| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "grave" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1111 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 854 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.856 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite her own" | | 1 | "looked like it had been hammered from moo" | | 2 | "fabric that seemed to shift on its own" | | 3 | "not quite a smile, but close" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.7 | | wordCount | 1111 | | matches | | 0 | "Not stone at all, but wood so ancient" | | 1 | "not the warning heat it gave near Hel portals, but something gentler" | | 2 | "not quite a smile, but close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 28.49 | | std | 20.51 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 72 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 56 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent hit Rory first—sweet and heavy, like honey left too long in the sun, undercut by something green and wild." | | 1 | "Flowers bloomed in riotous clusters, their petals shifting through shades no mortal garden had ever produced—deep violets that bled into copper, blues that flickered with silver veins like captured lightning." | | 2 | "Not with insects—the grove was eerily silent of them—but with something else." | | 3 | "She felt it too—the weight of unseen eyes, the prickle at the back of her neck." | | 4 | "It pulsed with warmth—not the warning heat it gave near Hel portals, but something gentler." | | 5 | "At the centre of the stone circle, a single tree grew—a silver birch with bark that looked like it had been hammered from moon-metal." | | 6 | "She wore robes the colour of dusk—grey fading into deep purple, fabric that seemed to shift on its own." | | 7 | "Isolde's lips curved—not quite a smile, but close." | | 8 | "The grove held its breath—the hum dimmed, the glittering moss stilled, even the silver birch seemed to lean forward." | | 9 | "The ground where she stepped didn't mar the moss—the glittering lights simply parted for her and closed again in her wake." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 872 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.0389908256880734 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006880733944954129 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 12.34 | | std | 7.45 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 71.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Isolde nodded, a single," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 73.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the last" | | 1 | "It rose again after each" | | 2 | "It settled in her chest," | | 3 | "They stood still, head tilted," | | 4 | "they said, their voice that" | | 5 | "She had her hand on" | | 6 | "She felt it too—the weight" | | 7 | "It felt patient." | | 8 | "They were oak, she realised." | | 9 | "They were right." | | 10 | "She'd been reaching out without" | | 11 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 12 | "It pulsed with warmth—not the" | | 13 | "Its leaves caught the amber" | | 14 | "They rose above it, twisting" | | 15 | "Her silver hair pooled around" | | 16 | "She wore robes the colour" | | 17 | "Her voice was calm, musical," | | 18 | "Her feet didn't disturb the" | | 19 | "She glided across it like" |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent hit Rory first—sweet" | | 1 | "She pushed through the last" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove unfolded before" | | 3 | "Flowers bloomed in riotous clusters," | | 4 | "The grass beneath her feet" | | 5 | "It rose again after each" | | 6 | "The air hummed." | | 7 | "A vibration just below hearing," | | 8 | "It settled in her chest," | | 9 | "Nyx slipped through the gap" | | 10 | "They stood still, head tilted," | | 11 | "they said, their voice that" | | 12 | "She had her hand on" | | 13 | "Rory didn't tell her she" | | 14 | "She felt it too—the weight" | | 15 | "It felt patient." | | 16 | "The standing stones rose at" | | 17 | "They were oak, she realised." | | 18 | "Moss grew in spirals along" | | 19 | "Nyx said, not turning" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers bloomed in riotous clusters, their petals shifting through shades no mortal garden had ever produced—deep violets that bled into copper, blues that flic…" | | 1 | "Each footstep sent ripples through the light, spreading outward in concentric rings that faded before they reached the stones." | | 2 | "At the centre of the stone circle, a single tree grew—a silver birch with bark that looked like it had been hammered from moon-metal." | | 3 | "She wore robes the colour of dusk—grey fading into deep purple, fabric that seemed to shift on its own." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their voice that familiar whisper-on-wind" | | 1 | "Nyx said, not turning" | | 2 | "Isolde reached out, her fingers hovering over the pendant without touching it" |
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| 85.48% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.323 | | leniency | 0.645 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |