| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped aside [aside]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.372 | | leniency | 0.744 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |
| 84.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1597 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1597 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "navigate" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "calculating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1608 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Aurora, if you walk out that door with Evan still breathing, you're making a mistake.\"" | | 1 | "thunk" | | 2 | "supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1180 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Tuesday | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Lucien | 14 | | Moreau | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | London | 2 | | East | 1 | | End | 1 | | Cantonese | 1 | | Kowloon | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Swallowed | 1 | | Despite | 1 | | Edinburgh | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "East" | | 3 | "End" | | 4 | "Cantonese" | | 5 | "Kowloon" | | 6 | "Edinburgh" | | 7 | "Brick" | | 8 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.907 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite conceal" | | 1 | "nder the sofa, apparently deciding he wanted" | | 2 | "quite belong to the human world" |
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| 75.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.244 | | wordCount | 1608 | | matches | | 0 | "not good at arithmetic, Rory, but even I can see" | | 1 | "Not to her face, as she'd expected, but to her wrist" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 28.71 | | std | 23.73 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 80 | | 31 | 58 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 69 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 75 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 69 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was still holding" | | 1 | "was still letting" | | 2 | "were calculating" | | 3 | "was still hiding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva wasn't due back from her symposium until Tuesday, and the curry house downstairs had already closed for the night — she could tell by the absence of cumin and cardamom seeping through the floorboards." | | 1 | "The last time they'd been in the same room — this very flat, actually — he'd handed her a manila envelope containing three new identity documents and said, *\"Aurora, if you walk out that door with Evan still breathing, you're making a mistake.\"*" | | 2 | "Lucien looked exactly as he always did — immaculate and faintly dangerous — but there was something tighter around his eyes tonight." | | 3 | "Lucien always knew where everyone was — it was half his professional identity and all of his personal one." | | 4 | "Instead, he lifted a scroll from the armchair — Eva's only armchair — and examined it with the detached curiosity of someone who read dead languages for sport." | | 5 | "Something flickered across his face — too fast to name, too quick to catch." | | 6 | "He was beautiful in the way that old paintings were beautiful — something unsettling lurking beneath the surface, something that didn't quite belong to the human world." | | 7 | "The small crescent-shaped scar stood out pale against her skin — a childhood accident, she always said, and it was true, even if the accident had been her father's signet ring and her mother's insistence that she stop crying." |
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| 73.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1174 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 74 | | adverbRatio | 0.06303236797274275 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012776831345826235 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 12.27 | | std | 10.23 | | cv | 0.833 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 64.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4198473282442748 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Then the third." | | 2 | "Of course he wasn't." | | 3 | "Instead, he lifted a scroll" | | 4 | "Instead, his fingers hovered in" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She padded to the door," | | 1 | "She hadn't seen Lucien Moreau" | | 2 | "She'd walked out anyway." | | 3 | "His voice carried through the" | | 4 | "She closed her eyes." | | 5 | "His heterochromatic gaze swept over" | | 6 | "She stepped aside" | | 7 | "He swept past her in" | | 8 | "She'd once watched him navigate" | | 9 | "He didn't answer immediately." | | 10 | "He set the scroll down" | | 11 | "It might have been hurt." | | 12 | "It might have been irritation." | | 13 | "She'd been right." | | 14 | "She'd refused, because at the" | | 15 | "He took a step toward" | | 16 | "His voice had dropped, shedding" | | 17 | "He lifted his free hand," | | 18 | "He was beautiful in the" | | 19 | "he said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 81.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came in three" | | 1 | "Rory set down the container" | | 2 | "Eva wasn't due back from" | | 3 | "That left very few people" | | 4 | "She padded to the door," | | 5 | "The fisheye lens distorted the" | | 6 | "Platinum blond hair slicked back" | | 7 | "Charcoal suit sharp enough to" | | 8 | "Rory's stomach dropped straight through" | | 9 | "She hadn't seen Lucien Moreau" | | 10 | "The last time they'd been" | | 11 | "She'd walked out anyway." | | 12 | "The knock came again, slower" | | 13 | "His voice carried through the" | | 14 | "She closed her eyes." | | 15 | "The first deadbolt slid back" | | 16 | "Lucien looked exactly as he" | | 17 | "A tension in the jaw" | | 18 | "His heterochromatic gaze swept over" | | 19 | "Amber eye catching the light." |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "One hand resting on an ivory-handled cane that gleamed even in the murk of the corridor." | | 1 | "Rory crossed her arms and leaned against the doorframe that separated the living room from the kitchenette." | | 2 | "Books and scrolls and Eva's cramped handwriting covered every available surface, a archaeology of obsession that had overtaken the coffee table, the dining chai…" | | 3 | "Lucien navigated it without looking, stepping around a stack of medieval bestiaries as if he'd memorized the layout." | | 4 | "He was beautiful in the way that old paintings were beautiful — something unsettling lurking beneath the surface, something that didn't quite belong to the huma…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "his cane tightened, knuckles whitening against the ivory" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.209 | | leniency | 0.419 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |