Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DX0VW5EG0QM5XJXKB693V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 51s
Cost:
$0.003434
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token felt greasy between her fingers as Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the striped barrier tape and stepped off the last tread of the escalator. The air hit her first—cold, damp, carrying a mineral tang of old brickwork and something else, something burnt and organic that clung to the back of her throat. Camden Town’s abandoned deep-level shelter had been closed to the public since the Blitz, but the forensics team’s portable arc lamps threw harsh arcs of white light against arched concrete, illuminating a warren of stalls cobbled together from salvaged timber and corrugated iron. The Veil Market, the uniformed PC at the top of the stairs had called it, as though she were supposed to know the name. Quinn pocketed the token. The desk sergeant at Mornington Crescent had eyed her with a mix of pity and relief when he handed it over—a small disc of polished bone etched with a labyrinth pattern. “DI Tran sends his compliments,” he’d said, and then, quieter, “Says you’ll need it for the door.” There was no door. Only a platform arch that seemed to swallow the light. She had walked through, and her wristwatch had stuttered—a half-second pause before the second hand jumped back into its steady sweep. She filed the glitch away. Now she scanned the scene. A body lay sprawled near what looked like an apothecary’s stall, glass jars glinting purple and amber on the shelves behind. The victim was male, late fifties, gaunt, with a beard that had been trimmed to a precise point. His eyes were open, fixed on the ceiling in an expression of abject terror that had already begun to stiffen into rigor. No blood. No visible wounds. His right hand was clenched around a small brass compass. “DI Quinn?” A woman’s voice, carrying the soft lilt of Oxford polish. Quinn turned. A figure emerged from behind a stack of leather-bound ledgers, a woman in round glasses, red curls escaping a hasty bun. Freckles dusted her nose and cheeks. A worn leather satchel bulged at her hip. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear and extended her free hand. The other cradled a notebook covered in dense, spidery handwriting. “Eva Kowalski. Research assistant, British Museum restricted archives. DCI Weaver drafted me as a consultant on the symbology.” A faint grimace. “Though I’m beginning to suspect I was invited so the division could claim they’d pursued every angle.” “A civilian consultant.” Quinn’s words fell flat. “An occult researcher, specifically.” Eva’s green eyes tracked Quinn’s reaction. “The symbols carved into the stall counters and the floor around our victim aren’t gang tags. They’re wards. Binding marks from a fourteenth-century grimoire.” Quinn stepped past her, crouching near the body without touching. The compass in the dead man’s grip drew her attention. It was old, the brass casing mottled with verdigris, the face etched with sigils that matched some of the chalk marks on the concrete. The needle quivered, pointing not north but directly at the victim’s chest. “Tell me,” Quinn said, “what you see.” Eva knelt opposite, careful not to disturb anything. “I see a man who traded in artifacts that shouldn’t exist, killed by something that left no entry wound and no forensic trace. The temperature of the body is four degrees below ambient—which, given the ambient is twelve degrees and falling, makes little sense unless he’s been dead for less than two hours. The time of death by lividity is inconsistent with the degree of rigor. And that compass? It’s not a compass, not in the magnetic sense. It’s a Veil Compass, attuned to supernatural rifts. I’d wager if you took it from his hand, the needle would spin until it found the nearest breach.” “The nearest what?” “Portal. Tear between our world and… somewhere else.” Eva’s voice didn’t waver. She delivered it with the same calm as stating a museum catalogue number. “I think a rift opened here just after midnight. I think something came through. Something that doesn’t kill with knives or bullets. And I think our victim—whose stall includes dreamcatchers threaded with human teeth and bottles of black ichor labelled ‘void-touched’—was in the wrong place at the wrong moment.” Quinn absorbed this without changing expression. Her military bearing kept her spine straight, hands resting loose at her sides. She let her gaze drift across the stall, noting the way the glass jars nearest the body were dim, the liquids inside darkened as though scorched from within. The forensics team had set up their equipment around the perimeter, but every time a camera flash went off near the body, the light seemed to bend, as if passing through a lens of warped air. One technician muttered under his breath and swapped out the camera’s memory card. “The equipment’s malfunctioning,” Eva said, following Quinn’s look. “Only within a three-metre radius of the position of the rift. The crime scene manager’s Geiger counter clicked briefly when they first arrived, but now it’s silent. The Shadow Rift—that’s what the grimoire calls it—left a decaying residue.” Quinn’s mind catalogued the details without prejudice. She had eighteen years of solving cases that other detectives wanted to bury. Her partner, DS Morris, had died three years ago in a warehouse that showed the same contradictions: a locked room, a body with no trauma, electronic failures, and temperature drops that the official report blamed on a broken HVAC system. She remembered the way Morris’s own watch had stopped at 3:07 a.m., exactly synchronised with the 999 call timestamp. No explanation. Case unsolved, shunted to the cold files. She reached for the compass. The dead man’s fingers were stiff, but a gentle pressure on the wrist tendon released the grip. The brass casing was ice-cold. She held it flat on her palm. The needle swung away from the body and came to rest pointing at Eva’s satchel. Eva flinched, then exhaled. “I have a few items from the archive that resonate. It’s not a weapon.” Quinn turned the compass over. On the back, under the verdigris, she found engraving: _To find what is hidden, follow the wound._ She read it aloud. “The rifts are wounds,” Eva said. “In the fabric of the world. They bleed energy. This compass was crafted by a Shade artisan—a being from the other side. It’s attracted to that energy. The victim probably used it to source his merchandise.” Quinn lifted her head. “You’re telling me this market deals in goods from another dimension.” Her tone was flat, but her brown eyes were sharp, missing nothing. “The Veil Market moves every full moon for a reason.” Eva gestured at the station’s curved ceiling. “The vendors aren’t all human. The customers aren’t, either. The Met’s Special Operations unit has been tracking it for years but can never find entry without a token. Tonight, someone tipped them off to a ‘disturbance,’ and your dispatcher sent you because you’re the only DI who doesn’t have a case closure quota hanging over her head.” The barb landed, but Quinn didn’t flinch. She’d been sidelined from major investigations since she insisted Morris’s death wasn’t a heart attack caused by stress. Now she understood the desk sergeant’s pity. She looked down at the body again, her eyes tracing the chalk wards, the way they spiralled inward like a snare. “If a rift opened here and something came through, why didn’t it kill anyone else? Why just this stall?” Eva opened her mouth, paused, and then closed it. That tuck of hair again, a nervous tell. Quinn had seen it three times now. “I don’t know. Unless the wards were placed after he died, to contain something. But who would do that?” Quinn stood, the compass still cold in her grip. She walked the scene, counting. Three steps from the body, the arc light flickered. Four steps, a faint scent of ozone. She traced a line with her eyes from the dead man’s hand to the jars on the shelf—one of them had a hairline crack that wasn’t there in the photos the SOCO had taken twenty minutes earlier, because she’d glanced at the camera screen on her way in. “The rift is still here,” she said. “Dormant, maybe, but present. The reservoir of whatever energy it left is degrading those jars, not time.” She pointed to the crack. “Thermal expansion from cold. But the temperature hasn’t changed. So it’s not thermal.” Eva stared at the jar, then at Quinn. “You believe me?” “I believe evidence.” Quinn’s jaw set. “The evidence says my watch stopped for half a second when I entered. It says this compass points to your bag and you know why. It says a man is dead with no cause of death that fits the medical textbooks, and a crime scene manager is replacing batteries on gear that’s never failed before. I believe something happened here that isn’t in the procedure manual.” She looked at Eva. “Now tell me what the wards on the floor really do. Every single one.” Eva’s freckled face went still. She understood, then, what Quinn had already deduced: the symbols weren’t random. They formed a perimeter, yes, but also a bottleneck— a corridor of binding marks that funnelled from the stall entrance to the exact spot where the body lay. Someone had set a trap. Not to keep something out, but to direct it toward a specific target. “The victim was bait,” Quinn said, filling the silence herself. “The wards weren’t for his protection. They were meant to lure whatever came through the rift straight to his stall. Someone wanted him dead. Someone who knew when the rift would open.” Eva’s hand went to her satchel, fumbling for a leather-bound journal. “If that’s true, then whoever did this had access to the market schedule—and the means to carve seventh-circle binding sigils without error. That’s not a common skill set even in my circles.” Quinn glanced at the compass. The needle still pointed at Eva’s bag. “Then we start with the person who has those skills and a collection of artefacts that resonate.” She let the implication hang. “You knew about this place. You have a satchel full of objects that make the compass react. You were invited as a consultant before I even entered the station. How did DCI Weaver know to call you?” Eva’s expression flickered—shock, then something harder, more guarded. “Because I found the body.” The words settled into the cold air, and for the first time that night, Harlow Quinn felt the pieces of a puzzle begin to shift into an order no one else had seen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"implication"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"scanned"
2"glinting"
3"lilt"
4"quivered"
5"magnetic"
6"tracing"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
9"silence"
10"implication"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1768
ratio0.005
matches
0"To find what is hidden, follow the wound."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1059
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow2
Quinn21
Town1
Blitz1
Veil1
Market1
Mornington1
Crescent1
Oxford1
Eva15
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Morris"
places
0"Town"
1"Mornington"
2"Crescent"
3"Oxford"
globalScore0.508
windowScore0.5
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"arch that seemed to swallow the light"
1"looked like an apothecary’s stall, glass"
2"as if passing through a lens of warped air"
86.88% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.131
wordCount1768
matches
0"not north but directly at the victim’s chest"
1"Not to keep something out, but to direct it toward a specific target"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"drops that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean49.11
std31.18
cv0.635
sampleLengths
0122
192
281
312
462
538
67
734
856
97
10113
113
1274
1396
1446
1588
1634
1715
1818
1926
2042
2127
2274
2332
2440
2543
2678
2742
2811
2990
3063
3142
3243
3371
3413
3533
81.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences88
matches
0"been closed"
1"were supposed"
2"been trimmed"
3"was clenched"
4"is hidden"
5"been sidelined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences106
ratio0.057
matches
0"The air hit her first—cold, damp, carrying a mineral tang of old brickwork and something else, something burnt and organic that clung to the back of her throat."
1"The desk sergeant at Mornington Crescent had eyed her with a mix of pity and relief when he handed it over—a small disc of polished bone etched with a labyrinth pattern."
2"She had walked through, and her wristwatch had stuttered—a half-second pause before the second hand jumped back into its steady sweep."
3"She traced a line with her eyes from the dead man’s hand to the jars on the shelf—one of them had a hairline crack that wasn’t there in the photos the SOCO had taken twenty minutes earlier, because she’d glanced at the camera screen on her way in."
4"They formed a perimeter, yes, but also a bottleneck— a corridor of binding marks that funnelled from the stall entrance to the exact spot where the body lay."
5"Eva’s expression flickered—shock, then something harder, more guarded."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02245088868101029
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002806361085126286
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean16.68
std15.27
cv0.916
sampleLengths
027
128
243
324
44
531
621
710
821
95
105
1121
1218
1322
142
153
1610
1712
182
1921
206
218
2215
2310
2421
2517
267
2710
2824
2910
3010
3124
3212
337
348
35105
363
3712
3813
3949
406
4113
4228
4336
4413
458
4638
477
4813
4940
48.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.330188679245283
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners35
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Only a platform arch that"
ratio0.012
98.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences82
matches
0"he’d said, and then, quieter,"
1"She had walked through, and"
2"She filed the glitch away."
3"His eyes were open, fixed"
4"His right hand was clenched"
5"She tucked a strand of"
6"It was old, the brass"
7"She delivered it with the"
8"Her military bearing kept her"
9"She let her gaze drift"
10"She had eighteen years of"
11"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
12"She remembered the way Morris’s"
13"She reached for the compass."
14"She held it flat on"
15"Her tone was flat, but"
16"She’d been sidelined from major"
17"She looked down at the"
18"She walked the scene, counting."
19"She traced a line with"
ratio0.305
14.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences82
matches
0"The bone token felt greasy"
1"The air hit her first—cold,"
2"Camden Town’s abandoned deep-level shelter"
3"The Veil Market, the uniformed"
4"Quinn pocketed the token."
5"The desk sergeant at Mornington"
6"he’d said, and then, quieter,"
7"She had walked through, and"
8"She filed the glitch away."
9"A body lay sprawled near"
10"The victim was male, late"
11"His eyes were open, fixed"
12"His right hand was clenched"
13"A woman’s voice, carrying the"
14"A figure emerged from behind"
15"Freckles dusted her nose and"
16"A worn leather satchel bulged"
17"She tucked a strand of"
18"The other cradled a notebook"
19"A faint grimace"
ratio0.89
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now she scanned the scene."
1"Now she understood the desk"
ratio0.024
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her military bearing kept her spine straight, hands resting loose at her sides."
1"She let her gaze drift across the stall, noting the way the glass jars nearest the body were dim, the liquids inside darkened as though scorched from within."
2"The forensics team had set up their equipment around the perimeter, but every time a camera flash went off near the body, the light seemed to bend, as if passin…"
3"Her partner, DS Morris, had died three years ago in a warehouse that showed the same contradictions: a locked room, a body with no trauma, electronic failures, …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he’d (would)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.057
81.7161%