Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2E4QZ8X1S5X9AG0F5Q94NT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 22s
Cost:
$0.002742
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt screeched free of its housing, and Aurora tugged the door inward. Curry-scented air from Brick Lane bled across the threshold, a ghost of cumin and cardamom that clung to everything in the flat. She expected Eva, arms full of Ptolemy and some desperate theory from a half-translated scroll. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal suit that didn't have a single wrinkle. The overhead bulb flickered, catching the platinum sweep of his hair. Aurora's hand tightened on the doorframe. Her pulse skipped into a rhythm it had no business keeping. "Laila." His voice carried the same unhurried cadence she remembered, sanded smooth by four languages and a childhood in Marseille. "You're a difficult woman to find." She hadn't heard that name in eight months. Not since she'd walked out of his office in Soho with a slammed door and a splinter of something sharp lodged beneath her ribs. He'd called her Laila from the beginning—a twist of her middle name, a private joke about beauty in darkness. For a while it had felt like a gift. Now it felt like a splinter. "You found me anyway." Aurora folded her arms, blocking the doorway. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light, a pale sickle against her skin. "What do you want, Luc?" Lucien's mismatched eyes tracked the movement. One amber, one black. The demon eye, she'd called it once, tracing her thumb along his temple while he laughed. The memory rushed up hot and unwelcome. "A conversation." He angled the cane, the silver tip tapping once against the warped floorboards. "May I come in, or do you intend to conduct this tête-à-tête in the stairwell where Silas can overhear every syllable?" Silas. So he'd already been to the bar downstairs. Of course he had. Lucien never walked into any room—or any building—without mapping every exit, every ear, every potential weapon. Aurora stepped back, her jaw set. "Five minutes." He crossed the threshold with that seamless, almost predatory economy she'd once found magnetic. The flat was small—a bed pushed against one wall, a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a single window overlooking the alley where the bins lived. She watched him take inventory, catalogue the stack of delivery receipts on the counter, the half-empty bottle of cider she'd opened an hour ago. "Charming." He didn't sit. "Didn't decorate with you in mind." "Clearly." Lucien turned, the cane now motionless under his palm. His face was all sharp planes and careful composure, but she caught the tension humming along his jaw. The same tension that used to surface right before he'd pull her against him, right before he'd whisper something reckless against her throat. She hated that she still recognized it. "Eight months," she said. "No calls. No messages. You vanish like smoke, and now you show up at my door on a Tuesday night expecting a conversation. After everything." The word *everything* landed between them like a dropped glass. Lucien's shoulders shifted, almost imperceptible. "I didn't vanish. I returned to Avaros." The demon realm. His father's territory. The place he'd sworn he'd never go back to, the place that had carved the black into his iris and left him with a cane before he was twenty-five. She'd heard the stories in fragments, late at night when his guard was down and her head rested on his chest. "You said you'd rather burn than cross back into that world." "I said many things." He moved toward the window, halting two feet from her. Close enough that she could smell the faint spice of his cologne—sandalwood, and underneath it, something cooler. Rain on stone. "Some of them I meant. Some I was too much of a coward to follow through on." Aurora's throat constricted. She reached for her cider, thought better of it. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Turn up on my doorstep and start peeling back the last eight months like wallpaper. You made your choices. You made them the night you told me I was 'too human' for the life you lead, that I'd become a liability." She spat the word. "Your word, Luc. Not mine." The amber eye flared. A trick of the light, she told herself. A demon's tell. But his voice stayed level. "I was wrong." The admission silenced her. She stood frozen in the cramped kitchenette, one hand braced on the counter, while the silence stretched and filled every corner of the flat. Somewhere down on Brick Lane, a car horn blared. Ptolemy yowled in Eva's flat across the way, muffled by brick and distance. "Why are you here?" Her voice came out quieter than she intended. Lucien reached into his jacket. For one absurd moment she tensed, prepared for a weapon or a threat, the old paranoia Evan had wired into her muscles. But his hand emerged with nothing but a folded square of paper, creased and soft at the edges. He held it out. "Because I need your help. And because I've spent every day since you left rehearsing what I should have said and never did." Aurora didn't take the paper. "You need my help. So this is a transaction." "It's a beginning." Lucien's knuckles whitened on the cane. "I'm asking—not demanding, not bargaining. Asking. There's a difference." "Since when?" "Since I realized what I threw away." He set the paper on the counter between them, a deliberate placement, as if he were laying down a weapon. "The situation in Avaros is deteriorating. My father's faction has broken from the Council. There's talk of a coup, of old treaties being torn up. I need someone with a mind for patterns and no supernatural blood to complicate the politics. Someone whose thinking I trust." Aurora stared at the folded paper. "You could hire anyone." "I don't want anyone." The words rushed out, stripped of their usual polish. Lucien took a step closer, the cane forgotten at his side. His face, for the first time since she'd known him, looked unguarded. "I want you. I have always wanted you, Rory. From the moment you walked into my office with a forged identity document and told me you'd rather risk demon territory than go back to Evan, I wanted you. I was terrified. You were the one thing I couldn't control, couldn't predict, and instead of admitting that, I pushed you away with the cruelest excuse I could fabricate. There. Is that honest enough for you?" The use of her real name—not Laila, not Aurora, but Rory—hit her square in the chest. He'd never called her that before. He'd always kept that small distance, that layer of artifice. The name her father used, the name Eva shouted when she was three ciders deep and remembering their childhood in Cardiff. She picked up the paper to give her hands something to do. "You rehearsed that." "About two hundred times. The delivery is still a work in progress." A reluctant laugh caught in her throat. She unfolded the paper. Inside was a list of names written in his tight, slanted hand, half in French, half in what she recognized as Avarian script. Below it, an address in Soho she knew—his old office, the one she'd walked out of. The splinter in her ribs twisted. "I'm not the same person who left." Aurora looked up from the list, meeting the strange collision of his gaze. "I've rebuilt something here. A life, Luc. Small and messy and mine. You can't just walk back in and expect me to drop it because you've finally found the words." "I don't expect you to drop it." He was close now, close enough that she could see the faint thread of silver in the platinum at his temples, a detail she'd never noticed before. "I expect you to tell me to go to hell. I expect you to set conditions and boundaries and deadlines. What I hope—" He paused, a tremor passing through his carefully held composure. "What I hope is that you'll read the list. Consider the offer. Let me earn back the privilege of standing in your doorway. Even if it takes years." The cider bottle sweated on the counter. The window rattled as a lorry rumbled past the alley. Aurora folded the paper again, smaller this time, into quarters, then eighths, a nervous habit she'd picked up during her Pre-Law exams and never shed. "You broke my heart." She said it plainly, without accusation. Just a fact, set down between the delivery receipts and the unpaid gas bill. Lucien flinched. "I know." "I thought I'd never see you again. I made peace with that. I told myself it was for the best, that you were just another Evan with better tailoring and a more cultured streak of cruelty." "I am not Evan." "No. You're not." She slipped the folded paper into the pocket of her jeans. "But you still left me standing in an empty office with nothing but a cheque I never cashed and a lot of questions you weren't brave enough to answer." He said nothing. The amber eye dimmed, the black one unreadable, but his hand moved—reaching for hers, halting an inch from her fingers. Waiting. Aurora looked at that hand. At the scar across his knuckles, the one she'd traced a hundred times while they lay tangled in his silk sheets. At the tremor she wasn't supposed to notice. "Five minutes," she said. "I gave you five minutes. It's been twelve." "I can count." "Then count this." She closed the distance herself, pressing her palm against his. A shock of warmth, that impossible heat the demon blood gave him. "I'll read the list. I'll hear you out. But you don't get to walk back in here like nothing happened. You don't get to call me Laila and expect me to melt." Lucien's fingers curled around hers, slow, as if she might shatter. "What do I get to call you?" Aurora pulled her hand free. She crossed to the door, flipped the first deadbolt, then the second. "You can call me Aurora." She opened the door, the curry-scented air rushing back in, and met his gaze with the full force of her own. "You can come back tomorrow at nine. And you can bring coffee. Black, no sugar. If you remember that part, maybe there's something we can salvage." He was already moving toward the threshold, cane tapping once, twice, but he paused with one foot in the corridor. The old smirk threatened at the corner of his mouth—she could see him fighting it back. "Black, no sugar." Lucien inclined his head. "I remember everything, ma chérie. That was always the problem."
created_at"2026-04-25T13:44:23.277Z" 4/25/2026, 1:44:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.764
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1804
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"potential"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"tracing"
3"potential"
4"magnetic"
5"tension"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"unreadable"
9"traced"
10"silk"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1793
ratio0.001
matches
0"everything"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A trick of the light, she told herself."
97.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1152
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Brick2
Lane2
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Soho2
Laila2
Silas1
Lucien11
Close1
Evan1
Rory1
Cardiff1
French1
Avarian1
Pre-Law1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Laila"
5"Silas"
6"Lucien"
7"Evan"
8"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Soho"
4"Cardiff"
5"French"
globalScore0.979
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a gift"
1"felt like a splinter"
88.46% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.115
wordCount1793
matches
0"not Laila, not Aurora, but Rory"
1"not Aurora, but Rory"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"heard that name"
1"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean30.39
std23.19
cv0.763
sampleLengths
051
140
217
326
460
56
632
733
836
929
108
1163
124
136
1451
157
1629
1710
1812
1956
2011
2151
2215
232
2450
2523
2650
2712
2845
2927
3014
3118
322
3373
3410
35110
3653
3715
3812
3950
406
4150
4295
4342
4424
454
4636
474
4843
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were laying"
1"was already moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"He'd called her Laila from the beginning—a twist of her middle name, a private joke about beauty in darkness."
1"Lucien never walked into any room—or any building—without mapping every exit, every ear, every potential weapon."
2"The flat was small—a bed pushed against one wall, a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a single window overlooking the alley where the bins lived."
3"Close enough that she could smell the faint spice of his cologne—sandalwood, and underneath it, something cooler."
4"The use of her real name—not Laila, not Aurora, but Rory—hit her square in the chest."
5"Below it, an address in Soho she knew—his old office, the one she'd walked out of."
6"The amber eye dimmed, the black one unreadable, but his hand moved—reaching for hers, halting an inch from her fingers."
7"The old smirk threatened at the corner of his mouth—she could see him fighting it back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02480752780153978
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001710863986313088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean13.18
std10.7
cv0.811
sampleLengths
014
122
215
329
411
56
611
720
86
98
1024
1119
129
136
1411
1516
165
176
184
1916
207
2115
2221
231
248
254
2616
276
282
2914
3025
3124
324
336
3410
3518
3623
377
384
3925
4010
415
427
433
443
4529
4621
4711
4814
4917
50.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3602941176470588
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Of course he had."
1"Somewhere down on Brick Lane,"
2"Just a fact, set down"
ratio0.031
79.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences97
matches
0"She expected Eva, arms full"
1"Her pulse skipped into a"
2"His voice carried the same"
3"She hadn't heard that name"
4"He'd called her Laila from"
5"He angled the cane, the"
6"He crossed the threshold with"
7"She watched him take inventory,"
8"He didn't sit"
9"His face was all sharp"
10"She hated that she still"
11"His father's territory."
12"She'd heard the stories in"
13"He moved toward the window,"
14"She reached for her cider,"
15"She spat the word"
16"She stood frozen in the"
17"Her voice came out quieter"
18"He held it out."
19"He set the paper on"
ratio0.351
52.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences97
matches
0"The third deadbolt screeched free"
1"She expected Eva, arms full"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"The overhead bulb flickered, catching"
4"Aurora's hand tightened on the"
5"Her pulse skipped into a"
6"His voice carried the same"
7"She hadn't heard that name"
8"He'd called her Laila from"
9"Aurora folded her arms, blocking"
10"The crescent scar on her"
11"Lucien's mismatched eyes tracked the"
12"The demon eye, she'd called"
13"The memory rushed up hot"
14"He angled the cane, the"
15"Lucien never walked into any"
16"Aurora stepped back, her jaw"
17"He crossed the threshold with"
18"The flat was small—a bed"
19"She watched him take inventory,"
ratio0.814
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.01
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Curry-scented air from Brick Lane bled across the threshold, a ghost of cumin and cardamom that clung to everything in the flat."
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal suit that didn't have a single w…"
2"The same tension that used to surface right before he'd pull her against him, right before he'd whisper something reckless against her throat."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He angled, the silver tip tapping once against the warped floorboards"
1"He paused, a tremor passing through his carefully held composure"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She spat (spit)"
1"The words rushed (rush)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.073
87.8537%