Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2DYF83YP52FSC4X8KC8E5R

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Duration:
44.7s
Cost:
$0.001340
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove tasted of honey and damp stone. Rory pulled her jacket tighter, though the cold that prickled her skin came from somewhere deeper than the October night. The standing stones rose before her—three ancient oaks turned to granite by centuries, their roots twisted into the earth like the gnarled fingers of buried giants. Moss crawled up their flanks in patterns that almost looked like writing. She checked her phone. The screen flickered twice before dying, despite showing sixty percent battery when she'd parked near Pembroke Lodge forty minutes ago. Dead. Of course. "Bloody typical," she muttered, pocketing the useless device. Moonlight filtered through the canopy in strange, shifting shafts that didn't quite match the position of the clouds above. Wildflowers brushed her ankles—lupine, foxglove, things that had no business blooming in late October. Their petals glowed faintly, as if they'd absorbed daylight and were slowly leaking it back into the dark. The pendant warmed against her collarbone. Rory's hand flew to it. The gemstone pulsed—once, twice—a heartbeat of deep crimson under her palm. She'd worn it for three weeks now, ever since finding the small velvet box on the windowsill of her flat above Silas' bar. No note. No return address. Just the pendant with its silver chain and its strange, internal light. It had never done this before. "You're losing it, Carter," she whispered. But her voice fell flat against the air, swallowed up too quickly, like the grove was drinking the sound. Eva's voicemail had sent her here. Five words, crackling with static: *Richmond Park. The old oaks. Please.* When Rory called back, the line rang through to nothing—not voicemail, not disconnect tone, just a hollow emptiness that made her teeth ache. Eva had been missing for four days. Four days of Rory filing reports with disinterested constables, plastering South London with missing person posters that strangers walked past without a glance. She stepped forward. The grass gave under her boots with a wetness that wasn't dew. It clung, sucking slightly at the soles, as if reluctant to let her pass. The first sound came when she reached the center stone. A rustle. Not wind through leaves—the air had gone dead still, the kind of stillness that presses against the eardrums and makes your own pulse sound like a drum. This was deliberate. A dragging shuffle, fabric on bark, somewhere to her left. Rory spun. Nothing. Just the standing stones and the glowing flowers and the wrong-colored moonlight. "Eva?" The name came out hoarse. Silence answered. Then another rustle, behind her now, and closer. She didn't turn this time. Her body had gone rigid, some primal part of her brain screaming *don't move don't breathe don't look* in a voice older than language. The pendant burned now, hot enough that she felt the heat through her shirt. The light from the gemstone painted her fingers red when she looked down. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Not human. Not quite. A suggestion of limbs too long, joints bent at angles that made her stomach lurch. It flickered between the standing stones like heat shimmer over pavement, there and not-there, a trick of the dark except the dark had stopped behaving like dark should. The shadows were leaning in the wrong direction. Rory's breath caught. The shadows of the standing stones stretched toward her, reaching across the moonlit grass in defiance of the light source above. They moved independently, crawling, twitching at the edges like ink spilled on wet paper. "Not real," she said. "This isn't real." The words sounded weak, childlike. She'd spent her whole life priding herself on rationality, on keeping her head when things went sideways. Wales had taught her that fog was just water vapor. Cardiff University had taught her that every problem had a logical solution if you approached it from the right angle. Logic had nothing to say about shadows that crawled. The pendant's pulse quickened. It matched nothing in her body—her heart was hammering, yes, but this was faster, a frantic flutter like a moth against glass. She gripped it, meaning to rip it off, throw it away, but the moment her fingers closed around the gemstone the world *shifted*. For one breath, the grove snapped into impossible clarity. The stones weren't stone at all—they were bones. Massive vertebrae rising from the earth, fossilized and fused with the oaks that had grown through them over millennia. The wildflowers were not wildflowers. They were tiny, luminous faces, mouths open in silent screams, petals unfolding from their eye sockets. Then the vision passed and everything was ordinary again. Moonlight. Standing stones. Flowers. The rustling had stopped. Rory stood frozen, her hand still clamped around the pendant. The silence that replaced the movement was worse. It had weight, intention. Something was holding its breath. She counted to ten. Then twenty. The shadows stayed where they belonged. The air remained still. She should run. Every instinct demanded it—back through the grove, past the boundary stones, into the park proper where the sodium lights from the car park would be visible and the world would make sense again. But Eva had called from here. Eva had said *please*. A low sound rose from the dark between the stones. Not a growl. Not a whisper. Something between the two—a thrumming resonance that vibrated in her molars and made the fillings in her back teeth sing. It came from underground. From the roots. From the spaces between spaces that the standing stones marked and guarded. The pendant seared against her skin. Rory gasped and yanked at the chain, but the clasp held, and through the pain she realized the sound was *answering* the light. Call and response. The grove spoke, and the pendant listened. She'd been wrong about being alone. The realization crept over her with the slow certainty of cold water rising. She'd been wrong from the moment she stepped between those stones. The grove was crowded with presences, half-formed and ancient, pressing against the membrane between their world and hers. They watched her the way deep-sea fish watch the light of a submersible—with hunger, with curiosity, with an intelligence so alien it registered as static. One of them was closer than the others. Rory didn't see it so much as feel it—a displacement of air, a cold spot that moved against the ambient temperature of the grove. It circled her slowly, and the wildflowers wilted in its wake. "Eva?" The name barely escaped her lips. The circling stopped. A voice answered, but it came from everywhere and nowhere, from inside her skull and the hollows of the stones. It spoke in Eva's cadence, in the familiar rise and fall of her best friend's speech patterns, but the words were wrong. Too many syllables. Sounds human throats shouldn't make. *She's here.* Rory bolted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.833
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"lurch"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulsed"
2"velvet"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"lurch"
7"quickened"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"resonance"
11"vibrated"
12"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords17
totalWords1141
ratio0.015
matches
0"Richmond Park. The old oaks. Please."
1"don't move don't breathe don't look"
2"shifted"
3"please"
4"answering"
5"She's here."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1126
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
October2
Pembroke1
Lodge1
Moonlight2
Park1
Rory10
South1
London1
Silence1
University1
Eva5
persons
0"Moonlight"
1"Rory"
2"Silence"
3"University"
4"Eva"
places
0"Pembroke"
1"Park"
2"South"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like writing"
1"quite match the position of the clouds above"
2"Something between the two—a thrumming resonance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1141
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.53
std21.97
cv0.77
sampleLengths
011
158
227
38
451
56
656
76
825
970
1029
1110
1242
1315
146
1510
1656
1755
188
1938
207
2152
229
2349
2457
2513
264
2727
2816
2946
3055
3139
3273
338
3435
357
363
3750
382
392
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were slowly leaking"
1"was drinking"
2"were leaning"
3"was hammering"
4"was holding"
5"was *answering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences114
ratio0.096
matches
0"The standing stones rose before her—three ancient oaks turned to granite by centuries, their roots twisted into the earth like the gnarled fingers of buried giants."
1"Wildflowers brushed her ankles—lupine, foxglove, things that had no business blooming in late October."
2"The gemstone pulsed—once, twice—a heartbeat of deep crimson under her palm."
3"Please.* When Rory called back, the line rang through to nothing—not voicemail, not disconnect tone, just a hollow emptiness that made her teeth ache."
4"Not wind through leaves—the air had gone dead still, the kind of stillness that presses against the eardrums and makes your own pulse sound like a drum."
5"It matched nothing in her body—her heart was hammering, yes, but this was faster, a frantic flutter like a moth against glass."
6"The stones weren't stone at all—they were bones."
7"Every instinct demanded it—back through the grove, past the boundary stones, into the park proper where the sodium lights from the car park would be visible and the world would make sense again."
8"Something between the two—a thrumming resonance that vibrated in her molars and made the fillings in her back teeth sing."
9"They watched her the way deep-sea fish watch the light of a submersible—with hunger, with curiosity, with an intelligence so alien it registered as static."
10"Rory didn't see it so much as feel it—a displacement of air, a cold spot that moved against the ambient temperature of the grove."
78.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount203
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.06403940886699508
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.009852216748768473
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean10.01
std7.69
cv0.768
sampleLengths
011
120
226
312
44
520
61
72
88
919
1014
1118
126
135
1411
1523
162
173
1812
196
206
2119
226
237
243
2524
267
2723
283
2912
3014
3110
322
3327
343
3510
362
371
3812
396
402
418
425
4324
4414
4513
468
472
482
4915
54.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.35964912280701755
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences96
matches
0"Just the pendant with its"
1"Just the standing stones and"
2"Then another rustle, behind her"
3"Then the vision passed and"
4"Too many syllables."
ratio0.052
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences96
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"she muttered, pocketing the useless"
2"Their petals glowed faintly, as"
3"She'd worn it for three"
4"It had never done this"
5"She stepped forward."
6"It clung, sucking slightly at"
7"She didn't turn this time."
8"Her body had gone rigid,"
9"It flickered between the standing"
10"They moved independently, crawling, twitching"
11"She'd spent her whole life"
12"It matched nothing in her"
13"She gripped it, meaning to"
14"They were tiny, luminous faces,"
15"It had weight, intention."
16"She counted to ten."
17"She should run."
18"It came from underground."
19"She'd been wrong about being"
ratio0.25
58.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences96
matches
0"The air inside the grove"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"The standing stones rose before"
3"Moss crawled up their flanks"
4"She checked her phone."
5"The screen flickered twice before"
6"she muttered, pocketing the useless"
7"Moonlight filtered through the canopy"
8"Wildflowers brushed her ankles—lupine, foxglove,"
9"Their petals glowed faintly, as"
10"The pendant warmed against her"
11"Rory's hand flew to it."
12"The gemstone pulsed—once, twice—a heartbeat"
13"She'd worn it for three"
14"It had never done this"
15"Eva's voicemail had sent her"
16"The old oaks."
17"Eva had been missing for"
18"She stepped forward."
19"The grass gave under her"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
21.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Wildflowers brushed her ankles—lupine, foxglove, things that had no business blooming in late October."
1"Please.* When Rory called back, the line rang through to nothing—not voicemail, not disconnect tone, just a hollow emptiness that made her teeth ache."
2"Four days of Rory filing reports with disinterested constables, plastering South London with missing person posters that strangers walked past without a glance."
3"Not wind through leaves—the air had gone dead still, the kind of stillness that presses against the eardrums and makes your own pulse sound like a drum."
4"A suggestion of limbs too long, joints bent at angles that made her stomach lurch."
5"Massive vertebrae rising from the earth, fossilized and fused with the oaks that had grown through them over millennia."
6"Something between the two—a thrumming resonance that vibrated in her molars and made the fillings in her back teeth sing."
7"Rory didn't see it so much as feel it—a displacement of air, a cold spot that moved against the ambient temperature of the grove."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
75.6151%