Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2E38SBHBS2W1GP32BYH646

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Duration:
26.3s
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$0.000584
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DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps, a pause, then two more. Rory knew that rhythm. She'd known it since university, when Lucien would show up at her dorm with a bottle of wine and that infuriating half-smile, ready to drag her out of whatever textbook she'd buried herself in. She set down Ptolemy, who'd been purring in her lap, and crossed the cluttered living room. The flat smelled of curry from downstairs and the jasmine tea she'd been nursing for the last hour. Through the peephole, she saw the charcoal suit first, then the familiar platinum blond hair, slightly dishevelled. The ivory handle of his cane glinted under the dim hallway light. Rory's hand hovered over the deadbolt. Three locks. She'd installed them after Evan, but Lucien had helped her pick out the first one, had stood in the hardware store and argued with the salesman about tensile strength while she'd stared at the floor, hollowed out and silent. She opened the door. Lucien stood in the narrow hallway, cane in one hand, the other raised as if to knock again. Up close, he looked tired — shadows under his mismatched eyes, a crease between his brows she didn't remember. He'd always been immaculate, a sharp blade in a velvet sheath. Tonight, the edge seemed dulled. "Rory." Her name on his tongue still carried the French curl, a ghost of Marseille. "What do you want, Luc?" He tilted his head. "That's not the welcome I was hoping for." "You show up at my door unannounced after six months, you don't get to hope for anything." A beat. He lowered his hand. "May I come in?" She should say no. She knew she should say no. The last time she'd seen him, they'd been standing on a rain-slicked street in Soho, him telling her he had to go to Paris, something about a deal gone wrong, something about never being the man she needed him to be. She'd watched him walk away, the tap of his cane against the wet pavement like a countdown she hadn't asked for. Rory stepped aside. Lucien moved past her into the flat, his gaze sweeping the room in a single practiced motion — the stacks of books, the research notes pinned to the wall, the half-empty teacup on the coffee table. Ptolemy wound between his ankles, and Lucien reached down to scratch behind the cat's ears. The gesture was so familiar it ached. "You're still feeding him scraps from the restaurant," he said. "He likes the duck." "He has expensive taste." "He's a cat on Brick Lane. He's earned it." Lucien straightened, and for a moment they just stood there, the space between them filled with six months of silence and all the years before. The flat felt smaller with him in it. It always had. "I need your help," he said. "You don't get to do that." "Excuse me?" Rory crossed her arms. "You don't get to vanish for half a year and then show up asking for favours. That's not how this works, Luc." "Things are complicated." "They always are with you. That's the point." She heard her voice rise and forced it back down. "You left. You said you couldn't be what I needed. I respected that. I stayed here, I rebuilt my life, I stopped waiting for you to come through that door. And now you're here, asking for help." Lucien's jaw tightened. He set his cane against the armchair and ran a hand through his hair, messing it further. She'd never seen him do that before. Lucien Moreau didn't fidget. "There's a woman," he said. "She's hunting me. Hunting my kind. Half-demons, specifically. She's good at it — better than anyone I've seen in decades." "And you came to me? I'm a delivery driver, Luc. I carry noodles." "You're cleverer than anyone I know. You think in ways people don't expect. And you know London — the backstreets, the hidden corners, the places people like her don't think to look." Rory shook her head. "No." "Rory—" "No. You don't get to waltz back into my life because you're scared. That's not how this works." "Then tell me how it works." His voice dropped, quieter now, stripped of its usual smooth veneer. "Tell me what I have to do. Because I've spent six months trying to stay away from you, trying to convince myself it was the right thing. That I was protecting you from the world I carry on my back. And every day, I've regretted it." The words hit her in the chest, sharp and unexpected. She looked at him — really looked — and saw the exhaustion she'd noticed at the door, the faint tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers curled against his palm like he was holding himself back from reaching for her. "You broke my heart, Luc." "I know." "You don't get to say things like that and expect me to just—" "I don't expect anything. I'm asking." He took a step closer, slow, giving her time to retreat. She didn't. "I'm asking because you're the only person I trust. Because when I was in Paris, bleeding out in a hotel room, I didn't think about my mother or my father or the deals I'd made. I thought about your laugh. The one you do when you're trying not to, and it comes out anyway, and your whole face lights up." Rory's throat tightened. Ptolemy meowed, loud and insistent, and the sound broke the moment. She turned away, pressed her palms against the countertop, and stared at the cold jasmine tea. "You're bleeding," she said, not looking at him. "Old wound." "Bullshit. You're favouring your left leg more than usual, and you haven't once made a joke about my research notes." She finally turned, caught his gaze. "Where is it?" Lucien hesitated. Then he reached up and unbuttoned his suit jacket, pulled aside the white shirt beneath. A bandage, hastily wrapped and dark with fresh blood, stained the fabric just below his ribs. Rory swore under her breath. "Sit down." "Rory—" "Sit down before you fall down, you dramatic bastard." He sat. She grabbed the first-aid kit from under the sink — the one she'd bought after he'd patched her up months ago, after she'd fallen off her bike delivering an order in the rain. The irony wasn't lost on her. She knelt in front of him and began unwrapping the bandage. His breath hitched when she touched the wound, but he didn't make a sound. "Who did this?" "The woman I mentioned. She's methodical, patient. She tracked me through Whitechapel, knew exactly where I'd turn, where I'd stop to catch my breath." "Ex-girlfriend?" A short, surprised laugh. "No. She's a hunter. Name's Sloane. Works for a organisation that doesn't officially exist." "That's very dramatic." "I told you. Complicated." Rory cleaned the wound with steady hands, the way she'd learned from watching him do it to her. It was deep but clean, a knife wound, not a bullet. She pressed a fresh gauze against it and reached for the tape. "I'll help you," she said quietly. "But not because I owe you anything. Because there's a woman hunting people in my city, and I don't like that." "That's enough." She looked up. He was watching her with an expression she couldn't quite read — something raw and unguarded, the mask slipped just enough to show the man beneath. "I missed you," he said. Rory pressed the tape down, maybe harder than necessary. He winced. "Stay quiet. Let me finish." But her hands were shaking, just a little, and she knew he noticed. Because Lucien always noticed everything. And because, despite every rational thought screaming at her to push him away, a part of her — the stubborn, reckless part that had fallen for him in the first place — was quietly, impossibly glad he was back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.042
88.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"velvet"
2"silence"
3"tension"
4"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1329
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount839
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Ptolemy3
Evan1
French1
Marseille1
Soho1
Paris1
Rory9
Moreau1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Moreau"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Soho"
2"Paris"
globalScore0.904
windowScore0.833
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite read — something raw and unguarded, the mask slipped just enough to show the man beneath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1329
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"knew that rhythm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean21.44
std20.95
cv0.977
sampleLengths
056
163
247
34
453
515
65
712
817
910
1072
113
1258
1310
144
154
169
1736
186
196
202
2126
223
2355
2431
2525
2613
2732
285
291
3018
3163
3251
335
342
3513
3679
373
3827
398
402
4129
4233
437
441
459
4641
4725
483
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
62.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was holding"
1"was watching"
2"were shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps, a pause, then two more."
1"Up close, he looked tired — shadows under his mismatched eyes, a crease between his brows she didn't remember."
2"Lucien moved past her into the flat, his gaze sweeping the room in a single practiced motion — the stacks of books, the research notes pinned to the wall, the half-empty teacup on the coffee table."
3"She looked at him — really looked — and saw the exhaustion she'd noticed at the door, the faint tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers curled against his palm like he was holding himself back from reaching for her."
4"She grabbed the first-aid kit from under the sink — the one she'd bought after he'd patched her up months ago, after she'd fallen off her bike delivering an order in the rain."
5"He was watching her with an expression she couldn't quite read — something raw and unguarded, the mask slipped just enough to show the man beneath."
6"And because, despite every rational thought screaming at her to push him away, a part of her — the stubborn, reckless part that had fallen for him in the first place — was quietly, impossibly glad he was back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount834
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03357314148681055
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008393285371702638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.19
std11.54
cv0.947
sampleLengths
018
14
234
316
418
517
612
76
82
939
104
1118
1219
1311
145
1515
165
174
188
1917
202
214
224
234
246
2541
2621
273
2836
2915
307
3110
324
334
349
3525
368
373
386
396
402
414
4222
433
4418
4537
463
4717
487
494
48.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3211009174311927
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners35
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then he reached up and"
ratio0.016
32.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences62
matches
0"She'd known it since university,"
1"She set down Ptolemy, who'd"
2"She'd installed them after Evan,"
3"She opened the door."
4"He'd always been immaculate, a"
5"Her name on his tongue"
6"He tilted his head."
7"He lowered his hand."
8"She should say no."
9"She knew she should say"
10"She'd watched him walk away,"
11"It always had."
12"She heard her voice rise"
13"He set his cane against"
14"She'd never seen him do"
15"His voice dropped, quieter now,"
16"She looked at him —"
17"He took a step closer,"
18"She turned away, pressed her"
19"she said, not looking at"
ratio0.468
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory knew that rhythm."
2"She'd known it since university,"
3"She set down Ptolemy, who'd"
4"The flat smelled of curry"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"Rory's hand hovered over the"
7"She'd installed them after Evan,"
8"She opened the door."
9"Lucien stood in the narrow"
10"He'd always been immaculate, a"
11"Tonight, the edge seemed dulled."
12"Her name on his tongue"
13"He tilted his head."
14"He lowered his hand."
15"She should say no."
16"She knew she should say"
17"The last time she'd seen"
18"She'd watched him walk away,"
19"Rory stepped aside."
ratio0.903
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Because Lucien always noticed everything."
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"And because, despite every rational thought screaming at her to push him away, a part of her — the stubborn, reckless part that had fallen for him in the first …"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, not looking at him"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.2838%