 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere to her right, among" | | 1 | "Instead, she fixed her gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched the spot through" | | 1 | "Her trainers made no sound" | | 2 | "She paused, turned a slow" | | 3 | "She watched her own breath" | | 4 | "She followed the path by" | | 5 | "Its head tracked her without" | | 6 | "She walked faster." | | 7 | "she whispered, counting the trees" | | 8 | "She positioned herself in front" | | 9 | "It had texture, like felt" | | 10 | "She took a tentative step" | | 11 | "She yanked the chain free" | | 12 | "Its crimson glow was faint" | | 13 | "She tucked the stone back" | | 14 | "They stirred as she passed," | | 15 | "Her own voice came out" | | 16 | "She flexed her hands inside" | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "She stood, scanning." | | 19 | "She clamped a hand over" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter left the last" | | 1 | "The chill in the air" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 3 | "She touched the spot through" | | 4 | "The directions Silas had scrawled" | | 5 | "Her trainers made no sound" | | 6 | "That in itself was wrong." | | 7 | "Richmond Park at night held" | | 8 | "She paused, turned a slow" | | 9 | "The moon was a clipped" | | 10 | "She watched her own breath" | | 11 | "The pendant had started feeling" | | 12 | "The grove, Silas had muttered" | | 13 | "Rory had borrowed his words" | | 14 | "The ground began to rise." | | 15 | "She followed the path by" | | 16 | "A heron stood at the" | | 17 | "Its head tracked her without" | | 18 | "She walked faster." | | 19 | "The standing stones announced themselves" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the dark" | | 1 | "To her left, the long" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones announced themselves as silhouettes first, a ragged circle of oaks that had grown through some old glacial argument until they’d fused into …" | | 1 | "At the exact center, a single stone not much taller than her waist bled a cold that seemed to push against the air itself." | | 2 | "With it came a distant chime, as if someone had struck a tiny glass bell deep underground." | | 3 | "Its crimson glow was faint but undeniable, a slow heartbeat of light that seemed to pull her toward the center stone." | | 4 | "*Wrong.* She knew it the way prey knows it, a ripple down the spine that had no language." | | 5 | "The scent of wet honey and turned earth rose, cloying with sweetness that didn’t belong in winter." | | 6 | "In its place, a dark shape that could have been a fallen branch rearranged itself in her peripheral vision and was something else—something that resolved into a…" | | 7 | "The wildflowers shivered in a ripple that began at the ring of oaks and raced inward, a concentric wave of petals bending without wind." | | 8 | "A hair’s breadth, maybe less, but enough to let out a thread of silver-green light that coiled upward like smoke from a just-snuffed candle." | | 9 | "The light cast no shadow, only a sense of pressure in the air, as if something vast were pressing its face against a curtain of water, its features just discern…" | | 10 | "No features, only a silhouette that absorbed the moonlight entirely, a cutout in the shape of a man that some hand had stretched wrong." | | 11 | "It did not move, but the space around it moved—air wobbled like heat haze above summer asphalt, a silent vibration that pushed against her eardrums." | | 12 | "Soft pads on frozen grass, circling the perimeter of the grove with a deliberation that spoke of ritual." | | 13 | "One footfall for each completed revolution of that metronome that had fallen silent." | | 14 | "The crack in the stone had become a mouth now, not screaming but whispering, a language of soft consonants that raked across her brainstem like fingernails on s…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |