| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.513 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |
| 88.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1727 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1727 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "intensity" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "resonated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1741 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1446 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 11 | | Aurora | 20 | | Through | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.808 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "not-quite blue, almost-purple, something that shimmered between gold and green depending on the angle of the light" | | 1 | "felt like a comfort then" | | 2 | "felt like a leash" | | 3 | "as though reaching for something that wasn’t there" | | 4 | "sounded like fear" | | 5 | "tasted like ash" | | 6 | "something close to solid" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.574 | | wordCount | 1741 | | matches | | 0 | "not fear, exactly, but a wary recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 36.27 | | std | 25.26 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 102 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 63 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 87 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 83 | | 36 | 64 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 90.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "was deciding" | | 1 | "was like plunging" | | 2 | "was crying" | | 3 | "were growing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it on her skin — a warmth that had no business in a London winter, thick as honey and twice as sweet." | | 1 | "In the amber light bleeding through the grove’s entrance, they looked less like a silhouette and more like a living wound in the world — depthless black with faintly glowing violet eyes that narrowed as they took in the scene." | | 2 | "The half-Fae stood in a pool of wildflowers that bloomed in colors Aurora couldn’t name — not-quite-blue, almost-purple, something that shimmered between gold and green depending on the angle of the light." | | 3 | "Nyx made a sound that might have been amusement — a susurrus of breath that stirred the leaves overhead without touching them." | | 4 | "The sky above was wrong — a deep violet bruised with streaks of silver, like a twilight that had been holding its breath for millennia." | | 5 | "Wildflowers pushed up everywhere — clusters of star-shaped blooms that opened as she passed, revealing centers that glowed with a faint bioluminescence." | | 6 | "Aurora crossed to them, her boots leaving no prints in the strange grass — and when had that started?" | | 7 | "— while Isolde followed at a more sedate pace." | | 8 | "As Aurora drew closer, she realized it was a rift — a tear in the fabric of the grove itself, a wound that bled darkness into the violet twilight." | | 9 | "Their violet eyes were bright with something Aurora had never seen in them before — not fear, exactly, but a wary recognition that was almost worse." | | 10 | "The reflecting pool rippled, and in its surface Aurora caught a glimpse of her own face — pale, wide-eyed, the crescent scar on her wrist stark against her skin as she clutched the pendant like a lifeline." | | 11 | "They left the grove together — the human, the shade, the half-Fae — and behind them, the rift pulsed in the twilight like a beating heart, waiting to be fed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1156 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.037197231833910036 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007785467128027681 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 15.14 | | std | 10.03 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 47.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3652173913043478 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the reflecting pool went" | | 1 | "Then she smiled, and it" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 83.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 1 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 2 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 3 | "Her silver hair caught a" | | 4 | "She left no impression in" | | 5 | "Her voice carried the particular" | | 6 | "It was a pocket, a" | | 7 | "she murmured, and the words" | | 8 | "She had stopped near the" | | 9 | "They paused near a cluster" | | 10 | "It was warmer now, pulsing" | | 11 | "She looked down at the" | | 12 | "She paused, and her lavender" | | 13 | "It had been three weeks" | | 14 | "It had felt like a" | | 15 | "They had drifted to the" | | 16 | "Their form pressed against it," | | 17 | "She saw vineyards stretching across" | | 18 | "She saw orchards heavy with" | | 19 | "she said again, but this" |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "Aurora felt it on her" | | 2 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 3 | "It pulsed against her palm," | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 5 | "they whispered, and their voice" | | 6 | "Isolde had already crossed the" | | 7 | "The half-Fae stood in a" | | 8 | "Her silver hair caught a" | | 9 | "She left no impression in" | | 10 | "Isolde said, without turning around" | | 11 | "Her voice carried the particular" | | 12 | "Nyx made a sound that" | | 13 | "Aurora shot them a look," | | 14 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 15 | "The grove wasn’t a clearing." | | 16 | "That was the first thing" | | 17 | "It was a pocket, a" | | 18 | "The sky above was wrong" | | 19 | "The trees that ringed the" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Now their bark gleamed with" | | 1 | "Now it felt like a" | | 2 | "— while Isolde followed at" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed against her palm, a steady rhythm that matched her heartbeat." | | 1 | "The half-Fae stood in a pool of wildflowers that bloomed in colors Aurora couldn’t name — not-quite-blue, almost-purple, something that shimmered between gold a…" | | 2 | "Her silver hair caught a breeze that didn’t exist, lifting strands of it around her shoulders like drifting smoke." | | 3 | "She left no impression in the grass, no bent stem or disturbed petal, as though the grove refused to acknowledge her weight." | | 4 | "Her voice carried the particular cadence of someone who had spent three centuries learning to make even the simplest statements sound like prophecy." | | 5 | "The sky above was wrong — a deep violet bruised with streaks of silver, like a twilight that had been holding its breath for millennia." | | 6 | "Now their bark gleamed with a faint pearlescent sheen, and their leaves whispered in a language that made Aurora’s teeth ache." | | 7 | "The grass beneath her feet was impossibly soft, each blade bending under her boots with a resilience that felt almost deliberate, as though the ground itself wa…" | | 8 | "Wildflowers pushed up everywhere — clusters of star-shaped blooms that opened as she passed, revealing centers that glowed with a faint bioluminescence." | | 9 | "The air tasted of ozone and honey and something else, something that reminded her of the moment before a thunderstorm breaks." | | 10 | "They paused near a cluster of mushrooms that grew in a perfect spiral, their caps a deep iridescent blue that shifted to green when viewed from a different angl…" | | 11 | "It was warmer now, pulsing with a heat that bordered on uncomfortable." | | 12 | "The half-Fae’s expression was unreadable, but Aurora had spent enough time around her now to recognize the tension in her shoulders, the way her fingers curled …" | | 13 | "As Aurora drew closer, she realized it was a rift — a tear in the fabric of the grove itself, a wound that bled darkness into the violet twilight." | | 14 | "The air that drifted through the portal was warm and rich, carrying the scent of roasting meat and spiced wine and something underneath it all, something dark a…" | | 15 | "Their violet eyes were bright with something Aurora had never seen in them before — not fear, exactly, but a wary recognition that was almost worse." | | 16 | "The sensation was like plunging her fingers into cold smoke, but Nyx steadied at the contact, their eyes focusing on her face." | | 17 | "They looked at the rift, at the amber sky and the impossible vineyards, at the shapes moving in the distance that were growing larger, closer, more defined." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, without turning around" | | 1 | "she murmured, and the words felt inadequate" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steady despite the tears tracking down her cheeks" | | 3 | "she asked, and her voice was almost light" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |