Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2E6TWS1E26R95PQ087KZMT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.002918
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt snicked open, then the second, then the third. Aurora yanked the door inward, a retort about Eva forgetting her keys already on her lips. It died there. The words shriveled in her throat. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold of the Brick Lane flat. Platinum hair slicked back as if he'd stepped out of a boardroom rather than up three flights of stairs that reeked of vindaloo. One eye amber, one black, both fixed on her face. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the hall's bare bulb. Ptolemy wound between Aurora's ankles and hissed. "What are you doing here?" Her voice came out flat. "I was in the neighborhood." The corner of his mouth lifted. A ghost of the smile she remembered, the one that never reached both eyes. "May I come in?" "No." He leaned on the cane. The movement shifted his charcoal jacket, revealing the crisp line of his waistcoat. A silver pocket watch chain glinted. "You're still angry." "Angry implies I care enough to be angry." Aurora's hand tightened on the doorframe. She felt the rough paint, the small crack that ran from the hinge. Grounding details. "You disappeared for three weeks. No calls, no messages. Then you show up on my best friend's doorstep? How did you even find me here?" "Your landlady at the bar mentioned you were house-sitting." Lucien tilted his head. The amber iris caught the light, flecked with gold. "Mrs. Bhandari was quite forthcoming after I helped her identify the creature leaving claw marks in her pantry. A juvenile barghest, if you're curious." "I wasn't." "You're a terrible liar, Rory. You always were." The nickname landed like a slap. She hadn't heard it from his lips since that night in the Rain Room, when the artificial storm had drenched his thousand-pound suit and he'd pulled her close and whispered things she'd replayed for weeks afterward. Before he'd gone cold. Before he'd told her she was a liability he couldn't afford. "Don't call me that." Aurora stepped back, but he didn't move to enter. He just stood there, immaculate and infuriating, the scent of his cologne cutting through the curry-stained air of the building. Bergamot and something darker. Something that didn't belong in this world. "May I come in?" he repeated. "I'd rather not have this conversation where the neighbors can hear. The Patel family on the second floor is already suspicious of me." "Maybe they should be." "Rory." His voice dropped. The playful veneer cracked, just for a breath. "Please." She'd never heard him say please before. Not once, in all the months they'd worked together, navigated the treacherous politics of London's supernatural underground, stolen files from a demon lord's Kensington townhouse. Not even when the ghouls had cornered them in the Aldwych tube station and he'd needed her to trust him with the binding spell. She stepped aside. Lucien moved past her with that fluid grace, the cane tapping once on the worn floorboards. Ptolemy skittered away, tail bushed. The cat launched himself onto a teetering stack of Eva's research notes and glared from his perch. Aurora closed the door. She didn't relock it. The flat swallowed them. Every surface was colonized by paper—books open face-down, scrolls unrolled and pinned with coffee mugs, sticky notes marching across the walls in Eva's cramped handwriting. The window over Brick Lane was grimy, filtering the afternoon light to a mustard haze. A half-eaten naan sat on a plate atop a thirteenth-century bestiary. "Charming," Lucien murmured. "It's not mine." "I know." He surveyed the chaos, his back to her. The line of his shoulders was rigid beneath the tailored wool. "Yours would be neater. More organized. You always did have a gift for putting things in their proper place." "Except for you, apparently." The words slipped out before she could stop them. Something petty and hurt coiled in her chest. "I couldn't figure out which box you belonged in. Ally? Informant? Something else?" He turned. The amber eye seemed to burn. "Is that why you left?" "I left because you made it crystal clear where I stood." Aurora crossed her arms. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sensation. "I was a tool you used and discarded. I got the message." "Is that what you think happened?" "That's what you told me. Word for word. 'You're becoming a liability, Aurora. I can't afford liabilities.'" She could still hear the cadence, that infuriating calm as he'd buttoned his ruined jacket and walked away through the museum's shattered skylight. "So forgive me if I didn't wait around for the encore." Lucien set the cane against Eva's cluttered coffee table. Without it, he seemed less put-together, though his posture didn't falter. "I was trying to protect you." "Don't." "The Malachite Court had marked you. Do you understand what that means? They don't just kill people, Rory. They unmake them. Erase every trace, every memory, every echo of their existence from every realm. Your own father would walk past you on the street and feel nothing." He took a step toward her. The floorboard creaked. "I have survived in this world for thirty-two years by being someone who doesn't have weaknesses. The moment I showed I cared about you, you became a target." "Then you should have told me that." Her voice cracked. She hated that it cracked. "You should have told me instead of—instead of making me feel like I'd imagined everything. The kiss. The things you said. Was any of it real?" The question hung between them. Ptolemy knocked a scroll off its pile; neither of them looked. Lucien reached into his jacket. His hand emerged with a small object wrapped in black silk. He held it out. Aurora didn't take it. "What is that?" "Open it." "I don't want your gifts." "It's not a gift. It's an explanation." She stared at the silk bundle. Her fingers, traitors, lifted to take it. The fabric was cool and whisper-soft. She unfolded it. Inside lay a silver locket, tarnished at the edges, engraved with a symbol she recognized from one of Eva's demonology texts. The sigil of Avaros. Lucien's father's realm. "Open it," he said again, softer. She pried the locket apart with her thumbnail. Inside was a miniature portrait, painted with impossible precision on a sliver of what looked like bone. A woman with platinum hair and one amber eye stared out. Her other eye was sky-blue, and her smile held a warmth that Lucien's never quite managed. "Your mother," Aurora whispered. "Yes. The Malachite Court took her when I was seven. My father was their primary target, but they couldn't reach him in Avaros. So they unmade her instead. And then they made sure I would remember." His voice stayed steady, but something raw moved beneath it. "I remember her face. Her laugh. The way she sang while she cooked. But my father? He walked past the framed photograph of their wedding day every