Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DSG2ME0NB6B2KXYMEGXX1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.002300
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter left the last streetlamp at the park gate and stepped onto the frosted grass as if crossing a border drawn in breath. The chill in the air settled in her lungs before she fully registered it—wet and green and threaded with something older than cold. The Heartstone pendant beneath her scarf gave a single, sluggish pulse of warmth against her sternum, then quieted. She touched the spot through wool, frowning. The directions Silas had scrawled on a napkin were sparse: *Standing stones at the rise beyond Pen Ponds. Wait for the oak that faces west. When the wind stops, step through.* She’d assumed the last part was poetic nonsense. Now, standing in the dark with the city a distant orange smudge at her back, nonsense seemed the only honest currency. Her trainers made no sound on the frost-crisp grass at first. That in itself was wrong. Richmond Park at night held a thousand small noises—nightjars, the rustle of deer in the bracken, the soft tick of branches—but here, fifty yards from the gate, the world had gone into some kind of listening. She paused, turned a slow circle. The moon was a clipped nail above bare elms. Nothing moved. No breeze. She watched her own breath plume and vanish and fought the urge to hold it. *Keep going.* The reason she’d come gnawed at her better sense. Three nights of dreams, each one ending in the same image: a tree split by lightning, a crimson light pulsing in the hollow. The pendant had started feeling warm during those dreams, as if answering a question she hadn’t asked. The grove, Silas had muttered after his third whiskey, didn’t give gifts without wanting something back. Rory had borrowed his words and now carried them like a key. The ground began to rise. She followed the path by memory more than sight—dog-walker trails she’d learned during daylight hours, pretending normalcy. To her left, the long black mirror of Pen Ponds held the moon in duplicate. A heron stood at the water’s edge, motionless as a carving. Its head tracked her without a sound. She walked faster. The standing stones announced themselves as silhouettes first, a ragged circle of oaks that had grown through some old glacial argument until they’d fused into shapes that weren’t quite architecture and weren’t quite accident. At the exact center, a single stone not much taller than her waist bled a cold that seemed to push against the air itself. Rory stopped at the perimeter. “West-facing oak,” she whispered, counting the trees. The fifth one from the tilted monolith had a branch that stretched like an arm pointing out of the grove. She positioned herself in front of it, feeling foolish and small and suddenly very certain that the wind had died the exact moment she’d arrived. The silence was not empty. It had texture, like felt pressed over the ears. She waited. The instruction said to step through. But through what? She took a tentative step forward. The frost crunched—the first sound she’d made in minutes. With it came a distant chime, as if someone had struck a tiny glass bell deep underground. The pendant warmed again, sharper now. She yanked the chain free from her collar and let the heartstone dangle in the moonlight. Its crimson glow was faint but undeniable, a slow heartbeat of light that seemed to pull her toward the center stone. *Wrong.* She knew it the way prey knows it, a ripple down the spine that had no language. But the dreams, the pendant, the split tree—all of it waited somewhere beyond this grimy threshold of common sense. She tucked the stone back under her scarf and walked into the circle. The temperature dropped by ten degrees between one step and the next. Wildflowers broke against her shins, blooms she couldn’t name, petals of impossible violet and pale phosphorescent blue that should not have survived the December frost. They stirred as she passed, though no wind touched them. The scent of wet honey and turned earth rose, cloying with sweetness that didn’t belong in winter. Rory drew a steadying breath and approached the central stone. A sound behind her: a child’s giggle, liquid and close. She spun. The oaks stood in their ring, unmoved. Beyond them, the park stretched in moon-washed emptiness. The heron was gone. In its place, a dark shape that could have been a fallen branch rearranged itself in her peripheral vision and was something else—something that resolved into a figure, human-height, before she turned her head fully. When she faced it straight on, there was only a tangle of brambles and the black sheen of the pond. “Steady.” Her own voice came out thinner than she liked. She flexed her hands inside her coat pockets, feeling the crescent scar on her left wrist pull as she clenched. She turned back to the stone. The surface was smooth, almost polished, except for a single crack that ran down its face like a closed eyelid. In the thin moonlight, the crack seemed to pulse in rhythm with the pendant. Rory crouched. The air thickened around her as if the grove had noticed her noticing. *Tick. Tick. Tick.* Not a heartbeat. A clock. Somewhere to her right, among the oaks, a sound like the slow escapement of a grandfather clock’s pendulum. But no clock. She stood, scanning. The rhythm came from everywhere and nowhere, a metronome tapped against the membrane between here and somewhere else. The pendant blazed hot. She clamped a hand over it. The giggle came again, behind her left shoulder this time, so close the hair on her neck stirred. She heard the distinct syllables of her name, not “Rory” but *Aurora*, pronounced with a patient, lilting cadence that stretched the vowels into something almost musical. The voice belonged to no one she could see. “Show yourself.” The command trembled out of her, less demand than plea. The wildflowers shivered in a ripple that began at the ring of oaks and raced inward, a concentric wave of petals bending without wind. When it reached her feet, the motion stopped dead, leaving a perfect circle of stillness around her. The clock ticking grew louder. The pendant throbbed like a second heart against her ribs. She thought of running, but the direction to the gate no longer felt certain. The path behind her might lead to the pond, or it might lead deeper in. The moon above looked different now—closer, its seas a rusted red instead of grey. A flicker at the edge of vision. She refused to turn this time. Instead, she fixed her gaze on the central stone’s crack. It had widened. A hair’s breadth, maybe less, but enough to let out a thread of silver-green light that coiled upward like smoke from a just-snuffed candle. The light cast no shadow, only a sense of pressure in the air, as if something vast were pressing its face against a curtain of water, its features just discernible in the distortion. She lost the fight to keep still and glanced. Between the west-facing oak and the next, a shape stood with the patience of stone but the posture of a living thing. Tall. Limbs too long. A head tilted with an almost affectionate curiosity. No features, only a silhouette that absorbed the moonlight entirely, a cutout in the shape of a man that some hand had stretched wrong. It did not move, but the space around it moved—air wobbled like heat haze above summer asphalt, a silent vibration that pushed against her eardrums. The clock sound ceased. In its place, footsteps. Not hers. Soft pads on frozen grass, circling the perimeter of the grove with a deliberation that spoke of ritual. One footfall for each completed revolution of that metronome that had fallen silent. The shape by the oak did not step forward. It didn’t need to. The certainty that she was not alone was no longer a suspicion. It was a fact written in every cell of her skin, in the way her breath now came shallow and visible and far too fast. The pendant’s chain grew ice-cold against her throat even as the stone itself burned. She reached up, intending to yank it off, but her fingers refused the command. Something in the silver-green light held her gaze. The crack in the stone had become a mouth now, not screaming but whispering, a language of soft consonants that raked across her brainstem like fingernails on silk. The shape at the oak tilted its head a fraction more, as if awaiting an answer. Rory’s legs took a single stumbling step back. The wildflowers bent away from her retreat as if repelled. The figure did not pursue. It simply watched, and in that watching was a promise that running would only take her deeper into the circle, not out of it. The park had become a labyrinth. The air tasted of copper and snow and the forgotten scent of a room sealed for decades. She stopped. Closed her eyes. Counted to three, a trick from her father for when the world spun too fast. When she opened them, the figure was gone. But the space where it had stood still shimmered, and the footsteps continued their slow, patient circuit around the grove. Closer now. The wildflowers began to whisper in that same soft language, petals like lips shaping sounds just below the threshold of comprehension. Aurora Carter pressed her palm flat against the heartstone, let its heat fuse with her own, and listened to the footsteps draw near.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"normalcy"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"throbbed"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count3
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"normalcy"
4"silence"
5"resolved"
6"scanning"
7"trembled"
8"raced"
9"perfect"
10"throbbed"
11"flicker"
12"sense of"
13"footsteps"
14"footfall"
15"silk"
16"shimmered"
17"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
87.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords28
totalWords1599
ratio0.018
matches
0"Standing stones at the rise beyond Pen Ponds. Wait for the oak that faces west. When the wind stops, step through."
1"Keep going."
2"Wrong."
3"Tick. Tick. Tick."
4"Aurora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1593
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Heartstone1
Silas2
Pen2
Ponds2
Park1
December1
Rory5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Silas"
3"Ponds"
4"Rory"
places
0"Pen"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if crossing a border drawn in breath"
1"as if answering a question she hadn’t asked"
2"quite architecture and weren’t quite accident"
3"quite accident"
4"cold that seemed to push against the air itself"
5"light that seemed to pull her toward the center stone"
6"as if awaiting an answer"
74.92% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.251
wordCount1599
matches
0"not “Rory” but *Aurora*, pronounced with a patient, lilting cadence"
1"not screaming but whispering, a language of soft consonants"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean53.3
std30.71
cv0.576
sampleLengths
072
160
286
379
455
53
663
766
82
984
1050
1174
1286
1330
1455
153
1647
1710
1853
1912
2099
2183
229
2383
244
2587
2680
2770
2871
2923
99.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs241
matches
0"were pressing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences129
ratio0.062
matches
0"The chill in the air settled in her lungs before she fully registered it—wet and green and threaded with something older than cold."
1"Richmond Park at night held a thousand small noises—nightjars, the rustle of deer in the bracken, the soft tick of branches—but here, fifty yards from the gate, the world had gone into some kind of listening."
2"She followed the path by memory more than sight—dog-walker trails she’d learned during daylight hours, pretending normalcy."
3"The frost crunched—the first sound she’d made in minutes."
4"But the dreams, the pendant, the split tree—all of it waited somewhere beyond this grimy threshold of common sense."
5"In its place, a dark shape that could have been a fallen branch rearranged itself in her peripheral vision and was something else—something that resolved into a figure, human-height, before she turned her head fully."
6"The moon above looked different now—closer, its seas a rusted red instead of grey."
7"It did not move, but the space around it moved—air wobbled like heat haze above summer asphalt, a silent vibration that pushed against her eardrums."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1611
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03041589075108628
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006207324643078833
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean12.4
std8.28
cv0.668
sampleLengths
024
123
218
37
418
57
614
721
811
95
1036
116
129
132
142
1515
1611
1723
1817
1916
2012
215
2217
2315
2411
257
263
2734
2824
295
307
3120
3225
335
349
352
366
373
386
399
4017
416
4216
4321
4418
4519
4613
4712
4825
4910
45.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.32558139534883723
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners42
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"Somewhere to her right, among"
1"Instead, she fixed her gaze"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences116
matches
0"She touched the spot through"
1"Her trainers made no sound"
2"She paused, turned a slow"
3"She watched her own breath"
4"She followed the path by"
5"Its head tracked her without"
6"She walked faster."
7"she whispered, counting the trees"
8"She positioned herself in front"
9"It had texture, like felt"
10"She took a tentative step"
11"She yanked the chain free"
12"Its crimson glow was faint"
13"She tucked the stone back"
14"They stirred as she passed,"
15"Her own voice came out"
16"She flexed her hands inside"
17"She turned back to the"
18"She stood, scanning."
19"She clamped a hand over"
ratio0.259
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences116
matches
0"Aurora Carter left the last"
1"The chill in the air"
2"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
3"She touched the spot through"
4"The directions Silas had scrawled"
5"Her trainers made no sound"
6"That in itself was wrong."
7"Richmond Park at night held"
8"She paused, turned a slow"
9"The moon was a clipped"
10"She watched her own breath"
11"The pendant had started feeling"
12"The grove, Silas had muttered"
13"Rory had borrowed his words"
14"The ground began to rise."
15"She followed the path by"
16"A heron stood at the"
17"Its head tracked her without"
18"She walked faster."
19"The standing stones announced themselves"
ratio0.75
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"Now, standing in the dark"
1"To her left, the long"
ratio0.017
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"The standing stones announced themselves as silhouettes first, a ragged circle of oaks that had grown through some old glacial argument until they’d fused into …"
1"At the exact center, a single stone not much taller than her waist bled a cold that seemed to push against the air itself."
2"With it came a distant chime, as if someone had struck a tiny glass bell deep underground."
3"Its crimson glow was faint but undeniable, a slow heartbeat of light that seemed to pull her toward the center stone."
4"*Wrong.* She knew it the way prey knows it, a ripple down the spine that had no language."
5"The scent of wet honey and turned earth rose, cloying with sweetness that didn’t belong in winter."
6"In its place, a dark shape that could have been a fallen branch rearranged itself in her peripheral vision and was something else—something that resolved into a…"
7"The wildflowers shivered in a ripple that began at the ring of oaks and raced inward, a concentric wave of petals bending without wind."
8"A hair’s breadth, maybe less, but enough to let out a thread of silver-green light that coiled upward like smoke from a just-snuffed candle."
9"The light cast no shadow, only a sense of pressure in the air, as if something vast were pressing its face against a curtain of water, its features just discern…"
10"No features, only a silhouette that absorbed the moonlight entirely, a cutout in the shape of a man that some hand had stretched wrong."
11"It did not move, but the space around it moved—air wobbled like heat haze above summer asphalt, a silent vibration that pushed against her eardrums."
12"Soft pads on frozen grass, circling the perimeter of the grove with a deliberation that spoke of ritual."
13"One footfall for each completed revolution of that metronome that had fallen silent."
14"The crack in the stone had become a mouth now, not screaming but whispering, a language of soft consonants that raked across her brainstem like fingernails on s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
78.6391%