Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DSNWEV66B5ENA5MQG9YH0

Run Details

Duration:
54.9s
Cost:
$0.001885
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The footpath ended at a clot of shadow that smelled of damp oak and something older. Rory thumbed the zipper of her jacket, the sound swallowed by the immensity of Richmond Park after midnight. No streetlamps reached this far from the road. No distant traffic hum. Just the raw, black quiet of November woods pressing against the edges of her phone's flashlight beam. The Heartstone pendant burned cold against her collarbone. She had traced the warmth to this place—had followed it through three weeks of sleepless nights and obsessive map-scrolling until the pattern became undeniable. The stone pulsed strongest at coordinates that corresponded to nothing on any official survey. An omission. A blind spot where satellite imagery blurred just enough to make you look away. Her phone screen flickered. Rory stopped walking. The beam held steady, but something in the periphery of the light did not. She turned her head and caught only the after-image of movement—a suggestion of pale bark shifting where no wind blew. She counted five heartbeats before convincing her legs to carry her forward again. The standing stones announced themselves without ceremony. Three oaks, impossibly old, their trunks grown together in a rough triangle. The bark spiraled in patterns that hurt to follow, like trying to read text in a language you almost recognized. Rory's light swept across their surfaces and found carvings—not runes, not anything she could name—that seemed to recede from the beam as she moved it. "Right then." Her voice came out thinner than she intended. The sound died within arm's reach, swallowed by the same silence that had devoured the city noise. She had prepared for this. A pocket realm, Eva had called it. A place between. The instructions were specific: step between the stones at the moment the pendant's pulse matched your heartbeat. Wait for the veil to thin. Do not speak your name. Do not accept gifts. Do not— A child laughed somewhere in the dark behind her. Not a recording. Not an animal. The unmistakable, delighted giggle of a small child at play, wet and close and wrong in the November emptiness. Rory spun, the flashlight carving a frantic arc across bracken and bramble. Nothing. The laugh came again, this time from her left. Then her right. Then directly overhead. She looked up. The branches of the standing oaks interlaced into a canopy that shouldn't have held leaves this late in the year, but did—pale silver-green foliage that rustled without wind. Through the gaps, she saw no stars. No moon. No sky at all, just a depthless black that seemed to lean down toward her like a face pressing against glass. The pendant's pulse quickened. Not matching her heartbeat anymore. Outpacing it. Rory forced her breathing to slow. Fear was a luxury she couldn't afford, not here, not with the Grove's threshold yawning before her like an unhealed wound. She stepped between the stones. The transition was not a step but a fall sideways through temperatures that had no names. Cold that burned. Heat that numbed. The smell of wildflowers blooming in soil that had never seen sunlight. Her boots found ground that gave slightly, like walking on the chest of something breathing. The Grove opened around her. In the dark, it should have been invisible. But the dark here was not an absence of light—it was a presence, a substance, a velvet black that things moved through like fish in deep water. The wildflowers glowed faintly, pale blues and corpse-whites, their petals turning toward her with the slow, blind hunger of things that fed on attention. A sound built at the edges of hearing. Not the child's laugh now, but something older. A humming, maybe. Or a lullaby. Or the sound a mother makes when she's forgotten the words but remembers the ache behind them. It came from everywhere and nowhere, and it made the fine hairs on Rory's arms stand at attention. She was not alone. The certainty arrived complete and irrefutable, like a word placed directly into her mind. Something watched from the treeline—and treeline was the wrong word, these weren't trees, these were shapes that had learned to approximate trees the way a doll approximates a person. Their branches bent at joints. Their roots shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. "They know you're here." The voice came from beside her left shoulder. Close enough to feel breath. Rory did not turn. Every instinct that had kept her alive through Evan's rages, through London's dark streets, through the slow revelation that the world was full of hungers wearing familiar shapes—every one of those instincts screamed at her to remain still. "You're cleverer than most." The voice circled to her right, and now she could smell it. Honey and rot. Spring flowers and the sweet, cloying depth of something long dead. "Most of them turn. Most of them run. We like the ones who run." The humming grew louder. Or closer. The wildflowers swayed in time to it, and Rory realized with a lurch of her stomach that they were turning their faces toward the voice, toward the thing that circled her, the way sunflowers track the sun. "I came to understand." Her voice held steady. Good. That was good. "Did you?" A pause. A consideration. The presence settled somewhere in front of her, and the quality of the darkness changed, became a shape defined by its refusal to be shaped. A silhouette that ate the glow of the flowers around it. "You came because a stone around your neck told you to. You came because you are curious. You came because you are running from something and thought you might find something else to run toward." The pendant flared hot against her skin—not the gentle warmth of before, but a warning heat that made her want to tear it off. "That's not why I'm here," she said. "No?" The shape leaned closer, and in the space where its face should have been, she saw the suggestion of features—not a face, but the memory of one, the way water remembers the stone that disturbed it. "Then tell me, Aurora Carter. Tell me why you've stepped into my Grove in the hour of deep night, carrying a dead god's heart around your throat." The humming stopped. The wildflowers turned their faces away. And somewhere behind the shape—far behind it, in the impossible depth of the Grove that shouldn't extend past the stones but did—Rory heard footsteps. Many footsteps. Small and light and quick, like children running barefoot through wet grass. Coming closer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count2