morning for forty years and never once asked who she was. She's a hole in the world, Rory. A mother-shaped void that nothing can fill." Aurora's throat tightened. "You never told me." "I've never told anyone." Lucien closed the distance between them. His hand came up, hesitated, then brushed a strand of black hair from her cheek. The touch was featherlight. "I pushed you away because I couldn't bear the thought of you becoming another photograph I couldn't explain. Another hole. I thought if I cut you out cleanly, you'd be safe." "That's not how it works." She met his mismatched gaze. "You don't get to decide what's best for me. That's what Evan used to do. And I promised myself I'd never let anyone do that again." "I know." His thumb traced the curve of her jaw. "I know. And I'm here to apologize. Not to ask for forgiveness, not yet. Just to tell you that I was wrong, and I've spent three weeks trying to untangle the mess I made, and I can't stop thinking about the way you looked at me in the Rain Room like I was worth something more than the information I trade and the favors I'm owed." Aurora's pulse hammered in her ears. The flat, the cat, the smell of old books—it all faded to background noise. There was only him, close enough that she could see the faint lines around his eyes, the slight tremor in his fingers. "You hurt me," she said. "Yes." "I don't trust you." "You shouldn't. Not yet." His hand dropped to his side. "But I'd like the chance to earn it back. If you'll let me." Outside, a car horn blared on Brick Lane. Ptolemy meowed, demanding attention. The naan bread on the bestiary grew cold. Aurora looked at the locket in her palm, at the woman who'd been erased from existence, and then at the man who'd spent twenty-five years guarding a wound no one else could see. "I'm not house-sitting," she said finally. "I'm staying here because my flat above Silas' has a water leak. The ceiling caved in last Tuesday." Lucien blinked at the subject change. "I see." "So I'm here for another week at least. And Eva's gone to a symposium in Edinburgh until Saturday." She closed the locket carefully and set it on the table beside his cane. "So if you're going to convince me you're not the same man who walked away from me in that museum, you have exactly three days to do it." A slow, cautious smile spread across his face. This one reached both eyes. "I'll take those odds." "Don't think it'll be easy." "I never did." He moved toward the tiny kitchen alcove, surveying the mess with renewed interest. "Now. Do you have tea in this disaster zone, or am I venturing out to the shop on the corner?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Aurora stepped back [back]"
1"he said again [again]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.781
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.094
96.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1648
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1648
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"treacherous"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"silk"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"treacherous"
2"crystal"
3"shattered"
4"echo"
5"silk"
6"whisper"
7"warmth"
8"traced"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1645
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount922
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Moreau1
Brick3
Lane3
Aurora11
Rain1
Room1
London1
Kensington1
Aldwych1
Lucien10
Avaros1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Rain"
3"Room"
4"London"
5"Kensington"
6"Aldwych"
globalScore0.903
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like bone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1645
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean26.53
std22.92
cv0.864
sampleLengths
035
155
27
310
429
51
627
754
846
92
108
1157
1244
1329
144
1513
1656
173
1838
198
2055
213
223
2340
2434
2513
2638
276
2851
2926
301
3184
3241
3316
3420
357
362
375
387
3922
4028
416
4252
434
4498
457
4660
4736
4876
4942
98.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"was colonized"
1"been erased"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
81.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences140
ratio0.021
matches
0"Every surface was colonized by paper—books open face-down, scrolls unrolled and pinned with coffee mugs, sticky notes marching across the walls in Eva's cramped handwriting."
1"Ptolemy knocked a scroll off its pile; neither of them looked."
2"The flat, the cat, the smell of old books—it all faded to background noise."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02676659528907923
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032119914346895075
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.75
std10.87
cv0.925
sampleLengths
010
116
23
36
410
523
610
712
87
910
1011
1114
124
131
145
1513
166
173
1814
1913
202
2125
2213
239
2424
252
268
276
2836
294
3011
3113
3220
334
347
356
3623
374
384
398
401
417
4225
4324
443
4516
465
4717
484
494
50.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32857142857142857
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences95
matches
0"It died there."
1"Her voice came out flat"
2"He leaned on the cane."
3"She felt the rough paint,"
4"She hadn't heard it from"
5"He just stood there, immaculate"
6"His voice dropped"
7"She'd never heard him say"
8"She stepped aside."
9"She didn't relock it."
10"He surveyed the chaos, his"
11"She could still hear the"
12"He took a step toward"
13"Her voice cracked"
14"She hated that it cracked."
15"His hand emerged with a"
16"He held it out."
17"She stared at the silk"
18"Her fingers, traitors, lifted to"
19"She unfolded it."
ratio0.326
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences95
matches
0"The deadbolt snicked open, then"
1"Aurora yanked the door inward,"
2"It died there."
3"The words shriveled in her"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold"
5"Platinum hair slicked back as"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"Ptolemy wound between Aurora's ankles"
8"Her voice came out flat"
9"The corner of his mouth"
10"A ghost of the smile"
11"He leaned on the cane."
12"The movement shifted his charcoal"
13"A silver pocket watch chain"
14"Aurora's hand tightened on the"
15"She felt the rough paint,"
16"Lucien tilted his head"
17"The amber iris caught the"
18"The nickname landed like a"
19"She hadn't heard it from"
ratio0.895
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Before he'd gone cold."
1"Before he'd told her she"
ratio0.021
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He just stood there, immaculate and infuriating, the scent of his cologne cutting through the curry-stained air of the building."
1"Aurora looked at the locket in her palm, at the woman who'd been erased from existence, and then at the man who'd spent twenty-five years guarding a wound no on…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said again, softer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.094
88.5890%