| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "desire" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "mechanical" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "yearning" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1379 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1099 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Rorys | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rorys" | | 6 | "Gluttony" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.818 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.725 | | wordCount | 1379 | | matches | | 0 | "not spray water but cascades of steaming broth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 37.27 | | std | 23.94 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 82 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 74 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 82 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 96 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her collarbone—steady, warm, insistent." | | 1 | "The light bled from everywhere and nowhere, saturating the air with the drowsy glow of late afternoon in high summer—though the heat carried a strange, spiced weight that clung to the skin." | | 2 | "The air itself teased her palate—roasted stone fruits, dark chocolate, the caramelized edge of a slow-braised shank." | | 3 | "Paths of crushed white shell wound between garden beds where herbs ruffled themselves in a breeze that carried the faint sound of distant laughter—many-voiced, syncopated, drunk." | | 4 | "The worker’s eyes caught the amber light and reflected none of it—flat, hollow, utterly focused." | | 5 | "The Fae-Forged Blade was already in her hand; she didn’t remember drawing it." | | 6 | "Chive blossoms exploded into sizzling miniature firework displays whenever a bee—if the thumb-sized iridescent things were bees—bumped into them." | | 7 | "From their stone throats came no broth—only a fine, glittering mist that tasted of salt and damp stone when Rory breathed too close." | | 8 | "Not a feast hall—this was a passage walled in honeycomb tile, each hexagonal cell containing a preserved ingredient suspended in amber fluid." | | 9 | "Rory stepped after them, the obsidian tiles throwing her reflection back in duplicate beneath her feet—a hundred Rorys marching into the amber throat of Gluttony’s heart, all of them holding the same cold, glowing blade, all of them hungry in ways they could not name." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1124 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over sun-scorched asphalt." | | 1 | "twisted, silver-barked trees" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02224199288256228 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006227758007117438 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 13.25 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no imprint on" | | 1 | "She stood entirely still, her" | | 2 | "She swallowed hard and forced" | | 3 | "Her pendant had cooled, but" | | 4 | "Its movements were precise, almost" | | 5 | "They lifted goblets that refilled" | | 6 | "She felt the pull of" | | 7 | "They followed the shell path" | | 8 | "Her throat tightened." | | 9 | "She could feel the warmth" | | 10 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 11 | "Her riddler’s cadence softened to" | | 12 | "They clung, warm and weightless," | | 13 | "She felt the crescent scar" |
| | ratio | 0.182 | |
| 18.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear hung in the" | | 1 | "Rory clutched the silver chain" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" | | 3 | "Nyx had condensed from the" | | 4 | "Isolde’s pale lavender gaze tracked" | | 5 | "She left no imprint on" | | 6 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the cold" | | 7 | "The blade thrummed like a" | | 8 | "The Half-Fae’s smile had no" | | 9 | "Rory pressed her thumb into" | | 10 | "The pendant flared crimson, and" | | 11 | "The ground on the other" | | 12 | "Rory’s boots sank into soft," | | 13 | "The sky above boiled a" | | 14 | "The light bled from everywhere" | | 15 | "Nyx pulled themselves upright, the" | | 16 | "She stood entirely still, her" | | 17 | "Rory’s stomach clenched in immediate," | | 18 | "The air itself teased her" | | 19 | "She swallowed hard and forced" |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s boots sank into soft, giving moss that exhaled the scent of crushed cardamom." | | 1 | "The light bled from everywhere and nowhere, saturating the air with the drowsy glow of late afternoon in high summer—though the heat carried a strange, spiced w…" | | 2 | "Beyond, orchards of twisted, silver-barked trees sagged under globes of fruit that shone like polished garnet." | | 3 | "Paths of crushed white shell wound between garden beds where herbs ruffled themselves in a breeze that carried the faint sound of distant laughter—many-voiced, …" | | 4 | "Arches opened onto a courtyard where fountains did not spray water but cascades of steaming broth that filled the air with aromatic pearls of fat." | | 5 | "At the terrace’s centre, a fountain taller than any they’d seen before stood silent: a sculpture of a man and woman tangled in a dance, mouths open as if to dri…" | | 6 | "From their stone throats came no broth—only a fine, glittering mist that tasted of salt and damp stone when Rory breathed too close." | | 7 | "The corridor breathed out a draft of cold, smoky air, and with it came the first real sound since they’d entered Dymas that wasn’t laughter or bubbling broth: t…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her mouth dry" |
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| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |