| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.764 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1804 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1804 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "potential" | | 4 | "magnetic" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 74 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1793 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A trick of the light, she told herself." |
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| 97.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1152 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Laila | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Close | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | French | 1 | | Avarian | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Laila" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Lucien" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "Soho" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "French" |
| | globalScore | 0.979 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a gift" | | 1 | "felt like a splinter" |
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| 88.46% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.115 | | wordCount | 1793 | | matches | | 0 | "not Laila, not Aurora, but Rory" | | 1 | "not Aurora, but Rory" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "heard that name" | | 1 | "hated that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 30.39 | | std | 23.19 | | cv | 0.763 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 73 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 110 | | 36 | 53 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 95 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 43 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "were laying" | | 1 | "was already moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "He'd called her Laila from the beginning—a twist of her middle name, a private joke about beauty in darkness." | | 1 | "Lucien never walked into any room—or any building—without mapping every exit, every ear, every potential weapon." | | 2 | "The flat was small—a bed pushed against one wall, a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a single window overlooking the alley where the bins lived." | | 3 | "Close enough that she could smell the faint spice of his cologne—sandalwood, and underneath it, something cooler." | | 4 | "The use of her real name—not Laila, not Aurora, but Rory—hit her square in the chest." | | 5 | "Below it, an address in Soho she knew—his old office, the one she'd walked out of." | | 6 | "The amber eye dimmed, the black one unreadable, but his hand moved—reaching for hers, halting an inch from her fingers." | | 7 | "The old smirk threatened at the corner of his mouth—she could see him fighting it back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1169 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02480752780153978 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001710863986313088 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 10.7 | | cv | 0.811 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 50.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3602941176470588 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he had." | | 1 | "Somewhere down on Brick Lane," | | 2 | "Just a fact, set down" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 79.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She expected Eva, arms full" | | 1 | "Her pulse skipped into a" | | 2 | "His voice carried the same" | | 3 | "She hadn't heard that name" | | 4 | "He'd called her Laila from" | | 5 | "He angled the cane, the" | | 6 | "He crossed the threshold with" | | 7 | "She watched him take inventory," | | 8 | "He didn't sit" | | 9 | "His face was all sharp" | | 10 | "She hated that she still" | | 11 | "His father's territory." | | 12 | "She'd heard the stories in" | | 13 | "He moved toward the window," | | 14 | "She reached for her cider," | | 15 | "She spat the word" | | 16 | "She stood frozen in the" | | 17 | "Her voice came out quieter" | | 18 | "He held it out." | | 19 | "He set the paper on" |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 52.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt screeched free" | | 1 | "She expected Eva, arms full" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "The overhead bulb flickered, catching" | | 4 | "Aurora's hand tightened on the" | | 5 | "Her pulse skipped into a" | | 6 | "His voice carried the same" | | 7 | "She hadn't heard that name" | | 8 | "He'd called her Laila from" | | 9 | "Aurora folded her arms, blocking" | | 10 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 11 | "Lucien's mismatched eyes tracked the" | | 12 | "The demon eye, she'd called" | | 13 | "The memory rushed up hot" | | 14 | "He angled the cane, the" | | 15 | "Lucien never walked into any" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped back, her jaw" | | 17 | "He crossed the threshold with" | | 18 | "The flat was small—a bed" | | 19 | "She watched him take inventory," |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Curry-scented air from Brick Lane bled across the threshold, a ghost of cumin and cardamom that clung to everything in the flat." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal suit that didn't have a single w…" | | 2 | "The same tension that used to surface right before he'd pull her against him, right before he'd whisper something reckless against her throat." |
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| 77.38% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He angled, the silver tip tapping once against the warped floorboards" | | 1 | "He paused, a tremor passing through his carefully held composure" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She spat (spit)" | | 1 | "The words rushed (rush)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.073 | |