highlights
0"traced"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"flickered"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"velvet"
8"familiar"
9"lurch"
10"stomach"
11"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1096
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount998
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
November2
Heartstone1
Eva1
Grove3
Rory9
Evan1
London1
Honey1
Good1
Do3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.65
wordCount1096
matches
0"not a step but a fall sideways through temperatures"
1"Not the child's laugh now, but something older"
2"not the gentle warmth of before, but a warning heat"
3"not a face, but the memory of one, the way water remembers the stone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.25
std23.95
cv0.699
sampleLengths
063
18
254
34
450
564
627
749
89
953
103
1158
1211
1332
1449
155
1659
1757
184
1958
204
2155
2244
2343
2412
2577
2624
277
2864
293
306
3140
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs158
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"were turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences99
ratio0.111
matches
0"She had traced the warmth to this place—had followed it through three weeks of sleepless nights and obsessive map-scrolling until the pattern became undeniable."
1"She turned her head and caught only the after-image of movement—a suggestion of pale bark shifting where no wind blew."
2"Rory's light swept across their surfaces and found carvings—not runes, not anything she could name—that seemed to recede from the beam as she moved it."
3"Do not—"
4"The branches of the standing oaks interlaced into a canopy that shouldn't have held leaves this late in the year, but did—pale silver-green foliage that rustled without wind."
5"But the dark here was not an absence of light—it was a presence, a substance, a velvet black that things moved through like fish in deep water."
6"Something watched from the treeline—and treeline was the wrong word, these weren't trees, these were shapes that had learned to approximate trees the way a doll approximates a person."
7"Every instinct that had kept her alive through Evan's rages, through London's dark streets, through the slow revelation that the world was full of hungers wearing familiar shapes—every one of those instincts screamed at her to remain still."
8"The pendant flared hot against her skin—not the gentle warmth of before, but a warning heat that made her want to tear it off."
9"\"No?\" The shape leaned closer, and in the space where its face should have been, she saw the suggestion of features—not a face, but the memory of one, the way water remembers the stone that disturbed it."
10"And somewhere behind the shape—far behind it, in the impossible depth of the Grove that shouldn't extend past the stones but did—Rory heard footsteps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.027613412228796843
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006903353057199211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.07
std9.16
cv0.828
sampleLengths
016
118
28
34
417
58
624
714
82
914
104
113
1214
1320
1413
157
1612
1720
1825
1910
2017
215
227
233
2417
256
265
274
282
299
303
313
3219
3312
341
359
363
373
383
3928
407
412
4221
434
445
452
466
4721
485
4916
57.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.41414141414141414
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just the raw, black quiet"
1"Then her right."
2"Then directly overhead."
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences83
matches
0"She had traced the warmth"
1"Her phone screen flickered."
2"She turned her head and"
3"She counted five heartbeats before"
4"Her voice came out thinner"
5"She had prepared for this."
6"She looked up."
7"She stepped between the stones."
8"Her boots found ground that"
9"It came from everywhere and"
10"She was not alone."
11"Their branches bent at joints."
12"Their roots shifted when she"
13"Her voice held steady"
ratio0.169
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences83
matches
0"The footpath ended at a"
1"Rory thumbed the zipper of"
2"The Heartstone pendant burned cold"
3"She had traced the warmth"
4"The stone pulsed strongest at"
5"A blind spot where satellite"
6"Her phone screen flickered."
7"Rory stopped walking."
8"The beam held steady, but"
9"She turned her head and"
10"She counted five heartbeats before"
11"The standing stones announced themselves"
12"The bark spiraled in patterns"
13"Rory's light swept across their"
14"Her voice came out thinner"
15"The sound died within arm's"
16"She had prepared for this."
17"A pocket realm, Eva had"
18"A place between."
19"The instructions were specific: step"
ratio0.699
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The branches of the standing oaks interlaced into a canopy that shouldn't have held leaves this late in the year, but did—pale silver-green foliage that rustled…"
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4"And somewhere behind the shape—far behind it, in the impossible depth of the Grove that shouldn't extend past the stones but did—Rory heard footsteps."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.3262%